Vampire APP
NS Name: Rhinocera
Character Name:Dracan Malifex (Formerly Dracanias Julius Malifex) Oft referred to as Dracan the Dread, throughout his life he has been known by many names to mortals, having assumed many identities, currently he is known as John Lemano, though his mortal alias is Sir Edward Leopold
Appearance:
Age (Recommended maximum is around 500 years old. Anyone much older than that wouldn't have reason to leave the continent): 1,847 (Born in 84 B.C, turned in 44 B.C
Maker (AKA, the vampire who turned you. I recommend you make something of a backstory for them): Adonis
City of Origin: (Where they were turned, not where they were born.) Rome
Abilities: (All vampires would have access to one of the basic abilities. Older ones would have both of them and an advanced ability as well) Wields both of the basic abilities and has attained a mastery of Hypnosis
Religion: (Any works, including the two Vampiric ones listed in the lore section) Worships the Roman Gods
Languages Spoken: Speaks a great many languages, most of which he does so as fluently as he would if they were his native tongue. His native tongue is Latin, however.
Biography:
#CoB1764 [APP CODE, DO NOT DELETE
I addressed some of your concerns, including eliminating the over bearing mortal interference, the overlapping positions, and the unexplained weakness. Also threw in a new explanation for why he would be in Boston. Hope the edits are enough, this rp looks interesting and I’m hoping the original character I thought up can still be salvaged, despite the Caeser thing. I just thought it made Dracan a bit more interesting, as the fact will have little if any tangible impact on his arc, unless you decide that Adonis is aware, which could also be interesting.