Star Wars: Jedi Academy [A Pub RP] (OOC-DEAD)

[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

Some improvement, like easier to relate with an apprentice and the RP's theme. Age might be a factor, leaving that for others to look at.

Even as an apprentice, choose a saber type, one of the three basic ones (Single, Staff, Dual Wield) at least.

If you're saying that my guy should be younger, I mean, we have 48-year-old apprentices here

[Anowa]

Some improvement, like easier to relate with an apprentice and the RP's theme. Age might be a factor, leaving that for others to look at.

Even as an apprentice, choose a saber type, one of the three basic ones (Single, Staff, Dual Wield) at least.

If you're saying that my guy should be younger, I mean, we have 48-year-old apprentices here

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[Relikai]

Some improvement, like easier to relate with an apprentice and the RP's theme. Age might be a factor, leaving that for others to look at.

Even as an apprentice, choose a saber type, one of the three basic ones (Single, Staff, Dual Wield) at least.

If you're saying that my guy should be younger, I mean, we have 48-year-old apprentices here

Kindly, it would be wise of you not to assume so quickly.

Anyway upon further research there’s no cause for age to be a factor given the bio.

[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

If you're saying that my guy should be younger, I mean, we have 48-year-old apprentices here

Kindly, it would be wise of you not to assume so quickly.

Anyway upon further research there’s no cause for age to be a factor given the bio.

I wasn't accusing at all, I was just suggesting one of the many might have been meanings of what you said and pointing out why it was not the case

Also, imagine me saying it in a more of "well, but we have this" voice instead of a "ur wrong! I hate ur all, hurgh a durk" voice

[Relikai]

Kindly, it would be wise of you not to assume so quickly.

Anyway upon further research there’s no cause for age to be a factor given the bio.

I wasn't accusing at all, I was just suggesting one of the many might have been meanings of what you said and pointing out why it was not the case

Also, imagine me saying it in a more of "well, but we have this" voice instead of a "ur wrong! I hate ur all, hurgh a durk" voice

I understand, just saying that it’s unwise lest it allows assumptions and cause others to jump on the bandwagon on a misunderstanding.

[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

I wasn't accusing at all, I was just suggesting one of the many might have been meanings of what you said and pointing out why it was not the case

Also, imagine me saying it in a more of "well, but we have this" voice instead of a "ur wrong! I hate ur all, hurgh a durk" voice

I understand, just saying that it’s unwise lest it allows assumptions and cause others to jump on the bandwagon on a misunderstanding.

That's why I added the "I mean" to my sentence in comas, that usually signifies that the person in question is not exactly being very firm and being a lot loose when saying the question, compared to removing the "I mean" in which it'd be more attributed to a blunt statement

Well, that's how I decrypt things like that anyway

[Relikai]

I understand, just saying that it’s unwise lest it allows assumptions and cause others to jump on the bandwagon on a misunderstanding.

That's why I added the "I mean" to my sentence in comas, that usually signifies that the person in question is not exactly being very firm and being a lot loose when saying the question, compared to removing the "I mean" in which it'd be more attributed to a blunt statement

Well, that's how I decrypt things like that anyway

No worries is k.

[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

That's why I added the "I mean" to my sentence in comas, that usually signifies that the person in question is not exactly being very firm and being a lot loose when saying the question, compared to removing the "I mean" in which it'd be more attributed to a blunt statement

Well, that's how I decrypt things like that anyway

No worries is k.

Yeah, sorry about that, just thought that I had to clarify myself

Since whenever I see the words "I mean" I usually imagine the person going like this

[Anowa]

No worries is k.

Yeah, sorry about that, just thought that I had to clarify myself

Since whenever I see the words "I mean" I usually imagine the person going like this

I mean, you aren't wrong.

[Stristia]

May the 4th be with you, always!

[The Olog-Hai]

Name: Kaidin Thelcar
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Species: Echani

Appearance: White-silver skinned, silver eyed, and white hair. Stand with good form at 6', weighing around 165. Well toned and muscular. Moves with a fluid grace, always somewhat tense and ready for combat.

Rank: Apprentice

Lightsaber: Blue training saber, single blade.
Ship: None
Equipment: Echani Vibrosword, clothing (obviously).

Personality: Soldier-y, responds aggressive when confronted aggressively, doesn't automatically default to diplomacy when in a hostile situation. Tends to try to circumvent problems when he can, typically by physically moving around the problem when necessary. Tends toward honor, however.
Likes: Honorable people; fights, fair or not, but the fairer the better;
Dislikes: Carrying overly heavy things, losing, lack of honor.
Goals: To better himself, both as a person and in combat techniques, and to better his people.
Fears: A degree of claustrophobia, any environment which restricts his movements in general. Spacesuits, for similar reasons.

Background: The Echani were one of the least affected technically non-Humans by the rise of the Empire, as they were both close enough to Humans and extremely useful to the Empire, teaching them important techniques, especially for the Imperial Guard. As such, although the Echani were forced to dissolve their official military, they were allowed to retain a militia, and some of the higher ranking officers were still commissioned. Kaidin was born into this life, on the Echani homeworld of Eshan, to a family of the warrior caste. Although the Echani have a matriarchical society, dominated almost entirely by females, there was always some degree of advancement possible in the non-political sections of society, even though the top ranks had very few, if any men, Kaidin's family pushed him from a young age, training him to join the Echani militia, a very honorable goal in their society, as combat was crucial to them. Kaidin wasn't the best, but he was far from the worst, and pursued a commission in the militia, working other times as craftsman, creating works of art, made from metal and other tough substances.

Kaidin continued to keep in shape, staying in the militia through his adult life, and when the Empire fell, joined the military, as he had been waiting his whole life for this moment. He excelled, being a dutiful soldier, adept at following orders and having a good sense of honor, and eventually was promoted to an officer, although he did not remain there long. Soon after he achieved his dreams, and joined the military, as his family had done before him, the Jedi came knocking. Hunting for Force Sensitives, to join their new Academy, they found Kaidin in the military, and although he did not wish to leave, he realized it was for his best, and for the betterment of his people, as who knows who could follow in his footsteps as he opened doors for them?

Skills: Melee combat, both hand to hand and with weapons such as vibroblades, in the Echani traditional combat style, and therefore inclined towards Form II. Parkour. Good all around at most things physical.
Weaknesses: Has difficulty paying attention, mental challenges and tests tend to not be good for him for these reasons,

RP Example: Does the last rendition do?

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[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

I'd like to just ask, should we add miscellaneous items in the equipment section? Because I want to give Drasten cigarras and what's basically a walkman, and I don't want to get in trouble because I didn't mention them in the app

[Beiarusia]

Name: Drasten Kellic
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I can deal with it. Two things: 1) I expect you to get mistaken for an Echani a lot and 2) the training lightsabers would be standard designs, so no curved hilts until you make your own, so change that. Otherwise, ACCEPTED. upon making that change. And your equipment is mostly what you'd take with you on a mission, so could be anything so long as it makes sense and isn't something obvious that everyone would have anyway.

Name: Kaidin Thelcar
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Short and sweet. ACCEPTED.

[Relikai]

Many celebrations for a healthy roster

[Beiarusia]

I'll post soon and get us moving onto the trial. Unfortunately, I have to work tonight, so aiming for tomorrow or Sunday evening.

[The Olog-Hai]

Name: Drasten Kellic
DO NOT REMOVE: HK-47

I can deal with it. Two things: 1) I expect you to get mistaken for an Echani a lot and 2) the training lightsabers would be standard designs, so no curved hilts until you make your own, so change that. Otherwise, ACCEPTED. upon making that change. And your equipment is mostly what you'd take with you on a mission, so could be anything so long as it makes sense and isn't something obvious that everyone would have anyway.

Name: Kaidin Thelcar
DO NOT REMOVE: HK-47

Short and sweet. ACCEPTED.

I know it's a bit short, and I apologize, but there's not too much info on Echani, so that was some degree of a roadblock.

[Yvren]

I can deal with it. Two things: 1) I expect you to get mistaken for an Echani a lot and 2) the training lightsabers would be standard designs, so no curved hilts until you make your own, so change that. Otherwise, ACCEPTED. upon making that change. And your equipment is mostly what you'd take with you on a mission, so could be anything so long as it makes sense and isn't something obvious that everyone would have anyway.



Short and sweet. ACCEPTED.

I know it's a bit short, and I apologize, but there's not too much info on Echani, so that was some degree of a roadblock.

Something to look at, and I might be completely off on this, but I seem to remember all of the Imperial Guards were Echani or at least used Echani training methods.

[Beiarusia]

Something to look at, and I might be completely off on this, but I seem to remember all of the Imperial Guards were Echani or at least used Echani training methods.

I believe the latter is correct, and some probably were Echani.

[Arengin Union]

Well I got to apprentices now. Hey Olog and Stristia we should discuss what kind of master/padawan relations we'll have.

[The Olog-Hai]

I know it's a bit short, and I apologize, but there's not too much info on Echani, so that was some degree of a roadblock.

Something to look at, and I might be completely off on this, but I seem to remember all of the Imperial Guards were Echani or at least used Echani training methods.

Yes, Echani techniques. Also was an all-female (IIRC) group who worked for the Empire who were Echani. That's why I mentioned the Echani being well treated by the Empire.

[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

Name: Drasten Kellic
DO NOT REMOVE: HK-47

I can deal with it. Two things: 1) I expect you to get mistaken for an Echani a lot and 2) the training lightsabers would be standard designs, so no curved hilts until you make your own, so change that. Otherwise, ACCEPTED. upon making that change. And your equipment is mostly what you'd take with you on a mission, so could be anything so long as it makes sense and isn't something obvious that everyone would have anyway.

Name: Kaidin Thelcar
DO NOT REMOVE: HK-47

Short and sweet. ACCEPTED.

Thanks, can I add the cigarras and walkman then?

Also, why would I be mistaken for an Echani exactly? Is it because of the white hair?

[Beiarusia]

Thanks, can I add the cigarras and walkman then?

Also, why would I be mistaken for an Echani exactly? Is it because of the white hair?

As long as it's not an actual Walkman. And yeah, white-haired human would probably be mistaken for Echani.

[Arengin Union]

gotta teach my apprentices the art of not mastering a single fighting for... but all of them, but not really mastering but knowing them just enough to use them... also FORCE PUSH!

[Anowa]

gotta teach my apprentices the art of not mastering a single fighting for... but all of them, but not really mastering but knowing them just enough to use them... also FORCE PUSH!

Gonna teach my apprentices the art of pain.

Mainly by having them go 2v1 against someone 3 years ahead of them and nearly a foot and a half taller.

[Arengin Union]

gotta teach my apprentices the art of not mastering a single fighting for... but all of them, but not really mastering but knowing them just enough to use them... also FORCE PUSH!

Gonna teach my apprentices the art of pain.

Mainly by having them go 2v1 against someone 3 years ahead of them and nearly a foot and a half taller.

Not very honorable. But I'll make sure Alon points that out to his apprentices.