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Postby New Neros » Sun Jun 30, 2019 12:22 am

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New Neros wrote:Name: Enu Rasa
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance :
Mage?: No
Bio:
Born to vagrants and beggars, Enu Rasa was raised on the streets of Varum, capital of the Empire of Tashar. Her father was a soldier felled in battle, and her mother a local lunatic who shouted nonsense at inanimate objects, so she was often found in the company of other orphans and at some point in her childhood, simply stopped seeing her mother all together. Enu was tough, though, and fought with boys and girls alike for scraps of food when it came to the alleyways and sidestreets, becoming known as a fierce glutton. Everything changed, however, when the young girl found a broken, rusty short-sword while digging through the garbage.

She and the blade were inseparable, the trash of some traveling soldier becoming her prized possession. She was often to draw it and use it to intimidate others, steal the food she wanted and get the things she had felt she so rightfully deserved, yet the weapon remained unstained by her hands for quite some time. Never having drawn blood or taken a life, Enu was eventually put on the spot by three older teens when she was but ten years old. Armed with bats and chains, they wanted compensation for Enu's intimidation tactics, and of course, a street urchin has nothing to offer but attitude and spit. She drew her sword and gave them a chance to turn and walk away, but they knew she wasn't about using her weapon.

But they were wrong this time, and it cost the trio dearly as Enu closed her eyes and charged, yelling at the top of her lungs and plunging her weapon into the stomach of one of the boys, taking and lifting him off of his feet and planting him on his ass, a gaping wound in his chest that poured blood. Withdrawing her sword from the teen who would soon become a carcass, Enu turned and swung like a rabid animal at the other two, liberating one of their hand and missing the last remaining member entirely. Rightfully, the two bolted and left their friend to perish, drowning in his own blood in a few agonizing moments. A passing beggar witnessed the encounter, and approached Rasa.

"Fourth Precept," The woman began, "Breathing is very important! Is the violent breath of life in you not hot? Exhale! Exult!" The words were strange to Rasa, who had raised her blade to protect herself from this interloper. "Second Precept, Your stance must be wide. You must not be spare with the fluidity of your wrists or shoulders. You must have grip on the handle that is loose and unstrained. I heard it said you must be tender with your sword grip, as though with a lover. This is patently false. A sword is not your lover. It is a hideous tool for separating men from their vital fluids." Enu lowered her sword slightly and loosened her grip, finding it more comfortable holding the weapon without her rigid clasp. The beggar smiled slightly, and turned to walk away from the scene.

"When you are of sound mind and body, find me the Rakshata Wilderness. I will teach you how to use that despicable instrument to annihilate Gods." When the beggar had left entirely, Enu Rasa remained with the dead body for a time, pondering on what to do. She figured she must train and prepare herself, but first needed to leave the crime scene before her murder could be discovered. No one came for the boy, his murder was never investigated, his body was left to rot and be eaten by stray animals, such was the life of the downtrodden of Varum. For the next three years, Enu Rasa trained her body and practiced her weapon, stealing a few books and manuals on how to properly use a blade, as well as how to condition your body. She was unable to read at first, but slowly learned the meaning of the symbols that became letters and eventually words, sentences, and such.

On the day of her thirteenth birthday, Enu arrived by merchant cart to the Rakshata Wilderness as instructed, running from the cart as she was unable to pay her fare. The merchant gave a yell and shouted curses, but dared not chase after an unruly teen girl into one of the most dangerous wildernesses on the continent. Though she seemed lost after a while, the girl had some idea of how to survive in harsh terrain from the manuals she had read. She brought nothing but her clothes and her sword, yet the large swathes of uncharted forest was quite the monster to behold, and how Enu planned to find the beggar woman in such a woodland maze was beyond her.

It crossed her mind several times that the beggar could have been like her mom, shouting nonsense and bumbling like a fool, but she was determined to see this adventure through, and honestly, anything was better than the life she was leaving behind. Finding a small encampment of bandits and outlaws by chance, Enu Rasa walked into the lions' den with confidence, not overbearing, but enough to hold her own. Stared down by the outcasts of stable society and deserters from battle, Enu asked if there lived a master swordswoman in the expansive wilderness.

"Au Vidal." One highwayman replied, "She lives in a hut several miles upstream, swinging her blade at imaginary foes, eating bugs and drinking water directly from the river. I would call her insane," He explained, showing a grave and serious look on his scarred and battle-born face, "But I have personally seen her battle ten thousand men completely naked. Except her sword, of course." Enu thanked the man for the directions and promptly exited the camp in the direction of the river he had mentioned, finding it after a few minutes travel, and then spending the rest of the afternoon travelling upstream to find the lonely hut of Au Vidal, Sword Saint.

Her first glimpse of her new master was that of a stark nude woman holding a straight sword in knee-deep water, staring off in the distance for some time. Rather than interrupt, Enu stayed by the waters' edge and observed, watching as Au folded her arm up and swung it down rapidly, a white aura encasing her blade, her strike reaching out and splitting the water between herself and the shore, slicing apart even the small rocks on the shoreline. Letting out a gasp, Au was alerted to Enu's presence, and stared at the teen. "I hope that by following my instruction, you will be thoroughly encouraged to become a farmer." Au stated, "Strip nude and enter the water. Training begins now."

Without hesitation, Enu did as she was told, and so began her journey into a living hell. For the first week and one day, she was starved, unable to eat a single bite of food and only able to drink, breath, and train - Sleep would fall somewhere in between. At the end of that fast, her mind was of sufficient state to learn the true meaning of swordsmanship, Au explaining to a barely conscious Enu that all she had learned in her studies was for peasants and amateur soldiers. With her real training beginning after her fast, Enu followed a vegetarian diet, barefoot sprints from the edge of the forest and back, squats and breathing exercises, and sword drills and resistance training.

By aged sixteen, Enu's body was a steel edifice, she could run from the forest edge and back to the river without straining her breath, she could break stones with her fists with little effort, and had virtually mastered the sword. Au Vidal was pleased with the progress her apprentice had made, and sent her to battle a true foe, giving her the mission to slay one of the giants living in the northern edge of the woods. It took a day and night for Enu to return, badly damaged, her sword was shattered into thirty pieces, her right leg was almost torn from its socket, and her honed body was broken pathetically in a hundred and forty places. When asked if she had succeeded, Enu nodded fiercely, explaining to her master that she had defeated him by gouging his brains out through his nostrils. "And what did that teach you, young apprentice?"

Glancing at her bloodied hands, "My thumbs were more useful than my sword." Enu stated. The normally stoic and hard-pressed master smiled with unrestrained glee, her student able to understand the futility of prolonged combat and was finally ready to learn the true art taught taught and mastered by Au Vidal, The Art of Cutting. Enu was taught the 18 Precepts of Sword Law administered by Au Vidal, which focused on the singular action of a sword cut and how it must be made fierce and unquestionable. There is to be no hesitation in action, as outlined in Precept 5: "You must strive for detachment when cutting. Your cut must be sticky and resolute. A weak, listless cut is a despicable thing. But you must also not cling to your action, or its result. Clinging is the great error of men. A man who strikes without thought of his action can cut the Gods."

It would take another few years for Enu Rasa to learn the Art of Cutting to a suitable degree, becoming a revered swordswoman in her own right. Her master would take her to watch the large battles and skirmishes at the borders of several kingdoms so that Enu could see for herself the combat only mortals are capable of, even the fierce tournaments in the royal and imperial capitals had them as spectators to watch how others fight so that the pair could learn more. Though they were master and student, Enu saw Au like a mother she had never had, and respected the Sword Saint for her endless wisdom.

At age twenty, Enu had already left her masters' quarters for several months out of the year to go on her own adventures, studying, and the like, finding work as a bodyguard for several nobles in that time and gaining some traction as a mercenary to make ends meet when it came to money, though, she often resorted to begging as she was accustomed to. As Enu returned to her master's hut, though, she found the place ransacked and burnt to a crisp some time before, Enu several weeks late to the act. With her master nowhere to be found, Enu took it upon herself to avenge her fallen teacher, and set off into the world to look for clues wherever she could, finding herself distracted along the way to take her mind away from losing her only mother figure.


Fighting Style: Swordswoman
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My class in the charactersheet is listed as rogue and I was going to protest but... yeah I pretty much made an arcane trickster when I was trying to change the initial assassin concept to be a mage, that's accurate. Aw well -w-
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Postby Tomia » Sun Jun 30, 2019 11:00 am

New Neros wrote: Enu Rasa

So honestly, I'm not sure how much this character fits in the RP. The bio doesn't really reference any of the lore, the powers are also pretty separate from the OP, and it seems that much of the concept of this character is taken from preexisting fiction which also makes me question the fit.

Beyond that the character needs a more solid limitation and honestly I think the unarmed sword ability is a little silly. Though it might just be the wording and the over exaggerated language there. Which is part of the problem I think. This char seems more designed to flaunt an ability than to develop a char in this world. So while I'm not entirely opposed to the art of the cutting idea I think you'd have to do a decent amount of work to make it fit into the lore and be more character focused.

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Postby New Neros » Sun Jun 30, 2019 11:10 am

Tomia wrote:
New Neros wrote: Enu Rasa

So honestly, I'm not sure how much this character fits in the RP. The bio doesn't really reference any of the lore, the powers are also pretty separate from the OP, and it seems that much of the concept of this character is taken from preexisting fiction which also makes me question the fit.

Beyond that the character needs a more solid limitation and honestly I think the unarmed sword ability is a little silly. Though it might just be the wording and the over exaggerated language there. Which is part of the problem I think. This char seems more designed to flaunt an ability than to develop a char in this world. So while I'm not entirely opposed to the art of the cutting idea I think you'd have to do a decent amount of work to make it fit into the lore and be more character focused.


The basic idea I got out of this response is that I cannot bring in outside lore.

There are two strong limitations, being without magic and being unarmored in a fantasy roleplay setting, as well as the two abilities she does have being excessive drains on stamina that wholly amounts to a solid third limitation. I think I did a decent amount of work in the biography to justify her placement, as well as give enough enough credence to fleshing out a character like Enu in this setting. It was ten paragraphs at two in the morning before the Art of Cutting was mentioned and expanded upon, I think I have enough justification for disagreeing with this assessment.
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Postby Skyggeheim » Sun Jun 30, 2019 11:27 am

Hey Zark, I don't mean to be a bother, I think you mistakenly marked Traven as Tasharen. He's technically Dascian, but that's my fault because I never mentioned it in his bio.

Will fix that, sorry to be nitpicky.

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Postby Tomia » Sun Jun 30, 2019 11:33 am

Skyggeheim wrote:Hey Zark, I don't mean to be a bother, I think you mistakenly marked Traven as Tasharen. He's technically Dascian, but that's my fault because I never mentioned it in his bio.

Will fix that, sorry to be nitpicky.

Was actually my fault, I told Zark I thought he was from Tashar :p
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Postby Skyggeheim » Sun Jun 30, 2019 11:34 am

Tomia wrote:
Skyggeheim wrote:Hey Zark, I don't mean to be a bother, I think you mistakenly marked Traven as Tasharen. He's technically Dascian, but that's my fault because I never mentioned it in his bio.

Will fix that, sorry to be nitpicky.

Was actually my fault, I told ZRk I thought he was from Tashar :p

Not a problem! He's tracking some Tashari(Tasharens?), but he's not from there.

I should've clarified in the bio, but I fixed it now. No biggie.

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Postby Tomia » Sun Jun 30, 2019 1:45 pm

Name: Lena Goodwin
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Appearance: https://pbs.twimg.com/media/Cy_WJzEWgAALbH5.jpg
Mage?: Yes
Bio:
Lena was born the first daughter of merchant in Tashar. Her mother Helen, and father Robert, lived comfortably despite being rich, and did their best to raise a loving family. However they lived in a small city named Fanir that had a particularly anti-mage attitude because of recent incidents that had led to deaths. When Lena's magical abilities started to manifest at age eight, her parents desperately tried to hide it from others. They managed to do so for a few months, but eventually word got out and a mob formed outside their house, demanding Lena be handed over. With no chance for escape, Helen and Robert thought they were at the mercy of the crowd until three members of the Enchanter Order arrived and faced them down, demanding they disperse. The crowd was even more agitated to see mages, and attempted to attack but were soon forced to flee as the head mage killed an attacker with a powerful lightening spell that terrified the others.

With the crowd gone, the Enchanters spoke to Lena's parents, telling them they needed to come to the capital to keep their family safe while Lena trained to control her abilities. The little girl in question was glad that her family would be safe, but horrified that someone had died because of her. One of the three enchanters saw she was crying and approached her. The mage was in her young twenties and smiled to the girl, offering her a strawberry she had packed with her. The fruit was sweet and delicious and the enchanter told the little girl that they were plentiful in the capital. Feeling a bit better, Lena agreed to go and she traveled with her family to the capital city of Varum.

Her father was provided with new trading contacts that made him widely successful, allowing him to set up his own shop in the capital. This provided them with a beautiful home in the merchant district of the city. It had a beautiful garden where Lena's mother planted strawberries at the young girl's insistence.

Meanwhile Lena was sent to live at the Order's keep, just outside the royal palace. She missed her family terribly but after a few years she found another family among the enchanters. The other children she trained and grew up with soon grew a tight bond with each other, becoming a close circle of friends. During her training, Lena found special interesting in frost magic, and she was given an instructor to suit her abilities. It turned out it was the woman who had comforted her when the mob attacked, her name was Sasha and she was now an up and coming mage in the order. Under Sasha's training, Lena grew to be a powerful mage, and at 15 began training to be a battle mage within the order. She was instructed in swordsmanship and at 18 she was assigned her post along side the Knights of Shotarr. It was there she met a young Quentin Raeden. The two were both assigned to Fort Radiance on the Eshon boarder of Tashar. When there was cavalry raid into Tashar territory, the Knights were sent to respond and during the battle Lena saved Quentin from a charging knight.

The two bonded after that and eventually developed a romantic relationship. Lena was reassigned back to the capital after two years however and two fell out of touch. After a few more years as a battle mage, Lena was promoted Knight-Enchanter, and became a high ranking officer within the Tashar military. Knight-Enchanter's serve as commanders and magical advisers to military generals. She has been in this role for four years now and has been sent to Haden Hill as the ranking mage for Tashar.

Lena has great respect for the enchanter's order, believing it important that magic be regulated, and mages looked after for. She believes without the order she would have been ripped apart by the angry mob outside her home. Still, she recognizes flaws in their methods, and believes their harsh tactics regarding bringing in mages has given them an unfortunate reputation of being tyrannical.
Fighting Style: Battle Mage
Abilities:
  • Frost Magic: Lena is a powerful mage and specializes in ice based magic. She is able to create spikes of ice to hurl at her enemies, freeze the ground around her, and even freeze her enemies solid.
  • Frost Sword: Her sword is enchanted so that when used it channel magika it produces a layer of ice that can prove deadly to raw skin
  • Ice Mine: Using an incantation Lena can create a spell circle that once stepped on explodes in an icy blast
  • Sword-fighting: Lena knows her way around a sword and prefers to carry one into battle. It provides her versatility and defense in close quarter combat.

Limitations:
  • No staff- Lena chooses to channel her magic through her own body rather than through a staff or another amplifier. This makes her attacks more concentrated but forces them to less frequent. If Lena overworks herself, she notably begins to freeze herself.
  • Power of the Moon- Lena draws her power from the moon, which makes her a terror at night but during the day she is forced to rely on stored energy in runes and even her own life force if she is desperate
  • Second Best- She is a capable swordsman, but can be bested by a trained knight or someone with more experience and practice.

Equipment:
  • Sword Steel short sword
  • Armor As depicted in the face claim
  • Amulet of Oadot Silver moon kept on a silver chain and wore as a necklace
  • Moon Runes Small collection of runes used to draw power from the moon


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Personal Quest:
Favorite Factions: The Enchanter Order, Oadot's Choosen, the Slayers of the Crypt, Knights of Shotarr
Least Favorite Factions: The Consortium
Favorite Memory: Picking strawberries with her mother
Goals: To become Grand Enchanter and reform the Order
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Religion: The Pantheon, specifically Oadot, Shotarr, and Chtholes
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Postby Skyggeheim » Sun Jun 30, 2019 2:29 pm

Hey Tom, is there any lore about continents other than Eboris?

I kinda wanted to make a character based around an Eastern-styled empire from a different continent, since it doesn't seem like we have much Far East influence.

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Postby Finland SSR » Sun Jun 30, 2019 2:35 pm

Skyggeheim wrote:Hey Tom, is there any lore about continents other than Eboris?

I kinda wanted to make a character based around an Eastern-styled empire from a different continent, since it doesn't seem like we have much Far East influence.

This has been answered before:

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There might well be others, but if there were, they wouldn't play into the story at all. So, for all intents and purposes, no


I think Eboris is an isolated continent rather than one connected to a different one Eurasia-style, so someone from the "Far East" would most likely be from the Eastern part of Eboris rather than a different continent entirely. I don't see the problem with making an Eastern-inspired nation in that region, though it wouldn't be empire-sized.
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Postby Skyggeheim » Sun Jun 30, 2019 2:37 pm

Finland SSR wrote:
Skyggeheim wrote:Hey Tom, is there any lore about continents other than Eboris?

I kinda wanted to make a character based around an Eastern-styled empire from a different continent, since it doesn't seem like we have much Far East influence.

This has been answered before:

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:

There might well be others, but if there were, they wouldn't play into the story at all. So, for all intents and purposes, no


I think Eboris is an isolated continent rather than one connected to a different one Eurasia-style, so someone from the "Far East" would most likely be from the Eastern part of Eboris rather than a different continent entirely. I don't see the problem with making an Eastern-inspired nation in that region, though it wouldn't be empire-sized.

Ah didn't see that. Thanks for the heads up!

Unfortunate. A foreign visitor from another continent might be interesting.

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Postby Tomia » Sun Jun 30, 2019 2:46 pm

New Neros wrote:[Enu Rasa

Nice work, the detailing of the style is well, done, bio as well. Thanks for adding the weakness I think that is sufficient. Just don't go overboard with the art of sword hand because it still sounds a little within the realm of anime absurdity to me, but I trust you to keep it reigned in. Accepted

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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sun Jun 30, 2019 3:21 pm

Ihsalihna wrote:My class in the charactersheet is listed as rogue and I was going to protest but... yeah I pretty much made an arcane trickster when I was trying to change the initial assassin concept to be a mage, that's accurate. Aw well -w-


Honestly I had to do some guesswork there since her fighting style was listed as 'merchant' and that would've been odd :P if you'd like any changes though, feel free to suggest 'em.

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Tomia wrote:Was actually my fault, I told ZRk I thought he was from Tashar :p

Not a problem! He's tracking some Tashari(Tasharens?), but he's not from there.

I should've clarified in the bio, but I fixed it now. No biggie.


Yeah, I had it originally listed as "N/A", but Tom told me that Traven was Tasharen :P I'll fix it next time I update the character list.
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Postby The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Sun Jun 30, 2019 5:06 pm

Tomia wrote: Lena Goodwin
-snip-


Oh boy, an ice-foil for Nastasia. Neato

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Postby Tomia » Sun Jun 30, 2019 5:57 pm

The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune wrote:
Tomia wrote: Lena Goodwin
-snip-


Oh boy, an ice-foil for Nastasia. Neato

indeed :p

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Postby Ormata » Sun Jun 30, 2019 6:28 pm

Another idea for ya.

A mage tried to live forever (Endlessly adding to his hourglass) and as such slighted Sualdir. The God of Time, in response, granted his wish by making the man simultaneously live his past (A young boy), present (Man of 30s) and future (Haggard old guy of around 90s) for an undetermined amount of time. As such, he constantly changes physical characteristics in random areas (Adult figure with child's head, child with adult arms, etc etc) in an almost glitched-out degree (Lots of haze, others incapable of focusing eyes on him) as well as holding a minor change in personality, voice, etc with every moment, as well as minor location-hopping. He'll be trying to redeem himself under the own-leadership of the old man.

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Postby Tomia » Sun Jun 30, 2019 6:39 pm

Ormata wrote:Another idea for ya.

A mage tried to live forever (Endlessly adding to his hourglass) and as such slighted Sualdir. The God of Time, in response, granted his wish by making the man simultaneously live his past (A young boy), present (Man of 30s) and future (Haggard old guy of around 90s) for an undetermined amount of time. As such, he constantly changes physical characteristics in random areas (Adult figure with child's head, child with adult arms, etc etc) in an almost glitched-out degree (Lots of haze, others incapable of focusing eyes on him) as well as holding a minor change in personality, voice, etc with every moment, as well as minor location-hopping. He'll be trying to redeem himself under the own-leadership of the old man.

Seems kind of trippy and out there tbh, and I don't think I want to confirm curses from gods as canon

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Postby Ormata » Sun Jun 30, 2019 6:41 pm

Tomia wrote:Seems kind of trippy and out there tbh, and I don't think I want to confirm curses from gods as canon


But Gods can give boons, yes? Wouldn't it follow that they could also give curses? And yeah, intentionally out there and frankly enough you're not going to get an image from it.

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Postby Tomia » Sun Jun 30, 2019 6:44 pm

Ormata wrote:
Tomia wrote:Seems kind of trippy and out there tbh, and I don't think I want to confirm curses from gods as canon


But Gods can give boons, yes? Wouldn't it follow that they could also give curses? And yeah, intentionally out there and frankly enough you're not going to get an image from it.

Yes, though it is fairly debatable in the world where those boons actually come from. Curses just seem like a different can of worms that I'm not too interested in opening.

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Postby Ormata » Sun Jun 30, 2019 6:46 pm

Tomia wrote:
Ormata wrote:
But Gods can give boons, yes? Wouldn't it follow that they could also give curses? And yeah, intentionally out there and frankly enough you're not going to get an image from it.

Yes, though it is fairly debatable in the world where those boons actually come from. Curses just seem like a different can of worms that I'm not too interested in opening.


O fine.

Would you be alright with a minor nobleman (Independent fiefdom holder allied with one of the nations)? Small retinue of troops, around 20-ish professionals and a lotta militia that are gonna die.

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Postby Tomia » Sun Jun 30, 2019 7:17 pm

Ormata wrote:
Tomia wrote:Yes, though it is fairly debatable in the world where those boons actually come from. Curses just seem like a different can of worms that I'm not too interested in opening.


O fine.

Would you be alright with a minor nobleman (Independent fiefdom holder allied with one of the nations)? Small retinue of troops, around 20-ish professionals and a lotta militia that are gonna die.

Ya that's fine

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Sarderia
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Postby Sarderia » Sun Jun 30, 2019 8:38 pm

So just to make dis clear all of our chars start in a massive battle between three states right
Takkan Melayu Hilang Di Dunia

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Postby Tomia » Sun Jun 30, 2019 8:42 pm

Sarderia wrote:So just to make dis clear all of our chars start in a massive battle between three states right

The battle hasn't started but yes, all three sides are preparing to fight

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The Land of Golden Blobfish
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Postby The Land of Golden Blobfish » Mon Jul 01, 2019 12:46 am

This RP looks interesting. I'll finish reading up on the OP tomorrow morning and then might start working on a character. Is there any type/ class of character lacking that you'd want? I'm on board with working with anything
BOSS NASS : Yousa cannot bees hair. Dis army of mackineeks up dare tis new
weesong!
QUI-GON : That droid army is about to attack the Naboo. We must warn them.
BOSS NASS : Wesa no like da Naboo! Un dey no like uss-ens. Da Naboo tink
day so smarty den us-ens. Day tink day brains so big.
OBI-WAN : After those droids take control of the surface, they will come
here and take control of you.
BOSS NASS : No, mesa no tink so. Mesa scant talkie witda Naboo, and no
nutten talkie it outlaunders. Dos mackineeks no comen here! Dey not know of
uss-en.
OBI-WAN : You and the Naboo form a symbiont circle. What happens to noe of
you will affect the other. You must understand this.
BOSS NASS : Wesa wish no nutten in yousa tings, outlaunder, and wesa no
care-n about da Naboo.

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Postby Uzuldaroum » Mon Jul 01, 2019 12:47 am

Hello, hello! Definitely intrigued by this, definitely hope to join, but before I submit an app, I was wondering if the Knights of Shotarr have a sort of executioner? As in like a public headsman. Or, if you haven't gone into further detail than the OP, if such a background would be permitted?

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