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by Brusia » Sun Jun 30, 2019 1:33 pm
by Britanania » Sun Jun 30, 2019 8:35 pm
Brusia wrote:App
Name: Gida Amersu
Age: 39
Short Bio: Gida'amersu was born and raised in the city of Nabat on Ryloth, and had a fairly normal childhood until the Separatists began their occupation of her world. Fortunately she was visiting friends in another city when the Separatists occupied her hometown, but her parents were taken hostage by the Separatists and used as living shields to protect their proton cannons. Outraged and longing to rescue her family, Gida joined up with the Twi'lek Resistance, and though she was only 15 proved herself to be a capable fighter. Thankfully General Kenobi was able to rescue her family and the other Twi'leks being held hostage at Nabat, but Gida decided to stay on with the Resistance until the end and fought with them in the Battle of Lessu, forcing the surrender of the Separatist commander there and ending the occupation of her world.
Unfortunately, their hard won freedom would prove to be short to last, as the Separatist occupation was soon to be replaced by an Imperial occupation following the fall of the Republic. Gida would join up with many of her former Resistance allies when the Free Ryloth movement was formed to fight against the Empire. She continued fighting on Ryloth for over a decade until the Battle of Yavin convinced her to join up with the Rebel Alliance to help not only drive the Empire from Ryloth but to destroy it altogether. Her extensive experience in guerrilla warfare made her a natural choice for the Alliance Special Forces, and she completed officer training with the group with flying colors. She was given command of a Pathfinder Platoon and proved to be an excellent leader and fighter, quickly rising up through the ranks. She particularly distinguished herself at the Battle of Endor where she was awarded the Medal of Alderaan for her actions there and given command of the SpecForce Pathfinders 2nd Regiment. She has since been assigned to Home One with her most challenging mission yet upon which the liberation of Kashyyyk may very well hinge...
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A280C blaster rifle, DH-17 blaster pistol, thermal detonators
Ship: None
Rank: Major
by United Nations Confederation of Earth » Mon Jul 01, 2019 4:54 am
by Revlona » Mon Jul 01, 2019 6:16 am
United Nations Confederation of Earth wrote:Would it be possible to RP a small Imperial Fleet (no more than 5 ships to start with) that was cut off and is attempting to make it back to friendly lines through Rebel-held territory.
by United Nations Confederation of Earth » Mon Jul 01, 2019 8:18 am
by Democratic Republic of Eiria » Mon Jul 01, 2019 10:07 am
by Democratic Republic of Eiria » Mon Jul 01, 2019 10:52 am
United Nations Confederation of Earth wrote:Great. As the Imperial Fleet, really more of a squadron, is cut off from Imperial Space following the destruction of the Death Star II and Battle of Endor, I haven't been able to find any detailed maps showing the Rebel and Imperial held space so as to situate the Imperial Squadron somewhere for the RP. Any advice on areas, preferably in the Outer Rim, for the Squadron to start off in?
by Britanania » Mon Jul 01, 2019 11:24 am
Democratic Republic of Eiria wrote:App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was born Force-Sensitive, and both He and His parents worked to keep his abilities hidden. At the age of Nine, he and his parents were forced to become servants of the current Moff of Naboo. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve Naboo's Moff as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol, and a Blue Lightsaber
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Battlecruiser he inherited from his Grandparents, Republic Commanders. He donated it to the Rebellion, and was given command of it.
Rank: Captian
by United Nations Confederation of Earth » Mon Jul 01, 2019 11:27 am
by Democratic Republic of Eiria » Mon Jul 01, 2019 11:36 am
Britanania wrote:Democratic Republic of Eiria wrote:App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was born Force-Sensitive, and both He and His parents worked to keep his abilities hidden. At the age of Nine, he and his parents were forced to become servants of the current Moff of Naboo. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve Naboo's Moff as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol, and a Blue Lightsaber
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Battlecruiser he inherited from his Grandparents, Republic Commanders. He donated it to the Rebellion, and was given command of it.
Rank: Captian
Why does he have a lightsaber?
by Britanania » Mon Jul 01, 2019 11:45 am
by Democratic Republic of Eiria » Mon Jul 01, 2019 11:47 am
by Democratic Republic of Eiria » Mon Jul 01, 2019 11:54 am
by Ormata » Mon Jul 01, 2019 1:32 pm
Democratic Republic of Eiria wrote:App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was born Force-Sensitive, and both He and His parents worked to keep his abilities hidden. At the age of Nine, he and his parents were forced to become servants of the current Moff of Naboo. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve Naboo's Moff as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol.
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Battlecruiser he inherited from his Grandparents, Republic Commanders. He donated it to the Rebellion, and was given command of it.
Rank: Captian
by Democratic Republic of Eiria » Mon Jul 01, 2019 1:56 pm
by Ormata » Mon Jul 01, 2019 2:03 pm
Democratic Republic of Eiria wrote:Hopefully this one is a little better. I apologise for taking up your time.
App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was to a poor family, his parents fortune having been lost due to trade restrictions. At the age of Nine, he and his parents became servants of an Imperial-Supporting Noble family.. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve the Noble Family as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. His Grandparents died a month after he joined. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol.
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Corvette He was given Command of. (CR90)
Rank: Captian
by Democratic Republic of Eiria » Mon Jul 01, 2019 2:08 pm
Ormata wrote:Democratic Republic of Eiria wrote:Hopefully this one is a little better. I apologise for taking up your time.
App
Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was to a poor family, his parents fortune having been lost due to trade restrictions. At the age of Nine, he and his parents became servants of an Imperial-Supporting Noble family.. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve the Noble Family as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. His Grandparents died a month after he joined. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of the ship he donated. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol.
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Corvette He was given Command of. (CR90)
Rank: Captian
Not taking up my time at all. I do do this for fun, after all. Only slightly disappointed that the method of fixing chosen here is cutting stuff out, though. I will point-out that I'm not a Co-Op and as such can't approve or disapprove.
by Ormata » Mon Jul 01, 2019 2:13 pm
Democratic Republic of Eiria wrote:Well, my character was a bit OP. I had to cut back a little.
by Democratic Republic of Eiria » Mon Jul 01, 2019 2:26 pm
Ormata wrote:Democratic Republic of Eiria wrote:Well, my character was a bit OP. I had to cut back a little.
I'm moreso talking about just...removing stuff and not replacing it. I can see where some bits were kept and some bits were lost by reading it alone due to the disjointed nature of some parts and there's nothing there to replace it. I mean, there's a good bit you could talk about to more fully flesh the character out like his time in the Resistance (Leading a double life is a scary life) or his time with the Rebellion so far (Was he ground or space oriented? If ground combat, guerrilla warfare maybe or fighting against odds as one of the more standing army units of the Rebellion and if space combat, warfare against all odds) or I mean heck, even putting in a bit about his parents and how they felt about him joining the Rebellion. Of course this isn't me saying to put that in specifically because at that point the bio becomes a bulletpoint list of answers that lack any form of flow whatsoever and that's not good writing, but still.
by Revlona » Mon Jul 01, 2019 4:12 pm
Democratic Republic of Eiria wrote:Ormata wrote:
I'm moreso talking about just...removing stuff and not replacing it. I can see where some bits were kept and some bits were lost by reading it alone due to the disjointed nature of some parts and there's nothing there to replace it. I mean, there's a good bit you could talk about to more fully flesh the character out like his time in the Resistance (Leading a double life is a scary life) or his time with the Rebellion so far (Was he ground or space oriented? If ground combat, guerrilla warfare maybe or fighting against odds as one of the more standing army units of the Rebellion and if space combat, warfare against all odds) or I mean heck, even putting in a bit about his parents and how they felt about him joining the Rebellion. Of course this isn't me saying to put that in specifically because at that point the bio becomes a bulletpoint list of answers that lack any form of flow whatsoever and that's not good writing, but still.
Slightly better
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Name: Jeresa Malo
Age: 34
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jeresa was born in Lake Country, Naboo, a few years before Imperial Occupation. He was to a poor family, his parents fortune having been lost due to trade restrictions. At the age of Nine, he and his parents became servants of an Imperial-Supporting Noble family.. He joined a Naboo resistance force at nineteen, and help destroy an imperial weapons Depot on Naboo with only 3 charges.
After the Resistance was disbanded after a bombing of a key base, Jeresa continued to serve the Noble Family as a cook, until he was 26, when he was contacted by Bail Organa, and joined his resistance group, later absorbed into the Rebel Alliance. His Grandparents died a month after he joined. He originally was based in ground bases, but he started getting jumpy with flashbacks from the loss of some of his friends in the Naboo resistance bombing, so they transferred him to a crew position on a Corvette. He fought in several battles, and his aptitude for command became evident to the leaders of the Rebellion, who put him in charge of a Corvette. He commanded the Eclipse in the Battle of Endor.
Faction: Rebel Alliance
Weapon: A Blaster Rifle and Pistol.
Ship (If you have one): The Eclipse, a Corvette He was given Command of. (CR90)
Rank: Captian
by Ormata » Mon Jul 01, 2019 6:25 pm
by Ormata » Mon Jul 01, 2019 6:38 pm
United Nations Confederation of Earth wrote:App
Name: Jack Cochrane
Age: 26
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jack Cochrane was born 21BBY, the firstborn son of a wealthy middle-class family on Corellia, his father being a Starship pilot and his mother a merchant. At 18 during his time in University, he joined the Imperial Navy University Officer Training Corps (UTOC) to help pay his way through University. Upon graduation, he left for the Imperial Naval Academy on Prefsbelt IV despite protests from his family. While he wasn’t a prodigy at Naval Combat, he was intelligent and hardworking enough to be in the upper quartile of his class. A week before the Officer Cadets passed through into the Navy proper, Jack got into an argument and later fight with another Officer Cadet from Coruscant, the other Cadet's father used his influence on Coruscant to have Jack assigned to the Outer Rim on an undermanned aging Venerator built at the end of the Clone Wars, ending any chances of a bright career in the Imperial Navy.
Jack found himself commanding Imperial Navy Task Force Charlie 7-7, consisting of his Venerator, an equally old yet fully manned Arquitens-class light cruiser, and three Lancer-class frigates which the local Imperial Admiral had seen no use for. At the time of the Battle of Endor, Charlie 7-7 was on its last deployment clearing out pirates in an asteroid belt near the Christophsis System. The Venerator was scheduled to be sold for scrap upon the mission’s completion and the remaining ships were to be redeployed elsewhere. During the battle with the pirates, communications with the Cardin-V Class space station that they operated out from were lost due to jamming, a problem that unable to be fixed until later (three months after the Battle of Endor) with an attack on the last Pirate Asteroid stronghold destroyed the jammer.
Faction: Empire
Weapon: SE-14r light repeating blaster
Rank: Captain
Ships:
1 Venerator Class, INS Triumph
1 Arquitens-class light cruiser, INS Undaunted
3 Lancer-class Frigates, INS Havoc, INS Daring, INS Astute
More than happy to fix any issues.
by United Nations Confederation of Earth » Tue Jul 02, 2019 1:18 am
by Revlona » Tue Jul 02, 2019 1:24 am
United Nations Confederation of Earth wrote:App
Name: Jack Cochrane
Age: 26
Short Bio (2 paragraphs min): Jack Cochrane was born 21BBY, the firstborn son of a wealthy middle-class family on Corellia, his father being a Starship pilot and his mother a merchant. At 18 during his time in University, he joined the Imperial Navy University Officer Training Corps (UTOC) to help pay his way through University. Upon graduation, he left for the Imperial Naval Academy on Prefsbelt IV despite protests from his family. While he wasn’t a prodigy at Naval Combat, he was intelligent and hardworking enough to be in the upper quartile of his class. A week before the Officer Cadets passed through into the Navy proper, Jack got into an argument and later fight with another Officer Cadet from Coruscant, the other Cadet's father used his influence on Coruscant to have Jack assigned to the Outer Rim on an undermanned, underequipped aging Venator built at the end of the Clone Wars, ending any chances of a bright career in the Imperial Navy.
Jack found himself commanding Imperial Navy Task Force Charlie 7-7, consisting of his Venator, an equally old yet fully manned Arquitens-class light cruiser, and three Raider I-class frigates which the local Imperial Admiral had seen no use for. With the Imperial Navy in that sector being understaffed for the number of ships available and Jack's grades from the Naval Acadamy along with several favours he called in from the Acadamy, he was promoted to Captian of the Venator and its escort squadron. At the time of the Battle of Endor, Charlie 7-7 was on its last deployment clearing out pirates in an asteroid belt near the Christophsis System. The Venator was scheduled to be sold for scrap upon the mission’s completion and the remaining ships were to be redeployed elsewhere. During the battle with the pirates, communications with the Cardin-V Class space station that they operated out from were lost due to jamming, a problem that unable to be fixed until later with an attack on the last Pirate Asteroid stronghold destroyed the jammer. They were unable to return to base immediately as the INS Triumph's Hyperdrive had broken down and engineering had to scavenge for parts from both the Imperial vessels and wrecked pirate ships and bases.
Faction: Empire
Weapon: SE-14r light repeating blaster
Rank: Captain
Ships:
1 Venator-class Star Destroyer, INS Triumph
1 Arquitens-class light cruiser, INS Undaunted
3 Raider I-class Corvette, INS Havoc, INS Daring, INS Astute
Should now be better.
by Ormata » Tue Jul 02, 2019 2:44 pm
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