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Nevrintik
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Postby Nevrintik » Mon Jul 23, 2018 11:35 am

Hero APP:
Name/Alias: Fah Loon Ji-tann (Real name unknown)
Age: 37
Gender: Male
Appearance: Brown eyes, bald, 6'5"
Personality: Placid, amiable, occasionally humorous
Faction: None
Race: Human (Black)
Backstory:

Not much is known about the self-proclaimed monk known as Fah Loon Ji-tann. From a young age, he was infatuated with monk culture. He was in love with the idea of the martial arts and the concept of transcendence. His ideas and philosophies put him in bad positions as a youth, but he knew physical and psychological self-defense from a young age. Many regarded him as being mentally and socially impaired and sometimes even delusional, but this did not stop him. When he was 30, he decided to fake his death and abandoned his previous life to live as a modern monk, traveling the lands and helping those in need whenever possible.

The man cast off his previous name, now referring to himself as Fah Loon Ji-tann. After leaving his old life, he continued to train himself over the years. With only a staff, two pocket knives, a robe, and a mission, Fah began his crusade of justice, hoping to bring peace and prosperity to those he could. He works based off of a simple, but strict moral code, going off of the following rules:

* The needs of others always outweigh the needs of the self.
* Avoid unnecessary rancor; remaining rational is the key to proper function.
* Few can be truly beyond redemption; do not take the life of another unless absolutely necessary.
* Commit no acts which may inhibit one's ability to function properly at all times; no drugs, no alcohol, no over-eating, etc.
* Danger can come from anyone, anywhere, at anytime; be ever on-guard against the unseen and the unseeable.

Powers/Weapons/Tech: None (See skills)
Weaknesses:

Fah is a strong combatant, but the bulk of his weaknesses are purely psychological. He tends to become defensive when others inquire about his past, eventually progressing to rage and interfering with his overall technique. He is also prone to think too long on subjects, which could lead to him taking too long to make decisions. Because of this, he has somewhat of a shortened attention span and his mind tends to wander a lot.

Skills:

Because of his extensive self-training, Fah can go for up to five days without sleep and up to two weeks without food or drink. He also has an extremely high pain tolerance, letting him take blow after blow and still continue to fight. His senses are very well-attuned, allowing him to see and hear at far greater capacities than any typical individual.

Fah bares a few objects which he uses as weapons. His go-to instrument is a staff, which he uses in an expert fashion to deliver quick blows against his opponents while leaving no room for them to fight back. If he is to lose his staff, he can effectively utilize hand-to-hand combat to keep his foes at bay. He is also capable of using objects around himself as makeshift weapons, such as stray bricks, rocks, or pieces of broken glass.

Aside from his monk-related abilities, Fah has a strong sense of empathy and has a great insight into the personalities and motives of others. He frequently uses this to console troubled individuals or to deduce the intentions of assailants.

Extra Information
Voice Actor: Sahr Ngaujah (Doomfist from Overwatch)

Did you read the rules? Yes.
I really love RPing, but I am still very new to it.

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United States of Brainy
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Postby United States of Brainy » Mon Jul 23, 2018 5:43 pm

Hey, Nev, since Yaana was the one that started reviewing your app, I'm going to let them finish the review. :)

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Nevrintik
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Postby Nevrintik » Mon Jul 23, 2018 7:37 pm

Just a reminder that I will be out traveling tomorrow and will return in a week.
I really love RPing, but I am still very new to it.

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United States of Brainy
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Postby United States of Brainy » Mon Jul 23, 2018 8:01 pm

Nevrintik wrote:Just a reminder that I will be out traveling tomorrow and will return in a week.


Have a great trip! :)

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Fronket
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Postby Fronket » Tue Jul 24, 2018 7:44 am

Posted for Maggie.

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Whalestron
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Postby Whalestron » Tue Jul 24, 2018 7:54 am

Aaand replied with Madison

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Personal Freedom
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Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby Personal Freedom » Tue Jul 24, 2018 11:32 am

So, Brainy, I do want to have the imposter mad hatter visit the Iceberg Lougue if that is okay with you.
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'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves;
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.

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Yaana Noore
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Postby Yaana Noore » Tue Jul 24, 2018 11:33 am

@Nevrintik the character is approved, just remember to keep those psychological weaknesses in mind when writing the character. They're fine but sometimes get conveniently forgotten by people when writing their characters in action scenes, but if handled well work great.

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Postby United States of Brainy » Tue Jul 24, 2018 11:38 am

Personal Freedom wrote:So, Brainy, I do want to have the imposter mad hatter visit the Iceberg Lougue if that is okay with you.


Suuuure! But all he might find there is a dead body behind the bar. :p

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Skarten
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Postby Skarten » Tue Jul 24, 2018 4:04 pm

Quite honestly ,i'm thinking of something to post about.

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The Democratic Marxists
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Postby The Democratic Marxists » Tue Jul 24, 2018 4:59 pm

Posted as Carrie.
I’m a democratic socialist. Yes, I believe in the radical idea of sharing, as do so many other people. Fight me.

Pro: Socialism, Social Democracy, Peace, Environment, Legal Marijuana, Gun Control, Economic Redistribution, Medicare for All, Living Wage, Tuition-Free College, Land Ceiling, Universal Pre-K, Palestine, Bernie Sanders, Alexandria Ocasio-Cortez, Jeremy Corbyn, Jacinda Ardern, AMLO, Labour Party, Democratic Socialists of America, Green Party

Moderate: Communism, Barack Obama, Elizabeth Warren, Feminism

Anti: Casino Capitalism, Ruthless Billionaires, Abortion, Racism, War, The Wall, Israel, ISIL, CNN, Fox News, MSNBC, Hillary Clinton, Theresa May, Donald Trump, Republican Party, Democratic Party

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United States of Brainy
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Postby United States of Brainy » Tue Jul 24, 2018 5:13 pm

My post for Babs is in the oven, should be ready in an hour everyone! ;)

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Postby United States of Brainy » Tue Jul 24, 2018 5:15 pm

The Democratic Marxists wrote:Posted as Carrie.


I think what Carrie is saying is that she wants to stay at the Batcave but I'm not sure. :lol:

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Main Nation Ministry
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Postby Main Nation Ministry » Tue Jul 24, 2018 5:20 pm

I'm going to post a very large wall of text in the IC, hope no one minds.
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Yaana Noore
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Postby Yaana Noore » Tue Jul 24, 2018 5:38 pm

Main Nation Ministry wrote:I'm going to post a very large wall of text in the IC, hope no one minds.

Nobody should take offence at lots of writing, it's a good thing and should never be discouraged!

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Yaana Noore
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Postby Yaana Noore » Tue Jul 24, 2018 5:46 pm

Skarten wrote:Quite honestly ,i'm thinking of something to post about.

If you need help getting involved with a hero or villain I am sure someone can help you out.

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United States of Brainy
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Postby United States of Brainy » Tue Jul 24, 2018 6:03 pm

Posted for Babs! :) And catch the mouth on Steph! Sugar and spice...NOT! :lol: *goes back to read Main's Great Wall of China* :p

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Main Nation Ministry
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Postby Main Nation Ministry » Tue Jul 24, 2018 6:08 pm

United States of Brainy wrote:Posted for Babs! :) And catch the mouth on Steph! Sugar and spice...NOT! :lol: *goes back to read Main's Great Wall of China* :p

I got Superman to fix the Great Wall of China with his superpowers. He just needed to stare at the broken wall and it just rebuilds itself.
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United States of Brainy
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Postby United States of Brainy » Tue Jul 24, 2018 6:16 pm

Main Nation Ministry wrote:I got Superman to fix the Great Wall of China with his superpowers. He just needed to stare at the broken wall and it just rebuilds itself.


SUPERMAN IV:THE QUEST FOR PEACE!!! I LOVE THAT MOVIE!!! :D And speaking of movies...I just felt like I stepped into a John Hughes movie! :lol: That post of yours was amazing! :clap:

(And oh, if it's okay, I'm gonna send that big fake Hatter Coyne's way ;) )

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United States of Brainy
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Postby United States of Brainy » Tue Jul 24, 2018 6:20 pm

Hey Main, another favor to ask! Please delete that OOC comment about it being Monday and just write Monday Morning underneath "Take 3." Monday morning or Monday afternoon or just Monday. Thanks!
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Main Nation Ministry
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Postby Main Nation Ministry » Tue Jul 24, 2018 6:23 pm

United States of Brainy wrote:Hey Main, another favor to ask! Please delete that OOC comment about it being Monday and just write Monday Morning underneath "Take 3." Monday morning or Monday afternoon or just Monday. Thanks!

No worries, just making sure to classify the IC date to make sure no one is confused.
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United States of Brainy
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Postby United States of Brainy » Tue Jul 24, 2018 6:52 pm

Posted for Iceberg!

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Whalestron
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Postby Whalestron » Tue Jul 24, 2018 7:24 pm

Got a biggish post up

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Postby United States of Brainy » Tue Jul 24, 2018 7:27 pm

Whalestron wrote:Got a biggish post up


Yay!

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Postby United States of Brainy » Tue Jul 24, 2018 7:42 pm

Skarten wrote:Quite honestly ,i'm thinking of something to post about.


I'd be more than happy to help you if you're stuck, Skarten. :) Okay, double-checked and last we heard of Jules, Steph, great hero that she is, left Jules high and dry at the bank. What if the cops arrested Jules and he ended up in the same cell along with Lady Clayface and Tetch?

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