Kassaran wrote:
I like some of the aspects of it, but unfortunately I'm far too nitty gritty to probably do too well within the limits of the scenario.1. Why did Humanity go to war and not just simply join with the Arcturians? Was there some sort of conflict in ideals or resource-sharing that made the Arcturians unfit to be a leader in the Federation? Having to follow someone who knows better isn't exactly something newfound to Humans. It's highly likely if we were to find a highly advanced species with better technology, we'd pursue friendly relations first, followed by cultural and economic imperialism rather than military conquest. So why did Humanity fight back or fight at all?
2. You detail 'extreme ordnance' but almost directly turn to using a relatively small-scale analogy to make the point. Being able to destroy a city isn't a big deal, only was when we first experimented with atomic weaponry. Take a look at some of the warheads currently in the world's arsenals today, they got smaller. So massive warships in space, with the ability to destroy just cities in terms of scale is pretty relative and small. Now, Humanity in the future will probably live in megacities, sure, and those megacities would represent vast amounts of wealth and economic power, but the destructiveness of weaponry has always been given numbers for a reason.
3. Armor in space counts for about as much as debris does. This can probably just be written off in-lore as just meaning a ship with a lot of defensive constructions and systems, but anyways- let's talk about the powerplants... solar panels. These are notoriously poor for supplying large amounts of sustained power unless you have a means of focusing sun-light at the panels from a distance- ala solar lasers/magnifiers- which requires infrastructure that would inherently compete with Dreadnought construction. In reality, Humanity would likely use nuclear reactors, probably Fusion for the added power they'd bring to the table. They're smaller and already used (at least the Fission reactors are) on active warships today. It's a reliable and safe technology with relatively little drawbacks.
4. The situation in which the Jutland was downed is plausible given a distinct technology exists: radiation masking/cloaking. In space, there's almost no way to hide yourself. It's a vast and empty expanse with small amounts of matter or material present. This means any material or matter not accounted for, would be probably labeled as an interesting piece of data to be observed and watched. Only way to stop this is to perfectly mask the radiation coming off the object, the vehicle which it launched from, and their initial launch from the planet. Then we have the question of ECCM and CIWS which would be no doubt employed on the Jutland as every warship Humanity has designed since the advent of the Torpedo Boat in the late 1800's. How did the nuclear warhead lock onto, track, and achieve a positive hit on the Jutland? Did it simply get lucky? Was it launched as part of a massed attack on the Jutland? Why didn't the Jutland recognize the warhead at distance? Additionally, where were the Jutland's escorts, or was she acting alone?
It's an interesting lore to be sure, but it would need some work to tie up some aspects into a neat little bow. I'd be interested in taking part though.
All this is answered by Humanity fuck yeah.







