Young Bloods(REBOOT OOC, Superhero RP, Open)

[Zarkenis Ultima]

What Segral said. You gave her a ton of powers. What amounts to having intangibility, a Green Lantern Ring, teleportation, with relatively niche weaknesses.

Ya see, this is why I almost always go for street levelers. They get accepted easily enough into a role play filled with supers and then once they are in you make em powerful. -Imitates Zark Nod-

-adjusts Rebel's posture-

[Segral]

Filia is suppose to be a darkness manipulating thief with great stealth and an ability to make quick get aways. I could restrict the teleportation to short distances.

So...couple things.

1. If she's a thief and stealthy, where does the shadow construct come in? I don't see how that helps her be a thief or spy.
2. You have to define how short the distance is. We're not telepaths. Is it 10 feet? 5? 20?
3. There needs to be a better weakness. How about a weakness to bright light, where prolonged exposure to light becomes like acid to her?

[The Flutterlands]

Is this better?

Name: Filia Umbrarum
Age: 30 (appears 21)
Gender: Female
Race: Cambion (half-demon)
Appearance:

Young Blood?: Nope
Bio: Filia Umbrarum was born in the year 1987 to a wealthy family in Brooklyn, New York. She was daughter of a demonic entity named Domini Umbrarum who took human form and a kind and loving American woman named Joanna, thus making Filia a cambion. The family was charge of one of the most largest multicorporation companies in the world, called S.H.A.D.E Industries. Filia inherented her powers from Domini Umbrarum who came from the Shadow Realm, which he rules as his personal domain. Filia's mother, Joanna, unfortunately died giving birth to her, which caused Domini Umbrarum to have a huge resentment towards the young cambion

In childhood Filia was quite sociably with her peers, finding a great love in helping those around her, seeking nothing in return. She went to a private school and did quite well with her education, getting along quite well with her peers., making friends with them However, even from a young age, Filia Umbrarum had a found herself constantly having the urge to steal. At times she would shop lift from various stores. At other times she would pickpocket, even her own friends and peers, and she would even go break into others homes at night and rob the place. The things she stole varied from the most valuable to the most useless, including shoes, pencils, paperclips, pens, toys, clothing, and even jewelry. Filia was caught quite a few times and have gotten in trouble, with only her family to bail her out. However, she found herself unable to stop with her crimes. Thus Filia was a diagnosed with kleptomania at age 10. The youthful half-demon continued her thievish exploits nonetheless, getting practiced with the art of thieving, no matter how terrible she felt about it at many times, to the point of the skills becoming super powers themselves.

Filia, upon reaching adulthood, later moved to San Diego
to live with her older cousin, Sophie, who is also a cambion. Sophie, like her uncle, owned a rather large corporation herself, and lived in an old estate that belonged to the Umbrarum Family for many years and was called Tenebrous Manor. Even in San Diego, Filia continued her thieving excursions, creating a costume and taking on the name "Lady Tenebrous". The half-demon proved to have a talent in the art of thievery unlike any other in the world. However, the young woman gained a sense of putting her kleptomania and powers over darkness and shadows to "good" use, stealing from the rich and giving to the poor, which helped Filia come to terms with her thievish addiction and even fall even more in love with it.

As the years passed, Lady Tenebrous became one of the most wanted thieves in the world. The great thief have had many clashes with heros of all kinds, but has always managed to slip through their fingers. However, no one knows that the dark woman has even any connections to the lovely lady, Filia Umbrarum....

In the meantime, Filia and her cousin Sophie opened together a night club. Naming it the 'Nightingale Lounge', the club opened about a year ago and proved to be a successful and popular attraction in the City of San Diego. For food, drink, music and fun all are welcome at The Nightingale Lounge.
Powers:

• [Cambion Physiology]: Filia Umbrarum, being the daughter of a demon and a human, is made of dark magical energy, while normally a human, when she is fully immersed in darkness or area’s of negative emotion, her strength, speed and endurance increase to peak human levels. Also grant’s semi-immortality (stops aging at 21), supernatural beauty and night vision.
• [Darkness Manipulation]: Filia Umbrarum can generate and manipulate shadows as well as create constructs of anything she wishes out of them, holdings dominion over darkness, even becoming a shadow herself to blend in with the darkness.

Limitations:

• -Can only create a small quantity of shadows, preventing her from plunging the world in everlasting darkness. -Can only create shadow that go a maximum of 10 feet way. -Can only become a shadow for about a minute at a time. - Her dark constructs, while can be anything, are quite brittle and can be shattered by a bullet.

Weaknesses:

• [Holiness and Sunlight Aversion]: Weak against light magic, holy magic, light weaponry and holy weaponry. Also weak to holy objects like crosses, rosaries, holy water and weapons that have been blessed by priests. Vulnerable and powerless in holy places like churches and temples. Filia also must avoid direct sunlight, prone to terrible burns in the burning sun.

Likes: Stealing shit, helping people, fighting bad guys and 'play' fighting with heros.
Dislikes: Truly evil villains, getting caught stealing, killing
Additional Information-
Birthday: November 21st 1987
Theme song: Chase Me
Favorite food: Seafood
Greatest fear: Becoming like her Father

[Segral]

Flutters, that's much better. I'm not Co-OP but I would think that looks pretty good.

[The Rebel Alliances]

As I read some of Valiant's comics I am really wanting to give Raven the nanite treatment. The crap Bloodshot can pull off is pretty insane.

The nanites also give him a sonic scream, enhanced strength, speed, durability, senses able to hear sounds otherwise impossible or see in the ultraviolet spectrum I believe. Not to mention I think he can alter his physical appearance to be, well anything I believe. Although not certain on this last one.

Damn son.

[The Republic of Atria]

As I read some of Valiant's comics I am really wanting to give Raven the nanite treatment. The crap Bloodshot can pull off is pretty insane.

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The nanites also give him a sonic scream, enhanced strength, speed, durability, senses able to hear sounds otherwise impossible or see in the ultraviolet spectrum I believe. Not to mention I think he can alter his physical appearance to be, well anything I believe. Although not certain on this last one.

Damn son.

I'm okay with it.

[The Rebel Alliances]

As I read some of Valiant's comics I am really wanting to give Raven the nanite treatment. The crap Bloodshot can pull off is pretty insane.

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The nanites also give him a sonic scream, enhanced strength, speed, durability, senses able to hear sounds otherwise impossible or see in the ultraviolet spectrum I believe. Not to mention I think he can alter his physical appearance to be, well anything I believe. Although not certain on this last one.

Damn son.

I'm okay with it.

I can add in a couple weaknesses. Borrowing from Bloodshot Raven would need to consume a lot of protein to fuel the nanites that would be placed in her body.

Also, I could write it that her body would need the nanites to survive. To a degree that if a strong enough EMP were to hit her. She would not just lose her abilities tied to them, but die as well.

[The Republic of Atria]

I'm okay with it.

I can add in a couple weaknesses. Borrowing from Bloodshot Raven would need to consume a lot of protein to fuel the nanites that would be placed in her body.

Also, I could write it that her body would need the nanites to survive. To a degree that if a strong enough EMP were to hit her. She would not just lose her abilities tied to them, but die as well.

I think her dying is a bit overboard, but getting screwed over by electrical discharges works fine. Since her dying would mean that it would be impossible to use that weakness against without killing her off.

[The Rebel Alliances]

I can add in a couple weaknesses. Borrowing from Bloodshot Raven would need to consume a lot of protein to fuel the nanites that would be placed in her body.

Also, I could write it that her body would need the nanites to survive. To a degree that if a strong enough EMP were to hit her. She would not just lose her abilities tied to them, but die as well.

I think her dying is a bit overboard, but getting screwed over by electrical discharges works fine. Since her dying would mean that it would be impossible to use that weakness against without killing her off.

Thinking about it your right. I was just thinking that the regeneration was kinda op. So I wanted to make sure that it was balanced by something equally op,

[Indo-pasif archipelago]

I'm okay with it.

I can add in a couple weaknesses. Borrowing from Bloodshot Raven would need to consume a lot of protein to fuel the nanites that would be placed in her body.

Also, I could write it that her body would need the nanites to survive. To a degree that if a strong enough EMP were to hit her. She would not just lose her abilities tied to them, but die as well.

Why fuel itu with protein? Isn't fat would be a better candidate for fuel?

[The Republic of Atria]

I'm okay with it.

I can add in a couple weaknesses. Borrowing from Bloodshot Raven would need to consume a lot of protein to fuel the nanites that would be placed in her body.

Also, I could write it that her body would need the nanites to survive. To a degree that if a strong enough EMP were to hit her. She would not just lose her abilities tied to them, but die as well.

Electricity frying her powers for a bit is a pretty fair weakness. It's not like electricity is rare is a moderately PMT universe.

I can add in a couple weaknesses. Borrowing from Bloodshot Raven would need to consume a lot of protein to fuel the nanites that would be placed in her body.

Also, I could write it that her body would need the nanites to survive. To a degree that if a strong enough EMP were to hit her. She would not just lose her abilities tied to them, but die as well.

Why fuel itu with protein? Isn't fat would be a better candidate for fuel?

This^

[The Rebel Alliances]

I can add in a couple weaknesses. Borrowing from Bloodshot Raven would need to consume a lot of protein to fuel the nanites that would be placed in her body.

Also, I could write it that her body would need the nanites to survive. To a degree that if a strong enough EMP were to hit her. She would not just lose her abilities tied to them, but die as well.

Why fuel itu with protein? Isn't fat would be a better candidate for fuel?

The inspiration is a Valiant Comics character named Bloodshot and for him it is protein. So, I just decided to copy and paste the idea honestly. Did not think much farther than that.

[Indo-pasif archipelago]

Why fuel itu with protein? Isn't fat would be a better candidate for fuel?

The inspiration is a Valiant Comics character named Bloodshot and for him it is protein. So, I just decided to copy and paste the idea honestly. Did not think much farther than that.

Using protein would means she'll be fueling it with her muscle. I think fat would fit better.

Sorry for the scientific nitpicks

[The Rebel Alliances]

The inspiration is a Valiant Comics character named Bloodshot and for him it is protein. So, I just decided to copy and paste the idea honestly. Did not think much farther than that.

Using protein would means she'll be fueling it with her muscle. I think fat would fit better.

Sorry for the scientific nitpicks

I think I will stick with protein, I mean look at that pic of her, she look like she has any fat on her to fuel nanites?

[Indo-pasif archipelago]

Using protein would means she'll be fueling it with her muscle. I think fat would fit better.

Sorry for the scientific nitpicks

I think I will stick with protein, I mean look at that pic of her, she look like she has any fat on her to fuel nanites?

The converse would be she has no fat because she uses it to fuel them nanites

[The Republic of Atria]

Using protein would means she'll be fueling it with her muscle. I think fat would fit better.

Sorry for the scientific nitpicks

I think I will stick with protein, I mean look at that pic of her, she look like she has any fat on her to fuel nanites?

Wink wink.

She has fat on her. Unless she did some hardcore dieting and training to reduce that to 0-2%.

But yeah. Using fat makes much more sense. Since it's basically backup fuel for bodies anyways.

[The Rebel Alliances]

I think I will stick with protein, I mean look at that pic of her, she look like she has any fat on her to fuel nanites?

The converse would be she has no fat because she uses it to fuel them nanites

Touche.

[The Flutterlands]

I think I will stick with protein, I mean look at that pic of her, she look like she has any fat on her to fuel nanites?

Wink wink.

She has fat on her. Unless she did some hardcore dieting and training to reduce that to 0-2%.

But yeah. Using fat makes much more sense. Since it's basically backup fuel for bodies anyways.

Filia?

[The Republic of Atria]

Wink wink.

She has fat on her. Unless she did some hardcore dieting and training to reduce that to 0-2%.

But yeah. Using fat makes much more sense. Since it's basically backup fuel for bodies anyways.

Filia?

I went to Tom for final approval. You're waiting on him/I'm waiting on him.

[The Rebel Alliances]

Think I should update Raven's app to include her future IC abilities?

[The Republic of Atria]

Think I should update Raven's app to include her future IC abilities?

I would. I plan to once Wyatt finishes his training.

How soon until she gets the nanites?

[The Rebel Alliances]

Think I should update Raven's app to include her future IC abilities?

I would. I plan to once Wyatt finishes his training.

How soon until she gets the nanites?

Not too soon. She will have a decent run as a normal human vigilante but that cannot last forever so at some point she will be taken down and secretly transferred to a facility that tortures and experiments on her. That's where they try to forge her into a living weapon using nanite technology.

[Bentus]

As I read some of Valiant's comics I am really wanting to give Raven the nanite treatment. The crap Bloodshot can pull off is pretty insane.

(Image)

The nanites also give him a sonic scream, enhanced strength, speed, durability, senses able to hear sounds otherwise impossible or see in the ultraviolet spectrum I believe. Not to mention I think he can alter his physical appearance to be, well anything I believe. Although not certain on this last one.

Damn son.

Damn that sounds ridiculous. May be a bit OP for this rp as is? I was under the impression that the young bloods are fairly street level (or slightly above) at the moment? Though I could definitely get behind something similar.

[The Republic of Atria]

As I read some of Valiant's comics I am really wanting to give Raven the nanite treatment. The crap Bloodshot can pull off is pretty insane.

(Image)

The nanites also give him a sonic scream, enhanced strength, speed, durability, senses able to hear sounds otherwise impossible or see in the ultraviolet spectrum I believe. Not to mention I think he can alter his physical appearance to be, well anything I believe. Although not certain on this last one.

Damn son.

Damn that sounds ridiculous. May be a bit OP for this rp as is? I was under the impression that the young bloods are fairly street level (or slightly above) at the moment? Though I could definitely get behind something similar.

It's pretty much on par with everything we have at the moment, and those powers are street level.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

As I read some of Valiant's comics I am really wanting to give Raven the nanite treatment. The crap Bloodshot can pull off is pretty insane.

(Image)

The nanites also give him a sonic scream, enhanced strength, speed, durability, senses able to hear sounds otherwise impossible or see in the ultraviolet spectrum I believe. Not to mention I think he can alter his physical appearance to be, well anything I believe. Although not certain on this last one.

Damn son.

Damn that sounds ridiculous. May be a bit OP for this rp as is? I was under the impression that the young bloods are fairly street level (or slightly above) at the moment? Though I could definitely get behind something similar.

I wouldn't say they're quite street level, some of them can be very powerful, though their drawbacks keep them on more or less even footing with the rest of the team. They're not too high up the scale either way, though.

And I largely agree, that power list is a bit much. Excessively versatile, if nothing else.