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by Imperial Esplanade » Sat Feb 24, 2018 9:00 pm
But the Lord stood by me, and gave me strength. (2 Timothy 4:17)One of the keys to happiness is a bad memory. (Rita Mae Brown)
by Imperial Esplanade » Sat Feb 24, 2018 9:01 pm
The V O I D wrote:I fucked up my post and decided not to post it...
...Imperial Esplanade, would you mind possibly posting something for me to react to? For Reid's response? It seems like I always work easier with something to work off of, sometimes...
But the Lord stood by me, and gave me strength. (2 Timothy 4:17)One of the keys to happiness is a bad memory. (Rita Mae Brown)
by United Human Planets » Sun Feb 25, 2018 12:33 am
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by Maligard » Sun Feb 25, 2018 7:10 am
Imperial Esplanade wrote:Maligard, I'm glad you posted an application for this roleplay, and I am glad you are interested in joining, but I would be greatly appreciative if you could expand things a bit more.
For personality, perhaps tell us as to the extent of his physical gifts and abilities? If you are struggling with ideas on how to expand his described personality, I suggest starting with a single descriptive word, write it down, and then create a sentence that describes what you have in mind. Repeat this cycle for three or four traits, and you'd likely have a well-rounded, well-written personality for your character.
For biography, some more information would be appreciated as well. Why did they move to Daytona Beach? What happened to their family once they moved? Did he ever have any siblings? When, and why, did he start working at the local comic book store? When and why did he join the track team? Is he a part of the track team at Coastal Daytona Academy? Is his family well-off, financially, or are they struggling? Stuff like that.
Thanks!
by Imperial Esplanade » Sun Feb 25, 2018 7:12 am
Maligard wrote:Imperial Esplanade wrote:Maligard, I'm glad you posted an application for this roleplay, and I am glad you are interested in joining, but I would be greatly appreciative if you could expand things a bit more.
For personality, perhaps tell us as to the extent of his physical gifts and abilities? If you are struggling with ideas on how to expand his described personality, I suggest starting with a single descriptive word, write it down, and then create a sentence that describes what you have in mind. Repeat this cycle for three or four traits, and you'd likely have a well-rounded, well-written personality for your character.
For biography, some more information would be appreciated as well. Why did they move to Daytona Beach? What happened to their family once they moved? Did he ever have any siblings? When, and why, did he start working at the local comic book store? When and why did he join the track team? Is he a part of the track team at Coastal Daytona Academy? Is his family well-off, financially, or are they struggling? Stuff like that.
Thanks!
Ok, I will do that
But the Lord stood by me, and gave me strength. (2 Timothy 4:17)One of the keys to happiness is a bad memory. (Rita Mae Brown)
by Imperial Esplanade » Sun Feb 25, 2018 7:22 am
United Human Planets wrote:Yo, so Ive been having some writers block trying to come up with my first post, anyone got any ideas as to what I should do?
But the Lord stood by me, and gave me strength. (2 Timothy 4:17)One of the keys to happiness is a bad memory. (Rita Mae Brown)
by Maligard » Sun Feb 25, 2018 7:58 am
by Imperial Esplanade » Sun Feb 25, 2018 9:17 am
But the Lord stood by me, and gave me strength. (2 Timothy 4:17)One of the keys to happiness is a bad memory. (Rita Mae Brown)
by True Christopia » Sun Feb 25, 2018 10:50 am
by United Human Planets » Sun Feb 25, 2018 11:21 am
Imperial Esplanade wrote:United Human Planets wrote:Yo, so Ive been having some writers block trying to come up with my first post, anyone got any ideas as to what I should do?
Maybe start with a bit of slice-of-life/background storytelling of life back in New Orleans -- something to help establish, ICly, what her frame of mind is like as she begins the school year, then waking up and getting ready ahead of the trip to CDA, and finally transitioning to a physical arrival at the school campus to set the stage to interact with other characters.
Those three ought to be easy to do, and sufficient, but let me know if you're still struggling.
From that point, one of us can easily have some interaction with Jane.
by Imperial Esplanade » Sun Feb 25, 2018 12:43 pm
United Human Planets wrote:Imperial Esplanade wrote:Maybe start with a bit of slice-of-life/background storytelling of life back in New Orleans -- something to help establish, ICly, what her frame of mind is like as she begins the school year, then waking up and getting ready ahead of the trip to CDA, and finally transitioning to a physical arrival at the school campus to set the stage to interact with other characters.
Those three ought to be easy to do, and sufficient, but let me know if you're still struggling.
From that point, one of us can easily have some interaction with Jane.
Alright, I think this idea will work.
Ill give it a whirl.
But the Lord stood by me, and gave me strength. (2 Timothy 4:17)One of the keys to happiness is a bad memory. (Rita Mae Brown)
by The V O I D » Sun Feb 25, 2018 12:46 pm
Imperial Esplanade wrote:The V O I D wrote:I fucked up my post and decided not to post it...
...Imperial Esplanade, would you mind possibly posting something for me to react to? For Reid's response? It seems like I always work easier with something to work off of, sometimes...
Yeah, sure! I'll see what I can do. Want a trouble-maker sort of scenario?
by Imperial Esplanade » Sun Feb 25, 2018 3:15 pm
But the Lord stood by me, and gave me strength. (2 Timothy 4:17)One of the keys to happiness is a bad memory. (Rita Mae Brown)
by Imperial Esplanade » Sun Feb 25, 2018 3:16 pm
But the Lord stood by me, and gave me strength. (2 Timothy 4:17)One of the keys to happiness is a bad memory. (Rita Mae Brown)
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by Imperial Esplanade » Sun Feb 25, 2018 6:49 pm
The Grand Rift wrote:Tag, Never done an academy rp, but might as well start now its on my town lmao.
But the Lord stood by me, and gave me strength. (2 Timothy 4:17)One of the keys to happiness is a bad memory. (Rita Mae Brown)
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by Imperial Esplanade » Sun Feb 25, 2018 6:58 pm
But the Lord stood by me, and gave me strength. (2 Timothy 4:17)One of the keys to happiness is a bad memory. (Rita Mae Brown)
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