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The Republic of Atria
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Postby The Republic of Atria » Wed Apr 03, 2019 12:52 pm

For the sake of simplicity, we're saying that the Tournament does allow people to sign up and drag a big ass suit of power armor with him?

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Postby Finland SSR » Wed Apr 03, 2019 1:04 pm

The Republic of Atria wrote:For the sake of simplicity, we're saying that the Tournament does allow people to sign up and drag a big ass suit of power armor with him?

I was trying to find a way to explain that in my last post, but I didn't find a way how to have Cedric express that organically.

Yes. I'd imagine that if you are just a normal human outside of your suit, you're able to bring it, as long as you don't bring any lethal equipment with you in that suit.
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tag might join later, just want to read for now
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First of my posts up.

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Postby The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Wed Apr 03, 2019 2:09 pm

And posted the conclusion to match uno

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Postby The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Wed Apr 03, 2019 7:40 pm

I think we really should get a discord going for this

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Postby Finland SSR » Wed Apr 03, 2019 9:05 pm

The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune wrote:I think we really should get a discord going for this

We should, I'll get me and Reb into working on one this weekend.

Next match is Theo vs Leon.
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Postby Finland SSR » Thu Apr 04, 2019 2:42 am

The Discord chat is now up.

https://discord.gg/8b6P8Z
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Postby American Pere Housh » Mon Apr 08, 2019 10:33 pm

Name:Sora
Appearance:Athletic build, black hair, blue eyes, black tail, Female version of Goku only a genius
Race:half Saiyan, half human
Gender:female
Age:25
Power Level:25,000
Bio:unknown daughter of Son Goku, she was taking from Earth by Vegeta and Napa at 5 years of age to be trained. Over the years, Vegeta began to consider Sora as a surregate father to her. She doesn't make appearance until after Baby's defeat. She has the ability to reach Super Saiyan 4 with ease because of her adopted father.
Likes: Space, books, video games, anime, food, training
Dislikes: Perverts, bullies, arrogant people, lazy people
Techniques: She is taught all the techniques that both Vegeta and Napa know plus instant transmission
Abilities: Super Strength, Super Speed, super durability, super senses
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQyfrmJXUbg Cha-La Head Cha-La
Last edited by American Pere Housh on Mon Apr 08, 2019 10:36 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Government Type:Militaristic Absolute Monarchy
Leader:King Alexander
WA Ambassador: Eliza 'Vanny' Cortez
Secretary of Defense:Hitomi Izumi
Secretary of State:Alicia Cortez
Current Year:2750
I stand with the State of Israel.
2021 RPCountry:South Korea

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Postby Sterkistan » Tue Apr 09, 2019 3:19 am

American Pere Housh wrote:Name:Sora
Appearance:Athletic build, black hair, blue eyes, black tail, Female version of Goku only a genius
Race:half Saiyan, half human
Gender:female
Age:25
Power Level:25,000
Bio:unknown daughter of Son Goku, she was taking from Earth by Vegeta and Napa at 5 years of age to be trained. Over the years, Vegeta began to consider Sora as a surregate father to her. She doesn't make appearance until after Baby's defeat. She has the ability to reach Super Saiyan 4 with ease because of her adopted father.
Likes: Space, books, video games, anime, food, training
Dislikes: Perverts, bullies, arrogant people, lazy people
Techniques: She is taught all the techniques that both Vegeta and Napa know plus instant transmission
Abilities: Super Strength, Super Speed, super durability, super senses
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQyfrmJXUbg Cha-La Head Cha-La

Is this a joke app?
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American Pere Housh
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Postby American Pere Housh » Tue Apr 09, 2019 7:21 pm

Y
Sterkistan wrote:
American Pere Housh wrote:Name:Sora
Appearance:Athletic build, black hair, blue eyes, black tail, Female version of Goku only a genius
Race:half Saiyan, half human
Gender:female
Age:25
Power Level:25,000
Bio:unknown daughter of Son Goku, she was taking from Earth by Vegeta and Napa at 5 years of age to be trained. Over the years, Vegeta began to consider Sora as a surregate father to her. She doesn't make appearance until after Baby's defeat. She has the ability to reach Super Saiyan 4 with ease because of her adopted father.
Likes: Space, books, video games, anime, food, training
Dislikes: Perverts, bullies, arrogant people, lazy people
Techniques: She is taught all the techniques that both Vegeta and Napa know plus instant transmission
Abilities: Super Strength, Super Speed, super durability, super senses
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQyfrmJXUbg Cha-La Head Cha-La

Is this a joke app?

What seems to be the problem and I will fix it?
Government Type:Militaristic Absolute Monarchy
Leader:King Alexander
WA Ambassador: Eliza 'Vanny' Cortez
Secretary of Defense:Hitomi Izumi
Secretary of State:Alicia Cortez
Current Year:2750
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The Rebel Alliances
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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Tue Apr 09, 2019 7:51 pm

American Pere Housh wrote:Name:Sora
Appearance:Athletic build, black hair, blue eyes, black tail, Female version of Goku only a genius
Race:half Saiyan, half human
Gender:female
Age:25
Power Level:25,000
Bio:unknown daughter of Son Goku, she was taking from Earth by Vegeta and Napa at 5 years of age to be trained. Over the years, Vegeta began to consider Sora as a surregate father to her. She doesn't make appearance until after Baby's defeat. She has the ability to reach Super Saiyan 4 with ease because of her adopted father.
Likes: Space, books, video games, anime, food, training
Dislikes: Perverts, bullies, arrogant people, lazy people
Techniques: She is taught all the techniques that both Vegeta and Napa know plus instant transmission
Abilities: Super Strength, Super Speed, super durability, super senses
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQyfrmJXUbg Cha-La Head Cha-La


OK, for simlicity I will make a list.

1: This is not a major problem nor a disqualifying one and honestly among all of the other issues this is minor but a picure FC is preferred. If you do not have a picture some more description is strongly recommended. Does the character have scars, other distinctive facial features etc. Also if you really want a female Goku FC, there are lots of genderbent images on a Google search.
2: The Power level is far too high. We are in what is basically the Saiyan Saga. There is a hard limit of 300 max to start off with for most characters and honestly it should be beneath that. The PL of a character will naturally grow as the RP progresses but we are all just starting.
3: OK, there are massive issues with the Bio, but starting with the biggest one, Goku does not exist in this RP. Vegeta and Nappa do not exist. Baby does not exist. No canon character exists in Dragon Ball Sagas, this was explained in the OOC. Only Original characters can be created or used in lore. This suggests that you did not read the OP, but moving on.
4: The bio is far too short, it should be at minimum two paragraphs. Give us some feel for the history of the character.
5: She could not have been tought Vegeta's techniques for the above reasons. Also, this is asking for a list of techniques. There is an example app in the OP, please look at it for reference.

That is all, honestly you are better off entirely making a new app from scratch. As aside from things like 'Likes or Dislikes and Name and species everything else was well...in need of massive reworking. I hope that this clears up any questions you may have.
Last edited by The Rebel Alliances on Tue Apr 09, 2019 7:54 pm, edited 1 time in total.
The Starlight wrote:Rebel Force: Noun - A strange power associated with street-level characters who are the weakest, yet most powerful of all.



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The Rebel Alliances
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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Tue Apr 09, 2019 7:59 pm

Also, some FCs for your potential character.

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The Starlight wrote:Rebel Force: Noun - A strange power associated with street-level characters who are the weakest, yet most powerful of all.



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American Pere Housh
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Postby American Pere Housh » Wed Apr 10, 2019 1:40 am

The Rebel Alliances wrote:
American Pere Housh wrote:Name:Sora
Appearance:Athletic build, black hair, blue eyes, black tail, Female version of Goku only a genius
Race:half Saiyan, half human
Gender:female
Age:25
Power Level:25,000
Bio:unknown daughter of Son Goku, she was taking from Earth by Vegeta and Napa at 5 years of age to be trained. Over the years, Vegeta began to consider Sora as a surregate father to her. She doesn't make appearance until after Baby's defeat. She has the ability to reach Super Saiyan 4 with ease because of her adopted father.
Likes: Space, books, video games, anime, food, training
Dislikes: Perverts, bullies, arrogant people, lazy people
Techniques: She is taught all the techniques that both Vegeta and Napa know plus instant transmission
Abilities: Super Strength, Super Speed, super durability, super senses
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQyfrmJXUbg Cha-La Head Cha-La


OK, for simlicity I will make a list.

1: This is not a major problem nor a disqualifying one and honestly among all of the other issues this is minor but a picure FC is preferred. If you do not have a picture some more description is strongly recommended. Does the character have scars, other distinctive facial features etc. Also if you really want a female Goku FC, there are lots of genderbent images on a Google search.
2: The Power level is far too high. We are in what is basically the Saiyan Saga. There is a hard limit of 300 max to start off with for most characters and honestly it should be beneath that. The PL of a character will naturally grow as the RP progresses but we are all just starting.
3: OK, there are massive issues with the Bio, but starting with the biggest one, Goku does not exist in this RP. Vegeta and Nappa do not exist. Baby does not exist. No canon character exists in Dragon Ball Sagas, this was explained in the OOC. Only Original characters can be created or used in lore. This suggests that you did not read the OP, but moving on.
4: The bio is far too short, it should be at minimum two paragraphs. Give us some feel for the history of the character.
5: She could not have been tought Vegeta's techniques for the above reasons. Also, this is asking for a list of techniques. There is an example app in the OP, please look at it for reference.

That is all, honestly you are better off entirely making a new app from scratch. As aside from things like 'Likes or Dislikes and Name and species everything else was well...in need of massive reworking. I hope that this clears up any questions you may have.

Thanks
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Leader:King Alexander
WA Ambassador: Eliza 'Vanny' Cortez
Secretary of Defense:Hitomi Izumi
Secretary of State:Alicia Cortez
Current Year:2750
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Postby Turkducken » Wed Apr 24, 2019 8:32 am

Name: Ash'Too'Sho Colrab "The Chosen"
Appearance:
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Race: Saiyan
Gender: M
Age: 21
Power Level: 250
Bio:
The Great Forests of the Western Continent are ruled by the Ha'Shana'Kai People, some build great structures atop hills, others are semi-nomadic, some even venture out into the great seas of the world. Standing atop these varied people's is the Great Clan of Ash'Too'Sho. They produce the strongest warriors of all the Warrior Clans, and according to their own legends are descended from the Great Father himself. Twenty years ago a son was born to the current War Chief, a tall and powerful woman, and it is said he rode a star onto the Earth itself. He grew to be unnaturally strong, taller than even his amazonian mother, and a proficient warrior. But the Spirits, ever mysterious, granted such a miraculous warrior at a price. A great and terrible beast would appear under the full moon and terrorize and destroy their Clan's works. This happened for many years until the Beast was slain, and it has not reappeared since.

It is said by his Mother that Colrab's name and fate were proclaimed by the stars. He became a master of the War Club, capable of defeating other warriors in groups whilst alone. He became the Chosen Warrior of the Clan, said to lead their people into the New Age. Paradise began to be threatened however, other people began to settle near the Great Forests. Colrab was tasked with retrieving a funny "paper money" from the Others by his Mother. He was pointed in the direction of a great challenge of Martial Prowess and Skill, an apparent tradition amongst the others known as the Tenkaichi Budokai. Colrab has joined the Tournament, aiming to take the winnings for himself.
Likes: His Clan, the Great Forests of Earth, His Own Strength
Dislikes: Talking, Large Crowds, Being Hungry, Urban Environments
Techniques:
Steel Lariat: With one giant arm outstretched, Colrab rushes the opponent. Catching them by the upper collarbone and slamming them into the ground.
Giant Boomerang: Colrab, with an unnatural amount of power and skill, winds up and throws his gunstock war club at an opponent. This covers several feet horizontally across the air, and it returns to him unless interfered.
Grappler's Delight: Colrab, being physically stronger than most opponents, overpowers his opponent and restrains them with an iron grip. From this technique he can choose to preform a variety of moves, such as slamming the opponent repeatedly, throwing them into the air or wall/s, or finishing them with a deadly back breaker.
Spirits Take You!: (A Finishing Move) Colrab, using his gunstock war club, beats his opponent viciously. This causes major blunt damage and minor piercing damage from the small metal blade.

Abilities:
Form of the Chosen: Standing at an intimidating 8'4, Colrab is taller than most other Saiyans, let alone Humans. His form is thick with muscles, legs as thick as trees, and soul piercing gaze in his eyes'. Even the toughest of combatants should have a little fear enter their hearts.
Theme Song: (Optional)
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Postby Finland SSR » Thu Apr 25, 2019 7:19 am

Turkducken wrote:Name: Ash'Too'Sho Colrab "The Chosen"

Gotta note that the slots for the Budokai have all been filled and we've already gone through all four battles in the first round, so Colrab can't be a tournament participant. Otherwise, seems fine.
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Postby Finland SSR » Sat May 04, 2019 4:27 am

Finland SSR wrote:Character Index

Made a quick character index to keep track of all the players in the game.
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Morrallia
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Postby Morrallia » Sat May 04, 2019 7:59 am

Finland SSR wrote:The Discord chat is now up.

https://discord.gg/8b6P8Z

Link has expired.

Also would like to join this. In case I fall out of activity assume my internet went bonkers (as it often does).
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The Republic of Atria
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Postby The Republic of Atria » Sat May 04, 2019 8:33 am

Morrallia wrote:
Finland SSR wrote:The Discord chat is now up.

https://discord.gg/8b6P8Z

Link has expired.

Also would like to join this. In case I fall out of activity assume my internet went bonkers (as it often does).


Welcome aboard, try this link: https://discord.gg/pxehKq

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Postby Finland SSR » Sat May 04, 2019 11:03 am

Reposted from the Discord chat.

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Turmenista
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Postby Turmenista » Sat May 04, 2019 11:20 am

I know I've been slow posting, so I'll try not to be so slow posting now.

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Postby Cappuccina » Fri Jul 12, 2019 4:57 pm

Anymore spots for Saiyans? If not, I'm still interested in applying.
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Postby Finland SSR » Fri Jul 12, 2019 11:15 pm

Cappuccina wrote:Anymore spots for Saiyans? If not, I'm still interested in applying.

Oh yeah, we have spots for Saiyans. We're currently in the middle of a battle against Dakon and Aspara, so help is appreciated.
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Postby Cappuccina » Sat Jul 13, 2019 1:03 pm

Finland SSR wrote:
Cappuccina wrote:Anymore spots for Saiyans? If not, I'm still interested in applying.

Oh yeah, we have spots for Saiyans. We're currently in the middle of a battle against Dakon and Aspara, so help is appreciated.

I'll begin drafting an app then! :)

P.S: would the Earth Saiyans of this universe have knowledge of what they are or is it a reveal like in the DBZ Saiyan Arch?
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Postby Finland SSR » Sat Jul 13, 2019 1:12 pm

Cappuccina wrote:
Finland SSR wrote:Oh yeah, we have spots for Saiyans. We're currently in the middle of a battle against Dakon and Aspara, so help is appreciated.

I'll begin drafting an app then! :)

P.S: would the Earth Saiyans of this universe have knowledge of what they are or is it a reveal like in the DBZ Saiyan Arch?

Unless your character was, for one reason or another, around in the World Tournament, where it was revealed what Saiyans are, then most likely not.

We're currently at the equivalent of the Nappa and Vegeta fight of the Saiyan saga.
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