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by The Republic of Atria » Wed Apr 03, 2019 12:52 pm
by Finland SSR » Wed Apr 03, 2019 1:04 pm
The Republic of Atria wrote:For the sake of simplicity, we're saying that the Tournament does allow people to sign up and drag a big ass suit of power armor with him?
by The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Wed Apr 03, 2019 2:09 pm
by The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Wed Apr 03, 2019 7:40 pm
by Finland SSR » Wed Apr 03, 2019 9:05 pm
The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune wrote:I think we really should get a discord going for this
by Finland SSR » Thu Apr 04, 2019 2:42 am
by American Pere Housh » Mon Apr 08, 2019 10:33 pm
by Sterkistan » Tue Apr 09, 2019 3:19 am
American Pere Housh wrote:Name:Sora
Appearance:Athletic build, black hair, blue eyes, black tail, Female version of Goku only a genius
Race:half Saiyan, half human
Gender:female
Age:25
Power Level:25,000
Bio:unknown daughter of Son Goku, she was taking from Earth by Vegeta and Napa at 5 years of age to be trained. Over the years, Vegeta began to consider Sora as a surregate father to her. She doesn't make appearance until after Baby's defeat. She has the ability to reach Super Saiyan 4 with ease because of her adopted father.
Likes: Space, books, video games, anime, food, training
Dislikes: Perverts, bullies, arrogant people, lazy people
Techniques: She is taught all the techniques that both Vegeta and Napa know plus instant transmission
Abilities: Super Strength, Super Speed, super durability, super senses
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQyfrmJXUbg Cha-La Head Cha-La
by American Pere Housh » Tue Apr 09, 2019 7:21 pm
Sterkistan wrote:American Pere Housh wrote:Name:Sora
Appearance:Athletic build, black hair, blue eyes, black tail, Female version of Goku only a genius
Race:half Saiyan, half human
Gender:female
Age:25
Power Level:25,000
Bio:unknown daughter of Son Goku, she was taking from Earth by Vegeta and Napa at 5 years of age to be trained. Over the years, Vegeta began to consider Sora as a surregate father to her. She doesn't make appearance until after Baby's defeat. She has the ability to reach Super Saiyan 4 with ease because of her adopted father.
Likes: Space, books, video games, anime, food, training
Dislikes: Perverts, bullies, arrogant people, lazy people
Techniques: She is taught all the techniques that both Vegeta and Napa know plus instant transmission
Abilities: Super Strength, Super Speed, super durability, super senses
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQyfrmJXUbg Cha-La Head Cha-La
Is this a joke app?
by The Rebel Alliances » Tue Apr 09, 2019 7:51 pm
American Pere Housh wrote:Name:Sora
Appearance:Athletic build, black hair, blue eyes, black tail, Female version of Goku only a genius
Race:half Saiyan, half human
Gender:female
Age:25
Power Level:25,000
Bio:unknown daughter of Son Goku, she was taking from Earth by Vegeta and Napa at 5 years of age to be trained. Over the years, Vegeta began to consider Sora as a surregate father to her. She doesn't make appearance until after Baby's defeat. She has the ability to reach Super Saiyan 4 with ease because of her adopted father.
Likes: Space, books, video games, anime, food, training
Dislikes: Perverts, bullies, arrogant people, lazy people
Techniques: She is taught all the techniques that both Vegeta and Napa know plus instant transmission
Abilities: Super Strength, Super Speed, super durability, super senses
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQyfrmJXUbg Cha-La Head Cha-La
The Starlight wrote:Rebel Force: Noun - A strange power associated with street-level characters who are the weakest, yet most powerful of all.
by The Rebel Alliances » Tue Apr 09, 2019 7:59 pm
The Starlight wrote:Rebel Force: Noun - A strange power associated with street-level characters who are the weakest, yet most powerful of all.
by American Pere Housh » Wed Apr 10, 2019 1:40 am
The Rebel Alliances wrote:American Pere Housh wrote:Name:Sora
Appearance:Athletic build, black hair, blue eyes, black tail, Female version of Goku only a genius
Race:half Saiyan, half human
Gender:female
Age:25
Power Level:25,000
Bio:unknown daughter of Son Goku, she was taking from Earth by Vegeta and Napa at 5 years of age to be trained. Over the years, Vegeta began to consider Sora as a surregate father to her. She doesn't make appearance until after Baby's defeat. She has the ability to reach Super Saiyan 4 with ease because of her adopted father.
Likes: Space, books, video games, anime, food, training
Dislikes: Perverts, bullies, arrogant people, lazy people
Techniques: She is taught all the techniques that both Vegeta and Napa know plus instant transmission
Abilities: Super Strength, Super Speed, super durability, super senses
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQyfrmJXUbg Cha-La Head Cha-La
OK, for simlicity I will make a list.
1: This is not a major problem nor a disqualifying one and honestly among all of the other issues this is minor but a picure FC is preferred. If you do not have a picture some more description is strongly recommended. Does the character have scars, other distinctive facial features etc. Also if you really want a female Goku FC, there are lots of genderbent images on a Google search.
2: The Power level is far too high. We are in what is basically the Saiyan Saga. There is a hard limit of 300 max to start off with for most characters and honestly it should be beneath that. The PL of a character will naturally grow as the RP progresses but we are all just starting.
3: OK, there are massive issues with the Bio, but starting with the biggest one, Goku does not exist in this RP. Vegeta and Nappa do not exist. Baby does not exist. No canon character exists in Dragon Ball Sagas, this was explained in the OOC. Only Original characters can be created or used in lore. This suggests that you did not read the OP, but moving on.
4: The bio is far too short, it should be at minimum two paragraphs. Give us some feel for the history of the character.
5: She could not have been tought Vegeta's techniques for the above reasons. Also, this is asking for a list of techniques. There is an example app in the OP, please look at it for reference.
That is all, honestly you are better off entirely making a new app from scratch. As aside from things like 'Likes or Dislikes and Name and species everything else was well...in need of massive reworking. I hope that this clears up any questions you may have.
by Turkducken » Wed Apr 24, 2019 8:32 am
by Finland SSR » Thu Apr 25, 2019 7:19 am
Turkducken wrote:Name: Ash'Too'Sho Colrab "The Chosen"
by Finland SSR » Sat May 04, 2019 4:27 am
Finland SSR wrote:Character Index
by Morrallia » Sat May 04, 2019 7:59 am
by The Republic of Atria » Sat May 04, 2019 8:33 am
Morrallia wrote:
Link has expired.
Also would like to join this. In case I fall out of activity assume my internet went bonkers (as it often does).
by Finland SSR » Sat May 04, 2019 11:03 am
by Turmenista » Sat May 04, 2019 11:20 am
by Cappuccina » Fri Jul 12, 2019 4:57 pm
by Finland SSR » Fri Jul 12, 2019 11:15 pm
Cappuccina wrote:Anymore spots for Saiyans? If not, I'm still interested in applying.
by Cappuccina » Sat Jul 13, 2019 1:03 pm
by Finland SSR » Sat Jul 13, 2019 1:12 pm
Cappuccina wrote:Finland SSR wrote:Oh yeah, we have spots for Saiyans. We're currently in the middle of a battle against Dakon and Aspara, so help is appreciated.
I'll begin drafting an app then!
P.S: would the Earth Saiyans of this universe have knowledge of what they are or is it a reveal like in the DBZ Saiyan Arch?
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