Nea Videssos wrote:NAME: Rei Fujiwara (Fujiwara Rei or 藤原麗)
I've not finished reading through the biography yet (good chunk through) but can make a statement on everything else. I can address the bio more once I've finished reading it.
- First issue, creating a smalltime gang is one thing, but a major Yakuza group should be discussed with OP beforehand considering their size.
- Second, we need an age. You have many different skills which take time to learn (metahuman and not) and being that young could potentially be an issue.
- There is no need for that many images. Spoiler or not.
- They are basically immortal (cannot be killed). Being difficult is one thing, being immune to death is another. The healing is also vague. Can they heal from anything? Dismemberment? Burning or total destruction? What are the limits of their healing.
- You need more weaknesses. For one, the only thing that can counter your abilities is electricity or technology specifically tailored to counter such powers, which you are unlikely to face. Coupled with your presumed immortality, and how powerful your abilities can be, this seems a bit much. Having an abundance of skills makes weaknesses even more important. Talking with OP, the healing (and its other abilities) and the molecular manipulation are two separate abilities unrelated to one another. Characters cannot have two distinct powers.