Quebec-Libre wrote:Talchyon wrote:
All I can go off of is the vague descriptions you put in your app. Like, you say "telekinesis". I assume you mean "telekinesis".
But from what I see, your character is like a combination of these Marvel characters: Magneto, Jean Grey (before Phoenix), Iceman, Pyro, Hydro Man, Franklin Richards, and maybe Vision with his density manipulation. Whereas any one of these characters would be a formidable fight. And you have them all together at once.
Ethan is a Mary Sue and ridiculously overpowered more so than every other character in this RP.
To make it fair, I would suggest taking out all mind block, mind control, telepathy, density, water, ice and fire control and just sticking with levitation, a limited form of telekinesis, magnetism, and advanced senses. Or selecting 4 of the 13 powers he has and getting rid of the other 9. That would make it fair even if it would make it more challenging for him in a fight. The rest of us are making due with about that amount of powers...
And again, this is not bitterness about my character losing a fight. I could care less. My first character had no combat powers at all and I still liked him. I always like characters with unusual (though still limited to about 4 or at most 5) powers. And that's whether or not they suck in a fight or even die in an RP. That happens sometimes. I move on. So this is not bitterness about Diego losing a fight. It wasn't much of a fight to begin with. But it's more like I see Ethan as flagrantly breaking the rules of the RP and getting away with it.
Magneto is of course the main inspiration (if you couldn't already tell). I don't see where you got the Jean Grey Vibe (Can't magneto fly and levitate by himself?). I might have been too vague about what I meant by telekinesis, which is honestly why I put the list of powers that were included in it (it's not as much as additional powers than additives that form the telekinetic power itself) in the first place. If we combine all the powers that compose the telekinesis, plus Flight and levitation (one of the same thing in this case), we fall at 7 powers.
I think this is just a big misunderstanding.
After careful consideration, I agree that it is only seven powers. Honestly, I got no Jean Grey vibes and Talycon including Franklin Richards in the comparison is blatant exaggeration, as Ethan is nowhere near that level of OP.