Elysian Kentarchy wrote:Remnants of Exilvania wrote:Totally forgot that she existed cuz you keep not using her.
Now checked her app again, still couldn't remember her.
I did find something else though.
You might want to correct a few of the ages.
Last time I checked, the Great War broke out 22 years ago and lasted for 20 years. Aka Augustine wouldn't have been 73 by the time it broke out but rather 61. He also couldn't have adopted Silvia years before the war since she would've been born 4 years into the war. Solomon would've been around 20 years old when the war ended. His sister about 23 years. Very young but in these kinds of RPs that's negligible.
Also, I noticed you never mention Solomon's and Velira's parents apart from perhaps half a sentence in Augustine's app stating that some of his children died. I believe the death of their parents should be a relatively major event that should need some addressing in the apps of Velira and Solomon.
That's all from me for now.
PS: Could it be that you don't check TGs anymore?
Back when I wrote that the war was 7 years long and it was 5 years since. Then it was changed to 3 years since.
Also for Silvia what she is doing is a surprise that I am working on as quickly as can be done between me and Trace. She is on a secret mission after all (supposed to have a bigger role in things but I went dark so ah well, recovering what I can ).
Never heard of 7 years.
Thrac just came around and whacked me with 10 years + prior conflicts as the new meta but 7 years is definitely something I never heard of.
Pretty sure we both worked on our apps at the same time in the previous OOC and back then I accounted for 20 years + 2 years inbetween.