Kollin wrote:Lightning of course, is the most powerful application of her power. Also, i write REALLY long bios im sorry
That is a very well written app... and I am tempted to accept it straight off, though I feel that would be doing a disservice to the people I have been asking to change things.
Currently the character is overpowered. It isn't that any individual part of the powerset is more powerful than anyone else's in the thread. The issue is that there aren't any balancing weaknesses, which there need to be so that they aren't always the most powerful individual in every situation.
What I would recommend is to ditch the bit for Lariah about increased speed, strength, durability, perception. Without those the character becomes something of a 'glass cannon'.
With the Rig I'd suggest ditching either the inceased speed or the heavy armour plating. Personally I'd ditch the heavy armour and say it's comparable to standard body armour - a sniper doesn't need to be armoured like a tank, plus the speed is enough of a defensive measure anyway.
Tamrida wrote:God’s Among Us Application Form
Basics
Name: Albert Davidson
Alias: The Commander
Gender: Male
Age: 57
Nationality: American
Faction: NAMT
Class: Unpowered
Appearance:
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 174lbs
Abilities
Powers: N/A
Limitations: N/A
Skills: Pistol usage, Paperwork filing, Shouting, Getting people to do stuff, Great media personality.
Weaknesses: Overweight, Not well liked, Horrible in combat
Equipment: Suit and Tie, Pistol, Cuban Cigars
Concept: Basically, an office guy who shouts at people to do their job better.
Bios
Personality: Gruff and No-nonsense, Albert Davidson is a tough boss who relies at his powerful air and shouting to get his employees at the NAMT to do their jobs.
Biography: A life long government employee, Albert Davidson is a retired police chief who has a hatred towards meta-humans and comforters them to be a threat to society. When the government started the NAMT, he signed up for a leadership role and was granted leadership of the entire organization
He's accepted... though bear in mind he might be the Big Cheese in NY, but he'll still have Washington breathing down his neck if things go horribly wrong
Volcanu wrote:God’s Among Us Application Form
Basics
Name: John Czain
Alias: The Tanker
Gender: Male
Age: 30
Nationality: American
Faction: NAMT
Class: Rigger
Appearance:
Abilities
Powers: The Rig has a plasma missile launcher (small fireball, throws debris within 2 meters), a flamethrower and a energy cannon. It is also extremely durable.
Limitations: Suit can overheat if he uses it continuously and it is kind of slow
Skills: good at firearms
Weaknesses: not good in hand to hand combat
Equipment: N/A
Concept: Great at heavy combat scenarios, not so good against a little amount of metahuman
Bios
Personality: Kind but really destructive and has a deep hatred of meta-humans, mostly the Vanguard and attacks them on site though sometimes he is ok with good meta humans. He also is rude to meta humans.
Biography: John was born on July 10, 2000 in NYC. After his parents were killed by meta humans he seeked revenge on meta-humans and at age 24, joined the NAMT to get revenge on the meta-humans. At age 29 he got a Rig called the Tanker and is his main strength is firearms after training with the NAMT.
I am going to accept this, also. Also... you won't be wandering around bumping into Vanguard very often. Most of the time you'll be being called into somewhere they are already in the process of trashing...