Mars Needs Windex (Space, Comedy - OOC) - Dead

[Talchyon]

Hello! So far, there is no deadline for apps. I like lots of RPers in a comedy. Makes it fun. Second, yes we will accept a first time RPer. If you need some advice, I or any of the other players here would be happy to let you know what we do. The Discord link on the first page (OOC) also can be really good for that.

One small question. At first, you say Eulee has no powers. Then you say she can open wounds on others. I have no problem if she can open wounds on others. But then, technically that would be a power...

Otherwise, the app looks good.

Can't everyone open wounds on others?

Yeaaaa. Usually with a knife or something. But if it's with the mind, or some kind of power-related deal, it needs to be listed as a power.

[Auphelia]

Yeaaaa. Usually with a knife or something. But if it's with the mind, or some kind of power-related deal, it needs to be listed as a power.

My power is to send oxygen to almost every cell in my body!

I know, you all must be so jealous.

[Main Nation Ministry]

How should I introduce Wade, however.. Hmmm..

[Ism]

Yeaaaa. Usually with a knife or something. But if it's with the mind, or some kind of power-related deal, it needs to be listed as a power.

My power is to send oxygen to almost every cell in my body!

I know, you all must be so jealous.

Why didn't I think of that?
*facepalm*

[Argule and Monteverdeo]

Just curious, how is Eulalia pronounced in English? Yulaylia? Or like it's spelled, like in Swedish?

Yes, it's pronounced like Yulaylia.

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One small question. At first, you say Eulee has no powers. Then you say she can open wounds on others. I have no problem if she can open wounds on others. But then, technically that would be a power...

Otherwise, the app looks good.

She does have a power, healing that is. Reopening recently healed wounds is the reverse of the healing power, which is different from inflicting one.

[Auphelia]

Why didn't I think of that?
*facepalm*

In other news, as you are now at 5000 posts, you can never post again or else ruin your post count forever.

Unless you can make it to 10000, or even 100000!

[Talchyon]

Just curious, how is Eulalia pronounced in English? Yulaylia? Or like it's spelled, like in Swedish?

Yes, it's pronounced like Yulaylia.

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One small question. At first, you say Eulee has no powers. Then you say she can open wounds on others. I have no problem if she can open wounds on others. But then, technically that would be a power...

Otherwise, the app looks good.

She does have a power, healing that is. Reopening recently healed wounds is the reverse of the healing power, which is different from inflicting one.

Ok then. Remember there is a one power limit. It's either healing, or it's opening wounds. Your choice. And then, reflect this in the app, and it should be good.

[Auphelia]

Ok then. Remember there is a one power limit. It's either healing, or it's opening wounds. Your choice. And then, reflect this in the app, and it should be good.

Maybe a general wound manipulation?

Or time manipulation . . . of meat?

They could help make sure the meat on the Burger never goes bad!

[Argule and Monteverdeo]

Ok then. Remember there is a one power limit. It's either healing, or it's opening wounds. Your choice. And then, reflect this in the app, and it should be good.

I changed the powers in the app to:
"Currently, Eulee still cannot figure out why, as an ooman, she has slow healing powers (which only work on organic creatures)."

Maybe a general wound manipulation?

Or time manipulation . . . of meat?

They could help make sure the meat on the Burger never goes bad!

That's actually interesting!

[Talchyon]

APPLICATION

Name: Eulalia “Eulee” Blaine
Species: Ooman. They are almost identical to humans, except they are oviparous and live for an average of 200 human-years. Just like among humans, the possibility of an ooman getting superpowers is highly remote (if they were even possible in the first place).

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Eulee Blaine is ACCEPTED! Welcome to Mars Needs Windex! And glad to have you aboard as a 1st time RP-er. We've all been there, so if we can help you out, let us know.

[Talchyon]

Hey guys!

Just a few things.

First, we have an OP - The venerable Nova Corrini (the player behind Squawks and H'vari). Nova and I will be bouncing ideas off each other, and he has some experience at this. Feel free to congratulate him. I think this can only help. Hopefully, he will be a voice of semi-authority when I can't be on.

Second, we've kind of slowed down some. Sometimes this happens with people getting busy IRL. And that's fine. But if you are wanting to write and you're just stuck, this is a part of writing comedy is getting feedback and helping each other with funny things. Comedy, I don't think, was meant to be a solo act alone. It always helps with fun-minded friends. And I think all of us are fun-minded. All of us can help. But I want to let you know that if I can be of help with coming up with ideas, I am more than happy to do so. I'm just glad you guys like this RP.

Third, I will probably be writing an update soon, and moving to a timeskip soon. We're going to be moving to 4:30 am the next morning, for the new B-Jacs training session at 5 (called by the thorough and easily irritating Lt. Flo). First time you get to meet her. And Chuckie the robot too. Should be good.

If anyone wants to post anything before then, speak up here or post there. I'll give you a few hours, and probably get the timeskip at the end of the day.

[Nova Corina]

Hello. As your new CO-OP, I have a couple things to say.

As Talc said, my main purpose is to be a voice of authority in instances when he's gone and there is an issue that needs to be solved quickly.

He also spoke about feedback. I agree with this, and I would advise that if you needed to bounce ideas off of someone, you can do it in our Discord servers!

In other news, just a reminder that this is still open to new players and new characters, and it will be indefinitely as far as I know. The approval process should go somewhat quicker since now there are two people on.

I'd like to thank you for participating in the RP so far. Here's to a bright future for the crew of the A.S.S. Burger (after some wacky hijinks, of course)!

[Barapam]

Been busy, but I more or less know what to write. Will maybe post already tonight, but no promises. Got other rp:s I'm also falling behind on and need to catch up with.

[Talchyon]

Been busy, but I more or less know what to write. Will maybe post already tonight, but no promises. Got other rp:s I'm also falling behind on and need to catch up with.

I understand. I got busy too and had to put off my time skip post. That will be coming. If you want me to write that time skip first, I can. Otherwise, let me know and we'll see.

[Barapam]

Been busy, but I more or less know what to write. Will maybe post already tonight, but no promises. Got other rp:s I'm also falling behind on and need to catch up with.

I understand. I got busy too and had to put off my time skip post. That will be coming. If you want me to write that time skip first, I can. Otherwise, let me know and we'll see.

Either is fine.

[Barapam]

Hahaha! Your plan has failed, Talc! I work at a kindergarten, so I actually like that shark song! And maybe, like, Laika likes it too...

[Talchyon]

Hahaha! Your plan has failed, Talc! I work at a kindergarten, so I actually like that shark song! And maybe, like, Laika likes it too...

Nice. I just asked someone much younger about annoying songs and that's what she told me. I'll have to come up with different choices next time, I see!

[Talchyon]

I will be posting tonight.

Also, in case you're interested, there is new Google Document created by Nova on the Discord page. I'm attempting to write suggestions as to how to write for comedy. That said, if you have any things you'd like to add, this is an open document for all of us to collaborate on. If you're not on Discord but still want to collaborate, let me know. We can work something out.

I find it interesting. It gives me something to think about, to approach writing comedy a lot better and to help increase comedy writing skills. It's becoming very helpful for me to have to consider this. Hopefully you guys like it too.

-Talc

[Nova Corina]

I will be posting tonight.

Also, in case you're interested, there is new Google Document created by Nova on the Discord page. I'm attempting to write suggestions as to how to write for comedy. That said, if you have any things you'd like to add, this is an open document for all of us to collaborate on. If you're not on Discord but still want to collaborate, let me know. We can work something out.

I find it interesting. It gives me something to think about, to approach writing comedy a lot better and to help increase comedy writing skills. It's becoming very helpful for me to have to consider this. Hopefully you guys like it too.

-Talc

If you're not on Discord, just TG me and I'll TG you the share link.

[Talchyon]

Hey guys!

Just to let you know, we are not dead! We are continuing. Sometimes IRL things happen and you need a time to recharge. Here's to the next phase of Mars Needs Windex!

-Talc

[Pax Nerdvana]

I'll try to get a post up tommorow when I have a free moment.

[Talchyon]

I'll try to get a post up tommorow when I have a free moment.

Excellent, Pax! Thanks.

I will post tomorrow sometime, probably evening. So if anyone has anything they want to say or do before then, time's yours. (I do suggest interactions between characters, too.)

-Talc

[Pax Nerdvana]

I'll try to get a post up tommorow when I have a free moment.

Excellent, Pax! Thanks.

I will post tomorrow sometime, probably evening. So if anyone has anything they want to say or do before then, time's yours. (I do suggest interactions between characters, too.)

-Talc

Sounds like a plan!

[Woods Is Back]

Name: S.A.I.T. (Sentient AI Toothbrush)
Species: Electric Toothbrush with AI
Age: Manufactured 1 year ago
Sex: Male AI
Power(s): His head spins

Goals: To keep the ship, and its passengers clean
Equipment: Extra heads
Any enemies? : Plaque, as it is on teeth, and thus sticks to him

Biography: S.A.I.T. was manufactured one year prior to this RP, and was installed with an AI that will always be cleaning teeth, floors, toilets, etc. Being around all these beings though, has caused him to develop a sense of humor, which is rude at times, and he can be highly sarcastic. Nicknamed 'Toothy" he is bound to run in, and fight with other crew and visitors, as he is very territorial over his charging port.

RP sample:[url=https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.phpf=5&t=459160&p=35277169&sid=d83382c1a36030e298f8484019285f5f#p35277169[/url]

Theme music: [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pAgnJDJN4VA]You know it's me when the speakers start playing this[/url]

For tracking purposes only - do not delete: Squeegee

[Talchyon]

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Name: S.A.I.T. (Sentient AI Toothbrush)
Species: Electric Toothbrush with AI

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For tracking purposes only - do not delete: Squeegee

Oh my gosh. This character will definitely fit in this RP. S.A.I.T. (Thought it said "salt" at first) is definitely ACCEPTED! Welcome to Mars Needs Windex!

I look forward to seeing how this character moves, like if he rolls on his side or has to bum rides or something else. Since toothbrushes have no legs.

There is one small thing with the app. I don't know what the reason was, but I wasn't able to see your RP sample. Something wasn't working with the link