Talchyon wrote:Saxatoon wrote:And posted! Please give whatever criticism is needed.
No criticism from me. I liked it. Great introduction to Moo man. You fit right in with this group here!
And Zjaum - for a hero that had only one combat ability and never used it, Shauna was definitely vulnerable. But you give her a p.a. system or a megaphone, and boy! She has a way about her.
Literally the first action you did in the RP was cause all my government officials to drop their guns.