Star Wars: A Risen Rebellion Reboot [OOC/Open/All Welcome]

[Brusia]

App
Name: Gida Amersu
Age: 39
Short Bio: Gida'amersu was born and raised in the city of Nabat on Ryloth, and had a fairly normal childhood until the Separatists began their occupation of her world. Fortunately she was visiting friends in another city when the Separatists occupied her hometown, but her parents were taken hostage by the Separatists and used as living shields to protect their proton cannons. Outraged and longing to rescue her family, Gida joined up with the Twi'lek Resistance, and though she was only 15 proved herself to be a capable fighter. Thankfully General Kenobi was able to rescue her family and the other Twi'leks being held hostage at Nabat, but Gida decided to stay on with the Resistance until the end and fought with them in the Battle of Lessu, forcing the surrender of the Separatist commander there and ending the occupation of her world.

Unfortunately, their hard won freedom would prove to be short to last, as the Separatist occupation was soon to be replaced by an Imperial occupation following the fall of the Republic. Gida would join up with many of her former Resistance allies when the Free Ryloth movement was formed to fight against the Empire. She continued fighting on Ryloth for over a decade until the Battle of Yavin convinced her to join up with the Rebel Alliance to help not only drive the Empire from Ryloth but to destroy it altogether. Her extensive experience in guerrilla warfare made her a natural choice for the Alliance Special Forces, and she completed officer training with the group with flying colors. She was given command of a Pathfinder Platoon and proved to be an excellent leader and fighter, quickly rising up through the ranks. She particularly distinguished herself at the Battle of Endor where she was awarded the Medal of Alderaan for her actions there and given command of the SpecForce Pathfinders 2nd Regiment. She has since been assigned to Home One with her most challenging mission yet upon which the liberation of Kashyyyk may very well hinge...
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A280C blaster rifle, DH-17 blaster pistol, thermal detonators
Ship: None
Rank: Major

[Britanania]

App
Name: Gida Amersu
Age: 39
Short Bio: Gida'amersu was born and raised in the city of Nabat on Ryloth, and had a fairly normal childhood until the Separatists began their occupation of her world. Fortunately she was visiting friends in another city when the Separatists occupied her hometown, but her parents were taken hostage by the Separatists and used as living shields to protect their proton cannons. Outraged and longing to rescue her family, Gida joined up with the Twi'lek Resistance, and though she was only 15 proved herself to be a capable fighter. Thankfully General Kenobi was able to rescue her family and the other Twi'leks being held hostage at Nabat, but Gida decided to stay on with the Resistance until the end and fought with them in the Battle of Lessu, forcing the surrender of the Separatist commander there and ending the occupation of her world.

Unfortunately, their hard won freedom would prove to be short to last, as the Separatist occupation was soon to be replaced by an Imperial occupation following the fall of the Republic. Gida would join up with many of her former Resistance allies when the Free Ryloth movement was formed to fight against the Empire. She continued fighting on Ryloth for over a decade until the Battle of Yavin convinced her to join up with the Rebel Alliance to help not only drive the Empire from Ryloth but to destroy it altogether. Her extensive experience in guerrilla warfare made her a natural choice for the Alliance Special Forces, and she completed officer training with the group with flying colors. She was given command of a Pathfinder Platoon and proved to be an excellent leader and fighter, quickly rising up through the ranks. She particularly distinguished herself at the Battle of Endor where she was awarded the Medal of Alderaan for her actions there and given command of the SpecForce Pathfinders 2nd Regiment. She has since been assigned to Home One with her most challenging mission yet upon which the liberation of Kashyyyk may very well hinge...
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A280C blaster rifle, DH-17 blaster pistol, thermal detonators
Ship: None
Rank: Major

More of a formality, I suppose, but accepted

[United Nations Confederation of Earth]

Would it be possible to RP a small Imperial Fleet (no more than 5 ships to start with) that was cut off and is attempting to make it back to friendly lines through Rebel-held territory.

[Revlona]

Would it be possible to RP a small Imperial Fleet (no more than 5 ships to start with) that was cut off and is attempting to make it back to friendly lines through Rebel-held territory.

Shouldn’t be a problem

[United Nations Confederation of Earth]

Great. As the Imperial Fleet, really more of a squadron, is cut off from Imperial Space following the destruction of the Death Star II and Battle of Endor, I haven't been able to find any detailed maps showing the Rebel and Imperial held space so as to situate the Imperial Squadron somewhere for the RP. Any advice on areas, preferably in the Outer Rim, for the Squadron to start off in?

[Democratic Republic of Eiria]

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Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was born Force-Sensitive, and both He and His parents worked to keep his abilities hidden. At the age of Nine, he and his parents were forced to become servants of the current Moff of Naboo. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve Naboo's Moff as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. At Twenty Nine, he traveled to Ilum to try to discover how to control his Force powers. There, he built a Lightsaber, his most prized possession. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol, and a Blue Lightsaber
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Battlecruiser he inherited from his Grandparents, Republic Commanders. He donated it to the Rebellion, and was given command of it.
Rank: Captian

[Democratic Republic of Eiria]

Great. As the Imperial Fleet, really more of a squadron, is cut off from Imperial Space following the destruction of the Death Star II and Battle of Endor, I haven't been able to find any detailed maps showing the Rebel and Imperial held space so as to situate the Imperial Squadron somewhere for the RP. Any advice on areas, preferably in the Outer Rim, for the Squadron to start off in?

I Recommend near Christophsis, as after I get approved, I plan to start there. If you'd like, it could be to investigate your fleet.

[Britanania]

App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was born Force-Sensitive, and both He and His parents worked to keep his abilities hidden. At the age of Nine, he and his parents were forced to become servants of the current Moff of Naboo. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve Naboo's Moff as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol, and a Blue Lightsaber
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Battlecruiser he inherited from his Grandparents, Republic Commanders. He donated it to the Rebellion, and was given command of it.
Rank: Captian

Why does he have a lightsaber?

[United Nations Confederation of Earth]

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Name: Jack Cochrane
Age: 26
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jack Cochrane was born 21BBY, the firstborn son of a wealthy middle-class family on Corellia, his father being a Starship pilot and his mother a merchant. At 18 during his time in University, he joined the Imperial Navy University Officer Training Corps (UTOC) to help pay his way through University. Upon graduation, he left for the Imperial Naval Academy on Prefsbelt IV despite protests from his family. While he wasn’t a prodigy at Naval Combat, he was intelligent and hardworking enough to be in the upper quartile of his class. A week before the Officer Cadets passed through into the Navy proper, Jack got into an argument and later fight with another Officer Cadet from Coruscant, the other Cadet's father used his influence on Coruscant to have Jack assigned to the Outer Rim on an undermanned aging Venerator built at the end of the Clone Wars, ending any chances of a bright career in the Imperial Navy.
Jack found himself commanding Imperial Navy Task Force Charlie 7-7, consisting of his Venerator, an equally old yet fully manned Arquitens-class light cruiser, and three Lancer-class frigates which the local Imperial Admiral had seen no use for. At the time of the Battle of Endor, Charlie 7-7 was on its last deployment clearing out pirates in an asteroid belt near the Christophsis System. The Venerator was scheduled to be sold for scrap upon the mission’s completion and the remaining ships were to be redeployed elsewhere. During the battle with the pirates, communications with the Cardin-V Class space station that they operated out from were lost due to jamming, a problem that unable to be fixed until later (three months after the Battle of Endor) with an attack on the last Pirate Asteroid stronghold destroyed the jammer.
Faction: Empire
Weapon: SE-14r light repeating blaster
Rank: Captain
Ships:
1 Venerator Class, INS Triumph
1 Arquitens-class light cruiser, INS Undaunted
3 Lancer-class Frigates, INS Havoc, INS Daring, INS Astute

More than happy to fix any issues.

[Democratic Republic of Eiria]

App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was born Force-Sensitive, and both He and His parents worked to keep his abilities hidden. At the age of Nine, he and his parents were forced to become servants of the current Moff of Naboo. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve Naboo's Moff as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol, and a Blue Lightsaber
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Battlecruiser he inherited from his Grandparents, Republic Commanders. He donated it to the Rebellion, and was given command of it.
Rank: Captian

Why does he have a lightsaber?

Force sensitive. I forgot to add his trip to Ilum in the bio. Will edit.

[Britanania]

Why does he have a lightsaber?

Force sensitive. I forgot to add his trip to Ilum in the bio. Will edit.

I have some reservations about that.

[Democratic Republic of Eiria]

Force sensitive. I forgot to add his trip to Ilum in the bio. Will edit.

I have some reservations about that.

I could take out the Lightsaber, if you wish. It's not really pivotal to RP.

[Democratic Republic of Eiria]

I redid my App



App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was born Force-Sensitive, and both He and His parents worked to keep his abilities hidden. At the age of Nine, he and his parents were forced to become servants of the current Moff of Naboo. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve Naboo's Moff as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol.
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Battlecruiser he inherited from his Grandparents, Republic Commanders. He donated it to the Rebellion, and was given command of it.
Rank: Captian

[Ormata]

App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was born Force-Sensitive, and both He and His parents worked to keep his abilities hidden. At the age of Nine, he and his parents were forced to become servants of the current Moff of Naboo. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve Naboo's Moff as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol.
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Battlecruiser he inherited from his Grandparents, Republic Commanders. He donated it to the Rebellion, and was given command of it.
Rank: Captian

1. Be advised of Rule 7. If not pivotal, I see little reason to make a Force-Sensitive.
2. I see no reason as to why he and his parents would be forced to become servants of a Moff; the pay's pretty good and Naboo wasn't all that oppressed if I'm not mistaken. Palps is from there after all. I'm unsure as to how he continued to serve Naboo's Moff as a cook, especially considering the nature of his work and the fact that he took no measures to kill said Moff...and considering the Moff's security forces monitoring all members of the administration and those in the civilian side of it. I actually think that a Moff would probably have military cooks at this point and at that time, especially since the poisonings and bombings.
3. Aptitude for Command would likely lead to him gaining command of a CR90, considering most upper level positions would be occupied by far older and more experienced, and frankly more capable, commanders. Clone Wars veterans seem to be predominant there, as well as former Imperial captains.
4. I'm unsure on your definition of Battlecruiser, but for the most part that's in the traditional WW2 sense so a large, fast, heavily armed vessel with moderate to low armor or for some ships effectively what seems to be an ISD with bigger engines and more hull, so that's not really something a younger guy gets. Can we get a class name for the ship?
5. The ship itself is weird; as a Moff's cook he wouldn't have control whatsoever of a Battlecruiser and frankly enough the ship would be in Imperial hands. Him owning it on paper would likely violate several Imperial laws as even the Errant Venture had to be stripped of most weaponry when in civilian hands...even when it was on pretty good terms with the people wanting it stripped. Military ships in civilian hands makes any government twitchy. Inheriting a military warship simply isn't a thing, especially if it was in GAR operation during the Clone Wars which to be honest is extremely likely. Warships are owned by nations, not families, especially in Post-Clone Wars era. Even if he owned it, it makes no sense to join a planetary resistance when you own a main capital ship; simply take the capital ship and go commerce raiding. Withholding a valuable asset like that...no. People don't really do that.

[Democratic Republic of Eiria]

Hopefully this one is a little better. I apologise for taking up your time.



App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was to a poor family, his parents fortune having been lost due to trade restrictions. At the age of Nine, he and his parents became servants of an Imperial-Supporting Noble family.. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve the Noble Family as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. His Grandparents died a month after he joined. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol.
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Corvette He was given Command of. (CR90)
Rank: Captian

[Ormata]

Hopefully this one is a little better. I apologise for taking up your time.

App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was to a poor family, his parents fortune having been lost due to trade restrictions. At the age of Nine, he and his parents became servants of an Imperial-Supporting Noble family.. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve the Noble Family as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. His Grandparents died a month after he joined. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol.
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Corvette He was given Command of. (CR90)
Rank: Captian

Not taking up my time at all. I do do this for fun, after all. Only slightly disappointed that the method of fixing chosen here is cutting stuff out, though. I will point-out that I'm not a Co-Op and as such can't approve or disapprove.

Will point out that I have a post in progress for when SAMs are brought down.

[Democratic Republic of Eiria]

Hopefully this one is a little better. I apologise for taking up your time.

App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was to a poor family, his parents fortune having been lost due to trade restrictions. At the age of Nine, he and his parents became servants of an Imperial-Supporting Noble family.. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve the Noble Family as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. His Grandparents died a month after he joined. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol.
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Corvette He was given Command of. (CR90)
Rank: Captian

Not taking up my time at all. I do do this for fun, after all. Only slightly disappointed that the method of fixing chosen here is cutting stuff out, though. I will point-out that I'm not a Co-Op and as such can't approve or disapprove.

Well, my character was a bit OP. I had to cut back a little.

[Ormata]

Well, my character was a bit OP. I had to cut back a little.

I'm moreso talking about just...removing stuff and not replacing it. I can see where some bits were kept and some bits were lost by reading it alone due to the disjointed nature of some parts and there's nothing there to replace it. I mean, there's a good bit you could talk about to more fully flesh the character out like his time in the Resistance (Leading a double life is a scary life) or his time with the Rebellion so far (Was he ground or space oriented? If ground combat, guerrilla warfare maybe or fighting against odds as one of the more standing army units of the Rebellion and if space combat, warfare against all odds) or I mean heck, even putting in a bit about his parents and how they felt about him joining the Rebellion. Of course this isn't me saying to put that in specifically because at that point the bio becomes a bulletpoint list of answers that lack any form of flow whatsoever and that's not good writing, but still.

[Democratic Republic of Eiria]

Well, my character was a bit OP. I had to cut back a little.

I'm moreso talking about just...removing stuff and not replacing it. I can see where some bits were kept and some bits were lost by reading it alone due to the disjointed nature of some parts and there's nothing there to replace it. I mean, there's a good bit you could talk about to more fully flesh the character out like his time in the Resistance (Leading a double life is a scary life) or his time with the Rebellion so far (Was he ground or space oriented? If ground combat, guerrilla warfare maybe or fighting against odds as one of the more standing army units of the Rebellion and if space combat, warfare against all odds) or I mean heck, even putting in a bit about his parents and how they felt about him joining the Rebellion. Of course this isn't me saying to put that in specifically because at that point the bio becomes a bulletpoint list of answers that lack any form of flow whatsoever and that's not good writing, but still.

Slightly better

App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was to a poor family, his parents fortune having been lost due to trade restrictions. At the age of Nine, he and his parents became servants of an Imperial-Supporting Noble family.. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve the Noble Family as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. His Grandparents died a month after he joined. He originally was based in ground bases, but he started getting jumpy with flashbacks from the loss of some of his friends in the Naboo resistance bombing, so they transferred him to a crew position on a Corvette. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of a Corvette. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol.
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Corvette He was given Command of. (CR90)
Rank: Captian

[Revlona]

I'm moreso talking about just...removing stuff and not replacing it. I can see where some bits were kept and some bits were lost by reading it alone due to the disjointed nature of some parts and there's nothing there to replace it. I mean, there's a good bit you could talk about to more fully flesh the character out like his time in the Resistance (Leading a double life is a scary life) or his time with the Rebellion so far (Was he ground or space oriented? If ground combat, guerrilla warfare maybe or fighting against odds as one of the more standing army units of the Rebellion and if space combat, warfare against all odds) or I mean heck, even putting in a bit about his parents and how they felt about him joining the Rebellion. Of course this isn't me saying to put that in specifically because at that point the bio becomes a bulletpoint list of answers that lack any form of flow whatsoever and that's not good writing, but still.

Slightly better

App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was to a poor family, his parents fortune having been lost due to trade restrictions. At the age of Nine, he and his parents became servants of an Imperial-Supporting Noble family.. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve the Noble Family as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. His Grandparents died a month after he joined. He originally was based in ground bases, but he started getting jumpy with flashbacks from the loss of some of his friends in the Naboo resistance bombing, so they transferred him to a crew position on a Corvette. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of a Corvette. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol.
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Corvette He was given Command of. (CR90)
Rank: Captian

1. Why is the fact that they used only 3 charges to destroy the weapons depot important?

2. Why would Bail Organa contact him directly? Was he an important figure in the resistance?

3. Why was the resistance group he was with disbanded in the first place?

Other than that, the app is looking better, I'd like some more meat on the bones before it is accepted.

[Ormata]

Revlona, request permission to, once SAM sites and jammers are down and the spec forces team has radio'ed in such, maneuver Freedom's Call into atmospheric flight to provide heavy fire support. Third Fleet may need to send a detachment into orbit to keep Imperial reinforcements from engaging landed forces.

[Ormata]

App
Name: Jack Cochrane
Age: 26
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jack Cochrane was born 21BBY, the firstborn son of a wealthy middle-class family on Corellia, his father being a Starship pilot and his mother a merchant. At 18 during his time in University, he joined the Imperial Navy University Officer Training Corps (UTOC) to help pay his way through University. Upon graduation, he left for the Imperial Naval Academy on Prefsbelt IV despite protests from his family. While he wasn’t a prodigy at Naval Combat, he was intelligent and hardworking enough to be in the upper quartile of his class. A week before the Officer Cadets passed through into the Navy proper, Jack got into an argument and later fight with another Officer Cadet from Coruscant, the other Cadet's father used his influence on Coruscant to have Jack assigned to the Outer Rim on an undermanned aging Venerator built at the end of the Clone Wars, ending any chances of a bright career in the Imperial Navy.
Jack found himself commanding Imperial Navy Task Force Charlie 7-7, consisting of his Venerator, an equally old yet fully manned Arquitens-class light cruiser, and three Lancer-class frigates which the local Imperial Admiral had seen no use for. At the time of the Battle of Endor, Charlie 7-7 was on its last deployment clearing out pirates in an asteroid belt near the Christophsis System. The Venerator was scheduled to be sold for scrap upon the mission’s completion and the remaining ships were to be redeployed elsewhere. During the battle with the pirates, communications with the Cardin-V Class space station that they operated out from were lost due to jamming, a problem that unable to be fixed until later (three months after the Battle of Endor) with an attack on the last Pirate Asteroid stronghold destroyed the jammer.
Faction: Empire
Weapon: SE-14r light repeating blaster
Rank: Captain
Ships:
1 Venerator Class, INS Triumph
1 Arquitens-class light cruiser, INS Undaunted
3 Lancer-class Frigates, INS Havoc, INS Daring, INS Astute

More than happy to fix any issues.

Since no-one's addressed this app, I'm more than happy to.

1. The class of vessel you're looking for is Venator-Class Star Destroyer, not Venerator.
2. Your undermanned Venator will likely be underequipped as well in terms of a fighter compliment. They'll be TIE/ln's, too probably (I can see Imperial Procurement pitching a fit over having to deal with all these fancy starfighters like ARC-170s), though not completely sure on that. I can see you having an Imperial I-Class Star Destroyer's compliment of 72 due to a lack of need for the ship.
3. Lancer-Class Frigates were extremely valued by Imperial Admirals of all stripes due to their anti-fighter ability and capacity to nullify Rebel fighter superiority. Only issue was their speed, which honestly was slow, but really if it was used for garrison duties than that wouldn't be a great issue. Their value was only heightened by a small number of them. To my knowledge they were also a later war solution. Maybe switch those ships to CR70s (CR90's underpowered, lesser firepower commercial older brother).
4. Should probably be aware that clearing-out a system in 3 months is not great for a track record.
5. Should probably be aware that a ship's name is italicized, not the full thing. INS Triumph, not INS Triumph, but that's just me being me.
6. To be honest, not sure if his age is good or not as Captain in a Navy is O-6 (USN) and I think Imperial Navy holds them to be the same. Most COs are in their 30s at least, but the fact that he's in an Outer Rim command could help. Maybe his family pulled some strings back to get him up in the ranks faster, especially seeing as how he would be away from prying eyes? That'd be a neat twist, especially seeing as how his subordinates might have some years on him and might not fully trust their Captain.

[United Nations Confederation of Earth]

App
Name: Jack Cochrane
Age: 26
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jack Cochrane was born 21BBY, the firstborn son of a wealthy middle-class family on Corellia, his father being a Starship pilot and his mother a merchant. At 18 during his time in University, he joined the Imperial Navy University Officer Training Corps (UTOC) to help pay his way through University. Upon graduation, he left for the Imperial Naval Academy on Prefsbelt IV despite protests from his family. While he wasn’t a prodigy at Naval Combat, he was intelligent and hardworking enough to be in the upper quartile of his class. A week before the Officer Cadets passed through into the Navy proper, Jack got into an argument and later fight with another Officer Cadet from Coruscant, the other Cadet's father used his influence on Coruscant to have Jack assigned to the Outer Rim on an undermanned, underequipped aging Venator built at the end of the Clone Wars, ending any chances of a bright career in the Imperial Navy.
Jack found himself commanding Imperial Navy Task Force Charlie 7-7, consisting of his Venator, an equally old yet fully manned Arquitens-class light cruiser, and three Raider I-class frigates which the local Imperial Admiral had seen no use for. With the Imperial Navy in that sector being understaffed for the number of ships available and Jack's grades from the Naval Acadamy along with several favours he called in from the Acadamy, he was promoted to Captian of the Venator and its escort squadron. At the time of the Battle of Endor, Charlie 7-7 was on its last deployment clearing out pirates in an asteroid belt near the Christophsis System. The Venator was scheduled to be sold for scrap upon the mission’s completion and the remaining ships were to be redeployed elsewhere. During the battle with the pirates, communications with the Cardin-V Class space station that they operated out from were lost due to jamming, a problem that unable to be fixed until later with an attack on the last Pirate Asteroid stronghold destroyed the jammer. They were unable to return to base immediately as the INS Triumph's Hyperdrive had broken down and engineering had to scavenge for parts from both the Imperial vessels and wrecked pirate ships and bases.
Faction: Empire
Weapon: SE-14r light repeating blaster
Rank: Captain
Ships:
1 Venator-class Star Destroyer, INS Triumph
1 Arquitens-class light cruiser, INS Undaunted
3 Raider I-class Corvette, INS Havoc, INS Daring, INS Astute

Should now be better.

[Revlona]

App
Name: Jack Cochrane
Age: 26
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jack Cochrane was born 21BBY, the firstborn son of a wealthy middle-class family on Corellia, his father being a Starship pilot and his mother a merchant. At 18 during his time in University, he joined the Imperial Navy University Officer Training Corps (UTOC) to help pay his way through University. Upon graduation, he left for the Imperial Naval Academy on Prefsbelt IV despite protests from his family. While he wasn’t a prodigy at Naval Combat, he was intelligent and hardworking enough to be in the upper quartile of his class. A week before the Officer Cadets passed through into the Navy proper, Jack got into an argument and later fight with another Officer Cadet from Coruscant, the other Cadet's father used his influence on Coruscant to have Jack assigned to the Outer Rim on an undermanned, underequipped aging Venator built at the end of the Clone Wars, ending any chances of a bright career in the Imperial Navy.
Jack found himself commanding Imperial Navy Task Force Charlie 7-7, consisting of his Venator, an equally old yet fully manned Arquitens-class light cruiser, and three Raider I-class frigates which the local Imperial Admiral had seen no use for. With the Imperial Navy in that sector being understaffed for the number of ships available and Jack's grades from the Naval Acadamy along with several favours he called in from the Acadamy, he was promoted to Captian of the Venator and its escort squadron. At the time of the Battle of Endor, Charlie 7-7 was on its last deployment clearing out pirates in an asteroid belt near the Christophsis System. The Venator was scheduled to be sold for scrap upon the mission’s completion and the remaining ships were to be redeployed elsewhere. During the battle with the pirates, communications with the Cardin-V Class space station that they operated out from were lost due to jamming, a problem that unable to be fixed until later with an attack on the last Pirate Asteroid stronghold destroyed the jammer. They were unable to return to base immediately as the INS Triumph's Hyperdrive had broken down and engineering had to scavenge for parts from both the Imperial vessels and wrecked pirate ships and bases.
Faction: Empire
Weapon: SE-14r light repeating blaster
Rank: Captain
Ships:
1 Venator-class Star Destroyer, INS Triumph
1 Arquitens-class light cruiser, INS Undaunted
3 Raider I-class Corvette, INS Havoc, INS Daring, INS Astute

Should now be better.

Accepted

[Ormata]

Well United Nations Confederation of Earth welcome to it! I'm sure we can figure out a way to meet ICly.