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by United States of Brainy » Wed Jun 13, 2018 5:25 pm
by Ormata » Wed Jun 13, 2018 5:28 pm
United States of Brainy wrote:Reading Dentali's RP sample brought up a good point. In our IC posts, are we writing first-person present or third person past tense? Personally, I'm leaning toward the latter unless I receive a huge outcry for the former.
Ormata, could you let me do my job, please. I'm juggling a lot right now so give me some breathing room here, okay? Thanks.
by United States of Brainy » Wed Jun 13, 2018 5:33 pm
Ormata wrote: By the way, post up. Sorry it's a little short.
by Dentali » Wed Jun 13, 2018 5:46 pm
Ormata wrote:Imma point out that people can use the whole [url= stuff for their applications.
Dentali, while not an OP or Co-Op, could you please do the following:
A: More whole appearance section. If you're only going to use the mask for a character image, I'd love a paragraph on his facial features without the mask and, if not, please get a picture for him uncovered. Also, height, weight, skin tone, overall build can be detailed in there. Outstanding features should also be noted.
B: Please write in third person for your posts.
C: His "Living Place" is detailed as being a Loft Apartment. That section is more for what region of the city people live in, to be quite frank.
D: While not needed, well...the backstory is rather lackluster and short. Love to know more on his nuances.
by Ormata » Wed Jun 13, 2018 5:52 pm
Dentali wrote:Ormata wrote:Imma point out that people can use the whole [url= stuff for their applications.
Dentali, while not an OP or Co-Op, could you please do the following:
A: More whole appearance section. If you're only going to use the mask for a character image, I'd love a paragraph on his facial features without the mask and, if not, please get a picture for him uncovered. Also, height, weight, skin tone, overall build can be detailed in there. Outstanding features should also be noted.
B: Please write in third person for your posts.
C: His "Living Place" is detailed as being a Loft Apartment. That section is more for what region of the city people live in, to be quite frank.
D: While not needed, well...the backstory is rather lackluster and short. Love to know more on his nuances.
A: No
B: No
C: No
D: No
I'll detail things in the RP, i'm not giving everything in the application. As for requiring a third person pov, thats dumb
by Yaana Noore » Wed Jun 13, 2018 5:56 pm
by United States of Brainy » Wed Jun 13, 2018 5:58 pm
by Ormata » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:00 pm
Yaana Noore wrote:Ah, we have the IC now. Cool.
Flutter, of all these factions, who is the leader of the Order of Reapers? If you're not strictly controlling each one could I know who is behind it and their general aims.
United States of Brainy wrote:Thanks for making the changes, Dentali and thanks for the suggestions, Ormata. Okay, this is how we're going to play it-
Dentali, I'm going to allow first person present tense on a provisional basis since that seems the style you're most comfortable with. If I feel, as a reader, that the style shift is unduly taking me out of the story, you're going to have to switch to third person past, end of discussion. I'm going to be as lenient as I can for right now because I really want to get this story going.
by United States of Brainy » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:02 pm
Ormata wrote:Yaana Noore wrote:Ah, we have the IC now. Cool.
Flutter, of all these factions, who is the leader of the Order of Reapers? If you're not strictly controlling each one could I know who is behind it and their general aims.
Elias Shields looks to be their leader.United States of Brainy wrote:Thanks for making the changes, Dentali and thanks for the suggestions, Ormata. Okay, this is how we're going to play it-
Dentali, I'm going to allow first person present tense on a provisional basis since that seems the style you're most comfortable with. If I feel, as a reader, that the style shift is unduly taking me out of the story, you're going to have to switch to third person past, end of discussion. I'm going to be as lenient as I can for right now because I really want to get this story going.
No problem.
by United States of Brainy » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:04 pm
by Yaana Noore » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:04 pm
Ormata wrote:Yaana Noore wrote:Ah, we have the IC now. Cool.
Flutter, of all these factions, who is the leader of the Order of Reapers? If you're not strictly controlling each one could I know who is behind it and their general aims.
Elias Shields looks to be their leader.United States of Brainy wrote:Thanks for making the changes, Dentali and thanks for the suggestions, Ormata. Okay, this is how we're going to play it-
Dentali, I'm going to allow first person present tense on a provisional basis since that seems the style you're most comfortable with. If I feel, as a reader, that the style shift is unduly taking me out of the story, you're going to have to switch to third person past, end of discussion. I'm going to be as lenient as I can for right now because I really want to get this story going.
No problem.
by United States of Brainy » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:17 pm
Yaana Noore wrote:
As said then I want Harley to get involved in a less evil capacity. To the people leading these factions, is it possible for either the Order of Reapers or the Gang of Freaks to try and recruit or kill Harley Quinn? I'd like to get her involved against someone rather than just drifting and have a focus for her killing rather than just general crime.
by Dentali » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:20 pm
United States of Brainy wrote:Yaana Noore wrote:
As said then I want Harley to get involved in a less evil capacity. To the people leading these factions, is it possible for either the Order of Reapers or the Gang of Freaks to try and recruit or kill Harley Quinn? I'd like to get her involved against someone rather than just drifting and have a focus for her killing rather than just general crime.
How would you feel about Scarecrow blackmailing her into committing the chemistry lab break-in for him?
by United States of Brainy » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:23 pm
Dentali wrote:What could she possibly be blackmailed with?
by United States of Brainy » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:41 pm
by Auphelia » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:48 pm
by Dentali » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:51 pm
Auphelia wrote:I might have an App soon.
I have been stalking here for a few days and it has been massively entertaining to watch.
by United States of Brainy » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:55 pm
Auphelia wrote:I might have an App soon.
I have been stalking here for a few days and it has been massively entertaining to watch.
by Auphelia » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:56 pm
United States of Brainy wrote:Our shenanigans amuse you, huh? Just for that, I might have to think up some suitably embarrassing initiation prank to welcome you to the thread. Until then, welcome aboard and looking forward to your app!
by Yaana Noore » Wed Jun 13, 2018 6:58 pm
by Auphelia » Wed Jun 13, 2018 7:13 pm
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