Shadowwell wrote:Harbertia wrote:Alright I'm ready for a review
Looks good, would prefer the bio be divided into paragraphs, to be less blocky and wall of texty, and a few grammar issues, but those are minor things.
I do apologize oh sogh ghosh gosh XD haahahohboi, um- I didn't realize how long that bio was. I've made it less wall texty but grammar may be a problem due to the peculiar fashion in which I speak. I do think I found a run on sentence but am unsure how to correct that with out omitting some details of clarity.