Young Bloods(REBOOT OOC, Superhero RP, Open)

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Yep. We have a character like that already, and another pending approval, so yes

There's a section in the OP detailing how myth and magic is treated in the RP, you might want to check it out, though the rules are vague enough to allow most things (some of the main reasons they're in place is to allow some form of 'all myths are true' and deal with potential overlap).

Hmmm. Yeah, I read the magic section but I was wondering how far the stuff discussed there extended.

I'll probably come up with something else though if there's already a couple people doing that idea, might bring back my inventor from AoV.

Gonna feel bad about this, but there's a couple tech-based characters as well

However, overlap isn't that serious a thing (we try to not let it happen in the team, but otherwise there's not much of an issue). Do you plan on your character being a part of the Young Bloods, or unaffiliated?

[Forest State]

Hmmm. Yeah, I read the magic section but I was wondering how far the stuff discussed there extended.

I'll probably come up with something else though if there's already a couple people doing that idea, might bring back my inventor from AoV.

Gonna feel bad about this, but there's a couple tech-based characters as well

However, overlap isn't that serious a thing (we try to not let it happen in the team, but otherwise there's not much of an issue). Do you plan on your character being a part of the Young Bloods, or unaffiliated?

Was going to join the Young Bloods, with a transformation based power revolving around having a predator state that comes out because of possession, providing increased physical skills at the expense of having control.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Gonna feel bad about this, but there's a couple tech-based characters as well

However, overlap isn't that serious a thing (we try to not let it happen in the team, but otherwise there's not much of an issue). Do you plan on your character being a part of the Young Bloods, or unaffiliated?

Was going to join the Young Bloods, with a transformation based power revolving around having a predator state that comes out because of possession, providing increased physical skills at the expense of having control.

That sounds pretty good. None of the characters with similar backgrounds are in the team, so you could go with that.

[The Knockout Gun Gals]

So, I need some more stuff to post in after other things fell through.

I have a question, however. Does magic in this universe go far enough that there's demons that could possess somebody?

Forest!

[Tomia]

Of course I don't!

Yo Tomia, mind of PC characters kill off established NPC villains?

TG me about this is you have something you'd really like to pursue, but in general ya this is something that needs to be run by me and done for an impactful reason.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Yo Tomia, mind of PC characters kill off established NPC villains?

TG me about this is you have something you'd really like to pursue, but in general ya this is something that needs to be run by me and done for an impactful reason.

Establishing one's character as a badass does not count as an impactful reason

[Andsed]

TG me about this is you have something you'd really like to pursue, but in general ya this is something that needs to be run by me and done for an impactful reason.

Establishing one's character as a badass does not count as an impactful reason

*Looks at post having Garret hunting down and killing both Dante and Marionette so he could look like a badass that I spent the past 3 weeks writing* So are you sure your not changing your stance on that? Cause if not...

Justin case there is a misconception this is a joke.

[Indo-pasif archipelago]

Establishing one's character as a badass does not count as an impactful reason

*Looks at post having Garret hunting down and killing both Dante and Marionette so he could look like a badass that I spent the past 3 weeks writing* So are you sure your not changing your stance on that? Cause if not...

You are not serious right?

[Andsed]

*Looks at post having Garret hunting down and killing both Dante and Marionette so he could look like a badass that I spent the past 3 weeks writing* So are you sure your not changing your stance on that? Cause if not...(Image)

You are not serious right?

No of course not.

Edit: I just realized this could indicate I am serious so I just want to say this. This is a joke I am not being serious.

[Indo-pasif archipelago]

You are not serious right?

No of course not.

Well, I'm not one of the OP but:

1. I doubt OP would change their stance
2. Marionette is someone else's character which means you should have asked them first before using them in your writing and currently involved in one of their personal plot
3. You should have asked before doing something extreme like this

[Zarkenis Ultima]

Name: B.E.E.(S.)

Name: Benedetta Cappuccini/Lily

I'm not too sure about the first one. On the one hand, she seems fairly limited in the sense that she's easy to harm, but on the other, I'm very uncomfortable with the idea of a character that can stupidify and potentially enslave people with her mere presence, considering that most player characters have no real defence against something like that.

The second character seems fine in my books. The YBs have a no kill rule, so she'll have to adapt to that if she wants to join them, but besides that, looks fine. Worth noting is A) that the school year is over as of the start of the RP, so she won't be getting a lot of interaction that way, though she can be friends or acquaintances with some of the other kids if you and the other player agree to it, and B) that the YBs are currently off on an island training, so they won't be available for interaction soon. If you want Benedetta to go back to killing, though, I think she could fit some other group that's being planned.

That's what I have to say on those two apps. I'll hold off on accepting the latter, though, because it's related to Nightmare and Kommandant Fear, and while I have read those apps, I would rather have the OP make the verdict on those, since they seem to affect the world quite a bit (he said he would get around to reading them sometime today, so you should not be waiting much longer).

Establishing one's character as a badass does not count as an impactful reason

*Looks at post having Garret hunting down and killing both Dante and Marionette so he could look like a badass that I spent the past 3 weeks writing* So are you sure your not changing your stance on that? Cause if not...

Marionette is a player character anyway, so that's an entirely different case of hell no

Pls spoiler that image, it's huge. IPA, you're doing no favors by going and quoting it either.

[Andsed]

No of course not.

Well, I'm not one of the OP but:

1. I doubt OP would change their stance
2. Marionette is someone else's character which means you should have asked them first before using them in your writing and currently involved in one of their personal plot
3. You should have asked before doing something extreme like this

OkI guess I will refrain from making those kinds of jokes in the future.

Name: B.E.E.(S.)

Name: Benedetta Cappuccini/Lily

I'm not too sure about the first one. On the one hand, she seems fairly limited in the sense that she's easy to harm, but on the other, I'm very uncomfortable with the idea of a character that can stupidify and potentially enslave people with her mere presence, considering that most player characters have no real defence against something like that.

The second character seems fine in my books. The YBs have a no kill rule, so she'll have to adapt to that if she wants to join them, but besides that, looks fine. Worth noting is A) that the school year is over as of the start of the RP, so she won't be getting a lot of interaction that way, though she can be friends or acquaintances with some of the other kids if you and the other player agree to it, and B) that the YBs are currently off on an island training, so they won't be available for interaction soon. If you want Benedetta to go back to killing, though, I think she could fit some other group that's being planned.

That's what I have to say on those two apps. I'll hold off on accepting the latter, though, because it's related to Nightmare and Kommandant Fear, and while I have read those apps, I would rather have the OP make the verdict on those, since they seem to affect the world quite a bit (he said he would get around to reading them sometime today, so you should not be waiting much longer).

*Looks at post having Garret hunting down and killing both Dante and Marionette so he could look like a badass that I spent the past 3 weeks writing* So are you sure your not changing your stance on that? Cause if not...

Marionette is a player character anyway, so that's an entirely different case of hell no

Pls spoiler that image, it's huge. IPA, you're doing no favors by going and quoting it either.

Ok a spoiler has been placed on it.

[The Rebel Alliances]

TG me about this is you have something you'd really like to pursue, but in general ya this is something that needs to be run by me and done for an impactful reason.

Establishing one's character as a badass does not count as an impactful reason

That Zark, is the only impactful reason.

No seriously though I will shoot a TG to Tomia to discus my ideas. Also, for some reason I could not get on NS last night and I am starting my long overdue post now.

[Finland SSR]

Name: B.E.E.(S.)

Name: Benedetta Cappuccini/Lily

I'm not too sure about the first one. On the one hand, she seems fairly limited in the sense that she's easy to harm, but on the other, I'm very uncomfortable with the idea of a character that can stupidify and potentially enslave people with her mere presence, considering that most player characters have no real defence against something like that.

To add to this, her saliva being described as "being able to control anyone no matter how strong their defenses are" sounds really godmoddy. I'm no OP or co-OP though, so don't take my words here.

[Indo-pasif archipelago]

Pls spoiler that image, it's huge. IPA, you're doing no favors by going and quoting it either.

Sorry bout that. Thought the forum would turned it into one of those [image] things I usually see when quoting pics

[The Rebel Alliances]

I'm not too sure about the first one. On the one hand, she seems fairly limited in the sense that she's easy to harm, but on the other, I'm very uncomfortable with the idea of a character that can stupidify and potentially enslave people with her mere presence, considering that most player characters have no real defence against something like that.

To add to this, her saliva being described as "being able to control anyone no matter how strong their defenses are" sounds really godmoddy. I'm no OP or co-OP though, so don't take my words here.

Normally I would agree on something that has an affect 'no matter what' but this is saliva we are talking about. It's not really the most practical of weapons. If you have a way to get past her pheromones then I doubt she is swapping spit with anyone.

Good thing Raven wears a full face helmet at this point.

[Indo-pasif archipelago]

To add to this, her saliva being described as "being able to control anyone no matter how strong their defenses are" sounds really godmoddy. I'm no OP or co-OP though, so don't take my words here.

Normally I would agree on something that has an affect 'no matter what' but this is saliva we are talking about. It's not really the most practical of weapons. If you have a way to get past her pheromones then I doubt she is swapping spit with anyone.

Good thing Raven wears a full face helmet at this point.

*Cough* oh sorry, did my saliva got onto you while I was coughing?

[Remnants of Exilvania]

Normally I would agree on something that has an affect 'no matter what' but this is saliva we are talking about. It's not really the most practical of weapons. If you have a way to get past her pheromones then I doubt she is swapping spit with anyone.

Good thing Raven wears a full face helmet at this point.

*Cough* oh sorry, did my saliva got onto you while I was coughing?

Firsty, I think if she can hit you already by coughing, I think you should have some other problems already.

Secondly, I can't just smear some saliva on your hand and that's it. Imma need to insert it straight through your mouth. Drink dat stuff boy.

[Remnants of Exilvania]

Name: B.E.E.(S.)

Name: Benedetta Cappuccini/Lily

I'm not too sure about the first one. On the one hand, she seems fairly limited in the sense that she's easy to harm, but on the other, I'm very uncomfortable with the idea of a character that can stupidify and potentially enslave people with her mere presence, considering that most player characters have no real defence against something like that.

The second character seems fine in my books. The YBs have a no kill rule, so she'll have to adapt to that if she wants to join them, but besides that, looks fine. Worth noting is A) that the school year is over as of the start of the RP, so she won't be getting a lot of interaction that way, though she can be friends or acquaintances with some of the other kids if you and the other player agree to it, and B) that the YBs are currently off on an island training, so they won't be available for interaction soon. If you want Benedetta to go back to killing, though, I think she could fit some other group that's being planned.

That's what I have to say on those two apps. I'll hold off on accepting the latter, though, because it's related to Nightmare and Kommandant Fear, and while I have read those apps, I would rather have the OP make the verdict on those, since they seem to affect the world quite a bit (he said he would get around to reading them sometime today, so you should not be waiting much longer).

I mean, that is the point though. If you go at her unprepared and expecting some standard fight then you have a high possibility of ending up as her slave.
With some minimal preparations, like caring to wear an air filtering apparatus like a bloody gasmask, she becomes easy pickings unless defended by other slaves.

As for the second one, yeah, well she is being sent there to get off killing. Doesn't mean that she does agree to that and she might just welcome any opportunity to escape her transfer and join up with some other group whose punishment methods align more with her. But I am curious, you've been mainly talking about Benedetta and seem to have ignored Lily completely. Does that mean she is completely fine in your book as well.

As for FEAR and Nightmare, well it basically adds a Liechtenstein sized country next to Liechtenstein (I would have used Liechtenstein proper instead but didn't think that a player controlling a real country was acceptable) and an International Organisation focused on creating havoc and terror. But I never clearly defined just how big and strong that organisation is so it should be pretty flexible.

[The Rebel Alliances]

Normally I would agree on something that has an affect 'no matter what' but this is saliva we are talking about. It's not really the most practical of weapons. If you have a way to get past her pheromones then I doubt she is swapping spit with anyone.

Good thing Raven wears a full face helmet at this point.

*Cough* oh sorry, did my saliva got onto you while I was coughing?

Pretty sure that the point of the saliva is to be ingested through the mouth, ie kissing ect. Something that is not too tough to avoid via just a little bit of prep.

[Remnants of Exilvania]

*Cough* oh sorry, did my saliva got onto you while I was coughing?

Pretty sure that the point of the saliva is to be ingested through the mouth, ie kissing ect. Something that is not too tough to avoid via just a little bit of prep.

The main problem I have with that and probably other players too, is that it could be put into a drink which...eh...makes the whole thing a whole lote more useful and versatile.

[Zarkenis Ultima]

I'm not too sure about the first one. On the one hand, she seems fairly limited in the sense that she's easy to harm, but on the other, I'm very uncomfortable with the idea of a character that can stupidify and potentially enslave people with her mere presence, considering that most player characters have no real defence against something like that.

The second character seems fine in my books. The YBs have a no kill rule, so she'll have to adapt to that if she wants to join them, but besides that, looks fine. Worth noting is A) that the school year is over as of the start of the RP, so she won't be getting a lot of interaction that way, though she can be friends or acquaintances with some of the other kids if you and the other player agree to it, and B) that the YBs are currently off on an island training, so they won't be available for interaction soon. If you want Benedetta to go back to killing, though, I think she could fit some other group that's being planned.

That's what I have to say on those two apps. I'll hold off on accepting the latter, though, because it's related to Nightmare and Kommandant Fear, and while I have read those apps, I would rather have the OP make the verdict on those, since they seem to affect the world quite a bit (he said he would get around to reading them sometime today, so you should not be waiting much longer).

I mean, that is the point though. If you go at her unprepared and expecting some standard fight then you have a high possibility of ending up as her slave.
With some minimal preparations, like caring to wear an air filtering apparatus like a bloody gasmask, she becomes easy pickings unless defended by other slaves.

As for the second one, yeah, well she is being sent there to get off killing. Doesn't mean that she does agree to that and she might just welcome any opportunity to escape her transfer and join up with some other group whose punishment methods align more with her. But I am curious, you've been mainly talking about Benedetta and seem to have ignored Lily completely. Does that mean she is completely fine in your book as well.

As for FEAR and Nightmare, well it basically adds a Liechtenstein sized country next to Liechtenstein (I would have used Liechtenstein proper instead but didn't think that a player controlling a real country was acceptable) and an International Organisation focused on creating havoc and terror. But I never clearly defined just how big and strong that organisation is so it should be pretty flexible.

Sure, like, in terms of balance and narrative I don't have significant objections against BEES, but there are difficulties endemic to our medium (roleplaying/collaborative storytelling) that make me look at her with caution. I doubt most people would want to relinquish their character's free will because they are in the vicinity/in the same scene as her (I'm not saying you'd directly godmod the characters, of course, but BEES' presence might introduce a writing constraint that players might not agree with), for instance. There's also the fact that it's not too difficult for her to get powerful slaves, considering the kind of roleplay we're in.

Ultimately I'd accept her, but I would keep a very close eye on her.

Regarding Lily, yeah. I just said Benedetta in general to address the character. I see no significant issues with either.

Good to hear that you plan on being flexible with Nightmare, but I'd still rather let Tom pass verdict on that.

[The Rebel Alliances]

Pretty sure that the point of the saliva is to be ingested through the mouth, ie kissing ect. Something that is not too tough to avoid via just a little bit of prep.

The main problem I have with that and probably other players too, is that it could be put into a drink which...eh...makes the whole thing a whole lote more useful and versatile.

Does it? I only see that as useful provided the would be victim does not suspect anything. If that was the case they are probably already being influenced by pheromones. I won't speak for others but I doubt I will have my character prep for pheromone mind control, and then willingly drink anything in the vicinity of Bee.

Just would not make any sense.

[Remnants of Exilvania]

The main problem I have with that and probably other players too, is that it could be put into a drink which...eh...makes the whole thing a whole lote more useful and versatile.

Does it? I only see that as useful provided the would be victim does not suspect anything. If that was the case they are probably already being influenced by pheromones. I won't speak for others but I doubt I will have my character prep for pheromone mind control, and then willingly drink anything in the vicinity of Bee.

Just would not make any sense.

Yes, but that is the entire problem with one being able to put it into a drink.

It wouldn't necessarily have to be anywhere near the Bee.

[Finland SSR]

If I'm perfectly honest, I am not a fan of any type of mind control in a RP like this.

Whenever a player character is involved as the target of mind control, either he resists the spell or he ends up having to do something the player would not necessarily like to do, which in both cases ends up as no fun for the people involved.