ANBU : Age of Shinobi (OOC)

[American Pere Housh]

Roger that

[Sil Arion]

Sorry for my absence! Internet and other services got knocked out in my area due to several severe thunderstorms and flooding. I'm fine, and I'll be able to post tonight.

[Aidannadia]

Sorry for my absence! Internet and other services got knocked out in my area due to several severe thunderstorms and flooding. I'm fine, and I'll be able to post tonight.

Oh that's good. Yeah feel free to comic book time our interaction; I know you're talking with Izumi in the past and planned on training with her.

[Dentali]

So i saw you can app for a clan, we can create an original clan and put them in the RP?

[Britanania]

So i saw you can app for a clan, we can create an original clan and put them in the RP?

Yes, for an example look at my app or Aidan's app.

[Dentali]

So i saw you can app for a clan, we can create an original clan and put them in the RP?

Yes, for an example look at my app or Aidan's app.

hmm and it has to be a Leaf Village clan?

[Dentali]

Im considering a member of the Hatake clan who studies a sage jutsu

[Britanania]

Yes, for an example look at my app or Aidan's app.

hmm and it has to be a Leaf Village clan?

Yes, or at least your character has to live in the Leaf village

[Dentali]

Can anyone give me some feedback?

ANBU Application
Name: Hatake Aya
Clan: Hatake


Chakra Nature: Lightning/ Water
Age: 17
Gender: F
Jutsu:
LIGHTNING RELEASE
Fangs of Lightning- Raising arms to the sky allows the user to send electrical essence into the clouds allowing lightning strikes to land at any location within sight
Lightning Banquet- several thunderbolts cut through the ground or air until they hit a target
Lightning Strike Armor- The user is surrounded by electricity in the form of armor enhancing their speed and electrocuting anyone making contact
Lightning Wolf- Lightning is generated from the users body releasing in the form of a giant wold that electrocutes anyone it comes into contact with, its quick movement allows it to take out multiple opponents, on the water it can cover an even wider area

WATER RELEASE
Hiding in Mist Technique- Users fill the air with mist and control its thickness with their chakra. Once the mists are thick enough that opponents cannot see, that in turn means they cannot manage much defence against the user.
Water Prison Technique- Target is trapped in asphere of water that can be drawn from the surroundings of expelled from the users mouth restricting the targets movements and making breathing difficult
Water Bullet Technique- User expels a large quanitty of water in a powerful torrent aimed towards their target.

STORM RELEASE
Laser Circus- This technique creates several beams and shoots them at the enemy. First, a halo of bright energy spreads around the user's hands as this technique is activated, then it encircles the user's hand and from that, the beams are shot out towards the enemy.

Thunder Cloud- generate a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around the user, a defensive ward which obscures enemy vision and provides an electrified perimeter.


Strengths: High Speed, High offensive capability, very perceptive through non-visual means ie: sound,
Weaknesses: No Genjutsu defense, lacks endurance, poor at taijutsu
Bio:

Aya was born to the Mindumo Hatake, brother of Sakumo Hatake, and a woman he met in a small village while traveling through the Land of Water on a mission. She grew up knowing little of her father who would typically visited once or twice a year and was raised primarily by her mother and uncle, who was a ninja of the Village Hidden in the Mist who taught her basic ninja techniques. When she was 12 her uncle was caught up on the wrong side of an internal power struggle in the Land of Water, and the village was put to the sword.

Aya escaped just barely and made her way to the Village Hidden in the Leaves. Mindumo found her after hearing of the massacre and brought her home with him to be raised as a member of the clan. Tensions with the rest of the clan were fraught as Mindumo had married after Aya was born and had two other children, Aya’s new stepmother was concerned about her own children’s position in the clan and the shame the bastard child brought upon them. While it was a marriage of love it led to many heated arguments between Midumo and his wife, as well as an estrangement between Aya and her half siblings.

She was instructed to keep her birthplace quiet as to not concern any in the village, claiming to have been born in the land of fire. She studied at the Academy doing well and finding an aptitude for advanced lightning jutsu as well as water jutsu. Eventually she combined her chakra natures experimenting with Storm Release Jutsu something few members of the village had ever performed. He noted experimentation and aptitude led her to being recruited as a member of the ANBU blackops.

She is a new member and has yet to be sent out on missions but is considered to show a great deal of promise.



Extra Info:

Once again it would be nice to get feedback

[Sil Arion]

Oh that's good. Yeah feel free to comic book time our interaction; I know you're talking with Izumi in the past and planned on training with her.

Yeah, that's what I'm doing! We'll advance the main plot while filling in past subplots as we go, lol!

Pere Housh, I'll post again tomorrow with Himura's response to Izumi and their reunion with Kushina.

[American Pere Housh]

Oh that's good. Yeah feel free to comic book time our interaction; I know you're talking with Izumi in the past and planned on training with her.

Yeah, that's what I'm doing! We'll advance the main plot while filling in past subplots as we go, lol!

Pere Housh, I'll post again tomorrow with Himura's response to Izumi and their reunion with Kushina.

I will be waiting.

[Shadowwell]

Anyone open to interactions?

[American Pere Housh]

Anyone open to interactions?

I'm open.

[Britanania]

Anyone open to interactions?

I'm open.

Isn't Izumi doing shit with Himura?

[Dentali]

Can anyone give me some feedback?

ANBU Application
Name: Hatake Aya
Clan: Hatake
Chakra Nature: Lightning/ Water
Age: 17
Gender: F
Jutsu:
LIGHTNING RELEASE
Fangs of Lightning- Raising arms to the sky allows the user to send electrical essence into the clouds allowing lightning strikes to land at any location within sight
Lightning Banquet- several thunderbolts cut through the ground or air until they hit a target
Lightning Strike Armor- The user is surrounded by electricity in the form of armor enhancing their speed and electrocuting anyone making contact
Lightning Wolf- Lightning is generated from the users body releasing in the form of a giant wold that electrocutes anyone it comes into contact with, its quick movement allows it to take out multiple opponents, on the water it can cover an even wider area

WATER RELEASE
Hiding in Mist Technique- Users fill the air with mist and control its thickness with their chakra. Once the mists are thick enough that opponents cannot see, that in turn means they cannot manage much defence against the user.
Water Prison Technique- Target is trapped in asphere of water that can be drawn from the surroundings of expelled from the users mouth restricting the targets movements and making breathing difficult
Water Bullet Technique- User expels a large quanitty of water in a powerful torrent aimed towards their target.

STORM RELEASE
Laser Circus- This technique creates several beams and shoots them at the enemy. First, a halo of bright energy spreads around the user's hands as this technique is activated, then it encircles the user's hand and from that, the beams are shot out towards the enemy.

Thunder Cloud- generate a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around the user, a defensive ward which obscures enemy vision and provides an electrified perimeter.


Strengths: High Speed, High offensive capability, very perceptive through non-visual means ie: sound,
Weaknesses: No Genjutsu defense, lacks endurance, poor at taijutsu
Bio:

Aya was born to the Mindumo Hatake, brother of Sakumo Hatake, and a woman he met in a small village while traveling through the Land of Water on a mission. She grew up knowing little of her father who would typically visited once or twice a year and was raised primarily by her mother and uncle, who was a ninja of the Village Hidden in the Mist who taught her basic ninja techniques. When she was 12 her uncle was caught up on the wrong side of an internal power struggle in the Land of Water, and the village was put to the sword.

Aya escaped just barely and made her way to the Village Hidden in the Leaves. Mindumo found her after hearing of the massacre and brought her home with him to be raised as a member of the clan. Tensions with the rest of the clan were fraught as Mindumo had married after Aya was born and had two other children, Aya’s new stepmother was concerned about her own children’s position in the clan and the shame the bastard child brought upon them. While it was a marriage of love it led to many heated arguments between Midumo and his wife, as well as an estrangement between Aya and her half siblings.

She was instructed to keep her birthplace quiet as to not concern any in the village, claiming to have been born in the land of fire. She studied at the Academy doing well and finding an aptitude for advanced lightning jutsu as well as water jutsu. Eventually she combined her chakra natures experimenting with Storm Release Jutsu something few members of the village had ever performed. He noted experimentation and aptitude led her to being recruited as a member of the ANBU blackops.

She is a new member and has yet to be sent out on missions but is considered to show a great deal of promise.



Extra Info:

Once again it would be nice to get feedback

Hey can i get some feedback?

[Britanania]

Can anyone give me some feedback?

ANBU Application
Name: Hatake Aya
Clan: Hatake
Chakra Nature: Lightning/ Water
Age: 17
Gender: F
Jutsu:
LIGHTNING RELEASE
Fangs of Lightning- Raising arms to the sky allows the user to send electrical essence into the clouds allowing lightning strikes to land at any location within sight
Lightning Banquet- several thunderbolts cut through the ground or air until they hit a target
Lightning Strike Armor- The user is surrounded by electricity in the form of armor enhancing their speed and electrocuting anyone making contact
Lightning Wolf- Lightning is generated from the users body releasing in the form of a giant wold that electrocutes anyone it comes into contact with, its quick movement allows it to take out multiple opponents, on the water it can cover an even wider area

WATER RELEASE
Hiding in Mist Technique- Users fill the air with mist and control its thickness with their chakra. Once the mists are thick enough that opponents cannot see, that in turn means they cannot manage much defence against the user.
Water Prison Technique- Target is trapped in asphere of water that can be drawn from the surroundings of expelled from the users mouth restricting the targets movements and making breathing difficult
Water Bullet Technique- User expels a large quanitty of water in a powerful torrent aimed towards their target.

STORM RELEASE
Laser Circus- This technique creates several beams and shoots them at the enemy. First, a halo of bright energy spreads around the user's hands as this technique is activated, then it encircles the user's hand and from that, the beams are shot out towards the enemy.

Thunder Cloud- generate a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around the user, a defensive ward which obscures enemy vision and provides an electrified perimeter.


Strengths: High Speed, High offensive capability, very perceptive through non-visual means ie: sound,
Weaknesses: No Genjutsu defense, lacks endurance, poor at taijutsu
Bio:

Aya was born to the Mindumo Hatake, brother of Sakumo Hatake, and a woman he met in a small village while traveling through the Land of Water on a mission. She grew up knowing little of her father who would typically visited once or twice a year and was raised primarily by her mother and uncle, who was a ninja of the Village Hidden in the Mist who taught her basic ninja techniques. When she was 12 her uncle was caught up on the wrong side of an internal power struggle in the Land of Water, and the village was put to the sword.

Aya escaped just barely and made her way to the Village Hidden in the Leaves. Mindumo found her after hearing of the massacre and brought her home with him to be raised as a member of the clan. Tensions with the rest of the clan were fraught as Mindumo had married after Aya was born and had two other children, Aya’s new stepmother was concerned about her own children’s position in the clan and the shame the bastard child brought upon them. While it was a marriage of love it led to many heated arguments between Midumo and his wife, as well as an estrangement between Aya and her half siblings.

She was instructed to keep her birthplace quiet as to not concern any in the village, claiming to have been born in the land of fire. She studied at the Academy doing well and finding an aptitude for advanced lightning jutsu as well as water jutsu. Eventually she combined her chakra natures experimenting with Storm Release Jutsu something few members of the village had ever performed. He noted experimentation and aptitude led her to being recruited as a member of the ANBU blackops.

She is a new member and has yet to be sent out on missions but is considered to show a great deal of promise.



Extra Info:

Once again it would be nice to get feedback

Hey can i get some feedback?

Sorry, I thought I accepted this already

[Dentali]

Hey can i get some feedback?

Sorry, I thought I accepted this already

wait seriously? accept without any need for edits?

[Britanania]

Sorry, I thought I accepted this already

wait seriously? accept without any need for edits?

It seemed fine to me, unless Aidan had any complaints.

[Aidannadia]

wait seriously? accept without any need for edits?

It seemed fine to me, unless Aidan had any complaints.

I was fine with it, but I believe we were rejecting the idea of sage mode being accessed fully.

[Dentali]

It seemed fine to me, unless Aidan had any complaints.

I was fine with it, but I believe we were rejecting the idea of sage mode being accessed fully.

Oh yea I/she cant do it yet, that just going to be something she is studying. I was thinking a wolf sage or and owl sage maybe

[Shadowwell]

Sorry for my absence! Internet and other services got knocked out in my area due to several severe thunderstorms and flooding. I'm fine, and I'll be able to post tonight.

So Sil, i seems Amariki and your Hyuuga are together for gaurd duty, how did you want to handle this?

[Dentali]

Sorry for my absence! Internet and other services got knocked out in my area due to several severe thunderstorms and flooding. I'm fine, and I'll be able to post tonight.

So Sil, i seems Amariki and your Hyuuga are together for gaurd duty, how did you want to handle this?

Kiss!

[Dentali]

ANBU Application
Name: Hatake Aya
Clan: Hatake
Chakra Nature: Lightning/ Water
Age: 17
Gender: F
Jutsu:
LIGHTNING RELEASE
Fangs of Lightning- Raising arms to the sky allows the user to send electrical essence into the clouds allowing lightning strikes to land at any location within sight
Lightning Banquet- several thunderbolts cut through the ground or air until they hit a target
Lightning Strike Armor- The user is surrounded by electricity in the form of armor enhancing their speed and electrocuting anyone making contact
Lightning Wolf- Lightning is generated from the users body releasing in the form of a giant wold that electrocutes anyone it comes into contact with, its quick movement allows it to take out multiple opponents, on the water it can cover an even wider area

WATER RELEASE
Hiding in Mist Technique- Users fill the air with mist and control its thickness with their chakra. Once the mists are thick enough that opponents cannot see, that in turn means they cannot manage much defence against the user.
Water Prison Technique- Target is trapped in asphere of water that can be drawn from the surroundings of expelled from the users mouth restricting the targets movements and making breathing difficult
Water Bullet Technique- User expels a large quanitty of water in a powerful torrent aimed towards their target.

STORM RELEASE
Laser Circus- This technique creates several beams and shoots them at the enemy. First, a halo of bright energy spreads around the user's hands as this technique is activated, then it encircles the user's hand and from that, the beams are shot out towards the enemy.

Thunder Cloud- generate a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around the user, a defensive ward which obscures enemy vision and provides an electrified perimeter.


Strengths: High Speed, High offensive capability, very perceptive through non-visual means ie: sound,
Weaknesses: No Genjutsu defense, lacks endurance, poor at taijutsu
Bio:

Aya was born to the Mindumo Hatake, brother of Sakumo Hatake, and a woman he met in a small village while traveling through the Land of Water on a mission. She grew up knowing little of her father who would typically visited once or twice a year and was raised primarily by her mother and uncle, who was a ninja of the Village Hidden in the Mist who taught her basic ninja techniques. When she was 12 her uncle was caught up on the wrong side of an internal power struggle in the Land of Water, and the village was put to the sword.

Aya escaped just barely and made her way to the Village Hidden in the Leaves. Mindumo found her after hearing of the massacre and brought her home with him to be raised as a member of the clan. Tensions with the rest of the clan were fraught as Mindumo had married after Aya was born and had two other children, Aya’s new stepmother was concerned about her own children’s position in the clan and the shame the bastard child brought upon them. While it was a marriage of love it led to many heated arguments between Midumo and his wife, as well as an estrangement between Aya and her half siblings.

She was instructed to keep her birthplace quiet as to not concern any in the village, claiming to have been born in the land of fire. She studied at the Academy doing well and finding an aptitude for advanced lightning jutsu as well as water jutsu. Eventually she combined her chakra natures experimenting with Storm Release Jutsu something few members of the village had ever performed. He noted experimentation and aptitude led her to being recruited as a member of the ANBU blackops.

She is a new member and has yet to be sent out on missions but is considered to show a great deal of promise.



Extra Info: