Jojo Bizarre Rewrite (Interest, OOC)

[Britanania]

Name: Sūn Fang (Chinese naming conventions, so her first name is Fāng)
Character Appearance: Here.
Character Personality: Fang is a quiet, stotic individual, observant and patient, always with her eye on whatever goal she's set herself most recently.
Character Bio: Sūn Fang, or Fang Sūn, is the eldest daughter but third child of an extremely wealthy Chinese merchant and his Portuguese wife in Hong Kong. A rather sheltered girl, she tended to fade into the background in the social circles of her peers, being rather quiet, but not out of shyness, but out of choice. Fang learned to watch, to observe people, to figure out what they wanted and how they intended to get it, and then how to twist and play them, using her rare offerings of speech as scalpel-like precise movements, always keeping her words to only things of importance.

At the age of 18, however, as the eldest daughter, and of a Chinese high-class family at that, there was only one option open to her; marriage. So she did the logical thing, and she left, travelling to America where her uncle had supposedly gone to, leaving with no plan, and no real destination, only whatever she could gather into a suitcase. She's been making her way eastwards across the US ever since, learning to shoot in her free time, travelling by train and horse and foot, working odd jobs along the way, mostly as a maid or a washerwoman or a courier, and she's been doing that ever since.

Stand Name: Evanescence
Stand Appearance: Evanescence is a white, glowing unicorn, around the same size as a very large horse.
Stand Power: Evanescence is an Automatic Stand, activating automatically whenever its user is placed in danger regardless of if the user is aware of the danger or not, and attempting to remove them from the danger, either by running or fighting. Evanescence's horn, if touched, instantly puts whoever touched it into a deep coma, with the only way to awaken them by either killing Evanescence or having Evanescence touch the target with the horn. Likewise, anyone asleep who touches Evanescence's horn is awakened, and cannot sleep until they touch Evanescence's horn again but retains the need for sleep.
Stand Weakness: Evanescence can put people down quite easily, but it cannot put people 'out' as it were. Furthermore, it cannot be used for active offence, as it only activates when the user is about to be in danger.
Stand Stats:

Destructive Power: D
Speed: A
Range: E
Durability: A
Precision: C
Developmental Power: B

Accepted

[Atkemri]

Name:Cäsar Von Binge
Character Appearance:Cäser
Character Personality:Cäser is very proud and haughty person proud of his appearance, heritage, bloodline, etc. He is highly nationalistic and cruel towards people labeled "enemies" of the German state. To others he is just cold, but can care if they show similar values to him.
Character Bio:Cäser was born into a noble family in Prussia and was given a sheltered childhood going to private schools across the planet. He joined the military in 1892 as an officer and rose up the ranks. He's been assigned to deliver a message to Mexico and to pick up a Bizarre item along the way....
Stand Name:Krautrock
Stand Appearance:Kroutrock
Stand power: Kroutrock has guns on it's wrists and an artillery piece on it's back. It can also move backwards in time 10 seconds
Stand weakness:The Stand is not very durable and his time reverse can only be used one time every day
Stand Stats:

Destructive Power:A
Speed:B
Range:B
Durability:C
Precision:D
Developmental power:D

[Danceria]

Name: Dominick “Dom” Dohman
Character Appearance: fitting the time period
Character Personality: Dominick is the very empitemy of the rowdy, but still polite enough German gentleman. Prompt in action and decision, he’s not one to start a fight, but isn’t one to shy away from a fight either. Driven by a fierce desire to protect people and cure his sister, he works tirelessly to find a cure for the bizarre ailment that afflicts Erika.
Character Bio: Born to a student of the great Egyptologist Heinrich Karl Brugsch, and a German Literature teacher, the Dohmans grew up with a strong emphasis on education, and indeed, the Dohmans were a far-travelling family of professors, doctors, and explorers. Dr. Dietrich Christian Dohman was actually a contemporary of the late Professor Collins, and was present in the fated sabbatical that recovered the Bow and Arrows, though his two children would not know of the situation.

For Dominick was growing up a bright and studious child, though sadly was sent over to the United States during the outbreak of the Great War. Any that accused either himself or his sister of spying for Germany was met with a triade of fists and furious words, and was often seen laying on the hurt on anyone who persecuted the long-standing German-American community in Boston. During university, he was actually interested in medicine, breaking tradition with the philological minded Dohmans, and actually studied with Layla Collins for Anthropology and English, where he earned dubious nickname of “Gutenberg” for his adept translations of German subjects into English and vice-versa.

Now with Collins’s death, it appears that the world is only going to get stranger from here.

Stand Name: 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』
Stand Appearance: A blob of semi-transparent purple goop, typically encasing Dominick in a tough but spongy armor, continuously shifting about to Dominick’s needs and desires. It’s greatest ability is to harden to an impressively durable material and relax to it’s natural goop like presence. This allows Stuck In Middle to hide beneath armor and up sleeves, waiting for an opportune moment to strike. It does have a humanoid form however, consisting of a menacing four armed figure of which it uses to lift or punch the [REDACTED] out of objects/persons. This form rarely manifests itself, save only to combat other powerful close quarters Stands. However, glimpses of it can be seen whenever Dominick uses his various abilities.

Stand power: 『Clowns to the Left of Me』: At the expense of nearly all other stats in exchange for range, a portion of 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』 can be placed on a person of interest, and last 30 days on a normal person. However, with Stand users, the effect is drastically cut to three days, due to the piece being gradually eroded by the Stand User’s unique aura. Think of it as a scab, or piece of dead skin. Eventually it flakes off and new skin (or Spirit Hamon/Stand Aura) takes place. Of course, the effect can be cut even shorter if a rather perceptive Stand User notices an odd piece of purple goop attached to them.

『Jokers to the Right』: Similar to Cannon Hermit Purple, but Dominick is not so much able to divine future events (because ability to divine the future plus healing would be too OP for Me) as he is able to analyze objects and figure out where people are. Jokers allows Dominick to analyze the compound of an object, draw things from memory, and discern the locations of persons of interest. Sadly, he cannot control it. (See above).

『Stuck In the Middle』: With a little bit of Hamon, 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』 can repair broken objects, and act as a mild healing agent.

Stand weakness:(Give at least one given that your stand isn't too strong)
Stand Stats:(Rank Each from E to A. E is the worst while A is the best)

Destructive Power: B
Speed: A
Range: D
Durability: B
Precision: A
Developmental power: C

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Name: Erika Dohman
Character Appearance: This, but naturally paler and with more pronounced canines, and ruby-red eyes.
Character Personality: Originally, Erika was an athletic, upbeat girl, serving as the counterpart to Layla. Where Layla tries to be quiet and aloof, Erika’s “mask” is one of the extroverted lass who will shake your hand and show you around campus. She tries to emulate her older brother’s upbeat nature, and has garnered the reputation of a party girl.

Now? Now she’s much more depressed, pensive, and angsty. Almost nuerotically pouring over occult texts in order to reverse her vampiric state, she tries her best to keep a smile for her big bro, but...
Character Bio: Erika Dohman was often joked to have been born bear-hugging Dominick, and for good reason. During university, she would often be closest with her older brother, being nigh inseparable and horrendously competitive. She could change from competing neck in neck, a fierce verbal fencing in German, to bawling or laughing with one arm slung around her big bro in a matter of minutes. Only siblings as close as the Dohman twins could understand the bond that the two had, especially being so far from their native home.

Mercifully for Dominick, she seems to have found a new friend in the incredibly aloof Layla, being a fellow lover of anthropology, and seemed to have stuck to the Professor’s daughter as much as her older brother. It was a matter of sink or swim, as the two were roommates, which lead to the Dohman’s learning of Collins’s secret experiments with the Arrow and Mask.

One fateful night, while the duo were assisting the Professor, the Stone Mask latched itself onto Erika’s face, and turned her into a rabid vampire. Fortunately restrained, the Professor and Dominick worked tirelessly to at least restore her mental state. It was done in a roundabout way, as to the Professor, the only way that a Vampire could be defeated besides sunlight would be through a Stand, and when the arrow was launched at Dominick, Erika broke her bonds and attempted to shield her brother from the projectile. Unfortunately, Vampires can easily be destroyed, and easily repair themselves, so the arrow went right through her and pierced Dominick nonetheless. They both survived this event, and on top of gaining stands, Erika was able to regain her coherence as a slightly less than ravenous vampire, who currently is satisfied with eating aged and dying animals.
Stand Name: 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』
Stand Appearance: The Stand typically manifests in an inky black visage, covering almost all of Erika’s body, though at night, it spreads out to become shadowy will-o-the-wisp like sparks dancing about her, that can combine to form larger objects or split apart to act as her eyes and ears.
Stand power:
『Any Colour You Like』: “...So long as it’s in black or white”. Works exactly as Hermit Purple’s Spirit Photography.

『Brain Damage』: Perhaps it’s the nature of the Stand, perhaps it’s something related to the Vampiric Flesh Buds, perhaps it’s because of her own introverted nature, but Erika has a way of being invisible. Whether it be a disguise, or straight up camouflage, with proper preparation, she can be no more than another face in the crowd.

『Us and Them』: The most evident of her abilities, and usually displayed when a sufficient amount of darkness is in the air, she sheds her Stand’s aura to a small host of little black specks and sparks. These...fragments are what she uses to attack, or generally defend herself against foes. Similarities have been drawn between 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 and 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』, due to overall appearance, abilities, and nature. However, 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』 is more coherent, defined, and has an actual consistent humanoid appearance, while 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 retains a more fluid visage. However, unlike Dominick’s Stand, she can use the individual sparks to “detect” living beings, in conjunction with her already vampiric senses.

Stand weakness: While the Stand in theory is rather powerful against non-stand users, those versed in Hamon or possessing Stands of their own find that while the Stand itself is nigh-indestructible, Vampires still suffer from rigor mortis, and if sufficiently damaged, 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 would be Erika’s body bag. She is more vulnerable in daytime, as she would be using her stand to deflect harmful sunlight.
Stand Stats:(Rank Each from E to A. E is the worst while A is the best)

Destructive Power: C
Speed: C
Range: B
Durability: A
Precision: D
Developmental power: B

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[Skarten]

Name: Dominick “Dom” Dohman
Character Appearance: fitting the time period
Character Personality: Dominick is the very empitemy of the rowdy, but still polite enough German gentleman. Prompt in action and decision, he’s not one to start a fight, but isn’t one to shy away from a fight either. Driven by a fierce desire to protect people and cure his sister, he works tirelessly to find a cure for the bizarre ailment that afflicts Erika.
Character Bio: Born to a student of the great Egyptologist Heinrich Karl Brugsch, and a German Literature teacher, the Dohmans grew up with a strong emphasis on education, and indeed, the Dohmans were a far-travelling family of professors, doctors, and explorers. Dr. Dietrich Christian Dohman was actually a contemporary of the late Professor Collins, and was present in the fated sabbatical that recovered the Bow and Arrows, though his two children would not know of the situation.

For Dominick was growing up a bright and studious child, though sadly was sent over to the United States during the outbreak of the Great War. Any that accused either himself or his sister of spying for Germany was met with a triade of fists and furious words, and was often seen laying on the hurt on anyone who persecuted the long-standing German-American community in Boston. During university, he was actually interested in medicine, breaking tradition with the philological minded Dohmans, and actually studied with Layla Collins for Anthropology and English, where he earned dubious nickname of “Gutenberg” for his adept translations of German subjects into English and vice-versa.

Now with Collins’s death, it appears that the world is only going to get stranger from here.

Stand Name: 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』
Stand Appearance: A blob of semi-transparent purple goop, typically encasing Dominick in a tough but spongy armor, continuously shifting about to Dominick’s needs and desires. It’s greatest ability is to harden to an impressively durable material and relax to it’s natural goop like presence. This allows Stuck In Middle to hide beneath armor and up sleeves, waiting for an opportune moment to strike. It does have a humanoid form however, consisting of a menacing four armed figure of which it uses to lift or punch the [REDACTED] out of objects/persons. This form rarely manifests itself, save only to combat other powerful close quarters Stands. However, glimpses of it can be seen whenever Dominick uses his various abilities.

Stand power: 『Clowns to the Left of Me』: At the expense of nearly all other stats in exchange for range, a portion of 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』 can be placed on a person of interest, and last 30 days on a normal person. However, with Stand users, the effect is drastically cut to three days, due to the piece being gradually eroded by the Stand User’s unique aura. Think of it as a scab, or piece of dead skin. Eventually it flakes off and new skin (or Spirit Hamon/Stand Aura) takes place. Of course, the effect can be cut even shorter if a rather perceptive Stand User notices an odd piece of purple goop attached to them.

『Jokers to the Right』: Similar to Cannon Hermit Purple, but Dominick is not so much able to divine future events (because ability to divine the future plus healing would be too OP for Me) as he is able to analyze objects and figure out where people are. Jokers allows Dominick to analyze the compound of an object, draw things from memory, and discern the locations of persons of interest. Sadly, he cannot control it. (See above).

『Stuck In the Middle』: With a little bit of Hamon, 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』 can repair broken objects, and act as a mild healing agent.

Stand weakness:(Give at least one given that your stand isn't too strong)
Stand Stats:(Rank Each from E to A. E is the worst while A is the best)

Destructive Power: B
Speed: A
Range: D
Durability: B
Precision: A
Developmental power: C

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Name: Erika Dohman
Character Appearance: This, but naturally paler and with more pronounced canines, and ruby-red eyes.
Character Personality: Originally, Erika was an athletic, upbeat girl, serving as the counterpart to Layla. Where Layla tries to be quiet and aloof, Erika’s “mask” is one of the extroverted lass who will shake your hand and show you around campus. She tries to emulate her older brother’s upbeat nature, and has garnered the reputation of a party girl.

Now? Now she’s much more depressed, pensive, and angsty. Almost nuerotically pouring over occult texts in order to reverse her vampiric state, she tries her best to keep a smile for her big bro, but...
Character Bio: Erika Dohman was often joked to have been born bear-hugging Dominick, and for good reason. During university, she would often be closest with her older brother, being nigh inseparable and horrendously competitive. She could change from competing neck in neck, a fierce verbal fencing in German, to bawling or laughing with one arm slung around her big bro in a matter of minutes. Only siblings as close as the Dohman twins could understand the bond that the two had, especially being so far from their native home.

Mercifully for Dominick, she seems to have found a new friend in the incredibly aloof Layla, being a fellow lover of anthropology, and seemed to have stuck to the Professor’s daughter as much as her older brother. It was a matter of sink or swim, as the two were roommates, which lead to the Dohman’s learning of Collins’s secret experiments with the Arrow and Mask.

One fateful night, while the duo were assisting the Professor, the Stone Mask latched itself onto Erika’s face, and turned her into a rabid vampire. Fortunately restrained, the Professor and Dominick worked tirelessly to at least restore her mental state. It was done in a roundabout way, as to the Professor, the only way that a Vampire could be defeated besides sunlight would be through a Stand, and when the arrow was launched at Dominick, Erika broke her bonds and attempted to shield her brother from the projectile. Unfortunately, Vampires can easily be destroyed, and easily repair themselves, so the arrow went right through her and pierced Dominick nonetheless. They both survived this event, and on top of gaining stands, Erika was able to regain her coherence as a slightly less than ravenous vampire, who currently is satisfied with eating aged and dying animals.
Stand Name: 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』
Stand Appearance: The Stand typically manifests in an inky black visage, covering almost all of Erika’s body, though at night, it spreads out to become shadowy will-o-the-wisp like sparks dancing about her, that can combine to form larger objects or split apart to act as her eyes and ears.
Stand power:
『Any Colour You Like』: “...So long as it’s in black or white”. Works exactly as Hermit Purple’s Spirit Photography.

『Brain Damage』: Perhaps it’s the nature of the Stand, perhaps it’s something related to the Vampiric Flesh Buds, perhaps it’s because of her own introverted nature, but Erika has a way of being invisible. Whether it be a disguise, or straight up camouflage, with proper preparation, she can be no more than another face in the crowd.

『Us and Them』: The most evident of her abilities, and usually displayed when a sufficient amount of darkness is in the air, she sheds her Stand’s aura to a small host of little black specks and sparks. These...fragments are what she uses to attack, or generally defend herself against foes. Similarities have been drawn between 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 and 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』, due to overall appearance, abilities, and nature. However, 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』 is more coherent, defined, and has an actual consistent humanoid appearance, while 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 retains a more fluid visage. However, unlike Dominick’s Stand, she can use the individual sparks to “detect” living beings, in conjunction with her already vampiric senses.

Stand weakness: While the Stand in theory is rather powerful against non-stand users, those versed in Hamon or possessing Stands of their own find that while the Stand itself is nigh-indestructible, Vampires still suffer from rigor mortis, and if sufficiently damaged, 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 would be Erika’s body bag. She is more vulnerable in daytime, as she would be using her stand to deflect harmful sunlight.
Stand Stats:(Rank Each from E to A. E is the worst while A is the best)

Destructive Power: C
Speed: C
Range: B
Durability: A
Precision: D
Developmental power: B

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You need to put an weakness for Dominick's stand. You can't be simply unbeatable.I Also dont really like how many powers you have.Dominick 's stand also has rather high stats, considering the powers and abilities.

[Haedros 92712]

Finished my app for not-Noriaki Kakyoin.

[Britanania]

Finished my app for not-Noriaki Kakyoin.

I feel really uncomfortable about how similar this character is to the canon Kakyoin and the Crusaders in general, especially because you said you're making a Jotaro expy who has time stopping powers. I dunno, if Atkemri is fine with it, he's the boss, but would think this works better if we use more original characters

[Haedros 92712]

Finished my app for not-Noriaki Kakyoin.

I feel really uncomfortable about how similar this character is to the canon Kakyoin and the Crusaders in general, especially because you said you're making a Jotaro expy who has time stopping powers. I dunno, if Atkemri is fine with it, he's the boss, but would think this works better if we use more original characters

If I were to make this A.U. Jotaro, his Star Platinum-ish stand would be even weaker than part 4 Star Platinum, maybe a one second time stop at best, just to even out the fact that it is a time stop, as well as put a heavy cooldown.

[Britanania]

I feel really uncomfortable about how similar this character is to the canon Kakyoin and the Crusaders in general, especially because you said you're making a Jotaro expy who has time stopping powers. I dunno, if Atkemri is fine with it, he's the boss, but would think this works better if we use more original characters

If I were to make this A.U. Jotaro, his Star Platinum-ish stand would be even weaker than part 4 Star Platinum, maybe a one second time stop at best, just to even out the fact that it is a time stop, as well as put a heavy cooldown.

Fair enough, but I still feel uneasy about it in general. I won't rule on it until Atkemri is on.

[Skarten]

I feel really uncomfortable about how similar this character is to the canon Kakyoin and the Crusaders in general, especially because you said you're making a Jotaro expy who has time stopping powers. I dunno, if Atkemri is fine with it, he's the boss, but would think this works better if we use more original characters

If I were to make this A.U. Jotaro, his Star Platinum-ish stand would be even weaker than part 4 Star Platinum, maybe a one second time stop at best, just to even out the fact that it is a time stop, as well as put a heavy cooldown.

I don't agree with it. It's essentially an ripoff. I'll wait for Atkemri, but if it depended on me, i'd say denied.

[Haedros 92712]

Eh, I've got two people against it, so Ima just go back and edit it now

[Britanania]

Eh, I've got two people against it, so Ima just go back and edit it now

Really the issue is the backstory. If you change it to be completely original it should be fine

[Skarten]

Eh, I've got two people against it, so Ima just go back and edit it now

Really the issue is the backstory. If you change it to be completely original it should be fine

Maybe change the name or the picture. That'd help too

[Haedros 92712]

Eh, I've got two people against it, so Ima just go back and edit it now

Really the issue is the backstory. If you change it to be completely original it should be fine

Yeah, that's pretty much what I'm doing, cutting the backstory and removing the stands emerald splash type ability. It's gonna basically be the same character, but with less Kakyoin.

[Britanania]

Really the issue is the backstory. If you change it to be completely original it should be fine

Maybe change the name or the picture. That'd help too

That too.

[Atkemri]

Name: Hiroshi Sato
Character Appearance: Don't mind that it's just Kakyoin.
(Don't mind that it's just Kakyoin)
Character Personality: Hiroshi is incredibly pensive, calm, and strategic. He is incredibly formal and distant, an introverted type, only kind with those who are close to him. Incredibly intelligent and strategic, though, he suffers from a great flaw. Reflected in his stand, he is quick to break in a fight, or in even everyday tribulations, and run away.
Character Bio:
Stand Name: Siamese Dream
Stand Appearance: Siamese Dream
Stand power: Upon contact with Siamese Dreams fists, reality becomes far more malleable, allowing the stand to pull apart the fabric of reality to create wormholes that it and it's user can travel through. If anything other than the stand or user tries to use these wormholes, they will be pulled in and essentially deleted from existence. In addition to this, Siamese Dream can stretch out its limbs, and unravel its body like Noriaki Kakyoin's Hierophant.
Stand weakness: It's only real destructive power is its wormholes. The punches S.D. throws are about as strong as Gold Experience. In addition, it's durability is so low that engaging in a punching match with another stand is a huge risk for S.D.
Stand Stats:

Destructive Power: B
Speed: A
Range: B (the stand itself can teleport around 30-40 meters, though the stand can only be about 15 meters away from it's user.)
Durability: D
Precision: C
Developmental power: B

I'll wait for an app to make my judgement though it definitely looks better.

[Turmenista]

Name: Evelyn Sherwood
Character Appearance: Here
Character Personality: Evelyn is very difficult to understand at first. She is outgoing, stubborn, sultry at times, and hot-headed with a short temper, while also managing to be a manipulative and bratty stereotypical "rich girl." She is selfish, hoarding things of value to herself, and is more likely to ask someone else in a team to do the work while she does something else. However, deep down inside of Evelyn lies a heart of gold. When the going gets tough, she may sometimes put the lives and safety of others in front of her own safety, and will vehemently defend what she believes in. This is evident in her stubborn behavior and high expectations of friends.
Character Bio:

The Sherwoods were an elite family renowned for their great wealth and deep history, and some even considered them American "Nobility" due to their rich bloodline. Evelyn was no different from any other Sherwood, born into the upper class family living in South Carolina. While most of their money before was from slaves and the plantation lifestyle, the Sherwoods had to improvise, adapt, and overcome to changing times. When the economy changed from agrarian to industrial, The Sherwoods moved to big businesses, and, as such, her father would be the one to establish himself as a popular and well-respected owner of a law firm in South Carolina. Evelyn's expectations were high from the start as well. She made exceptional grades, living a fairly normal childhood up until a fateful event that would change her life forever.

While messing around in their vast house, Evelyn was suddenly subject to The Arrow, or, rather, an Arrow. The artifact was a heirloom from one of her father's friends, its origins mainly unknown. While Evelyn would survive the accident, it would inadvertently awaken her Stand, Com Truise, a8nd change her life forever. Suddenly, she would begin making references to her "guardian angel," who always seemed to "stop" misfortune events from befalling Evelyn. Even potential thieves and muggers weren't safe from the "guardian angel" — they'd all end up with terrible injuries that, evidently, only a powerful man or rabid animal could make.

After completing her university studies, Evelyn would follow in the footsteps of her father to expand her family's clout outside of the south, moving north to New York City. She would later establish her own fashion and beauty company while there, thanks to some "help" from her father (really a rather sizable loan of money and workers.) However, as with most Sherwoods, she constantly wanted more, and looked to expand her gradually growing beauty company throughout the northeast. This brought her directly to the most bizarre of locations: the tiny town of Norton, Maine, which one would have to look intensely at a map to even find. While searching through the town for a place to set up her expansion, she would inadvertently put herself in the path of an even more bizarre set of events to come.

Stand Name: 『COM TRUISE』
Stand Appearance: Here
Stand power: "Controlpop": In addition to being a rather standard close-range stand, Com Truise is capable of controlling the "timeline" of objects, or specific aspects of them. It can act as a sort of "remote control" for Evelyn that is able to pause, resume, fast-forward, and rewind whatever aspect of the object she is affecting. An example of Evelyn's use of her ability is to accelerate the speed of a punch while pausing the time it would take for her fists to break from the immense speed and force it would normally not be able to handle, thus allowing her to punch at increased power. Some more niche applications include pausing food or the bacteria on it to keep it from spoiling, pausing the timeline of something like a bullet or arrow falling to keep it flying straight, pausing the air in front of her to make it function like a solid, or rewinding some injuries.
Stand weakness: The stand's most glaring weakness is that it must be in contact with the object to be able to affect it. Considering its rather short range, this is often difficult to do. Another weakness is shown when Com Truise tries to affect more object than one at the same time, which will cause a physical strain to be put on the user's body. In extreme cases of affecting more than one thing, Evelyn will succumb to exhaustion and risk collapsing from overexertion, or even dying in the fashion of a heart attack or stroke. The Stand cannot reverse deaths, its effects are permanent if not specified otherwise (which could potentially be dangerous for its user or allies), and it is unable to universally manipulate time, being vulnerable to abilities revolving around time, like time stops.
Stand Stats:

Destructive Power: C
Speed: A
Range: C
Durability: B
Precision: B
Developmental power: B

[Danceria]

Name: Dominick “Dom” Dohman
Character Appearance: fitting the time period
Character Personality: Dominick is the very empitemy of the rowdy, but still polite enough German gentleman. Prompt in action and decision, he’s not one to start a fight, but isn’t one to shy away from a fight either. Driven by a fierce desire to protect people and cure his sister, he works tirelessly to find a cure for the bizarre ailment that afflicts Erika.
Character Bio: Born to a student of the great Egyptologist Heinrich Karl Brugsch, and a German Literature teacher, the Dohmans grew up with a strong emphasis on education, and indeed, the Dohmans were a far-travelling family of professors, doctors, and explorers. Dr. Dietrich Christian Dohman was actually a contemporary of the late Professor Collins, and was present in the fated sabbatical that recovered the Bow and Arrows, though his two children would not know of the situation.

For Dominick was growing up a bright and studious child, though sadly was sent over to the United States during the outbreak of the Great War. Any that accused either himself or his sister of spying for Germany was met with a triade of fists and furious words, and was often seen laying on the hurt on anyone who persecuted the long-standing German-American community in Boston. During university, he was actually interested in medicine, breaking tradition with the philological minded Dohmans, and actually studied with Layla Collins for Anthropology and English, where he earned dubious nickname of “Gutenberg” for his adept translations of German subjects into English and vice-versa.

Now with Collins’s death, it appears that the world is only going to get stranger from here.

Stand Name: 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』
Stand Appearance: A blob of semi-transparent purple goop, typically encasing Dominick in a tough but spongy armor, continuously shifting about to Dominick’s needs and desires. It’s greatest ability is to harden to an impressively durable material and relax to it’s natural goop like presence. This allows Stuck In Middle to hide beneath armor and up sleeves, waiting for an opportune moment to strike. It does have a humanoid form however, consisting of a menacing four armed figure of which it uses to lift or punch the [REDACTED] out of objects/persons. This form rarely manifests itself, save only to combat other powerful close quarters Stands. However, glimpses of it can be seen whenever Dominick uses his various abilities.

Stand power:
『Stuck In the Middle』: With a little bit of Hamon, 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』 can repair broken objects, and act as a mild healing agent.

Stand weakness:It is a young stand, firmly attached to Dominick and not truly aware of it's own power. A sufficiently well-ranged stand, or a variety of traps, could be the undoing of Dominick if he
Stand Stats:(Rank Each from E to A. E is the worst while A is the best)

Destructive Power: C
Speed: A
Range: E
Durability: B
Precision: A
Developmental power: A

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Name: Erika Dohman
Character Appearance: Thanks Brit for the image.
Character Personality: Originally, Erika was an athletic, upbeat girl, serving as the counterpart to Layla. Where Layla tries to be quiet and aloof, Erika’s “mask” is one of the extroverted lass who will shake your hand and show you around campus. She tries to emulate her older brother’s upbeat nature, and has garnered the reputation of a party girl.

Now? Now she’s much more depressed, pensive, and angsty. Almost nuerotically pouring over occult texts in order to reverse her vampiric state, she tries her best to keep a smile for her big bro, but...
Character Bio: Erika Dohman was often joked to have been born bear-hugging Dominick, and for good reason. During university, she would often be closest with her older brother, being nigh inseparable and horrendously competitive. She could change from competing neck in neck, a fierce verbal fencing in German, to bawling or laughing with one arm slung around her big bro in a matter of minutes. Only siblings as close as the Dohman twins could understand the bond that the two had, especially being so far from their native home.

Mercifully for Dominick, she seems to have found a new friend in the incredibly aloof Layla, being a fellow lover of anthropology, and seemed to have stuck to the Professor’s daughter as much as her older brother. It was a matter of sink or swim, as the two were roommates, which lead to the Dohman’s learning of Collins’s secret experiments with the Arrow and Mask.

One fateful night, while the duo were assisting the Professor, the Stone Mask latched itself onto Erika’s face, and turned her into a rabid vampire. Fortunately restrained, the Professor and Dominick worked tirelessly to at least restore her mental state. It was done in a roundabout way, as to the Professor, the only way that a Vampire could be defeated besides sunlight would be through a Stand, and when the arrow was launched at Dominick, Erika broke her bonds and attempted to shield her brother from the projectile. Unfortunately, Vampires can easily be destroyed, and easily repair themselves, so the arrow went right through her and pierced Dominick nonetheless. They both survived this event, and on top of gaining stands, Erika was able to regain her coherence as a slightly less than ravenous vampire, who currently is satisfied with eating aged and dying animals.
Stand Name: 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』
Stand Appearance: The Stand typically manifests in an inky black visage, covering almost all of Erika’s body, though at night, it spreads out to become shadowy will-o-the-wisp like sparks dancing about her, that can combine to form larger objects or split apart to act as her eyes and ears.
Stand power:

『Us and Them』: The most evident of her abilities, and usually displayed when a sufficient amount of darkness is in the air, she sheds her Stand’s aura to a small host of little black specks and sparks. These...fragments are what she uses to attack, or generally defend herself against foes. Similarities have been drawn between 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 and 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』, due to overall appearance, abilities, and nature. However, 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』 is more coherent, defined, and has an actual consistent humanoid appearance, while 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 retains a more fluid visage. However, unlike Dominick’s Stand, she can use the individual sparks to “detect” living beings, in conjunction with her already impressive vampiric abilities.

Stand weakness: While the Stand in theory is rather powerful against non-stand users, those versed in Hamon or possessing Stands of their own find that while the Stand itself is nigh-indestructible, Vampires still suffer from rigor mortis, and if sufficiently damaged, 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 would be Erika’s body bag. She is more vulnerable in daytime, as she would be using her stand to deflect harmful sunlight.
Stand Stats:(Rank Each from E to A. E is the worst while A is the best)

Destructive Power: C
Speed: C
Range: B
Durability: A
Precision: D
Developmental power: B

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Edited

[Britanania]

Name: Dominick “Dom” Dohman
Character Appearance: fitting the time period
Character Personality: Dominick is the very empitemy of the rowdy, but still polite enough German gentleman. Prompt in action and decision, he’s not one to start a fight, but isn’t one to shy away from a fight either. Driven by a fierce desire to protect people and cure his sister, he works tirelessly to find a cure for the bizarre ailment that afflicts Erika.
Character Bio: Born to a student of the great Egyptologist Heinrich Karl Brugsch, and a German Literature teacher, the Dohmans grew up with a strong emphasis on education, and indeed, the Dohmans were a far-travelling family of professors, doctors, and explorers. Dr. Dietrich Christian Dohman was actually a contemporary of the late Professor Collins, and was present in the fated sabbatical that recovered the Bow and Arrows, though his two children would not know of the situation.

For Dominick was growing up a bright and studious child, though sadly was sent over to the United States during the outbreak of the Great War. Any that accused either himself or his sister of spying for Germany was met with a triade of fists and furious words, and was often seen laying on the hurt on anyone who persecuted the long-standing German-American community in Boston. During university, he was actually interested in medicine, breaking tradition with the philological minded Dohmans, and actually studied with Layla Collins for Anthropology and English, where he earned dubious nickname of “Gutenberg” for his adept translations of German subjects into English and vice-versa.

Now with Collins’s death, it appears that the world is only going to get stranger from here.

Stand Name: 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』
Stand Appearance: A blob of semi-transparent purple goop, typically encasing Dominick in a tough but spongy armor, continuously shifting about to Dominick’s needs and desires. It’s greatest ability is to harden to an impressively durable material and relax to it’s natural goop like presence. This allows Stuck In Middle to hide beneath armor and up sleeves, waiting for an opportune moment to strike. It does have a humanoid form however, consisting of a menacing four armed figure of which it uses to lift or punch the [REDACTED] out of objects/persons. This form rarely manifests itself, save only to combat other powerful close quarters Stands. However, glimpses of it can be seen whenever Dominick uses his various abilities.

Stand power:
『Stuck In the Middle』: With a little bit of Hamon, 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』 can repair broken objects, and act as a mild healing agent.

Stand weakness:It is a young stand, firmly attached to Dominick and not truly aware of it's own power. A sufficiently well-ranged stand, or a variety of traps, could be the undoing of Dominick if he
Stand Stats:(Rank Each from E to A. E is the worst while A is the best)

Destructive Power: C
Speed: A
Range: E
Durability: B
Precision: A
Developmental power: A

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Name: Erika Dohman
Character Appearance: Thanks Brit for the image.
Character Personality: Originally, Erika was an athletic, upbeat girl, serving as the counterpart to Layla. Where Layla tries to be quiet and aloof, Erika’s “mask” is one of the extroverted lass who will shake your hand and show you around campus. She tries to emulate her older brother’s upbeat nature, and has garnered the reputation of a party girl.

Now? Now she’s much more depressed, pensive, and angsty. Almost nuerotically pouring over occult texts in order to reverse her vampiric state, she tries her best to keep a smile for her big bro, but...
Character Bio: Erika Dohman was often joked to have been born bear-hugging Dominick, and for good reason. During university, she would often be closest with her older brother, being nigh inseparable and horrendously competitive. She could change from competing neck in neck, a fierce verbal fencing in German, to bawling or laughing with one arm slung around her big bro in a matter of minutes. Only siblings as close as the Dohman twins could understand the bond that the two had, especially being so far from their native home.

Mercifully for Dominick, she seems to have found a new friend in the incredibly aloof Layla, being a fellow lover of anthropology, and seemed to have stuck to the Professor’s daughter as much as her older brother. It was a matter of sink or swim, as the two were roommates, which lead to the Dohman’s learning of Collins’s secret experiments with the Arrow and Mask.

One fateful night, while the duo were assisting the Professor, the Stone Mask latched itself onto Erika’s face, and turned her into a rabid vampire. Fortunately restrained, the Professor and Dominick worked tirelessly to at least restore her mental state. It was done in a roundabout way, as to the Professor, the only way that a Vampire could be defeated besides sunlight would be through a Stand, and when the arrow was launched at Dominick, Erika broke her bonds and attempted to shield her brother from the projectile. Unfortunately, Vampires can easily be destroyed, and easily repair themselves, so the arrow went right through her and pierced Dominick nonetheless. They both survived this event, and on top of gaining stands, Erika was able to regain her coherence as a slightly less than ravenous vampire, who currently is satisfied with eating aged and dying animals.
Stand Name: 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』
Stand Appearance: The Stand typically manifests in an inky black visage, covering almost all of Erika’s body, though at night, it spreads out to become shadowy will-o-the-wisp like sparks dancing about her, that can combine to form larger objects or split apart to act as her eyes and ears.
Stand power:

『Us and Them』: The most evident of her abilities, and usually displayed when a sufficient amount of darkness is in the air, she sheds her Stand’s aura to a small host of little black specks and sparks. These...fragments are what she uses to attack, or generally defend herself against foes. Similarities have been drawn between 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 and 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』, due to overall appearance, abilities, and nature. However, 『S T U C K I N M I D D L E』 is more coherent, defined, and has an actual consistent humanoid appearance, while 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 retains a more fluid visage. However, unlike Dominick’s Stand, she can use the individual sparks to “detect” living beings, in conjunction with her already impressive vampiric abilities.

Stand weakness: While the Stand in theory is rather powerful against non-stand users, those versed in Hamon or possessing Stands of their own find that while the Stand itself is nigh-indestructible, Vampires still suffer from rigor mortis, and if sufficiently damaged, 『D A R K S I D E M O O N』 would be Erika’s body bag. She is more vulnerable in daytime, as she would be using her stand to deflect harmful sunlight.
Stand Stats:(Rank Each from E to A. E is the worst while A is the best)

Destructive Power: C
Speed: C
Range: B
Durability: A
Precision: D
Developmental power: B

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Accepted

[Britanania]

Name: Evelyn Sherwood
Character Appearance: Here
Character Personality: Evelyn is very difficult to understand at first. She is outgoing, stubborn, sultry at times, and hot-headed with a short temper, while also managing to be a manipulative and bratty stereotypical "rich girl." She is selfish, hoarding things of value to herself, and is more likely to ask someone else in a team to do the work while she does something else. However, deep down inside of Evelyn lies a heart of gold. When the going gets tough, she may sometimes put the lives and safety of others in front of her own safety, and will vehemently defend what she believes in. This is evident in her stubborn behavior and high expectations of friends.
Character Bio:

The Sherwoods were an elite family renowned for their great wealth and deep history, and some even considered them American "Nobility" due to their rich bloodline. Evelyn was no different from any other Sherwood, born into the upper class family living in South Carolina. While most of their money before was from slaves and the plantation lifestyle, the Sherwoods had to improvise, adapt, and overcome to changing times. When the economy changed from agrarian to industrial, The Sherwoods moved to big businesses, and, as such, her father would be the one to establish himself as a popular and well-respected owner of a law firm in South Carolina. Evelyn's expectations were high from the start as well. She made exceptional grades, living a fairly normal childhood up until a fateful event that would change her life forever.

While messing around in their vast house, Evelyn was suddenly subject to The Arrow, or, rather, an Arrow. The artifact was a heirloom from one of her father's friends, its origins mainly unknown. While Evelyn would survive the accident, it would inadvertently awaken her Stand, Com Truise, a8nd change her life forever. Suddenly, she would begin making references to her "guardian angel," who always seemed to "stop" misfortune events from befalling Evelyn. Even potential thieves and muggers weren't safe from the "guardian angel" — they'd all end up with terrible injuries that, evidently, only a powerful man or rabid animal could make.

After completing her university studies, Evelyn would follow in the footsteps of her father to expand her family's clout outside of the south, moving north to New York City. She would later establish her own fashion and beauty company while there, thanks to some "help" from her father (really a rather sizable loan of money and workers.) However, as with most Sherwoods, she constantly wanted more, and looked to expand her gradually growing beauty company throughout the northeast. This brought her directly to the most bizarre of locations: the tiny town of Norton, Maine, which one would have to look intensely at a map to even find. While searching through the town for a place to set up her expansion, she would inadvertently put herself in the path of an even more bizarre set of events to come.

Stand Name: 『COM TRUISE』
Stand Appearance: Here
Stand power: "Controlpop": In addition to being a rather standard close-range stand, Com Truise is capable of controlling the "timeline" of objects, or specific aspects of them. It can act as a sort of "remote control" for Evelyn that is able to pause, resume, fast-forward, and rewind whatever aspect of the object she is affecting. An example of Evelyn's use of her ability is to accelerate the speed of a punch while pausing the time it would take for her fists to break from the immense speed and force it would normally not be able to handle, thus allowing her to punch at increased power. Some more niche applications include pausing food or the bacteria on it to keep it from spoiling, pausing the timeline of something like a bullet or arrow falling to keep it flying straight, pausing the air in front of her to make it function like a solid, or rewinding some injuries.
Stand weakness: The stand's most glaring weakness is that it must be in contact with the object to be able to affect it. Considering its rather short range, this is often difficult to do. Another weakness is shown when Com Truise tries to affect more object than one at the same time, which will cause a physical strain to be put on the user's body. In extreme cases of affecting more than one thing, Evelyn will succumb to exhaustion and risk collapsing from overexertion, or even dying in the fashion of a heart attack or stroke. The Stand cannot reverse deaths, its effects are permanent if not specified otherwise (which could potentially be dangerous for its user or allies), and it is unable to universally manipulate time, being vulnerable to abilities revolving around time, like time stops.
Stand Stats:

Destructive Power: C
Speed: A
Range: C
Durability: B
Precision: B
Developmental power: B

Accepted

[Britanania]

To those keeping score at home, the IC is indeed up

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[Rannoria]

oh sick a jojo rp consider me in.

an app will be up in a few days

[Atkemri]

Name: Hiroshi Sato
Character Appearance: Don't mind that it's just Kakyoin.
(Don't mind that it's just Kakyoin)
Character Personality: Hiroshi is incredibly pensive, calm, and strategic. He is incredibly formal and distant, an introverted type, only kind with those who are close to him. Incredibly intelligent and strategic, though, he suffers from a great flaw. Reflected in his stand, he is quick to break in a fight, or in even everyday tribulations, and run away.
Character Bio: Hiroshi is a natural stand user, having developed Siamese Dream at age 7. Finding that Siamese Dream was a greater companion than most children his age, he closed himself off, and began talking to who most would believe to be himself. His family had him mentally evaluated, though any tests demonstrated nothing other than a "greatly active imagination." As he aged, he found that speaking to an entity only he could see didn't reflect a positive light on him, and so he spoke to S.D. only in private. However, when he found himself threatened by the obligatory school bully, he discovered his stand could do much more than talk. By age 17, he began using S.D.'s rather useful powerset for wrongdoing, until he was brought to a stop by his soon to be mentor, a man named Terrance Axman, a fellow stand user that corrected the boy, and taught him of vampires and other various evils that could be righted with Siamese Dream. Despite knowing of the good he could do, he always remained more prone to running away. He is no a 23-year-old psychologist, working as the campus psychologist/psychology professor at Miskatonic University, Arkham, MA.
Stand Name: Siamese Dream
Stand Appearance: Siamese Dream
Stand power: Upon contact with Siamese Dreams fists, reality becomes far more malleable, allowing the stand to pull apart the fabric of reality to create wormholes that it and it's user can travel through. If anything other than the stand or user tries to use these wormholes, they will be pulled in and essentially deleted from existence. In addition to this, Siamese Dream can stretch out its limbs, and unravel its body like Noriaki Kakyoin's Hierophant. Siamese Dream is also capable of speech, and is generally incredibly calm, courteous, and polite. However, when angered, S.D. becomes much more violent, especially when Hiroshi finds himself under threat.
Stand weakness: It's only real destructive power is its wormholes. The punches S.D. throws are about as strong as Gold Experience. In addition, it's durability is so low that engaging in a punching match with another stand is a huge risk for S.D.
Stand Stats:

Destructive Power: B
Speed: A
Range: B (the stand itself can teleport around 30-40 meters, though the stand can only be about 15 meters away from it's user.)
Durability: D
Precision: C
Developmental power: B

Accepted

[Haedros 92712]

Name: Finn Engel
Character Appearance: Finn
Character Personality: Arrogant and confident, Finn is the stereotypical German master race soldier. He is incredibly loyal to Caser Von Binge, and his country.
Character Bio: Of a proud military lineage, and a bloodline dedicated to the Fatherland, Finn has been indoctrinated into the belief that all who are not German-born and of German descent are worthless, and that all who stand in the way of the glorious German empire must be destroyed. His family amongst the higher social class, Finn was well educated in his youth. He joined the military to uphold his family tradition, one of proudly serving in the military. He is amongst the group of German soldiers who are currently at Miskatonic with Caser Von Binge, and just recently gained his stand via stand arrow.
Stand Name: March of the Black Queen
Stand Appearance: Black Queen
Stand power: Black Queen's power is it's incredibly deadly punch. The space around it's hands is constantly being deleted, thus making it's fists incredibly deadly. When struck, matter is deleted, similar to anything caught in the path of Cream. Once caught in contact, the area that makes contact is instantaneously destroyed.
Stand weakness: Black Queen's range is incredibly limited, so it's target must be absurdly close in order to actually deliver the punch. Things must come in contact with it's fists for any damage to be done, and so, if not in range, this stand is worthless.
Stand Stats:

Destructive Power: A
Speed: D
Range: E (1/2 meter)
Durability: A
Precision: C
Developmental power: B

[Britanania]

Name: Finn Engel
Character Appearance: Finn
Character Personality: Arrogant and confident, Finn is the stereotypical German master race soldier. He is incredibly loyal to Caser Von Binge, and his country.
Character Bio: Of a proud military lineage, and a bloodline dedicated to the Fatherland, Finn has been indoctrinated into the belief that all who are not German-born and of German descent are worthless, and that all who stand in the way of the glorious German empire must be destroyed. His family amongst the higher social class, Finn was well educated in his youth. He joined the military to uphold his family tradition, one of proudly serving in the military. He is amongst the group of German soldiers who are currently at Miskatonic with Caser Von Binge, and just recently gained his stand via stand arrow.
Stand Name: March of the Black Queen
Stand Appearance: Black Queen
Stand power: Black Queen's power is it's incredibly deadly punch. The space around it's hands is constantly being deleted, thus making it's fists incredibly deadly. When struck, matter is deleted, similar to anything caught in the path of Cream. Once caught in contact, the area that makes contact is instantaneously destroyed.
Stand weakness: Black Queen's range is incredibly limited, so it's target must be absurdly close in order to actually deliver the punch. Things must come in contact with it's fists for any damage to be done, and so, if not in range, this stand is worthless.
Stand Stats:

Destructive Power: A
Speed: D
Range: E (1/2 meter)
Durability: A
Precision: C
Developmental power: B

Accepted, even though you used WWII uniforms for a WWI era soldier

[Haedros 92712]

Name: Finn Engel
Character Appearance: Finn
Character Personality: Arrogant and confident, Finn is the stereotypical German master race soldier. He is incredibly loyal to Caser Von Binge, and his country.
Character Bio: Of a proud military lineage, and a bloodline dedicated to the Fatherland, Finn has been indoctrinated into the belief that all who are not German-born and of German descent are worthless, and that all who stand in the way of the glorious German empire must be destroyed. His family amongst the higher social class, Finn was well educated in his youth. He joined the military to uphold his family tradition, one of proudly serving in the military. He is amongst the group of German soldiers who are currently at Miskatonic with Caser Von Binge, and just recently gained his stand via stand arrow.
Stand Name: March of the Black Queen
Stand Appearance: Black Queen
Stand power: Black Queen's power is it's incredibly deadly punch. The space around it's hands is constantly being deleted, thus making it's fists incredibly deadly. When struck, matter is deleted, similar to anything caught in the path of Cream. Once caught in contact, the area that makes contact is instantaneously destroyed.
Stand weakness: Black Queen's range is incredibly limited, so it's target must be absurdly close in order to actually deliver the punch. Things must come in contact with it's fists for any damage to be done, and so, if not in range, this stand is worthless.
Stand Stats:

Destructive Power: A
Speed: D
Range: E (1/2 meter)
Durability: A
Precision: C
Developmental power: B

Accepted, even though you used WWII uniforms for a WWI era soldier

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