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Greater Meme Land wrote:I think I made all the appropriate edits.

United States of Brainy wrote:Listen, Meme, I'm trying to get your character's powers within acceptable limits for this RP so adding additional powers isn't helping issues. Being able to hear a pin drop from two miles away? Having eidetic memory that allows him to replicate any action with ease? No way, absolutely no way. Plus, I asked you specifically to clarify that sunlight included UV light but you failed to do that.

As it stands right now, you're giving me a lot of concerns about whether your intent is to fit into the story or whether it's simply to overpower all the other characters.

Greater Meme Land wrote:

United States of Brainy wrote:Crap, I’m sorry. Look, I keep forgetting a about the UV thing, but I added I now. I’m doing a lot of these edits on mobile while on the go, which is not exactly when I’m at my best. Hell, I’m writing this post from a bathroom stall. Please have patience with me, I’m not exactly the best as multitasking in this manner. I know I’m being a little irritating, and that this character is op, but that isn’t my intent. I’m sorry

The Nordic Model wrote:Posted. I decided to get her arrested now.

United States of Brainy wrote:Hey, Whales, why'd you move your post?

Whalestron wrote:

United States of Brainy wrote:Hey, Whales, why'd you move your post?

Figured it made more sense chronologically to have Cooper rush in after Tim landed

Haedros 92712 wrote:I’m cooking up the first Bane post. In response to the Mayors message.

Yaana Noore wrote:I like what's been done. It would be cool to see there be repercussions for the heroes' actions by having to go underground or be forced to work alongside the police, and if they do bad, have people actually turn against them. If enough people go against the heroes, maybe some will see Bane as the solution.

United States of Brainy wrote:Hey, Haedros! What suit is Snake wearing when he shoots the cop? His normal suit, the white suit with the golden dragon mask or the new suit he just picked up from Snugg? Ya know, for such a badass, Caleb is quite the clothes horse!

Haedros 92712 wrote:

United States of Brainy wrote:Hey, Haedros! What suit is Snake wearing when he shoots the cop? His normal suit, the white suit with the golden dragon mask or the new suit he just picked up from Snugg? Ya know, for such a badass, Caleb is quite the clothes horse!

He’s wearing the Advance Proto. You can tell because it has the A.I.

Whalestron wrote:Hero APP: (Delete Everything in Parentheses including this)
Name/Alias: Madison Clifford
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Appearance:

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Personality:
Faction:GCPD
Race:Human
Backstory:

Being the daughter of a decorated and deceased cop, Madison had a lot to live up to. Her father had been a well known detective, often taking Madison into work when she was younger. Though she would stay at home most of the time he was out in the real world. Her habits while home alone were tame until she became sixteen, when she would commonly go out to drink with friends or tag walls with graffiti.

Her rebellious age ended when her father died. He’d been out on a case and was shot dead by a criminal she would later learn was named Nickolas Mentell, a gang member. She sobered up quickly, realizing she’d been going against every moral her father had taught her. She had big shoes to fill, and she intended to prove to everyone she wasn’t some hoodlum.

She joined the police academy and was surprisingly quick to learn everything from the laws of the street to combat. In the end, Madison graduated top of her class. She did her work quite well, throwing crooks in jail and resolving disputes. And her first case was impressive. It was a homicide she’d reported to, a woman stabbed dead by her husband. Madison had managed to follow a trail he’d left of nothing but some hair in a shower drain and his shoes. She detained and arrested him at a train station before he could skip town.

A couple years later, Madison became a detective, especially useful with her attachments with some criminals and scum of the street she’d known in her youth. She wishes to clean up the streets using whatever means she can, and maybe even discover the crime family who was involved with killing her father.

Powers/Weapons/Tech:-Colt M1911
-Handcuffs
-Standard police equipment

Martial Arts: She excels at hand to hand combat, though her training is limited to the instructors she sought out and the stuff from the academy.

Detective: Madison is quite good at investigating a crime scene and people. She can find out a lot about someone or an event from deductions and analysis.
Weaknesses:- Her morals can get in the way of things, especially if they involve killing someone.
Madison has a tendency of going off-book when she’s on cases, which could easily land her in trouble if she’s not careful.
Her lack of powers could prove quite tricky in a fight with a powered person
Skills:Reads body language well
Can tell when someone is lying
Good with people
RP Examples: h
Extra Information
Day Job:Police Detective
Living Place: Old Gotham
Voice Actor: Jeannette Mccurdy
Likes/Dislikes:
+Honesty
+Facing things head on
+Solving cases

-Failure
-Noncompliance
-Crimes
-Bugs
Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=syNmrAcXEys
Did you read the rules? Yes

Wanted to make a cop person that might end up clashing interests with the new chief, maybe wind up becoming an outcast because of her views and actions in the future.