Spaceania wrote:Spaceania wrote:Okay also no need to worry about criticizing me since im asking for crtisim that way i can get better.
I will rewrite it later since i don't got to much time write now
Finally finished how about this letter?To whom it may concern in the British parliament
From President J.Maple of the Newfoundland freestate.
Greeting’s
I Jonathon maple president of the newly united Newfoundland freestate would like to propose a non-aggression pact between the British empire and the Newfoundland freestate; In exchange we will freely let all British to travel through the island of Newfoundland and even make port’s on the island allowing quicker & safer access to europe.
Respectfully
Jonathan Maple president of the Newfoundland freestate.
Greetings*, "I, Jonathan Maple*" Europe*... Shall I continue?