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When You Find Me (Horror / Mystery) (OOC / OPEN)

Postby Beiarusia » Sat Aug 04, 2018 11:45 am





Cedarview, Oregon, is a dying town.

A backwater.

The sort of place where nothing happens,
and whose defining feature is the highway bisecting the fading township.

But something evil lurks on the coastline of the Pacific Northwest.
A history of missing persons and unexplained phenomena.
An archive of strange happenings,
ignored as nothing more than coincidence.

The town continues on as normal,
seven months after the unusual disappearance of a young girl.
A troubled child. A runaway. A mystery with a perfectly rational explanation.
But, for some, the truth is incomplete.
They seek answer.
Explanation.

And it is their misfortune to find it.

Cedarview is a normal town where nothing ever happens.
Beneath the surface, however, is something far more sinister.



ABOUT
The story takes place in the fictional town of Cedarview, Oregon, in the autumn of 2008, seven months after the strange, unexplained disappearance of Alice Lowland, a sophomore at Cedarview High School. The most recent in a long history of missing persons. However, her case has garnered an unusual amount of outsider interest. Officially, the case remains unsolved, but local police are adamant in the girl being just another runaway. An explanation that leaves many questions left unanswered. Questions that deepen with the discovery of video footage of the girl's last known moments.

PLAYER CHARACTERS are locals or outsiders who, for whatever the reason, have interest in investigating the disappearance of Alice Lowland. You will piece together this mystery, and in doing so will uncover a sinister truth that, for centuries, has haunted the forests surrounding Red Mountain. A history of missing persons; strange and unexplainable occurrences.

The RP is a horror/mystery, and although reminiscent to Stephen King's IT the setting is more akin to Marble Hornets and Slender Man in the most basic of sense. Additionally, the RP will largely be a sandbox. There is no right way to go about things.



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Postby Beiarusia » Sat Aug 04, 2018 11:45 am

OREGON STATE POLICE
INCIDENT REPORT #13-404466 — CEDARVIEW MISSING PERSONS




• MISSING
- Eustace Corriander, 66
(missing since May 1860)
The eccentric founder of Cedarview, he was an avid hunter and outdoorsman, and, more importantly, considered himself a connoisseur of scotch, gin, and liquor in general. Would lead several local expeditions to map the northwestern edge of Oregon but would disappear in early-1860 soon after discovering a vein of silver. His body was never found.


- Harriet Reims, 33
(missing since January 1974)
An aspiring actress, she moved to Los Angeles in hopes of stardom but her career fizzled. Was traveling north along Highway 101 to return home to Washington but disappeared somewhere in Oregon. Believed to have been killed while hitchhiking but no evidence, or body, has been found to support such a theory. Is believed to be the inspiration of the Blue Lady. Why? No one is certain.


- Jackie Robbins, 10
(missing since June 1977)
The daughter of Jim Robbins, she disappeared without a trace when playing unsupervised in the woods behind her home. Despite an extensive search she was never found. Kidnapping remains a possibility, but the case remains unsolved decades later.


- Mary Burke, 56
(missing since November 1998)
The wife of a miner killed the year before, her disappearance is believed to be a suicide.


- Gary Crenshaw, 42
(missing since October 2002)
An ex-soldier who served during Desert Storm, he returned to Cedarview in the late-1990's after living in Seattle, Washington. An avid hiker, was reported to have been suicidal in the weeks leading up to his disappearance, a theory further compounded by the beginnings of a failing marriage. He simply went out one day and never returned. His body was never recovered despite an extensive search.


- Jennifer Tallow, 28
(missing since August 2005)
Living in Salem, Oregon, she was a nature enthusiast who disappeared suddenly when exploring the Oregon coastline in Summer 2005. Her car was later discovered in Rockaway Beach. No further evidence has been found to date and her disappearance remains unsolved.


- Alice Lowland, 16
(missing since March 2008)
A sophomore at Cedarview High School, the teenager was last seen inside her home on the evening of Friday March 28th. No evidence of foul play. A troubled home life has given credibility to her being 1) a runaway or 2) a suicide victim, however, despite an extensive search of the nearby forest, coastline, and lakes, no body has been found to support the latter theory. The case remains unsolved.



• PERSONS of INTEREST
- Wendy Adams, 16
(High School Student)
A classmate of Alice Lowland, she has shown a keen, morbid interest in the girl's disappearance.


- Jebediah Burrows, 94
(Retired)
He is believed to be suffering from mild dementia, and, as such, is often disregarded as nothing more than the harmless, crotchety town kook. Is an unabashed adherent to various conspiracy theories, folk lore, and obscure legends. Tends to ramble and is generally left alone to no complaint. Lives in a small, rundown bungalow just south of town. Served aboard the USS Washington during the Second World War.


- Daniel Coffers, 51
(Sheriff, Cedarview Police Department)
The longtime sheriff of Cedarview, he is respected for his fair, even-handed nature and is well-liked by most everyone in town, but can be gruff at times, particularly when stressed by difficult incidents. Is adamant in Alice Lowland being a runaway after no evidence to suggest otherwise was discovered.


- Elizabeth Colts, 15
(High School Student)
A dark and brooding girl who is often the target of bullies. Claims to see ghosts.


- Evelyn Deacon, 59
(Hotel Manager)
She owns and operates the Evergreen Inn. A bit disinterested, liking her privacy, but is genuinely and welcoming kind to most everybody, guests especially. Enjoys being a concierge.


- Marcus Deacon, 60
(Hotel Maintenance)
Evelyn Deacon's husband. Works at the Evergreen Inn and a handyman.


- Robert Dulong, 40
(Teacher, Cedarview High School
An apathetic teacher who plans on leaving town once the school year is finished.


- Missy Einhaus, 16
(Student, Cedarview High School)
A bully, and exceptionally cruel, she enjoys spreading rumors and sharing gossip.


- Arnold Humboldt, 71
(Store Owner)
A grumpy old man, he runs a moderately-sized convenience store and petrol station near the highway. Isn't too sociable, and generally dislikes children and teenagers, but is professional nonetheless.


- Abigail Johnson, 41
(Waitress)
The mother of Zane Johnson. Is protective of her son and works part-time at Pancake Shack.


- Taylor Johnson, 41
(Technician)
The father of Zane Johnson. Commutes to work in Portland, Oregon, and plans to move to the city soon with his family.


- Zane Johnson, 17
(High School Student)
An acquaintance of Alice Lowland, he has been particularly troubled by her disappearance with classmates and teachers noting a significant change in personality, being more withdrawn than usual. A member of the AV Club.


- Kevin Jones, 18
(High School Student)
A star athlete in a nowhere town, he is arrogant and relies on brawn not intelligence.


- Emily Lowland, 12
(Middle School Student)
The sister of Alice Lowland. Is openly hostile towards Sheriff Coffers and the local police in general.


- Kirsten Lowland, 37
(Housewife)
The mother of Alice Lowland. Blames herself for her daughter's disappearance due to friction in their relationship.


- Michael Lowland, 40
(Mechanic)
The father of Alice Lowland. Has been working overtime since his daughter's disappearance.


- Nick Masters, 45
(Utility Worker)
An unassuming man, he is the sort to know a bit about most everybody. Is friendly but has a hard time keeping secrets due to his talkative nature. Odd, with strange fascinations, and stranger hobbies. Keeps busy with work.


- Logan McAllister, 29
(Officer, Cedarview Police Department)
Idealistic, he cares greatly for the citizens of Cedarview, taking to heart his occupation as an officer, and feels personally responsible for failing to locate Alice Lowland. Disagrees with the handling of the case and has investigated the matter independently. Despairingly, has little to show for his effort.


- Kenneth Meyers, 60
(Principal, Cedarview High School)
Principal since 1987, he has shown much sympathy in regards to his student's disappearance, however, is believed to care more for keeping appearances than the whereabouts of a troublesome teenager. Takes his job seriously.


- Robert Sanders, 49
(Mayor)
Considering himself to be "down-to-earth", the mayor of Cedarview prefers a hands-on approach in connecting with the citizens of his town. Has said little in regards to the disappearance of Alice Lowland.


- Helen Townsend, 54
(Teacher, Cedarview High School)
A teacher and the school's guidance councilor, she has been cooperative with the police investigation in regards to the disappearance of Alice Lowland, much to the annoyance of her superior. Feels partly responsible for not recognizing Alice as having been troubled, and wishes she'd been more available in assisting the teenager. Of the school faculty, appears to be the most bothered.


- Daniel White, 52
(Doctor, Private Practitioner)
Runs the local clinic and pharmacy. Selfless and enjoys helping others.



• LOCATIONS
- Anton Beach
A small, sandy strip that is often frequented by locals during the warmer months. A boathouse is located on the southern end, but few attractions exist otherwise.

- the Cove
Formed by a rocky outcropping on the northern end of Anton Beach, the unnamed cove is a popular hangout for teenagers who desire a secluded location for smoking, drinking, and whatever else rebellious teens are wont to do. The cove is otherwise forgettable. Is rumored to be the haunting ground of the Blue Lady with sightings dating back to the 1970's, however, this is believed to be nothing more than a local legend to scare small children.

- Cedarview High School
Rebuilt in 1994, the school is a small yet modern-styled building. Compact to accommodate a low student population, approximately 300, complete with a gymnasium, track, sports field, and open land between it and the forest. Below-average in regional rankings — the last football regional championship was in 1970, and test scores are typically mediocre. The middle school is next door (and shares a building with the elementary school).

- Colton Silver Mine and Smelter
Opened in 1946, the silver mine and accompanying smelter proved a major boon to the growth of Cedarview, then a town with a population of less than 400, and was a major economic draw for decades to come. By 1980 the town's population had reached 3,500 and was expected to double by the year 2000, however, several accidents in the 1980's and 1990's, including the deaths of seven miners in 1997, coupled with a diminished supply of ore, would lead to the mine's eventual decommissioning and the smelter closing in 2002. The mine and smelter are abandoned and are off-limits to the public. Their seclusion and distance from town have kept unauthorized exploration to a minimum, but trespassing continues under lax enforcement.

- Corriander Pass
An overgrown trail with no known location on record.

- Derringer Park
A large, open space east of town. The perfect spot for a family picnic or BBQ with a wooden playground to entertain the younger children. Several nature trails branch off here.

- Evergreen Inn
A small hotel in the rough decor of a log cabin, the lodging is affordable but sees little business due to lacking tourism. Despite this, the hotel is well maintained if lacking in amenities, and is a short walk from downtown Cedarview. Owned and operated by Evelyn Deacon and her husband Marcus.

- Humboldt's Convenience Mart
Established by Arnold Humboldt, this small convenience store / petrol station is, perhaps, the location most frequented by outsiders traveling past along the highway, second only to the sole fast food restaurant immediately off the exit. Not the fanciest but offers a large selection of groceries and home products.

- Kingfisher Lake
Northeast of Derringer Park. Oftentimes used for swimming or fishing.

- Kingfisher Trail
A small, well-kept trail connecting Derringer Park to Kingfisher Lake.

- Lowland Auto Repair
A mechanics shop operating near downtown. Gets a decent amount of business, even outsiders with car troubles.

- Pancake Shack
A reasonably popular diner with claims of having the best pancakes in all of Oregon. Business has faltered somewhat since the closure of Colton Silver Mine, what with fewer travelers stopping into town, but the restaurant is doing well regardless and remains a mainstay in downtown Cedarview.

- Silver Bridge
An old railroad bridge near Silver Lake. Construction is typical of most beam designs but, after years of abandonment, is overgrown and showing signs of disrepair. Surrounded by difficult terrain.

- Silver Lake
A small lake deep in the forest.

- Town Hall
Constructed in 1855, the building was formerly the home of Eustace Corriander, the town's eccentric founder, and has been built upon on numerous occasions. Houses the mayor's office and police department.

- the Tracks
An abandoned railway connecting the Colton Silver Mine to major transportation arteries. Usage was discontinued in the 1990's and the tracks have since become overgrown.

- the Tunnel
A rail tunnel near the Colton Silver Mine with a slight curve preventing one from seeing through to the other side. Southern end leads immediately to Silver Bridge. Despite warnings, this location is often visited by teenagers seeking a thrill or ghost story, and, like the tracks, if overgrown and covered in graffiti.

- U.S. Route 101
A major north/south highway on Oregon's coastline connecting Washington to California. Passes just east of Cedarview, but, despite having an exit, traffic is mostly passersby seeking a pitstop (however, most continue on to larger towns).

- the Water Tower
A simple water tower with the town's name written in bold lettering.

- Wendy's
The only fast food restaurant in Cedarview just off the highway.

- White's Pharmacy
Located in downtown Cedarview, the pharmacy doubles as a small clinic.
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Postby Beiarusia » Sat Aug 04, 2018 11:45 am

ROSTER




• LOCAL
- Jebediah Burrows, 94 (Retired)
- Joe Foster, 61 (Retired)Costa Fierro
- Arnold Humboldt, 71 (Store Owner)
- Paige Novak, 40 (Psychiatrist)Convallaria
- Nick Masters, 45 (Utility Worker)
- Robert Sanders, 49 (Mayor)
- Donna Truelove, 47 (Clerk)
- Daniel White, 52 (Doctor)
- Jacob Wilson, 27 (Hunter)Faal Dovah

COLTS FAMILY
- Joseph Colts, 45 (Utility Worker)
- Mary Colts, 42 (Housewife)
- Elizabeth Colts, 15 (High School Student)
- Vernon Colts, 17 (High School Student / Cook)Tayner

HOLTON FAMILY
- Samuel Holton, 39 (Detective)
- Rosy Holton, 39 (Housewife)
- Henry Holton, 4 (Preschooler)

JOHNSON FAMILY
- Abigail Johnson, 41 (Waitress)
- Taylor Johnson, 41 (Technician)
- Gwendolyn Johnson, 8 (Elementary School Student)
- Xavier Johnson, 12 (Middle School Student)
- Zane Johnson, 17 (High School Student)

LOWLAND FAMILY
- Kirsten Lowland, 37 (Housewife)
- Michael Lowland, 40 (Mechanic)
- Emily Lowland, 12 (Middle School Student)

ROBINS FAMILY
- Jim Robins, 70 (Store Owner, Patriot Arms)Pax Nerdvana
- Sarah Robins, 66 (Store Owner, Patriot Arms)
- Evan Robins, 46 (Mechanic)
- Lisa Robins, 45 (Florist)

CEDARVIEW HAROLD
- Albert Dawning, 33 (Journalist)
- Avery Gerhart, 26 (Journalist)Dyelli Beybi
- Morris Smith, 30 (Journalist)

CEDARVIEW HIGH SCHOOL
- Kenneth Meyers, 60 (Principal)
- Robert Dulong, 40 (Teacher)
- Helen Townsend, 54 (Teacher)
- Wendy Adams, 16 (High School Student)
- Heather Brock, 16 (High School Student)
- Missy Einhaus, 16 (High School Student)
- Miles Greene, 18 (High School Student)Kentucky Fried Land
- Kevin Jones, 18 (High School Student)
- Moira Steinway, 17 (High School Student)

CEDARVIEW POLICE DEPARTMENT
- Daniel Coffers, 51 (Sheriff)
- Samuel Holton, 39 (Detective)
- Logan McAllister, 29 (Officer)
- Cathy Bates, 51 (Receptionist)

EVERGREEN INN
- Evelyn Deacon, 59 (Hotel Manager)
- Marcus Deacon, 60 (Hotel Maintenance)
- Phillip Deacon, 27 (Hotel Maintenance)Segral


• OUTSIDER
- Aaron "Kennedy" Burke, 39 (Unemployed)The Frozen Forest
- Noah Hargrave, 30 (Novelist)Kwadai
- Horton Kinnaman, 27 (TV Show Host)Main Nation Ministry
- Alexandra O'Loughlin, 38 (Screenwriter)The Knockout Gun Gals

OREGON STATE POLICE
- Anthony Burrows, 34 (Detective)Kentucky Fried Land
- Claire Pryzbylewski, 29 (Detective)

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Postby Kentucky Fried Land » Sat Aug 04, 2018 12:40 pm

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Name: Anthony Burrows
Age: 34
Occupation: State Detective

Appearance:
Burrows appears to be in perfect health. His hair is naturally curly and stress has appeared to make him seem somewhat older than he actually is. He has a slim build. His height is 6’0 ft. (183 cm) and he weighs in at 170 lbs. (79 kg).

Belongings:
  • Glock Model 22 w/ one magazine inside
  • 2x .40 S&W Magazines
  • Windbreaker
  • Black suit jacket
  • White button-up dress shirt
  • Black dress shoes
  • Black dress pants
  • Notebook w/ pen
  • Pocket of nitrile gloves
  • Jeans
  • Sneakers
  • Oregon State Police Badge
  • Keys to 2007 Chevrolet Tahoe - Unmarked SUV
  • Handcuffs
  • Wallet w/ ID, Rewards Cards, $24.37, Debit Card
  • Flask
  • Small LED Flashlight
Skills:
  • Attentive
  • An excellent detective
  • Plenty of experience in the police force
Weaknesses:
  • Alcohol Use Disorder
  • Egocentric
  • Self-destructive
Personality:
Burrows is well-attentive and detail oriented, two valuable skills in his line of work. While he is arrogant, he has been humbled by PTSD and often shows signs of self-hatred. This ruminates in cheating on his spouse, drinking, and using one too many pain pills at a time (allegedly). Despite this, he is an excellent detective and a valued member of the department.

Likes: Craft beer, catching criminals, folk songs, Western movies
Dislikes: Cigarettes, mustard, waking up early, social media
Fears: Aviatophobia (Fear of Flying), Fear of Commitment

Biography: Anthony Burrows was born in Salem, Oregon in 1974 to a middle class family. His mother was a nurse at a local hospital, while his father did industrial work in the eastern area of town. His father grew up frustrated not being the breadwinner for the family which often manifested in neglect. Anthony could be a near poster child for “his dad didn’t hug him enough as a kid.” He followed neither of his parents in their careers, instead electing to go to college and take up a degree in Criminal Justice. He left with a degree and a job in the local county’s sheriff’s department.

He worked there for eight years and during this time he reunited with his high school sweetheart and the two were married. Anthony had two kids with his wife and when he was thirty they moved further south in the state of Oregon. He became a state detective and around this time his wife began to suspect something of him; that being infidelity. She hired a private investigator to follow him and discovered his relationship with another woman which led to a harsh divorce between the two.

Anthony began drinking after his divorce and trapped himself in a cheap apartment to afford alimony and rent. The job consumed him. He would keep himself up at night working on cases, fretting about his desk and apartment. Eventually, his partner quit the job for something more peaceful and to settle down with his family, much to Anthony’s dismay. He was awarded a new partner, Claire Pryzbylewski, and the two actually bonded over a few new cases. Their latest case were the disappearances of Jennifer Tallow and Alice Lowland. The two girls were last seen on the same mysterious video together; an undeniable link which led the two to the backwater town of Cedarview.

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Postby Alanis Star » Sat Aug 04, 2018 12:49 pm

I hope you guys don't mind me dropping in here, but hey, great to see you guys again! I was in Innocent RP that time, remember? :P

I would love to join this, but unfortunately, I am in another II (International Incident RP), along with worldbuilding some puppets and RL stuff. So yeah, all the best, and I hope that I can RP with you all soon!

(Is there a chance that I can RP mid-way, like in the middle of the storyline?)
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Postby Convallaria » Sat Aug 04, 2018 1:42 pm

Name: Paige Novak
Age: 40
Occupation: Psychiatrist
Appearance:
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Belongings: Blue 1962 Cadillac Series 62 Convertible, heirloom pearl necklace, Sony digital voice recorder, silver cigarette lighter

Skills: High ability to understand emotion, motive and decipher meaning through personal expression.
Weaknesses: Smoker, passive-aggressive, and resorts to unusual punishments without directly expressing anger

Personality: Paige is a faded Southern Belle. She purports to be gentle and sweet but can actually come off as cunning and rude. She cares very much for her friends and close allies, even though she can be seen as cruel.
Likes: Marlboro cigarettes, white wine, classic Hollywood flicks
Dislikes: Dogs, electronic music
Goals: Marriage, and eventually children.
Fears: Nuns (Bad experiences as a child)

Misc. Paige is a strong believer in the supernatural. She is highly superstitious, and occasionally visits a medium.

Biography: Paige was born in Savannah and grew up in a church-run orphanage after the untimely death of her parents at a young age. The police were vague in the explanation for death, and couldn't provide many leads into the investigation that was promptly abandoned. Times were difficult, but upon adulthood, she attended medical school, where she became obsessed with understanding more about death. She focused the majority of her research time with cadavers, and following her graduation, returned to her father's grave intoxicated and determined to dig him out of the ground, hoping to haul him to the campus to start an autopsy. She soon came to her senses, and halted her activity out of grief. She felt that there was too much emotional baggage hindering her success in Georgia, and accepted a residency position at the farthest possible institution: St. Mary's Hospital in Portland Oregon.

In 1998, Paige lost a close patient named Julian (with whom she had been treating for several years) after she accidentally prescribed the wrong medication, sending Julian into a psychotic rage ending in suicide. After discovering her mistake, she destroyed all of the evidence of their previous appointment, and began drinking heavily to cope. With a patient lost and her actions being investigated, the hospital fired Paige and she was forced to move out of town. She eventually settled in Cedarview, where she opened a small practice counselling local residents. Paige was very self conscious of her reputation as her past incidents began surfacing around town, and she started losing clients. She drifted into financial hardship, just barely managing to keep her accounts from defaulting. In late 2007, Paige received a referral to counsel Alice Lowland on recommendation of the school nurse. Paige had difficulty connecting with Alice, and it wasn't long before she went missing, and Paige was once again struck with a potentially lost patient, this time without known motive.

Paige has been developing turbulent relations with her regulatory agency who are becoming heavily suspicious of Paige's actions, and are set to decide further whether she will keep her license in a professional hearing at a later time; in the meanwhile, relations with Alice's parents are very poor, and they remain confident that Paige knows something that they don't.

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Postby Main Nation Ministry » Sat Aug 04, 2018 1:49 pm

Might as well tag. Possible to use another character I made from another RP, he's a FBI agent which would make things interesting.
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Postby Hastur » Sat Aug 04, 2018 2:51 pm

State police squad reporting in to bust some backwater folk and possibly start ruby ridge 2.0.

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Detective Claire Pryzbylewski
Oregon State Criminal Investigation Division

Name: Claire Pryzbylewski
Age: 29
Occupation: Oregon state police detective; Criminal Investigation Division.
Appearance:

Picture attached to the file. Height: 180cm (5ft 10 inches) weight: 70 Kilograms (11 stone) Build: Athletic. Unique features: Tattoo of a crown on her left inner wrist.

Belongings:

  • Glock 22 with a synthetic holster along two magazines pouches, attached to her belt.
  • Extendable baton kept within a small pouch attached to her belt.
  • Smith & Wesson steel handcuffs.
  • Nokia 6233 Cellphone.
  • White Button up shirt
  • Black suit pants.
  • Police issue boots.
  • Oregon state issued wind breaker. Has the OSP written on the back.
  • Oregon State Police Badge.
  • Wallet w/ ID, debit card and around 200 dollars in cash.
  • Pocket of nitrile gloves.
  • Pack of cigarettes, with a zippo lighter.
  • Audio recorder.
  • Necklace holding a engagement band and a sliver sterling cross. Kept around her neck and under her shirt.
  • Evidence collection equipment, with sealable bags, gloves, black lights and various other crime scene examination equipment. Kept in the unmarked SUV.
  • Level IV kevlar vest, stored in the unmarked SUV.
  • Mossberg 590 mariner, kept locked away in the unmarked SUV.

Skills:

Experienced police officer: Has seven years of police work under her belt, eleven if you include her time within the marines as an MP. She has a good general instinct, is excellent at reading people and is what would be they would regard as good police.

Tactical trained: Served four years in the marines, and two years with CAPE before being moved up to detective. CAPE espeically giving her a better tactical inclination over most other detectives. In addition, she dealt with gangs during her time there, so she has an excellent eye for identifying if someone is withholding something, illegal or not.

Agile: Pryzbylewski is a dexterous and flexible individual who has a strong sense of balance, all of which come from her youth background in athletics. She can run fast in bursts across both flat and irregular terrain with general ease. Besides that, she has a quick reaction time.

Weaknesses:

headstrong: Pryzbylewski is stubborn with her goals to the point of the determent. She is notorious for never giving up on goals, objectives and even bets and will often stick with things to the end even if it involves personal harm. While she will change plan to achieve the end goal and shows flexibility there, she will still throw everything she has at the said goal and take a direct approach, not knowing when to quit, which can cause burnout or serious personal harm.

Inexperienced detective: Has only been a detective for just short of a year. While attentive, she is still learning the procedures and other things about the job, and hasn't quite diversified her tool set in extracting information from people.

Personality:

fit for duty. Officer Claire Pryzbylewski establishes her as a productive and attentive detective who possesses an excellent nose of trouble. Sporting a great general intuition and an investigative attitude, with Claire being mindful of her surroundings. She's practical and realistic in her views and in how she approaches things, searching for the precise and direct solution.

When interacting with members of the community, she tries to stay professional and is cordial towards those she meets, being courteous and amiable, eager to help those in need.  But this often diminished by a destructive temper which can flare up when her patience is tested. This irritable and hostile attitude emerging when dealing with non-compliant and combative people, angry drunks and in domestic situations. If left unchecked, it can drive on to her having a volatile outburst.

With her colleges, she is an extrovert who appreciates the company she holds. Having a significant amount of devotion and respect to the many officers and civilian personnel who she engages with every day. Considering most of them family and friends, whom she often takes part in personal banter to idle chitchat. That being said however, she has a mouth like a sailor, and has the tendency to be blunt, lacking in the way of word filters. Having limited time for stupidity or arrogance, which she will challenge with short sarcastic retorts. Something known to irk specific members of staff.


Likes: Her job, the occassional smoke, spicy food, red bull, coffee, tea, menthol gum.

Dislikes: Aggressive drunks, alcoholics, hard drug dealers, blowhards, daytime TV, small backward hicktowns who hate state police, getting shot at.

Goals: See this case through without killing her partner.

Fears: Enclosed spaces such as hallways, drowning, a triple 9 callout and forrests, mainly due to a reoccuring nightmare during her late teens involving a forrest, a grave and a talking corpse. Becoming like Burrows

Biography:

Born on 05/10/79 in Salem, Oregon. Growing up in a working-class household alongside four siblings, Claire being the second eldest of the pair. Her father being a local cop and her mother being a homemaker of sorts, with Claire and her siblings being cared for by her mother whilst her father carried out laborious and lengthy shifts. Home life was satisfactory, and she was raised well, performing great within education and extracurricular projects. However following graduation she elected to enlist within the marines rather than attend college following a stretch of jobs within the service industry.

Joining the marines at eighteen, she went through basic boot camp at Paris island, later entering the school of infantry at SOI east to complete 30 day marine combat training. Following the conclusion of SOI, they assigned her the 5811 MOS, Claire entering military police training at Fort Leonard Wood. Entered active service in the military police company within the Combat Logistics Battalion 3, being stationed in Hawaii. Most of her service being done on base. Claire exited active service during mid 2001 and entered IRR, coming back home to Salem.

She found work again within a wide verity of jobs returning home, and used the money earned to find some reasonably priced accommodation in Salem as she planned for the future, initially intending to study law at university, but she quickly wavered against it, again lacking the drive again to continue her education. She was later convinced to try out for the state police by her father, electing to enroll in the Oregon state law Enforcement Academy in late 2001. Undertaking the twenty-five week training program, graduating during 2002. She joined the state police not long after that, her military service getting her in, being placed into the field training phase.

She trained in a mostly low intensity environment, mainly dealing with drunks, traffic violations and the occasional domestic. Regarded her as a good candidate by her FTO, showcasing a high amount of professionalism and dedication that is occasionally undermined by an occasional short temper. She did however perform well enough on the evaluation phases, which led to her being brought onto the probationary period. She continued working with the Oregon State Police and was well enough regarded as an officer, performing well within her job, showcasing a good amount of respect for her superiors and was well enough liked by the community. Exited the probationary period during the end of 2003, earning the promotion of officer II.

Served within the patrol for two more years, assembling herself a stellar record, proving herself to be a valued officer. Eventually ending up working with the states CAPE patrol unit in late 2005. With Claire and the CAPE team performing arrests against high risk wanted suspects and seizures of illegal drugs, guns and firearms. Given the opportunity to move into the detective field, Claire undertook the exam in early 2007, and earned her promotion to detective in early 2008, working with detective Anthony Burrows, a closet alcoholic but solid detective.


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Postby Tayner » Sat Aug 04, 2018 3:16 pm

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Name: Vernon Colts
Age: 17
Occupation: Student/Cook (Pancake Shack)
Appearance: 5'11, 150lbs

Belongings:
  • 1994 Toyota Puckup
  • Zippo Lighter
  • Pack of Cigeretts
  • 2' Pocket Knife
  • Wallet ($12)
  • Phone
  • Baseball bat

Skills: Cooking, fishing, driving, history/English
Weaknesses: Somewhat introverted, below average eyesight, algebra/science

Personality: Vernon is almost your small town boy stereotype, but really in appearance only. He doesn't like to speak to new people, but still has a few friends. He finds pride in his work, but doesn't express it to many. He has an affinity towards social studies and the liberal arts, but dislikes advanced mathematics and sciences. He also shows an addictive personality by smoking, playing video games for prolonged periods of time, and a strong preference of carbonated beverages over water.
Likes: Drivng, playing video games, studying history
Dislikes: Talking to new people, bullies, smoking (ironically), homework
Goals: Quit smoking, get out of Cedarview, get a raise at work
Fears: Being shot, suffocating, wasps (due to an allergy)

Misc. His bank account holds $215.23, which he is saving up to leave town with. He is paid minimum wage ($6.85), and is a smoker.

Biography: Born to Jospeh and Mary Colts in 1992, Vernon would grow up relatively normal in Cedarview. He would do average in school, and would live with his family in their house in the outskirts of town. Vernon would make few friends in school, and when he was 16 he took a job as a cook in the local Pancake Shack. He would find himself working long hours, and not completing school work. He would buy his own vehicle, and save up money for his future.

However, he didn't see a future in Cedarview. His parents would always argue with his sister, Elizabeth, and Vernon would usually support his sister. They would also disapprove of his declining performance in school, and their relationship would become strained. Vernon would take longer hours and work later to avoid his parents, and would take up smoking (with help of some of his older friends.) He often cuts classes and spends his free time at Anton Beach, or the areas around Derringer Park.

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Postby Beiarusia » Sat Aug 04, 2018 6:07 pm

Tayner wrote:Name: Vernon Colts
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Hastur wrote:Name: Claire Pryzbylewski
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Kentucky Fried Land wrote:Name: Anthony Burrows
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ACCEPTED.


Convallaria wrote:Name: Paige Novak

Minor issue with the bio. A few middle-class (possibly upper-middle-class) neighborhoods may be hanging on, but the town in general is fading fast, a trend that is likely to worsen now that the recession is hitting. It's very unlikely that Paige would be attracting more clients here in a dying town than a major city. Otherwise I have no issue with the application.


Main Nation Ministry wrote:Might as well tag. Possible to use another character I made from another RP, he's a FBI agent which would make things interesting.

Due to an abundance of police (or interest in police) I'm no longer accepting such characters at this time. More may be allowed if we get more non-police characters.


Alanis Star wrote:I hope you guys don't mind me dropping in here, but hey, great to see you guys again! I was in Innocent RP that time, remember? :P

I would love to join this, but unfortunately, I am in another II (International Incident RP), along with worldbuilding some puppets and RL stuff. So yeah, all the best, and I hope that I can RP with you all soon!

(Is there a chance that I can RP mid-way, like in the middle of the storyline?)

Depending on what's happening that shouldn't be too much an issue.
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Postby Convallaria » Sat Aug 04, 2018 6:29 pm

Convallaria wrote:Name: Paige Novak
Minor issue with the bio. A few middle-class (possibly upper-middle-class) neighborhoods may be hanging on, but the town in general is fading fast, a trend that is likely to worsen now that the recession is hitting. It's very unlikely that Paige would be attracting more clients here in a dying town than a major city. Otherwise I have no issue with the application.


- I have rephrased the biography according to your notes.
"Convallaria: A sprawling sun-soaked dreamscape silhouetted far beyond the ethereal horizons of austere morality and petty mediocrity. But behind the sterile flights of state-sanctioned-fancy lies a paradise lost...a land of milk, honey and sex turned rancid in the sun, as the harshly held colonial disciplines of a bygone era yield to the temptations of society's nighttime fragrances..."

Welcome to the smokey, monochromatic bacchanalia of deco noire and diesel-fueled death traps!

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Postby Beiarusia » Sat Aug 04, 2018 6:35 pm

Convallaria wrote:Name: Paige Novak
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I think this can work. ACCEPTED.

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Postby Main Nation Ministry » Sat Aug 04, 2018 6:54 pm

Beiarusia wrote:
Tayner wrote:Name: Vernon Colts
DO NOT REMOVE: HE IS ALWAYS WATCHING

Hastur wrote:Name: Claire Pryzbylewski
DO NOT REMOVE: HE IS ALWAYS WATCHING

Kentucky Fried Land wrote:Name: Anthony Burrows
DO NOT REMOVE: HE IS ALWAYS WATCHING

ACCEPTED.


Convallaria wrote:Name: Paige Novak

Minor issue with the bio. A few middle-class (possibly upper-middle-class) neighborhoods may be hanging on, but the town in general is fading fast, a trend that is likely to worsen now that the recession is hitting. It's very unlikely that Paige would be attracting more clients here in a dying town than a major city. Otherwise I have no issue with the application.


Main Nation Ministry wrote:Might as well tag. Possible to use another character I made from another RP, he's a FBI agent which would make things interesting.

Due to an abundance of police (or interest in police) I'm no longer accepting such characters at this time. More may be allowed if we get more non-police characters.


Alanis Star wrote:I hope you guys don't mind me dropping in here, but hey, great to see you guys again! I was in Innocent RP that time, remember? :P

I would love to join this, but unfortunately, I am in another II (International Incident RP), along with worldbuilding some puppets and RL stuff. So yeah, all the best, and I hope that I can RP with you all soon!

(Is there a chance that I can RP mid-way, like in the middle of the storyline?)

Depending on what's happening that shouldn't be too much an issue.


I was in the middle of doing the biography of my FBI agent character, though. I got no other ideas for any other characters, so what can I do?
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Postby Beiarusia » Sat Aug 04, 2018 7:18 pm

Main Nation Ministry wrote:I was in the middle of doing the biography of my FBI agent character, though. I got no other ideas for any other characters, so what can I do?

Anything within reason except for cops, soldiers, etc. Additionally, FBI wouldn't have a reason to involve themselves. The disappearance falls under local and state jurisdiction.

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Postby Ubaria » Sat Aug 04, 2018 9:08 pm

[PLACEHOLDER]


Name: Charlotte Faye Evans
Age: 25
Occupation: Veterinary Assistant (Freelance Journalist)
Appearance:

Belongings:
  • Silver Blue 1996 Ford Mondeo MK2
  • Small Toolkit of small handtools
  • Hessian Style Shoulder Bag
    • Canon EOS 400D
    • Panasonic Lumix DMC-FX 07 Compact Video Camera
    • Sony VAIO SZ Laptop
    • Sony Ericsson K800i
    • Road Map of Oregon
    • $562 Dollars
    • Debit Card
    • Passport
    • Mace Aerosol
    • Flashlight
  • Several Changes of Undergarments
  • Notebook

Skills:
Weaknesses:

Personality:

Likes: (OPTIONAL)
Dislikes: (OPTIONAL)
Goals: (OPTIONAL)
Fears: (OPTIONAL)

Misc. (OPTIONAL. Anything else we should know?)

Biography: (Two paragraph minimum! Must include reason for being involved.)

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Postby Favation » Sat Aug 04, 2018 11:33 pm

Name: Samuel Holton
Age: 39
Occupation: Local Detective.
Appearance:
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-200 lbs
Belongings:
  • Walther P99 + Holster
  • 2007 Ford F150
  • Remington Camouflage AR15 (Carries in his truck)
  • Saint Patrick’s Necklace
  • Phone
  • Ammunition carriers x 4 for P99
  • Badge
  • Handcuffs
  • Binoculars
  • Hunting knife

Skills:
  • Intuitive mind
  • Physically Strong
  • Military training

Weaknesses:
  • Rushes into action
  • Heavy Drinker
  • Dangerously obsessive

Personality: Though outside of his job he acts in a calm and collected manner, trying to be a friendly and social person. In the job he is much more cold and socially awkward at times, almost as if he switches personalities and despite this he is quite an avid thinker but lacks patience due to his relatively young age in the force.
Likes: Smoking, playing pool, a good popcorn movie.
Dislikes:Losing time, laziness, criminals.
Goals: To Solve every case at the best of his abilities.
Fears: For his son or his wife to be harmed.

Misc. He has a light tick, when he drinks he taps his foot fast.

Biography:
Samuel grew up in the lowly populated wooded country land of Oregon, in the small town of Cedarview. The son of a lumberjack father and a mother who worked at a dinner. His mother took pills to keep her from gaining weight while his father chew tobacco on the daily after work and always expected a nice cold bear in his armchair along with a warm meal. Many times Samuel's father would stay away in the mountains for several days and Samuel had to carry her mother up the stairs to her bed countless of times that she feel asleep while watching late night shows on the living room, with a breath that let out a potent whiskey odor. Despite such a pair of not the best parents of them all, they still showed Samuel kindness and love despite their flaws, and pushed themselves to have money for him to go to college. Samuel went to the local small town high school where he meet his sweetheart Rosy Erinheart. The two would know they had a life together when in prom, dancing to the songs of John Denver they shared a passionate kiss while on the dance floor.

Several years later, Rosy went to study off to the University of Oregon to study economics while Samuel joined the army with the opportunity to get away from his parents for a while and get chance to study administrative justice at the army's expense. He wrote to Rosy daily and visited her often while on leave, waiting for her to finish up her career. Samuel's mother died of intoxication when he was barely 25 and had proposed to Rosy, his father became old and bitter and relied more and more on the drink and tobacco to forget. After being discharged from the Army, Samuel moved back to his hometown with Rosy, where she set up a gift shop on the main street and he was able to join the local PD, working on menial public and domestic disturbances, with the occasional arrest of shoplifting teens or dispersing the young adults at the Cover only for them to come back by the next week. After a few years of street and county work in Cedarview he got a call of noise complaint from a property owner a few miles away from the main town. Samuel went into the forest and found a small building from within the woods and while investigating he found the building largely ruined and several pieces of chemical tools that seemed to be from the local high school. Samuel called in backup and while doing so was shot at by a tweaky looking guy but he didn't manage to get a shot on Samuel and was promptly shot in the head and chest by the deputy, Samuel's first kill on the force. After a few minutes, Samuel cleared the building and arrested 5 other criminals who gave up rather quickly, it was clear that this whole thing was a meth production house. After the meth house bust, Samuel impressed the PD by showing intuition and bravery that later got him to become a detective by age 35, he soon conceived his first son with Rosy that year.

Working as a detective, Samuel got involved with working on the cases of missing people, which tended to be a rather usual problem in Cedarview. His father died in 2005, the same year that the Jennifer Tallow disappearance occurred, he didn't think much of the Tallow case since it was not in his jurisdiction and his father's death through the barrel of a gun still haunts him to this day, especially since he is still unconvinced it was a suicide and angry over him not being able to personally investigate it hence he has become quite obsessive over it and waits for the first chance he can get to investigate it, to no avail. After some more years of several drug arrests, runaway teenagers, and other small scale crimes pertaining to theft, teenage hooligans, and a drunken fight from time to time Samuel has been assigned to the Lowland case, a 16 year old missing since March, possible runaway since they usually are at that age. Not the first time Samuel has dealt with a runaway edgy teenager after all, he's sure he can find her before any state detective can find his case notes.

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Postby Main Nation Ministry » Sat Aug 04, 2018 11:47 pm

Trying to come up with ideas for what kind of character I should make. Any suggestions?
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- Descend into the forgotten tourist traps of Florida on this transgressive RP! - The Community (Mature/Black Comedy/Slice-of-Life)

My overall account that I use for P2TM and even for international roleplaying! MNM is a mysterious and extremely dangerous dictatorship filled with supernatural oddities, demons, militarized soldiers everywhere, and a misanthropic nihilistic dictator who doesn't give a damn. It's basically if the SCP Foundation got mixed with 1984.

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Postby Acerbez » Sun Aug 05, 2018 1:16 am

Name: Kortis "Ren" Renna
Age: 14
Occupation: Typical mischievous teen
Appearance: medium length light brown curly hair and Hazel coloured eyes (Very Syrian like), pronouned germanic features and lightly tanned skin. Always wears a bandana hankerchief around his neck or face.

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Belongings: dark grey hoody, slingshot, sack of "bullets", lighter, knapsack, 1 black spray paint can, venom comic book, 2 cans of dr.pepper, 6 illegal M-80 fire crackers, and a bag of sunflower seeds.

Skills: pretty good slinger, agile and quick, exceptionally smart for a delinquent 14yr old, fits on small spaces.
Weaknesses: naturally arogant, beginning to notice boobs, likes fire, smart but not exceptionally wise as in most youngins.

Personality: brash and at times temperamental, tends to do what he wants but all in all, not a horrible kid.
Likes: playing with matches and lighters, animals, fireworks, "accidentally" breaking things.
Dislikes: being told what to do for no reason, bullies, spiders, the smell of garbage
Goals: To pimp his bicycle, pranking others without ever getting caught.
Fears: spiders, cockroaches, Trash dumps, Girls with cooties.

Misc. Kortis' brother is 5, typically babysat at home while Kortis does his thing outside.

Biography: Little Ren runs around Cedarview like most kids. His Single mother raises him and his kid brother Sabri, while working at the the pancake shack as a waitress. Typically, Ren chills outdoors and runs amok with the other kids causing trouble during the summer but nothing too excessive- typical shennanigans. Most of his friends are unaware of Ren's tangent of running solo, and often disappears to indulge himself in random endeavors such as blowing up a mailbox or misplacing a garden gnome in another person's yard up the street.

Kortis lives in cedarview and doesnt fully grasp the concept of disappearances and assumes people run away because the town is boring and there's nothing to do. He just wants to pimp his bike and make the best of his time with epic teenage badassness like spray painting "Poop" on the wendy's alley wall or making Mr.Greenald think Jackson stole his garden gnome.

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Most of my RP is nation view but i assume u just wish to see the overall structuring. Hopefully this suffices.

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Postby Beiarusia » Sun Aug 05, 2018 9:40 am

Acerbez wrote:Name: Kortis "Ren" Renna

1: A few things. I assume he's Syrian, and small towns tend to be homogenous, so while not impossible Cedarview wouldn't be an attractive place to move to, more-so with the mine decommissioned. Not a big issue. He'd probably be one of the few minorities living in town.

2: The picture is bad. I need a face, not a Mad Max styled rebel.

3: Belongings are really only anything important that you keep on you or else own. Since he's a local he wouldn't have to be carrying everything everywhere typically.

4: Your grammar needs to be fixed. Some capitalization errors.

5: This is a little town, and Ren stands out, so destroying property and graffiti is gonna be easy to pin to him. He's the only Syrian kid and the only one to probably be wearing bandanas 24/7.

6: Lastly, the app comes across as needlessly edgy.

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Postby Acerbez » Sun Aug 05, 2018 9:50 am

Aight, Noted.
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Left-Leaning College State

Postby Pax Nerdvana » Sun Aug 05, 2018 9:54 am

This looks cool. Tag.
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Postby Costa Fierro » Sun Aug 05, 2018 5:20 pm

I've been waiting for an RP like this for ages. I have an app under construction as we speak.
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Postby Lavan Tiri » Sun Aug 05, 2018 5:53 pm

Major Twin Peaks vibes. Tag.
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Postby Imperial Esplanade » Sun Aug 05, 2018 6:01 pm

Pique of the ol' interest-meter.
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Postby Favation » Sun Aug 05, 2018 8:37 pm

App is updated Beia.

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