NS Parliament Chamber [IC]

[The Miaphysite Church of Coptic Archism]

Amendment ??
Author: Merizoc
Seconders:

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Strikes article 2

Amendment ??
Author: Merizoc
Seconders:

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Strikes article 9

Amendment ??
Author: Merizoc
Seconders:

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1: Strikes article 1.3.1

Amendment ??
Author: Merizoc
Seconders:

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Strikes article 70

"In any case, I would like to introduce an amendment to change the word "tenants" to "tenets" in article 63."

Amendment XX

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I. Amends Article 86 to read:
"The Electoral Commission shall be a government-funded independent agency, and serving members shall have no political affiliation."
II. Removes Article 88

Amendment XXII

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Removes The Bill Addendum

"I sponsor these amendments, madame speaker."

[American Pere Housh]

Albin Lundberg, having finally resorted to using a laptop to sort out the complicated amendments and contradictions in the Constitution, stands up:

"Madam Speaker, allow me to present the following amendments to resolve the contradictions in the current Draft of the Constitution. I'll be using the continuation of the numbering system."

Amendment XIX

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I. Amends Article 2 to read:
"The State of Saint Hilda shall be a democratic sovereign state under the dominion of the Swedish Crown."
II. Amends Article 5 to read:
"The National Emblem, Anthem, and Maxim of the State of Saint Hilda shall be determined by law."

Amendment XX

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I. Amends Article 86 to read:
"The Electoral Commission shall be a government-funded independent agency, and serving members shall have no political affiliation."
II. Removes Article 88

Amendment XXI

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I. Amends Article 70 to read:
"The Office of the Prime Minister is hereby granted the authority to appoint judges to any High Court."
II. Removes Article 79

Amendment XXII

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Removes The Bill Addendum

Amendment XXIII

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I. Amends Article 9 to read:

"The State of Saint Hilda shall reserve the right to revoke Citizenship, if the person concerned holds citizenship of another sovereign nation, or Permanent Legal Residency through either:

1. Any action considered to be revocation, which is considered in a court of law to be:
   
   1. Committing or Conspiring to Commit an act of Treason against the State of Saint Hilda;
   2. Committing or Conspiring to Commit an act of Terrorism against the State of Saint Hilda;
   3. Acting as an illegal foreign agent of another nation;
   4. Entering or serving in the armed forces of a nation considered an Enemy of the State; or
   5. Accepting, serving in, or performing the duties under the government of a nation considered an Enemy of the State.
2. A declaration of renunciation of citizenship from the person concerned, by way of:
   
   1. A sworn statement before a diplomatic or consular officer for the State of Saint Hilda;
   2. An affidavit delivered to an Ambassador of the State of Saint Hilda or Consul-General of the State of Saint Hilda or other relevant officers, if outside of the State of Saint Hilda; or
   3. An affidavit delivered to any officers with the power to accept the renunciation."

Amendment XXIV

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I. Amends Article 7.2 to read:

"Any child:

1. Born within the legally defined territory of the State of Saint Hilda following the accession of this Constitution, excluding those automatically eligible for citizenship of another nation and:
   
   1. are born of parents legally registered as foreign agents within the State of Saint Hilda;
   2. whose parents chose to renounce citizenship of Saint Hilda on behalf of the child; or
   3. are born of any parent conducting operations against the integrity of the State of Saint Hilda at home or abroad.
2. Born to a Citizen or Permanent Legal Resident of the State of Saint Hilda."

"I, Michael Thomas, seconded all the above amendments except Amendment XXII"

[The Sarian]

Contradiction One

OPTION ONE (Amendment XIX)

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i. Amends Article 2 to read:
"The State of Saint Hilda shall be a democratic sovereign state under the dominion of the Swedish Crown."

ii. Amends Article 5 to read:
"The National Emblem, Anthem, and Maxim of the State of Saint Hilda shall be determined by law."

OPTION TWO (Amendment XXV)

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Removes Article 2

Contradictions Two and Three

OPTION ONE (Amendment XXVII)

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Removes Article 1.3.1

OPTION TWO (Amendments XXIII, XXIV; Procedural Amendment A, Procedural Amendment C)

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i. Amends Article 9 to read:

"The State of Saint Hilda shall reserve the right to revoke Citizenship, if the person concerned holds citizenship of another sovereign nation, or Permanent Legal Residency through either:

1. Any action considered to be revocation, which is considered in a court of law to be:
   
   1. Committing or Conspiring to Commit an act of Treason against the State of Saint Hilda;
   2. Committing or Conspiring to Commit an act of Terrorism against the State of Saint Hilda;
   3. Acting as an illegal foreign agent of another nation;
   4. Entering or serving in the armed forces of a nation considered an Enemy of the State; or
   5. Accepting, serving in, or performing the duties under the government of a nation considered an Enemy of the State.
2. A declaration of renunciation of citizenship from the person concerned, by way of:
   
   1. A sworn statement before a diplomatic or consular officer for the State of Saint Hilda;
   2. An affidavit delivered to an Ambassador of the State of Saint Hilda or Consul-General of the State of Saint Hilda or other relevant officers, if outside of the State of Saint Hilda; or
   3. An affidavit delivered to any officers with the power to accept the renunciation."

ii. Amends Article 7.2 to read:

"Any child:

1. Born within the legally defined territory of the State of Saint Hilda following the accession of this Constitution, excluding those automatically eligible for citizenship of another nation and:
   
   1. are born of parents legally registered as foreign agents within the State of Saint Hilda;
   2. whose parents chose to renounce citizenship of Saint Hilda on behalf of the child; or
   3. are born of any parent conducting operations against the integrity of the State of Saint Hilda at home or abroad.
2. Born to a Citizen or Permanent Legal Resident of the State of Saint Hilda."

iii. Removes Article 7.4.1

iv. Removes Article 33

OPTION THREE (Amendment XXVI, Procedural Amendment A, Procedural Amendment B, Procedural Amendment C)

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i. Removes Article 9

ii. Removes Article 7.4.1

iii. Removes Articles 7.2.14, 7.2.1.5 and 7.2.1.6

iv. Removes Article 33

Contradictions Four, Five and Six

OPTION ONE (The Protect the Bill Addendum Addendum and Procedural Amendment D)

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i. The Protect the Bill Addendum Addendum

ii. Removes Articles 35 and 45

OPTION TWO (Amendment XXII)

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i. Removes The Bill Addendum

Contradiction Seven

OPTION ONE (Amendment XXI)

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i. Amends Article 70 to read:
"The Office of the Prime Minister is hereby granted the authority to appoint judges to any High Court."

ii. Removes Article 79

OPTION TWO (Amendment XXVIII)

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Removes Article 70

Contradiction Eight

OPTION ONE (Amendment XX)

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i. Amends Article 86 to read:
"The Electoral Commission shall be a government-funded independent agency, and serving members shall have no political affiliation."

ii. Removes Article 88

OPTION TWO (Procedural Amendment E)

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i. Removes Article 86

[The Sarian]

"Order, Order.

Voting will now begin on the Contradictions. Members may choose to vote for one of the options or abstain from voting. On vote two, members may chose a first and second preference. Voting will last 24 hours."

Code: Select all

[b]Vote One (Contradiction One):[/b] ONE/TWO

[b][u]Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):[/u][/b]
[b]First Preference:[/b] ONE/TWO/THREE
[b]Second Preference:[/b] ONE/TWO/THREE

[b]Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six):[/b] ONE/TWO

[b]Vote Four (Contradiction Seven):[/b] ONE/TWO

[b]Vote Five (Contradiction Eight):[/b] ONE/TWO


LINK TO OPTIONS

[East Meranopirus]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: TWO
Second Preference: THREE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): TWO

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): ONE

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[The Miaphysite Church of Coptic Archism]

Vote One (Contradiction One): TWO

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: THREE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): TWO

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): TWO

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[MERIZoC]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: THREE
Second Preference: ONE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): ONE

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): ONE

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Merni]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: ONE
Second Preference: ABSTAIN

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): TWO

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): TWO

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Northern Davincia]

Vote One (Contradiction One): TWO

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: ONE
Second Preference: THREE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): TWO

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): ONE

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Nova Anglicana]

Vote One (Contradiction One): TWO

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: ONE
Second Preference: ABSTAIN

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): TWO

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): TWO

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Martune]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: Two
Second Preference: Three

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): ONE

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): One

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): One

[Thermodolia]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: THREE
Second Preference: ONE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): ONE

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): ONE

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Democratic Republic of Eiria]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: Two
Second Preference: Three

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): TWO

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): ONE

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Agarntrop]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ABSTAIN

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: TWO
Second Preference: THREE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): TWO

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): TWO

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ABSTAIN

[LiberNovusAmericae]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE
Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: TWO
Second Preference: ONE
Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): TWO

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): TWO

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Kowani]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: TWO
Second Preference: ONE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): ONE

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): TWO

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Mayolagne]

One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: THREE
Second Preference: ONE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): ONE

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): ONE

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[The Archipelago Territory]

Vote One (Contradiction One): TWO

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: TWO/
Second Preference: ONE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): I abstain (present)

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): ONE

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Zaporizhian Host]

Vote One (Contradiction One): One

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: One
Second Preference: Three

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): Two

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): Two

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): One

[Lacona]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: THREE
Second Preference: ONE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): ONE

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): ONE

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Denieria]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: THREE
Second Preference: TWO

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): ONE

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): TWO

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Puertollano]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: THREE
Second Preference: ONE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): ONE

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): ONE

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Crylante]

Vote One (Contradiction One): TWO

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: THREE
Second Preference: TWO

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): TWO

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): ONE

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Borovan entered the region as he]

Vote One (Contradiction One): ONE

Vote Two (Contradictions Two and Three):
First Preference: TWO
Second Preference: ONE

Vote Three (Contradictions Four, Five and Six): TWO

Vote Four (Contradiction Seven): TWO

Vote Five (Contradiction Eight): ONE

[Kyrusia]

Per this ruling, this thread will be re-located to P2TM.