Elysian Kentarchy wrote:You know, thinking about it it kinda makes sense that Celio's childhood friend is an arguably psychopathic assassin.
Yeah, it is pretty fitting xD
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by Tracian Empire » Thu Dec 30, 2021 12:49 pm
Elysian Kentarchy wrote:You know, thinking about it it kinda makes sense that Celio's childhood friend is an arguably psychopathic assassin.
by Tracian Empire » Mon Feb 28, 2022 3:41 pm
by Tracian Empire » Wed Jul 06, 2022 2:19 pm
by Remnants of Exilvania » Wed Jul 06, 2022 2:39 pm
by Arengin Union » Tue Jul 19, 2022 2:11 pm
by Tracian Empire » Tue Jul 19, 2022 2:20 pm
Arengin Union wrote:Is this still active?
by Arengin Union » Tue Jul 19, 2022 2:22 pm
by Tracian Empire » Tue Jul 19, 2022 2:25 pm
Arengin Union wrote:Tracian Empire wrote:It's been a little slow in the past few months but it's still active and open, yeah
Good to hear. Still considering apping for a character, lost track of the lore after having to focus on other stuff but I hope to get back on track with it.
May need some help to sort out a few rough edges though
by Arengin Union » Tue Jul 19, 2022 2:33 pm
Tracian Empire wrote:Arengin Union wrote:Good to hear. Still considering apping for a character, lost track of the lore after having to focus on other stuff but I hope to get back on track with it.
May need some help to sort out a few rough edges though
Nice xD
If you'll have any questions or if you'll need any help with the lore or the character do let me know, I can certainly help
by Tracian Empire » Tue Jul 19, 2022 2:58 pm
Arengin Union wrote:Tracian Empire wrote:Nice xD
If you'll have any questions or if you'll need any help with the lore or the character do let me know, I can certainly help
Basically im thinking of doing a Rider of the Yazgiria who has turned his back on the tribal ways due to losing so many friends in the wars against the Karaki and now works as a Mercenary/Bounty Hunter. But I want to make his story turn from being a disheartened warrior to eventually return home and unite the Yazgirians if that could ever work.
by Arengin Union » Tue Jul 19, 2022 3:10 pm
Tracian Empire wrote:Arengin Union wrote:Basically im thinking of doing a Rider of the Yazgiria who has turned his back on the tribal ways due to losing so many friends in the wars against the Karaki and now works as a Mercenary/Bounty Hunter. But I want to make his story turn from being a disheartened warrior to eventually return home and unite the Yazgirians if that could ever work.
It would work, yeah, now that you mention it I do remember back when you first considered this character concept.
Yazgiria is essentially a matriarchy but men are not forbidden from being warriors, so it would certainly work, and there are many things within the Yazgirian culture that could help him turn against it, alongside the loss of his friends in the wars against the Karaki.
His skills as a rider and a warrior would certainly be valued and he could work as a mercenary or as a bounty hunter anywhere within the Silver Realms.
And it would be difficult for him to come back and to reunite the tribes, even more so since he would be male - but it is something that he could achieve. There are several things that could help him achieve something like that besides from growing his own reputation as a warrior and as a leader - including using the religion of the Yazgirians, the Faith of the Two Mothers, to his advantage, and earning the support of the Yazgirian shamans and elders.
by Arengin Union » Tue Jul 19, 2022 3:11 pm
by Tracian Empire » Wed Jul 20, 2022 8:09 am
Arengin Union wrote:Tracian Empire wrote:It would work, yeah, now that you mention it I do remember back when you first considered this character concept.
Yazgiria is essentially a matriarchy but men are not forbidden from being warriors, so it would certainly work, and there are many things within the Yazgirian culture that could help him turn against it, alongside the loss of his friends in the wars against the Karaki.
His skills as a rider and a warrior would certainly be valued and he could work as a mercenary or as a bounty hunter anywhere within the Silver Realms.
And it would be difficult for him to come back and to reunite the tribes, even more so since he would be male - but it is something that he could achieve. There are several things that could help him achieve something like that besides from growing his own reputation as a warrior and as a leader - including using the religion of the Yazgirians, the Faith of the Two Mothers, to his advantage, and earning the support of the Yazgirian shamans and elders.
Yes I do remember the matriarchy element and I kind of want to do a sort of twist on what some would call a feminist narrative where in this case instead of a patriarchy there's a matriarchy and such.
I do expect that reuniting the tribes and becoming a leader would be very difficult (no good story is ever without a good struggle) so my plan is for him to kind of band all other outcasts together and bring upon a new Tribe which helps to turn the tide of the war and this would also cause his followers to spread a new interpretation of the religion and even claim that the character is a sign of a new Era for the Faith if that works. I have the idea of three main arcs, the first where the character (his name will be Jair) lives out his typical lone adventurer days until he comes across a job which reunites him with a member of his people who reconnects him with his heritage and then comes an incentive for him to return home when he hears that the last remains of his lineage have been extinguished (his clan was more egalitarian than others and as such were kind of disliked and purposely led to their doom) and when he hears that the war is going terribly for his people he is incentivized to go back to lead the outcasts, second arc is him rising to leadership and a quasi-mythic status while ecountering resistance from his own people eventually this leads into the final arc where it leads into turning the tide of the war and him rising to a unifying leader status.
by Arengin Union » Wed Jul 20, 2022 8:42 am
Tracian Empire wrote:Arengin Union wrote:Yes I do remember the matriarchy element and I kind of want to do a sort of twist on what some would call a feminist narrative where in this case instead of a patriarchy there's a matriarchy and such.
I do expect that reuniting the tribes and becoming a leader would be very difficult (no good story is ever without a good struggle) so my plan is for him to kind of band all other outcasts together and bring upon a new Tribe which helps to turn the tide of the war and this would also cause his followers to spread a new interpretation of the religion and even claim that the character is a sign of a new Era for the Faith if that works. I have the idea of three main arcs, the first where the character (his name will be Jair) lives out his typical lone adventurer days until he comes across a job which reunites him with a member of his people who reconnects him with his heritage and then comes an incentive for him to return home when he hears that the last remains of his lineage have been extinguished (his clan was more egalitarian than others and as such were kind of disliked and purposely led to their doom) and when he hears that the war is going terribly for his people he is incentivized to go back to lead the outcasts, second arc is him rising to leadership and a quasi-mythic status while ecountering resistance from his own people eventually this leads into the final arc where it leads into turning the tide of the war and him rising to a unifying leader status.
That could work, yeah! Tribes, or Arrows as they are also known, have been created and lost in the past too, so it's feasible, even more so if he were to find one of the arrows as in shamanic artifacts which the Yazgirians are connected to their ancestors. And the Yazgirian Faith is generally focused a lot on shamanism and animism, so it's somewhat disorganized and most of its traditions are oral, which means that it can be interpreted and reinterpreted a lot easier than a fully organized faith would be.
And the plan for your character in its arcs overall looks pretty good. There hasn't been much done with Yazgirian, I don't think that we ever had a Yazgirian character to begin with, and the core elements of your plan are all true - the war has been going badly for the Yazgirians. The Karaki have been more aggressive. Velikiya's situation isn't fully stable, but its margraves have been better at organizing themselves and the last few Yazgirian raids into it have all failed.
by Tracian Empire » Wed Jul 20, 2022 9:26 am
Arengin Union wrote:Tracian Empire wrote:
That could work, yeah! Tribes, or Arrows as they are also known, have been created and lost in the past too, so it's feasible, even more so if he were to find one of the arrows as in shamanic artifacts which the Yazgirians are connected to their ancestors. And the Yazgirian Faith is generally focused a lot on shamanism and animism, so it's somewhat disorganized and most of its traditions are oral, which means that it can be interpreted and reinterpreted a lot easier than a fully organized faith would be.
And the plan for your character in its arcs overall looks pretty good. There hasn't been much done with Yazgirian, I don't think that we ever had a Yazgirian character to begin with, and the core elements of your plan are all true - the war has been going badly for the Yazgirians. The Karaki have been more aggressive. Velikiya's situation isn't fully stable, but its margraves have been better at organizing themselves and the last few Yazgirian raids into it have all failed.
I can definetly work with all that. I just need sort of a crash course on further Yazgirian Faith and how their society overall works just to get a better idea of how it all functions and work with that since the Lore page is kind of light on Yazgiria tbh. But knowing the faith is based on Shamanism and animism is very useful.
Well im glad all that can work with the overall world and im not intruding on anything. I'll get to re-working on my app asap.
by Tracian Empire » Wed Jul 20, 2022 9:27 am
by Arengin Union » Thu Jul 21, 2022 12:51 pm
Tracian Empire wrote:And like I said I've always imagined there being some or a lot of variation between the individual tribes and their customs, so you do get quite a bit of leeway in regards to describing the tribe your character would come from or would create later on.
by Tracian Empire » Fri Oct 14, 2022 2:03 pm
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Lunatic Goofballs wrote:I'm a third party voter. Trust me when I say this: Not even a lifetime supply of tacos could convince me to vote for either Hillary or Trump. I suspect I'm not the only third party voter who feels that way. I cost Hillary nothing. I cost Trump nothing. If I didn't vote for third party, I would have written in 'Batman'.
If you try to blame me, I will laugh in your face. I'm glad she lost. I got half my wish. :)
by Remnants of Exilvania » Sat Oct 15, 2022 3:21 am
by Arengin Union » Fri Oct 21, 2022 9:01 am
by Intermountain States » Wed Apr 12, 2023 8:07 pm
Lunatic Goofballs wrote:I'm a third party voter. Trust me when I say this: Not even a lifetime supply of tacos could convince me to vote for either Hillary or Trump. I suspect I'm not the only third party voter who feels that way. I cost Hillary nothing. I cost Trump nothing. If I didn't vote for third party, I would have written in 'Batman'.
If you try to blame me, I will laugh in your face. I'm glad she lost. I got half my wish. :)
by Arengin Union » Mon Apr 17, 2023 9:38 pm
by Remnants of Exilvania » Mon Apr 17, 2023 11:15 pm
Arengin Union wrote:This still alive!???
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