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Finland SSR
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Postby Finland SSR » Tue Oct 23, 2018 11:47 am

Toaslandia wrote:I think I know why everyone is going on the heirloom quest. Its because of the special reward.

Nah, you're all just ripping off poor Simion. :P
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Union Princes
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Postby Union Princes » Tue Oct 23, 2018 12:29 pm

Anyone enjoying the bits of lore of the Inquisition I'm incorporating in Strauch's dialogue so far?
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Toaslandia
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Postby Toaslandia » Tue Oct 23, 2018 12:34 pm

Union Princes wrote:Anyone enjoying the bits of lore of the Inquisition I'm incorporating in Strauch's dialogue so far?

Yep, its pretty cool.
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Verwood Island Archipelago
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Postby Verwood Island Archipelago » Tue Oct 23, 2018 12:51 pm

Union Princes wrote:Anyone enjoying the bits of lore of the Inquisition I'm incorporating in Strauch's dialogue so far?


For sure.

Some pretty good RP going on across the board.

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The Republic of Atria
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Postby The Republic of Atria » Tue Oct 23, 2018 1:10 pm

Union Princes wrote:Anyone enjoying the bits of lore of the Inquisition I'm incorporating in Strauch's dialogue so far?


I find it hilarious that your FC is Victor Saltzpyre and one of mine is Sienna Fuegonasus.

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Union Princes
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Postby Union Princes » Tue Oct 23, 2018 1:14 pm

Yeah, it was funny when I saw your character's pic too.
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Confederation of the Equator
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Postby Confederation of the Equator » Tue Oct 23, 2018 1:26 pm

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Union Princes
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Absolon-7
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Postby Absolon-7 » Tue Oct 23, 2018 4:27 pm

Union Princes wrote:Snip


Gasps I love Shadiversity's channel!


Ormata wrote:
Well, yeah, I suppose the fire is magical.

Well okay, just edit in stating that it was a powerful magical fire and it should be good.
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Tue Oct 23, 2018 4:29 pm

While I appreciate the interest, Union Princes, roster updates aren't going to be as soon as new applications are accepted, or every day. I'll update as I can, and I'm currently working on a few other things.
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Nuridia
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Postby Nuridia » Tue Oct 23, 2018 5:46 pm

K, so I got permission from Turm to make a Lycan subspecies...basically they’re gonna be classic werewolves that only turn into wolves and not wolf-men. They look human when not transformed instead of a wolf humanoid.
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Nuridia
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Postby Nuridia » Tue Oct 23, 2018 6:08 pm

Group Name: Werewolf
Region Inhabited: They can be found in all regions, but are most concentrated around the Archipelago
Group Appearance: They look like normal humans for the most part but many have some residual bestial features such as pointed canine teeth, extra body hair, long claw-like fingernails and eyes that are reflective at night like a wolf’s. Many also have pointed ears.
Description/Lore: Werewolves are descendants of Lycan/Human inbreeding, and as the centuries went by, the Lycan in these mixed bloodlines was diluted to the point that they lost their wolf-like appearance and appear for the most part as normal humans. Since they were neither full human or full Lycan, they’ve had to deal with bigotry on both ends but mostly from humans, Lycans were usually a bit more accepting.
Innate Abilities: Like a Lycan, they can transform into a wolf-state but instead of a powerful bipedal wolf-man like creature during the full moon, they simply turn into larger, more bestial versions of normal wolves during the full moon. They also have enhanced strength, speed and heightened senses that far surpass a human’s but are nowhere on par with a full-blooded Lycan’s. They can transform at will during any other day except the full moon.
Innate Weaknesses: Like Lycans, they have a weakness to silver but since they’re not full-blooded Lycans, it isn’t as potent. Touching silver directly would burn their skin however. Also, since full moon transformations are involuntary on their part, they can’t control their actions while in that form on that particular night...especially younger ones. Older or more experienced ones can keep their minds to an extent, but not fully. And like vampires they’re prone to going into a frenzy, if they’re in wolf form and haven’t eaten for a while.
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Caboose Landia
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Postby Caboose Landia » Tue Oct 23, 2018 6:15 pm

Name: Caboose
Age: Unknown
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Appearance (pics if possible): Tall, strong, and wears blue armor
Statistics: (All stats are at 1 by default, you have 8 points to distribute and you can only put 5 points maximum at the start to any stat)
Strength: 4
Agility: 2
Endurance: 2
Magical Prowess: 1
Bio (Please treat this as a replacement for a writing sample. No more than a few paragraphs is necessary but it should be well written): Caboose was found being raised by wolves by a young farmer couple. He is not very intelligent, but he is incredibly strong. He seems to be best friends with "Church", although he does not specify which church he is talking about. He loves to build things to solve his problems, and uses a strange wooden club to fight with. He has never been seen without his blue armor, and refuses to take it off. He was considered a hero in his village for plowing the fields when the oxen died. After that, his adopted parents had him join the village militia, where he helped them stop a horde of goblins by swinging his club around and killing the goblin war chief. He was then sent to the actual army, but was dishonorably discharged due to the fact that he never wore the armor he was given. He is very friendly to everyone.
Heroic Boon: (Your blessing, a special possession or ability. Don’t go overboard.) Friend Maker: He is somehow able to make people his friend easily by making objects for them.
Abilities:
  • [Thick skin]: Caboose has very thick skin from working in the fields. When he gets injured, he seems to be able to tough it out longer than most.
    (Note, you do not have a maximum or minimum of 2 abilities. Include both your character’s mundane abilities and any magic they have. If you don’t need all those, delete them. If you need more, copy and paste.)

Limitations (Reasons why your char can’t singlehandedly conquer a kingdom):
[*] He is not very intelligent and therefore is terrible at leading soldiers.
(Note, you do not have a maximum or minimum of 2 limitations. If you don’t need all those, delete them. If you need more, copy and paste.)[/box]
Equipment:
  • [Wooden Club] A strange club. Caboose calls it "a waking thingy".
  • [Blue Armor] His armor is standard leather, but for some reason blue.
    (Note, you do not have a maximum or minimum of 2 equipment. If you don’t need all those, delete them. If you need more, copy and paste. If it is a special piece of equipment please include a description. Also keep in mind your character’s background and what sort of wealth they would have as this greatly influences your starting equipment)
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Optional
Likes: Friends, "Church" his best friend, and Machines
Dislikes: Babies, Taxes, and some guy named O'Malley
Greatest Fear: Losing "Church"
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Union Princes
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Postby Union Princes » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:00 pm

Caboose, this is a medieval fantasy rp and your character does not fit the theme.
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Caboose Landia
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Postby Caboose Landia » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:04 pm

Union Princes wrote:Caboose, this is a medieval fantasy rp and your character does not fit the theme.

I made it so he has no guns, his armor is not op, and I made it so he appeared in the world through magic! I think that counts a fantasy.

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Ormata
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Corrupt Dictatorship

Postby Ormata » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:07 pm

Caboose Landia wrote:
Union Princes wrote:Caboose, this is a medieval fantasy rp and your character does not fit the theme.

I made it so he has no guns, his armor is not op, and I made it so he appeared in the world through magic! I think that counts a fantasy.


This is not a multiverse RP in any way or form.

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Caboose Landia
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Postby Caboose Landia » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:10 pm

Ormata wrote:
Caboose Landia wrote:I made it so he has no guns, his armor is not op, and I made it so he appeared in the world through magic! I think that counts a fantasy.


This is not a multiverse RP in any way or form.

All just make it so he's naturally in the world and has no Spartan armor. Is that ok?

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Union Princes
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Postby Union Princes » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:15 pm

Having the boon of being "lucky" is pretty taboo and almost game-breaking to an extent. I highly recommend picking a different ability as well as reworking your bio, so it has some specific details about his origins, as well as picking a different picture for your character. Because so far, much of your character's app is very vague
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Absolon-7
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Postby Absolon-7 » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:19 pm

Nuridia wrote:Group Name: Werewolf

Racial Group Accepted

Caboose Landia wrote:Name: Caboose

Denied, as much as Caboose is a good boy, the character and app do not fit the setting in any way.

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Union Princes
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Postby Union Princes » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:21 pm

Hey OP, have you checked Ormata's pyromancer app yet? Does it still need improvement?
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Absolon-7
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Postby Absolon-7 » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:24 pm

Union Princes wrote:Hey OP, have you checked Ormata's pyromancer app yet? Does it still need improvement?

I told them a few posts above to edit in stating that it was a powerful magical fire where they got pyromancy from and as it's still too vague for learning pyromancy.

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Caboose Landia
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Postby Caboose Landia » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:25 pm

Absolon-7 wrote:
Union Princes wrote:Hey OP, have you checked Ormata's pyromancer app yet? Does it still need improvement?

I told them a few posts above to edit in stating that it was a powerful magical fire where they got pyromancy from and as it's still too vague for learning pyromancy.

I changed it so its more realistic. He is now from this planet and is just Caboose, but I replaced his spartan armor with blue leather armor. Can he be accepted now?

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Ormata
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Postby Ormata » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:31 pm

Absolon-7 wrote:
Union Princes wrote:Hey OP, have you checked Ormata's pyromancer app yet? Does it still need improvement?

I told them a few posts above to edit in stating that it was a powerful magical fire where they got pyromancy from and as it's still too vague for learning pyromancy.


Yeah, gimme a bit.

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Absolon-7
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Postby Absolon-7 » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:34 pm

Caboose Landia wrote:
Absolon-7 wrote:I told them a few posts above to edit in stating that it was a powerful magical fire where they got pyromancy from and as it's still too vague for learning pyromancy.

I changed it so its more realistic. He is now from this planet and is just Caboose, but I replaced his spartan armor with blue leather armor. Can he be accepted now?

Still denied. Aside from the messiness of not removing the stuff in parentheses the bio is much too short and oversimplified. It also never states how they joined the Paean Legion in order to receive their boon. The biggest issue overall is that's its flagrant transplant of stuff from Red vs Blue.

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Caboose Landia
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Postby Caboose Landia » Tue Oct 23, 2018 7:35 pm

Absolon-7 wrote:
Caboose Landia wrote:I changed it so its more realistic. He is now from this planet and is just Caboose, but I replaced his spartan armor with blue leather armor. Can he be accepted now?

Still denied. Aside from the messiness of not removing the stuff in parentheses the bio is much too short and oversimplified. It also never states how they joined the Paean Legion in order to receive their boon. The biggest issue overall is that's its flagrant transplant of stuff from Red vs Blue.

Well ok.Goodbye Caboose!

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