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PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 7:58 am
by Asturial
Atreidya wrote:
Strala wrote:Who is going to train him


should we just make a new team and have Asturial be an actual sensei for three?


I can work with that if its how we want to go. As long as its okay with forest and the OP. Also probably either have to rewrite some stuff or gloss over it.

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 7:59 am
by Atreidya
Asturial wrote:
Atreidya wrote:
should we just make a new team and have Asturial be an actual sensei for three?


I can work with that if its how we want to go. As long as its okay with forest and the OP. Also probably either have to rewrite some stuff or gloss over it.


good point

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 9:59 am
by The Templar High Council
Atreidya wrote:Name: Shikaiko Nara

[...]

Jinchuriki: Yes

Sorry to be a bother, but if you got this character accepted as a jinchuriki and don't know which tailed beast it is (or note anything about it in the bio), there might be a bit of confusion later.

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 10:12 am
by Atreidya
The Templar High Council wrote:
Atreidya wrote:Name: Shikaiko Nara

[...]

Jinchuriki: Yes

Sorry to be a bother, but if you got this character accepted as a jinchuriki and don't know which tailed beast it is (or note anything about it in the bio), there might be a bit of confusion later.


That was a misstype I had intended on making her a Jinchuriki but decided against it, because I don't want her to be really that powerful.

Edit: Fixed that thanks for the heads up on that!

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 10:37 am
by The Rebel Alliances
OK, I think that I have gotten all of the additions made to the roster.

If I have missed anyone, let me know.

I need to go pick up my pay check at work and visit the hospital. But a post will be coming today, hopefully everyone on Team 9 will have responded to my last post by then.

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 11:05 am
by Asturial
The Rebel Alliances wrote:OK, I think that I have gotten all of the additions made to the roster.

If I have missed anyone, let me know.

I need to go pick up my pay check at work and visit the hospital. But a post will be coming today, hopefully everyone on Team 9 will have responded to my last post by then.


Can you add my two characters as well as my two clans o the roster?

Omura replaced Noriko, and Aikawa is a jonin.

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 12:07 pm
by The Rebel Alliances
Asturial wrote:
The Rebel Alliances wrote:OK, I think that I have gotten all of the additions made to the roster.

If I have missed anyone, let me know.

I need to go pick up my pay check at work and visit the hospital. But a post will be coming today, hopefully everyone on Team 9 will have responded to my last post by then.


Can you add my two characters as well as my two clans o the roster?

Omura replaced Noriko, and Aikawa is a jonin.


Where did I miss them? Could you link them for me please?

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 12:28 pm
by The Cross and Davids Star
The Rebel Alliances wrote:
Asturial wrote:
Can you add my two characters as well as my two clans o the roster?

Omura replaced Noriko, and Aikawa is a jonin.


Where did I miss them? Could you link them for me please?

viewtopic.php?f=31&t=441372&p=33892879#p33892879 there's the two characters, and one of the clans, i think.

Edit: Yeah, it has all four.

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 2:28 pm
by Asturial
Asturial wrote:Atreidya mentioned this to me, so I even renewed my nation to take part :)

Name:Omura Garasu
Village: Konoha
Rank:Genin
Clan: Garasu
Appearance: Omura Garasu A little tall for his age, his hair is a chocolate brown, and his eyes match, on his left arm he wears a protective plate that hinges at the elbow, wrist, and fingers so he can use his Glass release.
Gender:male
Age: 12
Chakra Natures: Fire
Jinchuriki: No
Kekkei Genkai: Glass Release, (described in the clan section)
Known Techniques: Glass release Shuriken Shower, Glass release Glass Clone, Glass Release Glass spears
Strengths: Best at medium and close range ninjutsu and taijutsu,
Weaknesses: Burns through his chakra very quickly using his known jutsu, Loses focus rather easily and will race off by himself.
Bio: The last of the Garasu clan, Omura was raised by an elderly shop owner in Konoha, a rather basic life to be honest, going to the academy and helping out in the shop was practically all he ever did. Omura rarely hung around other students and also rarely went out in public unless he was running errands for Gran, the woman who raised him. However Omura has proven his ability in his studies even though he is largely average in skill and intelligence, raising to one of the top in his class, through hard work and commitment.
Theme Song:The Raising Fighting Spirit

Clan Name: Garasu
Clan's Home Village: Konoha
Clan Crest: Garasu Symbol
Notable Members:Omura is the only living member, however the founder was actually better known for his glassware than ninja abilities Namiro Garasu.
Clan Techniques or Kekkei Genkai Glass release, Only used by some of the Garasu, largely considered the strongest of the Garasu. They are able to use the earth of their surroundings and form glass into different weapons and attacks.
Clan History: The Garasu originated not as a shinobi clan but a clan of glass makers who supplied glassware to Konoha. They were never large in number nor really all that well known and as time wore on the clan gradually grew smaller and smaller until it was no more than a single family. Omura Garasu is the only remaining member as his parents died one of illness shortly after his birth and the other while on a mission to a foreign country.


Name:Aikawa Kurhoshi
Village: Konoha
Rank: Jonin
Clan:Kurhoshi
Appearance: Aikawa Kurhoshi Tall and fit, he has black hair and usually blue eyes that change to a charcoal color with a star shape in the iris and pupil.
Gender:Male
Age:23
Chakra Natures: Lighting, Wind
Jinchuriki: no
Kekkei Genkai: Star Eye a dojutsu allowing the user to see heat sources, including body heat and is able to track people through a trail of heat they have left.
Known Techniques: Chidori, Substitution, Gale Palm,
Strengths: Extremely great tracker thanks to his Dojutsu, Also extremely strong in mid range jutsu and adept at taijutsu
Weaknesses: Great amounts of heat can force him out of his Star Eye state, and he is vulnerable to long range specialists.
Bio: Aikawa Kurhoshi has always been well known for his tracking abilities. Having hunted down and eliminated four high profile missing-nin prior to a short service as an Anbu agent. Aikawa was recently moved to the Hokage's security detail to ensure her safety, and with his Dojutsu, he is easily able to identify an ambush should he need to. However now he is stepping onto a new path, as a teacher and role model for a new generation.
Theme Song: Overtaken

Clan Name:Kurhoshi
Clan's Home Village: The Clan originates in Yugakure however a branch family resides in Konoha
Clan Crest: Kurhoshi Star
Notable Members: There is a large distinction made between thoes in Konoha and those outside of Konoha as both families despise one another. in Konoha Aikawa is the first of true note.
Clan Techniques or Kekkei Genkai Black Starred Eyes Dojutsu that can see heat sources and traces and can track it for miles or through walls. Additionally though unknown to anyone the Star Eyes have two additional functions that make them extremely powerful. The first of these two can only be unlocked through a moment of extreme rage, using their dojutsu the attacker can harness their chakra to trap and build heat within a target very quickly, only works on living targets. This can lead to the victim becoming feverish and possibly even dying from simply overheating (not very flashy though. The other ability of the star eyes allows the user to inflict a state of Genjutsu upon a target using eye contact and a massive amount of chakra, the victim becomes ensnared in what appears to them as flaming chains rooting them down and making them immobile while also forcing them to try and remove the imaginary objects.
Clan History: The Kurhoshi clan of Konoha is just a branch family of the original Kurhoshi clan in Yugakure, which separated due to an internal feud that escalated to bloodshed. The Kurhoshi of Konoha have proven their value and the majority have served as ninja for Konoha over the last several years, but none so notably as Aikawa. The man who has made a name for the Kurhoshi in Konoha.


right here pg 13

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 2:44 pm
by The Rebel Alliances
You should be good now.

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 7:50 pm
by The Frozen Forest
Asturial wrote:
Atreidya wrote:
should we just make a new team and have Asturial be an actual sensei for three?


I can work with that if its how we want to go. As long as its okay with forest and the OP. Also probably either have to rewrite some stuff or gloss over it.

I'm fine with this~

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 9:06 pm
by United Human Planets
Hey, sorry I didn't get a post up in the last few days, I was in cape cod with some friends and forgot my computer.

Anyways, I'll add in Kyo's post tomorrow, but tonight I got to get some sleep.

PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2018 9:49 pm
by The Rebel Alliances
United Human Planets wrote:Hey, sorry I didn't get a post up in the last few days, I was in cape cod with some friends and forgot my computer.

Anyways, I'll add in Kyo's post tomorrow, but tonight I got to get some sleep.


I am off tomorrow, so I will wait until you make yours and then post. Thank you for letting us know.

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2018 7:57 am
by The Templar High Council
The Rebel Alliances wrote:OK, I think that I have gotten all of the additions made to the roster.

If I have missed anyone, let me know.

I need to go pick up my pay check at work and visit the hospital. But a post will be coming today, hopefully everyone on Team 9 will have responded to my last post by then.

Imada clan, in the same link as Ryo.

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2018 11:39 am
by The Rebel Alliances
I will add it today.

I am going to wait a little longer for both Empire and Neros to post before I do.

But if they have not posted when I get back from the Hospital I will start my post, I have enough to I believe. I just wanted all of Team 9 to respond to her last past first.

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2018 12:15 pm
by The Valyria Empire
Sorry, been busy with school work. I'll try to get a post up tonight.

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2018 9:22 pm
by United Human Planets
Alright boys and girls, i got Kyos post up, im back in the game again.

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2018 9:34 pm
by The Rebel Alliances
United Human Planets wrote:Alright boys and girls, i got Kyos post up, im back in the game again.


Awesome!

PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2018 10:57 pm
by The Rebel Alliances
I have added Imada to the Clan roster now.

I am apologizing for the wait on my post. I am starting a post for my Genin now and it may or may not be finished before I head to bed for the night.

PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2018 2:28 pm
by United Human Planets
The Rebel Alliances wrote:
United Human Planets wrote:Alright boys and girls, i got Kyos post up, im back in the game again.


Awesome!


I like to think I'm pretty damn cool.

PostPosted: Sat Apr 28, 2018 5:24 pm
by The Frozen Forest
Posted! I accidentally passed over your post yesterday Asturial, sorry about that.

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2018 9:09 am
by Asturial
The Frozen Forest wrote:Posted! I accidentally passed over your post yesterday Asturial, sorry about that.

No worries I will have a post incoming shortly.

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2018 9:36 am
by The Valyria Empire
Sorry I haven’t posted yet. It’s finals week so I’m trying to get my shit out of the way so I can get back to this.

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2018 12:25 pm
by Altegonnia
Altegonnia wrote:Name: Toburo Kamada
Village: Formerly Kirigakure
Rank: Missing-nin
Clan: Kamada
Appearance:
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Gender: Male
Age: 38
Chakra Natures: Water
Known Techniques:
Water Style- Raging Waves: Water gushes out from the mouth like a waterfall and washes away the enemy. One can freely control the power of this technique with the amount chakra one releases. Having many variations, this is a basic Water Style jutsu.

Water Style- Water Shark Bullet: The user shapes water into the form of a large shark and thrusting their hand forward, sends it hurtling towards the opponent at high-speeds, resulting in a powerful impact

Water Style- Liquid Bullet: The user kneads chakra, and converts it into water, and then spits it out in the form of condensed balls. The high-speed waterball attack possesses just as much power to kill as an actual gunshot. While this is a water stylejutsu , it can still be employed someplace where no water is available, which is a great advantage. It's also possible to increase the power of destruction of the balls themselves by building up the chakra inside of them

Water Style- Water Wall: This defensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defence without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. The wall's strength and resistance change following the quantity of chakra poured down into the water, so a skilful shinobi will be able to build a sturdy one. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source.

Water Style- Hidden Mist Jutsu: This displacement jutsu is a speciality of the ninja from Kirigakure, where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dojutsu.

Water Style- Water Clone: The Water Clone Jutsu is similar to the Shadow Clone Jutsu except it creates clones out of water that have one-tenth of the original person's power. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body without losing control. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water

Water style- Hidden in Water- The user blends in with water to be undetected by the enemy, similar to the Earth Style: Hidden in Stones Jutsu. It was shown that this technique is usable even in water as shallow as a puddle


Water Style- Exploding Water Shockwave: The user spits out a great volume of water from their mouth, swallowing up and crushing the enemy with the advancing surge. The user can ride the wave, allowing them to move at high speed, and attack the enemy, now swept off their feet, without fear of counter-attacks. The amount of water created is proportional to the amount of chakra used; when used with Kisame's enormous chakra, even a dry wasteland can become a small ocean. Afterwards, the excess water can be used for additional Water Style jutsu

Summoning Justsu- Kuurgre: Toburo has a contract with a large crustacean named Kuugre. Besides it’s massive pincers and thick shell, it it well known for firing streams of water from it’s mouth that could cut rock. image

Strengths: Large Chakra Reserves: Toburo was born with above average chakra reserves, which has led him to being able to throw jutsu out comfortably in combat. This has led to him preferring to keep combat from mid to long range, avoiding CQC whenever possible.

Well connected: Due to his work as a bounty collector, toburo has made many friends in the black market and amongst other scummy dregs of society.


Weaknesses: CQC: although not weak in in close quarter combat, his fighting style puts him at clear disadvantages when engaged in it, making it a clear avenue for his defeat if capitalized on.

Wanted man: Toburo is a deserter and thusly lives always one step ahead of Kirigakure’s tracker ninja. This prevents him from planting roots or forgoing his current lifestyle.

One path ninja: Due to Toburo’s Justus all being water style, he is clearly vulnerable against earth natured ninja. He has to rely on his head in such situations since brute force won’t work in most cases

Has crabs: (joking of course)
Bio: Toburo was born and raised amoungst his villages most turbulent times. With both his parents being ninja themselves it was only natural that he himself would also follow in their footsteps. However becoming a ninja among the Hidden Mist’s ranks during this time was much more brutal an enterprise as it was well known that their final test to graduate was a fight to the death against another student. Like many of his village, this harsh weeding out of the “weak” pushed Toburo to become a stronger ninja and fighter, but sowed a distrust between him and his peers, the underlying paranoia that he would have to kill one of them himself ever present in the back of his mind. Throughout his time at the academy he quickly became apparent as one of the top prospects in his class as his capacity of chakra was higher than normal granting him more room to use jutsu than his peers in combat.

His strength with jutsu would even go as far as to save his life in his final exam where he found himself pitted against someone greatly his superior in taijutsu. It was only through his use of water style, in which he ended up putting a water bullet straight into his opponent’s skull, that he survived bloody and bruised but alive.

As he progressed as a ninja beyond this point, he was no stranger to the dissent and politcial instability of his village. His villages harsh nature did not foster a comraderie of loyal brothers and sisters in arms like other villages did and he was no exception. Early in his adulthood he became one of his villages numerous ninja trackers who would hunt down missing-nin from their village and either bring them back alive or execute them. The constant hunting and combat with fellow ninja fostered much room for improvement and growth for Toburo allowing him to further hone his natural talents. Unfortunately I’m hidnsight this skill he built up also made him a target for one of the villages’ several politcial groups of disatisfied ninjas.

One such group was lead by his own Father, Hando Kamada who spent much time stoking the flames of Dissent among his fellow ninja in a bid to lead a coup against the standing Mizukage. Such groups had to remain underground as to not be crushed by the standing order but Hando still managed to recruit several other elite ninja alongside his son and soon executed his hostile takeover. Toburo was a part of Hando’s assassiation squad who fought the Mizukage during the attempted coup.

Long story short the Coup failed tragically. The only known surviving member to this date is Toburo himself, who had never revealed how he managed to escape the Mizukage even though his comrades and family all perished. Since fleeing his village in the wake of
The failed coup he has lived his life as a bounty hunter, using his former tracker experience to hunt down fellow ninja and collect the bounties places on their heads through the black market.

IT IS COMPLETE

PostPosted: Sun Apr 29, 2018 3:20 pm
by Strala
Hey OP can I add a summoning jutsu and shadow clone jutsu to my app