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by Chronodosia » Sun Jan 28, 2018 9:58 am
by Chronodosia » Sun Jan 28, 2018 12:19 pm
by Chronodosia » Sun Jan 28, 2018 1:06 pm
by Joohan » Sun Jan 28, 2018 2:35 pm
Chronodosia wrote:Character App
Name:Jon Fulguris
Appearance:(Image)
Age: 35
Species: Human
Occupation: Soldier and Leader of The Tempestas, Captain of Noctis Lucis Tempestas.
Religion ( if any ): Belives in Ancient Roman Pagenism
Political affiliation ( if any ): Modified Human Supremacy
Personality: Calm and Collected, Charismatic. Cruel if pushed and ruthless in battle.
Bio: Jon was born to two Human Soldiers of the Federation Army on Earth. He lived with with older sister and grandparents for several years after his birth. When is sister left their grandparents at the age of 18 when he was 5, Jon left with her as she loved him and allowed him to form his own ideas and thoughts. She then used her savings from every job and what she inherited from their parents to move them to a far rim planet in the Outer Rim of the Federation, named Pulvis Diaboli. This planet was a desert planet that had a small equator band of jungle. Upon becoming seven Jon was taught how to shoot and, at the age of fifteen, how to command from the planets government when he joined the local government's Police Force to keep peace on the planet. At the age of nineteen Jon was promoted to a precinct commander. Over the next eleven years Jon implanted himself into the planetary government and gaining followers in like minded individuals. Jon created the Tempestas when he was 25 to give the people that followed him a name to call themselves. John had bought his Cruiser sized hauler at age twenty-five and had it crewed with his most loyal Tempestas members and had them do intra-system cargo hauling for the next seven years. At the age of thirty Jon had earned enough money, though his cargo hauling business and his job as Pulvis Diaboli's Chief of Police, to construct a space station outside the systems asteroid belt between the belt and a binary gas giant pair. The station, named station Tempestas, became the HQ of the Tempestas and had residential space for 100,000 people. Jon has also bought nine more cruiser sized haulers and had all ten haulers refitted into Tempest-class cruisers via the closest black market hub.
Interesting info-Opt.( help build your character ): Jon is a master sharpshooter and holds the loyalty of his ships crew and all his Captains.
Current Location: Station Tempestas
RP sample: https://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=270780
Faction App
Faction Name: The Tempestas
What is the nature of this group ( political, militant, religious, etc. )?: Militant
Where is the HQ ( if one exists ) of this group ( where's it being led from )?: Station Tempestas
Who is the leader/s if there are any to speak of?: Jon Fulguris
How many official and full members are in the faction: 20,000 SOldiers 30,000 Navel Personal, 50,000 military total.
Is this group legal and it's existence accepted ( if at all known ) by the GF?: Illegal
What is the purpose of this group?: to create a Empire built on Humans on top of the food chain with Mutant Slaves at the bottom
Logos or symbols?: a symbol of the Tempestas(Its Latin for Storm)
History: A group of Likeminded Humans that agree with Jon Fulguris that mutants should serve humans without reservation and with loyalty.
Interesting Info-Opt. ( flesh out your faction ): All members of The Tempestas believe that mutants should serve humans and no one that doesn't believe that is accepted into the group. Divided into guerrilla cells of 75 people, 1 cell commander, 4 sub-commanders, and 70 Guerrilla's. has 260 cells on 100 different near planets. Remaining 500 are stationed on Pulvis Diaboli in five cells of 100.
Place of Interest
Location name: Pulvis Diaboli
What is this place ( planet, space station, colony, what )?: Planet
Describe it's features ( if a planet it's ecosystem, if a station - it's design layout and interior )?: Mostly desert with a 10 mile wide band of rain forest on the equator of the planet.
What lives here and how many?: 10 million humans, 900,000 Vien, and 5 million assorted mutants.
What is this place known for ( why is it important? ): a light, high tensile strength metal called stormium, named after the person who discovered it.
Interesting info-Opt. ( flesh out this place ): The planet is a desert planet with a rain forest jungle ten miles wide on the equator. Most people live in the temperate jungle region on the planet.
If this is not enough tell me and I will fix/add stuff.
by Joohan » Sun Jan 28, 2018 3:07 pm
by Montchevre » Sun Jan 28, 2018 3:19 pm
by Montchevre » Sun Jan 28, 2018 3:20 pm
Joohan wrote:Does anyone intend on making a separatist character? They are a pretty important to the current situation in the galaxy and if no one intends on RPing as one I will make a a character myself.
by Rodez » Sun Jan 28, 2018 3:23 pm
Joohan wrote:Does anyone intend on making a separatist character? They are a pretty important to the current situation in the galaxy and if no one intends on RPing as one I will make a a character myself.
by The Intergalactic Russian Empire » Sun Jan 28, 2018 4:35 pm
by Republic of the Cristo » Sun Jan 28, 2018 4:46 pm
The Intergalactic Russian Empire wrote:Tagging. Just wondering, but is apping as an extremely high ranking person like the Chief Admiral allowed?
by Republic of the Cristo » Sun Jan 28, 2018 4:47 pm
Montchevre wrote:Joohan wrote:Does anyone intend on making a separatist character? They are a pretty important to the current situation in the galaxy and if no one intends on RPing as one I will make a a character myself.
I can make one if you need me to. He probably won't be up for a few hours though.
by Joohan » Sun Jan 28, 2018 4:50 pm
Jhet wrote:Joohan wrote:I like this - I like this a lot. The writing is quite tasteful and the idea is quite original.
This is accepted.
I am curious though, does an official HQ exist? That being, one distinct from any facility held by the Admiralty ( perhaps a planet in unknown space or a space station )?
Si monsiour its Overseer Station Nu. Should be linked to a galaxy map in both the faction details and character boxes (Headqaurters, and Current Location respectively)
by The Intergalactic Russian Empire » Sun Jan 28, 2018 5:10 pm
by Joohan » Sun Jan 28, 2018 5:17 pm
The Intergalactic Russian Empire wrote:Republic of the Cristo wrote:
Yes it is, but with such a position I expect some seriously good writing ability ( and of course dediction )
Hmm, how good are we talking about here? We talking just "is able to make cohesive, logical posts" or "literally has to make every post a mini-novel"?
by The Intergalactic Russian Empire » Sun Jan 28, 2018 5:31 pm
by Rodez » Sun Jan 28, 2018 9:42 pm
by Joohan » Mon Jan 29, 2018 12:32 am
Rodez wrote:I've made the edits you've asked for (I hope). Reduced the faction size from five fleets to one, and I changed the focus of Vasilchuk to pure separatism. He's still a Grand Admiral, but if he were to pull something, it would only be with one fleet. I feel like keeping the Pact under wraps with the officers of a single fleet is within the realm of possibility.
by Rodez » Mon Jan 29, 2018 11:02 am
Joohan wrote:Rodez wrote:I've made the edits you've asked for (I hope). Reduced the faction size from five fleets to one, and I changed the focus of Vasilchuk to pure separatism. He's still a Grand Admiral, but if he were to pull something, it would only be with one fleet. I feel like keeping the Pact under wraps with the officers of a single fleet is within the realm of possibility.
If you are only controlling one fleet then why not just make him an admiral? A Rogue admiral is a lot more likely than a rogue grand admiral anyway.
Also, it would be nice if you could fully edit your faction app, as you currently still have the original format set in with only the membership change.
by The Vrree Nations » Mon Jan 29, 2018 11:34 am
by Joohan » Mon Jan 29, 2018 12:08 pm
The Vrree Nations wrote:Tagging for interest. I'm planning on a separatist, pro-mutant character/faction. Unfortunately, I have to work all day today, so I'll not have anything until tomorrow at least.
Question: what is the status of genetic engineering? Can/do people deliberately create or modify species?
by Lunas Legion » Mon Jan 29, 2018 12:27 pm
by Elerian » Mon Jan 29, 2018 2:47 pm
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