Star Wars: A Final Hope (OOC/Signups)[/OPEN]

[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

could I use Darth Vectivus's Holocron as a plot point for my character? Since we don't actually know whether it was actually destroyed in the explosion that destroyed "The Home," perhaps my character could have stumbled across it, whether finding it drifting through space or in the storage of some shady collector who had happened to find it

[Brusia]

Hey folks, Jedi and I got a map thrown together in case anyone was curious about the current state of the Galaxy: https://imgur.com/a/KDLzGSI

The area in Gold is Alliance Space, Red is Coalition Space, Green is Hutt Space, Black is Mandalorian Space, and Blue is Chiss Ascendancy Space (with a supplementary map for Chiss Space here). The worlds between Alliance and Coalition Space are part of a Demilitarized Zone established by the Carida Concordant and are officially neutral; all other worlds not within the listed territories are neutral as well.

[Gorbatov]

Hey folks, Jedi and I got a map thrown together in case anyone was curious about the current state of the Galaxy: https://imgur.com/a/KDLzGSI

The area in Gold is Alliance Space, Red is Coalition Space, Green is Hutt Space, Black is Mandalorian Space, and Blue is Chiss Ascendancy Space (with a supplementary map for Chiss Space here). The worlds between Alliance and Coalition Space are part of a Demilitarized Zone established by the Carida Concordant and are officially neutral; all other worlds not within the listed territories are neutral as well.

I would just like to address some problems I noticed with the map:
-Kessel should be under Coalition control, due to the Maw Cluster(located in the Kessel sector) the location of the capital of the Coalition.
-Hutt Space is self-explanatory on the map, unless the Hutts managed to take over some planets during the war between the Alliance and the Coalition?
-The Chiss Ascendancy is supposed be larger since Darth Krayt giving them "control over large tracts of the Unknown Regions."

[Union Princes]

So, how's my app so far? Are you planning to review it on July 4th tomorrow?

[Ormata]

could I use Darth Vectivus's Holocron as a plot point for my character? Since we don't actually know whether it was actually destroyed in the explosion that destroyed "The Home," perhaps my character could have stumbled across it, whether finding it drifting through space or in the storage of some shady collector who had happened to find it

Imma guess that'll be a "No", since I wanted a Holocron and was denied a char due to that fact.

[Ormata]

So...any feedback on my Mandalorian's backstory?

[The Valyria Empire]

Valyria, I presume the Jedi you mentioned in your post was Illia? She is female, but your post references thr Jedi as male.

There's two jedi, no? Illia is going to investigate while the other guy is up top in the more crowded area. That's who the soldiers are going to.

[Ormata]

Valyria, I presume the Jedi you mentioned in your post was Illia? She is female, but your post references thr Jedi as male.

There's two jedi, no? Illia is going to investigate while the other guy is up top in the more crowded area. That's who the soldiers are going to.

The other guy is not a Jedi.

[Bla Ary]

Council, just wanted to point out Raiden was interacting with Illia. I didn't make that clear in my post, was my bad.

[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

could I use Darth Vectivus's Holocron as a plot point for my character? Since we don't actually know whether it was actually destroyed in the explosion that destroyed "The Home," perhaps my character could have stumbled across it, whether finding it drifting through space or in the storage of some shady collector who had happened to find it

Imma guess that'll be a "No", since I wanted a Holocron and was denied a char due to that fact.

How about any Sith teachings at all? Unless I have to go down the route of another Sith training my character, which wouldn't fit well

But I'd still like to see what the Co-OPs or OP says, even if there is little hope

[The Valyria Empire]

There's two jedi, no? Illia is going to investigate while the other guy is up top in the more crowded area. That's who the soldiers are going to.

The other guy is not a Jedi.

That's what I get for not reading the apps. Changes will be made.

[Jedi Council]

Council, just wanted to point out Raiden was interacting with Illia. I didn't make that clear in my post, was my bad.

My apologies I must have missed it! Ill take a look when I am on my computer at home and edit accordingly.

[Jedi Council]

The other guy is not a Jedi.

That's what I get for not reading the apps. Changes will be made.

Korven is Illia's non force sensitive twin brother.

[Bla Ary]

Council, just wanted to point out Raiden was interacting with Illia. I didn't make that clear in my post, was my bad.

My apologies I must have missed it! Ill take a look when I am on my computer at home and edit accordingly.

No problem. Totally my fault, I wasn't clear.

I don't believe you've posted since I did, but I just wanted to check while we were talking about it and corrupt soldiers walked around downstairs.

[Bla Ary]

Valyria, is the human male you mention in your post Raiden? I just want to be sure it isn't Illiam's brother after all this confusion.

[Ormata]

Valyria, is the human male you mention in your post Raiden? I just want to be sure it isn't Illiam's brother after all this confusion.

"As Imperious reached out at the station, he realized that there was a force sensitive being on the station as well. Imperious scowled, and ordered three of his Alliance soldiers to approach the human male, the Jedi's companion."

Is Raiden a person's companion.

[Brusia]

I would just like to address some problems I noticed with the map:
-Kessel should be under Coalition control, due to the Maw Cluster(located in the Kessel sector) the location of the capital of the Coalition.
-Hutt Space is self-explanatory on the map, unless the Hutts managed to take over some planets during the war between the Alliance and the Coalition?
-The Chiss Ascendancy is supposed be larger since Darth Krayt giving them "control over large tracts of the Unknown Regions."

Thank you for pointing that out; I was unaware the Maw was located in the Kessel System and will be redrawing the map to accommodate it. To your second point, yes, I had intended for the Hutts to have expanded their space during the chaos of the war between the Alliance and Coalition, though that will likely change given Kessel's location. To your final point, do have any maps or specifics on how much territory the Chiss were given by Darth Krayt? (I'll just have to kind of guesstimate otherwise).

[Bla Ary]

Valyria, is the human male you mention in your post Raiden? I just want to be sure it isn't Illiam's brother after all this confusion.

"As Imperious reached out at the station, he realized that there was a force sensitive being on the station as well. Imperious scowled, and ordered three of his Alliance soldiers to approach the human male, the Jedi's companion."

Is Raiden a person's companion.

No but he is with Illiam at the moment. That's why I just want to clear it up, because I can't figure out how they would know about Korven.

[The Valyria Empire]

Valyria, is the human male you mention in your post Raiden? I just want to be sure it isn't Illiam's brother after all this confusion.

"As Imperious reached out at the station, he realized that there was a force sensitive being on the station as well. Imperious scowled, and ordered three of his Alliance soldiers to approach the human male, the Jedi's companion."

Is Raiden a person's companion.

They approached Korven. The guy has a history of illegal affairs, so, it seems reasonable that the Alliance would have them in their criminal archives.

[Bla Ary]

"As Imperious reached out at the station, he realized that there was a force sensitive being on the station as well. Imperious scowled, and ordered three of his Alliance soldiers to approach the human male, the Jedi's companion."

Is Raiden a person's companion.

They approached Korven. The guy has a history of illegal affairs, so, it seems reasonable that the Alliance would have them in their criminal archives.

Got it. Just checking.

[Gerdon Laughis]

could I use Darth Vectivus's Holocron as a plot point for my character? Since we don't actually know whether it was actually destroyed in the explosion that destroyed "The Home," perhaps my character could have stumbled across it, whether finding it drifting through space or in the storage of some shady collector who had happened to find it

Imma guess that'll be a "No", since I wanted a Holocron and was denied a char due to that fact.

Am I the only one with a Holocron XD

[The Valyria Empire]

They approached Korven. The guy has a history of illegal affairs, so, it seems reasonable that the Alliance would have them in their criminal archives.

Got it. Just checking.

Unless someone comes to backup Korven he might be escorted away for questioning. So, it could force Illia to come back and assist her brother.

Though I would like to see what would happen if Raiden or Illia find one of the bombs.

Imma guess that'll be a "No", since I wanted a Holocron and was denied a char due to that fact.

Am I the only one with a Holocron XD

My character has a small collection of Sith holocrons, some of them being from major sith in the past. However, Davin is still very green and thus many of the secrets are still locked away.

[Gorbatov]

I would just like to address some problems I noticed with the map:
-Kessel should be under Coalition control, due to the Maw Cluster(located in the Kessel sector) the location of the capital of the Coalition.
-Hutt Space is self-explanatory on the map, unless the Hutts managed to take over some planets during the war between the Alliance and the Coalition?
-The Chiss Ascendancy is supposed be larger since Darth Krayt giving them "control over large tracts of the Unknown Regions."

Thank you for pointing that out; I was unaware the Maw was located in the Kessel System and will be redrawing the map to accommodate it. To your second point, yes, I had intended for the Hutts to have expanded their space during the chaos of the war between the Alliance and Coalition, though that will likely change given Kessel's location. To your final point, do have any maps or specifics on how much territory the Chiss were given by Darth Krayt? (I'll just have to kind of guesstimate otherwise).

Yeah you'll have to guesstimate.

Imma guess that'll be a "No", since I wanted a Holocron and was denied a char due to that fact.

Am I the only one with a Holocron XD

I have a holocron, recovered from a Rogue Sith attempting to flee to the Unknown Regions.

[Bla Ary]

Got it. Just checking.

Unless someone comes to backup Korven he might be escorted away for questioning. So, it could force Illia to come back and assist her brother.

Though I would like to see what would happen if Raiden or Illia find one of the bombs.

Am I the only one with a Holocron XD

My character has a small collection of Sith holocrons, some of them being from major sith in the past. However, Davin is still very green and thus many of the secrets are still locked away.

"If you give me 50 credits and take me with you, I won't tell a soul."

[Nuxipal]

I do enjoy that Taris is officially in neutral space. Makes the decision to try and hide there a little more plausible. As for whoever stole a holocron from a sith heading into the unknown regions... Aryca is gonna want to have some words with them.