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PostPosted: Mon Apr 23, 2018 11:43 pm
by Relikai
Northern Poland wrote:
Northern Poland wrote:Name: Randolph Thompson


There’s still issues regarding the basic background.

A six-year old won’t be able to carry 2 days worth of prepared food and water let alone ten, with enough nutrition to last a journey across the desert where one would be easily spotted/killed by the slavers or many other perils.

Also at 6 years old, there is not enough mature mentality to formulate an escape, less an off world escape, without connections, by simply showing away everywhere while not being caught/exploited/kidnapped by... the Gangs? The Remnant?

Maybe a teenager could do the latter part, but no one could move in the desert with 10days worth burdening then down, on foot.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 11:34 am
by Northern Poland
Name: Randolph Thompson
Age: 19
Gender:Male
Species:Human

Appearance: Blue eyes, , 5'7, 165 Pounds, Light White Skin, Freckles covering his face, no facial hair, a slight scar next to his left eye,and brown hair.

Rank: Apprentice

Lightsaber: Standard, Blue
Ship: Doesn't have one, though he hitches rides from other people.
Equipment: holopad, 1 TX-23 Fireworm Heavy Blaster Pistol.

Likes: Bread,riding speeder bikes, exploring, fixing and building things.
Goals: Traveling the Galaxy

Background: He was born on the desert planet of ambria, at 4 BBY. His father ran with a gang on the desert planet, and his mom was killed shortly after his birth. From a young age, he knew he had to get off the planet. The Planet had slarge Dark side presence, and he didn't know it. he had his first accidental run in with the force when he was 6. He moved a rock without touching it, and he was scared of what he could do. His father found out 2 years later, and tried to sell him off to the highest bidder, which would have probably sold him to the remnants. He stole his dad's speeder bike, and rode off into the desert.He drove for 4 Days to find a space port, and he had to stay away from anyone he saw outside of the port. He knew his father was looking for him, so he had to hide along the way, but he stopped at trading posts to buy stuff. He then found a space port that carried a few large cargo ships, and a bunch of smaller ones. He ditched the speeder bike in the sand, never to be seen again. He managed to hide on a cargo ship heading for Naboo.


He managed to get off the ship without getting caught, and he mostly scavenged for food. He managed to get some joyrides on speeders, and enjoys it alot. He used to repair some speeders for money, but he didn't get paid well. He built his own little robot, then sold it to buy a holopad. When he was 17 a jedi Knight found him while he was trying to move something without touching it. The Jedi Knight took him to the new Jedi order, and they accepted him. he was made a kind of Limbo apprentice, since there haven't been any trails.* He is currently looking for new parts to build another one, maybe something like a Pit droid.

Skills: hand to Hand, Using Speeder Bikes, and Good at fixing things
Weaknesses:
1. He is suspicious of people, not working very well with others.
2. He does try to jump into some situations, even though most of them don't really concern him.
3. He is arrogant, believing that he is stronger than he actually is.
RP Example:



DO NOT REMOVE: HK-47
Since there hasn't been trails, and because luke didn't start the youngling academy until 22 ABY, would he automatically made a apprentice, or would he be waiting for trails?
I'm a mostly BBY person, mainly Galactic civil war, And trying to start with the Old Republic era

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 3:34 pm
by Tayner
So, are we using the same layout as last time, for the academy?

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 4:22 pm
by Beiarusia
Tayner wrote:So, are we using the same layout as last time, for the academy?

More-or-less for the time being.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 4:38 pm
by Tayner
Beiarusia wrote:
Tayner wrote:So, are we using the same layout as last time, for the academy?

More-or-less for the time being.

Cool.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 5:13 pm
by Cainesland
I might change my character to be a gen’dai instead.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 5:25 pm
by Beiarusia
Cainesland wrote:I might change my character to be a gen’dai instead.

I'm just gonna step in and say no to a Gen'Dai on the grounds that they are too powerful.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 5:36 pm
by Cainesland
Beiarusia wrote:
Cainesland wrote:I might change my character to be a gen’dai instead.

I'm just gonna step in and say no to a Gen'Dai on the grounds that they are too powerful.


Ok. Fair enough. I thought it would be cool to make an old historian as they are long lived and peaceful. I can avoid using one though.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 5:44 pm
by Beiarusia
Cainesland wrote:Ok. Fair enough. I thought it would be cool to make an old historian as they are long lived and peaceful. I can avoid using one though.

They typically succumb to mental issues as their brains deteriorate with age. That, and they're impossible to kill without being completely vaporized in a sun. Would be too much of an unfair advantage.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 5:49 pm
by Cainesland
Beiarusia wrote:
Cainesland wrote:Ok. Fair enough. I thought it would be cool to make an old historian as they are long lived and peaceful. I can avoid using one though.

They typically succumb to mental issues as their brains deteriorate with age. That, and they're impossible to kill without being completely vaporized in a sun. Would be too much of an unfair advantage.


Fair enough. Would a Neti be ok?

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 5:59 pm
by Beiarusia
Cainesland wrote:Fair enough. Would a Neti be ok?

What were you planning? And what about your other app? Ignus?

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 6:06 pm
by Danceria
What's the Imperial Remnant view on Jedi?

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 6:13 pm
by Cainesland
Beiarusia wrote:
Cainesland wrote:Fair enough. Would a Neti be ok?

What were you planning? And what about your other app? Ignus?


An old historian. Someone who was around 1000 years old, and was around when the Yavin Code was signed and the republic started forming again. Someone who studied the history of civilizations and the biology of some of the galaxies flora and fauna, and wrote some books on it. And someone who served as an advisor in the court of Serenno and Papa the Hutt.

I can continue with the application for Ignus however.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 6:17 pm
by Danceria
Cainesland wrote:
Beiarusia wrote:What were you planning? And what about your other app? Ignus?


An old historian. Someone who was around 1000 years old, and was around when the Yavin Code was signed and the republic started forming again. Someone who studied the history of civilizations and the biology of some of the galaxies flora and fauna, and wrote some books on it. And someone who served as an advisor in the court of Serenno and Papa the Hutt.

I can continue with the application for Ignus however.

So basically that one old alien bartender lady from The Force Awakens, except useful and not a background char.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:06 pm
by Beiarusia
Cainesland wrote:An old historian. Someone who was around 1000 years old, and was around when the Yavin Code was signed and the republic started forming again. Someone who studied the history of civilizations and the biology of some of the galaxies flora and fauna, and wrote some books on it. And someone who served as an advisor in the court of Serenno and Papa the Hutt.

I can continue with the application for Ignus however.

While interesting, they would no doubt be a Jedi Knight I'd assume, given their age and latent connection to the Force. I'd have to think as Knight positions are more demanding than Apprentices.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:08 pm
by The Knockout Gun Gals
Name: J'Dar Kalla
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Species: Human

Appearance:
Image


Rank: Apprentice.

Lightsaber: Paired lightsabers, Green-colored.
Ship: N/A
Equipment: N/A

Personality: He has a compassionate side, but considering that he lives alone in Jakku and Jakku is a harsh world, safe to say it is deep down beneath the cover as an arrogant, tough, and looking-for-himself personality type. Safe to say, he is not the friendliest person you'll ever want to be friend, but he can be your friend if you know him long enough.
Likes: Scavenging, selling good stuffs, sleeping, fighting.
Dislikes: Destruction of the Galactic Empire, non-Imperial citizens.
Goals: Finding a new purpose of life.
Fears: Failing to find a new purpose of life and be drowned in his frustration of without purpose of life.

Background:

Born in Naboo on 13 BBY, J'Dar's family was more or less part of the Naboo's Galactic Empire garrison, as J'Dar's father was one of the commanders placed in Naboo. His father was a Galactic loyalist and assisted in the efforts of Galactic Empire to pacified the unruly elements in Naboo. Because of the healthier economy prospects, J'Dar was able to gained necessary knowledge in early years of his childhood. As soon as he was of 13 at 0 BBY he was sent to the Imperial Academy as an Imperial Cadet. With a bright future ahead, he could become one of the Imperial's finest officers. But he was only into 3 years when Battle of Endor happened, with the destructions of Death Star II and Executor. Even Emperor Palpatine himself was killed, as news went by. A year later, and with Jakku happened, the entire Imperial Military went into shatter and destruction. J'Dar was soon stranded in Jakku, though he removed all of his Imperial clothes and put on the clothes as a rather normal inhabitant, putting his back to work for a living while trying to find a way to return to Naboo.

From 6 BBY to 14 BBY, he would spend the next 8 years in Jakku, building up reputation as a skilled black market raider who raids abandoned ships and places for things to be sold upon. Despite that, it seemed from early age he developed Force-sensitive, and though it was overlooked during his time in Imperial Academy, his Force attracted the attention of a Jedi Knight in Jakku. After a period which also involves a very basic introduction to his soon-to-be standard style, a paired lightsabers, J'Dar was sent to the new Academy to turn for a new leaf.

Skills:
- Skilled scavenger. Very perceptive on what is to look for, thus giving him an advantage whenever he is looking for things.
- He still remembers the basic training of an Imperial Cadet, and thus know how to handle firearms and close combat training. Still, he is not an entirely experienced field soldier.
- Fluent in Teedospeak and Uthuthma.
Weaknesses:
- Looking out for himself. Definitely not a team player, experienced it during the early years in Jakku.
- Arrogant, remains of his past as an Imperial cadet and superiority view over the non-Imperial.
RP Example: Hi.

DO NOT REMOVE: HK-47

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:15 pm
by Danceria
Huh. Looks like our characters might get along, @Knockout Gun Gals.
He's an imperial cadet, I'm hailing from a line of Zygerrian slavers, who may nor may not have aided the Inquisitors in finding force sensitive younglings, or meat shields.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:17 pm
by The Knockout Gun Gals
Danceria wrote:Huh. Looks like our characters might get along, @Knockout Gun Gals.
He's an imperial cadet, I'm hailing from a line of Zygerrian slavers, who may nor may not have aided the Inquisitors in finding force sensitive younglings, or meat shields.


Yes, hope so. Is the bio fine enough? I'm not entirely sure.

Also I need to look for a good appearance. Anyone have ideas?

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:18 pm
by Beiarusia
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:Name: J'Dar Kalla

Just so you know, Endor was 3 ABY and the Battle of Naboo in 4 ABY, sometime before the Battle of Jakku. So Naboo would have been liberated by the New Republic before the end of the war. Otherwise it's fine.

On an unrelated note, I like how the Empire is the favorite by a wide margin.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:23 pm
by The Knockout Gun Gals
Beiarusia wrote:
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:Name: J'Dar Kalla

Just so you know, Endor was 3 ABY and the Battle of Naboo in 4 ABY, sometime before the Battle of Jakku. So Naboo would have been liberated by the New Republic before the end of the war. Otherwise it's fine.

On an unrelated note, I like how the Empire is the favorite by a wide margin.


I hardly favor the Empire or the Republic. I just find being trained by the Empire is the easiest factor to make this bio. Making him a republic would be well...a bit hard to find things.

Also, I'm pretty sure that even if Naboo has been liberated, J'Dar and his family is an Empire loyalists. It would be nasty if he returned to Naboo quickly, so I just left him stranded in Jakku.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:23 pm
by Danceria
Beiarusia wrote:
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:Name: J'Dar Kalla

Just so you know, Endor was 3 ABY and the Battle of Naboo in 4 ABY, sometime before the Battle of Jakku. So Naboo would have been liberated by the New Republic before the end of the war. Otherwise it's fine.

On an unrelated note, I like how the Empire is the favorite by a wide margin.

#TarkinDidNothingWrong #DeathStarWasAnInsideJob
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:
Danceria wrote:Huh. Looks like our characters might get along, @Knockout Gun Gals.
He's an imperial cadet, I'm hailing from a line of Zygerrian slavers, who may nor may not have aided the Inquisitors in finding force sensitive younglings, or meat shields.


Yes, hope so. Is the bio fine enough? I'm not entirely sure.

Also I need to look for a good appearance. Anyone have ideas?

Google "Imperial Agents" or Emperor's Hand OC Star Wars if you're going for a refined imperial look. Or just a scavenger.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:24 pm
by Beiarusia
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:I hardly favor the Empire or the Republic. I just find being trained by the Empire is the easiest factor to make this bio. Making him a republic would be well...a bit hard to find things.

Also, I'm pretty sure that even if Naboo has been liberated, J'Dar and his family is an Empire loyalists. It would be nasty if he returned to Naboo quickly, so I just left him stranded in Jakku.

Was referring to the poll. As for the bio, was he on-world or off-world by that time? Wasn't sure. Just said he was at Jakku, so he'd be 18 at the battle, so probably evacuated Naboo during the fighting or sometime before?

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:28 pm
by The Knockout Gun Gals
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:Name: J'Dar Kalla
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Species: Human

Appearance: (Image)

Rank: Apprentice.

Lightsaber: Paired lightsabers, Green-colored.
Ship: N/A
Equipment: N/A

Personality: He has a compassionate side, but considering that he lives alone in Jakku and Jakku is a harsh world, safe to say it is deep down beneath the cover as an arrogant, tough, and looking-for-himself personality type. Safe to say, he is not the friendliest person you'll ever want to be friend, but he can be your friend if you know him long enough.
Likes: Scavenging, selling good stuffs, sleeping, fighting.
Dislikes: Destruction of the Galactic Empire, non-Imperial citizens.
Goals: Finding a new purpose of life.
Fears: Failing to find a new purpose of life and be drowned in his frustration of without purpose of life.

Background:

Born in Naboo on 13 BBY, J'Dar's family was more or less part of the Naboo's Galactic Empire garrison, as J'Dar's father was one of the commanders placed in Naboo. His father was a Galactic loyalist and assisted in the efforts of Galactic Empire to pacified the unruly elements in Naboo. Because of the healthier economy prospects, J'Dar was able to gained necessary knowledge in early years of his childhood. As soon as he was of 13 at 0 BBY he was sent to the Imperial Academy as an Imperial Cadet. With a bright future ahead, he could become one of the Imperial's finest officers. But he was only into 3 years when Battle of Endor happened, with the destructions of Death Star II and Executor. Even Emperor Palpatine himself was killed, as news went by. A year later, and with Jakku happened, the entire Imperial Military went into shatter and destruction. J'Dar was soon stranded in Jakku, though he removed all of his Imperial clothes and put on the clothes as a rather normal inhabitant, putting his back to work for a living while trying to find a way to return to Naboo.

From 6 BBY to 14 BBY, he would spend the next 8 years in Jakku, building up reputation as a skilled black market raider who raids abandoned ships and places for things to be sold upon. Despite that, it seemed from early age he developed Force-sensitive, and though it was overlooked during his time in Imperial Academy, his Force attracted the attention of a Jedi Knight in Jakku. After a period which also involves a very basic introduction to his soon-to-be standard style, a paired lightsabers, J'Dar was sent to the new Academy to turn for a new leaf.

Skills:
- Skilled scavenger. Very perceptive on what is to look for, thus giving him an advantage whenever he is looking for things.
- He still remembers the basic training of an Imperial Cadet, and thus know how to handle firearms and close combat training. Still, he is not an entirely experienced field soldier.
- Fluent in Teedospeak and Uthuthma.
Weaknesses:
- Looking out for himself. Definitely not a team player, experienced it during the early years in Jakku.
- Arrogant, remains of his past as an Imperial cadet and superiority view over the non-Imperial.
RP Example: Hi.

DO NOT REMOVE: HK-47


Finished, pending review.

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:30 pm
by The Imperial Warglorian Empire
Could I ask of what age at latest are you allowed to join the New Jedi Order?

PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2018 7:30 pm
by The Knockout Gun Gals
Beiarusia wrote:
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:I hardly favor the Empire or the Republic. I just find being trained by the Empire is the easiest factor to make this bio. Making him a republic would be well...a bit hard to find things.

Also, I'm pretty sure that even if Naboo has been liberated, J'Dar and his family is an Empire loyalists. It would be nasty if he returned to Naboo quickly, so I just left him stranded in Jakku.

Was referring to the poll. As for the bio, was he on-world or off-world by that time? Wasn't sure. Just said he was at Jakku, so he'd be 18 at the battle, so probably evacuated Naboo during the fighting or sometime before?


A year after Endor happened, he and other Imperial Cadets were send to Jakku to reinforced the Imperial forces in Jakku. When the battle ended, he was left stranded on Jakku, so he never visited Naboo.

He left Naboo when he was 13 and hasn't got the time to return to Naboo.