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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Fri Mar 16, 2018 6:48 pm

Phew, finished with the first batch. One after another I'll get it all done. Tomorrow it's the bees' turn.
Anyway, this time the character should not be an expy or anything worn out. I was initially going for a Reverend Stryker/Hate Monger, then went over to Scarecrow, then went to Doctor Doom etc.
Should be alright and original enough.

Name: Medusold Dietrich Hotzenplotz alias Kommandant F.E.A.R. (Furcht, Entsetzen, Angst & Rachsucht)
Age: 48 years
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Appearance: Kommandant FEAR
Young Blood?: No
Bio: Medusold's birth was no happy birth, no, not happy at all. In fact, the only thing that preserved his life on the day of his birth was the love of his mother. Why? Well, he had been born quite literally with a face that only a mother could love. The face had apparently been so terrifying that the operating doctor suffered from a heart attack while the present nurse tried to kill him with a metal tablet which she had been holding during the procedure. His mother reacted abnormally too, her eyes widening in fear as she looked at her baby and tears streaming down her cheeks. But unlike the doctor and the nurse, the motherly love and feeling of accomplishment of having brought a child into this world helped her to overcome the initial shock and she protected her baby from the mad nurse by hugging the little crying child tightly so that no one could see it and taking the brunt of the nurse's attacks.

Eventually, with the baby out of sight, the nurse regained control of her senses, and, horrified by what she had done to the mother as well as by the doctor's obvious symptoms of a heart attack, rushed out of the room to get help. In the corridor she bumped into the unlucky father, who had already worried about the commotion inside, and in fear about possible retaliation from him for her mind thought that he knew what she had done to his wife, she backed away and accidentally fell backwards through an open window. A window in the fourth floor. Yeah, she was dead. The father, by now completely clueless what was going on, jumped into the room, just to see all the chaos inside there, and his wife weakly smiling at him, the marks of the metal tablet clearly visible and the tablet just magically drawing his sight, coated in the blood of his wife. She showed the newborn to him too and his reaction was similar to hers, only fatherly feelings and love for his wife, who had sacrificed so much for her child, keeping him from absolutely trashing the the newborn.

Being law abiding citizens and loyal followers of the Prince, the parents of course filed a report against the medical staff at the hospital. Of course, things didn't go so easily there as well, the police asking to see the child because they wouldn't believe what the two parents were telling them. Let's put it this way, young Medusold had immense luck that his father was quick enough at disarming the police officer else he and his mother would've been shot on the spot. Anyway, once the police officer had calmed down, he decided to overlook the existence of the boy and told the parents to cover his face in some way, lest they wanted the same event to happen over and over again when someone saw the child. The parents had by now realized that something definitely wasn't normal and they were not imagining things. At first, the newborn was covered with a paperbag with holes cut out for his eyes, later his mother sewed a mask for him that would be more comfortable to wear. But they still hand't given their baby a proper name. So, considering the fact that nobody could look at his hideous face, they thought of Medusa. Everyone who looked at her directly was turned to stone while everyone who looked at their son directly was gripped by fear so great that they succumbed to either fight or flight. But Medusa was a name for a female and they had a son and not a daughter. So they went for Medusold. Yeah, weird name. Another reason for him to be picked upon in school apart from constantly wearing a mask.

Moving on, the family life was actually rather normal. Medusold received all the love he could wish for from his parents. But sadly, the love from them could never truly compensate for the harassment he received in school and so dark feelings began brooding deep within him. One day he would make them all pay!

Those feelings were of course only further amplified when his parents died mysteriously in a skiing accident, only for the usual suspects among his school bullies to show up hours later to "finish things once and for all". But they had made the worst mistake of their petty little lives. Filled with rage and sorrow over the loss of the only people in this world who had loved him and cared for him, even the last boundaries of his self control, of the polite and shy facade he had worn for so long fell. The screams of the young men, for young men they all were by then, haunted the people of Steg for many years to come. As for Medusold? He disappeared that night and no one knew where he could have went.

But years later he returned to the public spotlight and that in a rather explosive way. It was unknown from where he had taken the money but together with a small band of mercenaries he effectively launched a coup in the tiny Principality of Saminia, executing the ruling Prince and his entire family and establishing himself as the new military crackpot dictator of the country. A goal easily accomplished since the Principality did not have such a thing as a military. But the foundation of his power was by far not secured. The mercenaries were a problem. They were bought and they could be bought by anyone else. He needed loyal men, loyal to him and him only. Ready to die for him. During the years he had spent abroad, he had started using his face in his favour. He had scared people into submission, broken them, killed them. He had gotten quite good at using the fear he caused to make the people do what he wanted. Adding a bit of good acting and careful whispering into their ears and they would do anything he wanted of them.

In a night to which he later jokingly referred to as his "Night of the long Forks", his new henchmen attacked the mercenaries who were allied with him and although casualties were high, they succeeded in the attack. Following this night, he cemented his rule in a brutal regime of terror and rage. But even like this, he probably would've never posed any kind of threat. Well, that was untill a chinese expedition found oil and gas deposits in the Samina valley. Coupled with the terrific find of Uranium beneat the Stachlerkopf, Medusold now finally had the ressources to make something out of this country. Of course attempts were made to replace him with a more benevolent and pro-western leader but he got lucky several times and avoided death untill he had formed a militia of sufficient strength to protect him. Eventually the greater powers gave up, silently accepting his oil rather than butting heads over his style of leadership.

Nonetheless Medusold realised that he and his country would forever be in danger. He needed an arm, an instrument whose reach could stretch far beyond that of Saminia to strike at his enemies while they could not strike at him. For that purpose he secretly founded the terrorist organisation "NIGHTMARE", an organisation hell-bent on spreading fear and terror over the globe and aiding their leader, Kommandant FEAR, in anything he desired.
Powers:
  • [Nightmare Imagination]: Whoever looks at his uncovered face is confronted by his worst nightmare instead of his real face. Everybody sees something different but it is equally frightening for everyone. Their greatest fears in facial form, speaking, talking to them. It often causes fight or flight reactions almost immediately, only the bravest of heart not losing their senses to it. People in bad medical condition might also suffer physically and people in good health who decide that it is a great idea to face their greatest fears might find out just how badly their body responds to being put under this much stress. People in fight or flight situations will lose control and rarely put all their skills or powers to use instead just desperately trying to kill him or get away from him. Untill the fear breaks them, makes them beg to spare them, that they would do anything for it to end.

Limitations:
  • The face works only when people are directly looking at it, not through some kind of screen, not through a mirror, not through a thick panel of glass.
  • The face does only work if you can properly make it out. People with a great eyesight will be affected by it at far greater ranges while people with terrible eyesight will need to be very close to be affected. Blind people will be completely unaffected.

Weaknesses:
  • [Uncertain Outcome]: I told you, that the face usually provokes fight or flight reactions...followed by worsening physical state due to the stress put on the body. However, a fight reaction can be very unpleasant for him, even if the victim cannot fully control himself and go at him full power, nobody would want...I don't know a raging Superman for instance to go after him, regardless of how unfocused he is.
  • [Wounds of War]: In the years he was gone, Medusold actually served as mercenary in Africa and South America. During this time he suffered a nasty wound just below his ribcage on the left half of his body. It has of course been treated properly and healed enough to not bother him any longer if left alone. However, pressure applied to it while cause excruciating pain to him and strong pressure will cause the wound to open once more which could prove fatal.

Likes: His parents, Fear, Sadism, Control, Power, Mountains
Dislikes: Skiing, Weakness, Liechtenstein, Human Rights

Additional Information
Birthday: 11.11.1969
Theme song: https://youtu.be/rQym6uQcUmA
Favorite food: Spätzle
Greatest fear: Another skiing Accident coming out of nowhere.




Faction Name: Nightmare
Faction Location/Territory: Headquarters or Areas of Operation? HQ is in Saminia. They do operate worldwide. But limited to only this world.
Tech Level: Modern Tech backed up by the occasional genius of mad science or captured equipment from governments or other organisations.
Description/Lore:
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Founded in 2008 by the Dictator of Saminia, Nightmare has but one purpose: To strike fear into the hearts of the people of the world, especcially those who would oh so happen to have something against Saminia.
Initially Nightmare started out as little more than a Secret Service of Saminia, acting only as spies and agents to help gather information outside of the country and do the dirty work of the dictator. They were of course largely unsuccessfull with the main reasons for this lack of success being the fact that they were chronically underfunded, undersupplied, understaffed and completely inexperienced. Agents of Nightmare were regularly captured and after some diplomatic quarrels sent back to Saminia with some harsh words. The agents rarely caused any harm to make them more than a tiny nuisance.

However, by 2011 its leader, Medusold Hotzenplotz, decided that there should be a change in the organisation's alignment, organisation and goals. The organisation was not inclusive enough, which he deemed to come from the fact that they were nothing more than a national secret service. They needed to serve a greater goal than simply protecting Saminia, a goal that would draw more people from all nationalities and ethnicities to the banner of Nightmare. Nightmare had to become independent from Saminia, atleast officially. And its new goal should be to terrorize the world, to make the leaders, nations and people of the world cower in fear before the mighty Nighmare. Mighty optimistic but we'll see how it played out.

Of course first the very public connections of Nightmare to Saminia had to be severed. An ingenious plot was created together with Medusold to overthrow him on the throne of Saminia, a plan which would of course come to his ears. In a show trial he officially disbanded Nightmare and ordered the executions of its leaders. In truth though, Nightmare moved its headquarters to a new compound and the character of Kommandant FEAR was born, an alias that Medusold took for himself to continue the leadership of Nightmare. And then Nightmare was free to act, with no one in the world having any evidence to tie the "new" Nightmare to Saminia.
At first recruitment and spread of Nightmare went only slowly. But it went forward, people were flocking to the banner of Nightmare. Far more than had worked for it ever before. Still, it remained a regional, loosely organised organisation at best.

It all changed in 2015. The rise of the refugee crisis, the terrorist attacks. Nightmare was suddenly swarmed with recruits who were all for striking fear deep into the hearts of the western world or anyone else really after some persuasion. With the new recruits also came new experience, new men to organise the countless operatives that Nightmare had gathered over the years. Actual bases were built, weapons distributed, operatives received actual training. Over the last two years Nightmare has risen from something that existed mostly in bad internet jokes and chatrooms into an organisation that threatens public safety on a large scale and is well tied into existing terrorist organisations, trading weapons, informations and material with them.

Population Size: 358.920
Army Size (If any): Theoretically all of them are part of the army. But for the sake of balance we will make a distinction between informants and terrorists. 60.000 people are ready worldwide to spread terror with anything ranging from kitchen knives over bombs and pistols to actual tanks and the results of weird science projects. Nightmare operatives on a mission are usually easily recognisable by the masks they wear, those often being any kind of mask you can find in the shop around Halloween. Less serious or more individualistic members also tend to wear all kinds of other Halloween related stuff like Jack O'Lantern patches, batwings etc.
Races that are part of the faction: Any who sign up. Nightmare does not care about how you look and merely about your committment to spreading the organisation and causing havoc to reap and sow fear.
Additional Info:
-A preferred weapon among Nightmare Operatives is the CZ2000
-Nightmare does not strike in Saminia or has any offensive capabilities there
-Nightmare does not have a firm grasp over all its cells or even knowledge of them




Name: Saminia
Type: Principality (Country)
Location: Europe. Alps. Tiny Country mostly occupying the Samina valley so basically eastern Liechtenstein and going all the way up to Feldkirch in Austria, with Feldkirch being the capital.
Population: 43.283
Notable features: The most notable feature of the Principality of Saminia are the plethora of high mountains. What else to expect from an alpine state? The Samina Valley as well as its side valleys are however barely inhabited, the largest settlements being the villages of Malbun and Steg. Nearly all of the population is packed in the capital of Feldkirch and the city of Frastanz which are located at the end of the Ill Valley. Despite a relatively high GDP due to the trade with natural oil ressources, many of the people prefer to stick to old and traditional timber-framed homes, creating a rather medieval atmosphere in the settlements of Saminia.
Year founded:
Active heroes/villains of note:
-Kommandant FEAR
-(Organisation) Nightmare
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Nachfolgia wrote:Mind if I join this, Tomia?

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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Sat Mar 17, 2018 12:03 pm

Yeah, this took way too long for me to make. I'll postpone the other bee to tomorrow.
Name: B.E.E.(S.) (Biological Enemy Extermination (System)) alias Queen Bee
Age: 27 years
Gender: Female
Race: Bio-engineered Creature/ Bee-Human crossover
Appearance: BEES
Young Blood?: No
Bio: BEES' story started in 1983 in a US laboratory. Only days prior did NATO forces finish their "Operation Able Archer 83", a training exercise for the possibility of a full scale war with the Warsaw Pact. Naturally, it had raised world tension considerably as the Soviets were convinced that this was the real deal or the preparation for it and mobilized their armies. The Cold War was once again on the brink of going real hot and dragging the world down into hell.

So of course both powers started new armament and science projects to outdo each other, to become stronger than the opponent, to have a secret ace up their sleeve in case the other party declared war. The BEES Project was one such project carried out on the side of the US. The goal? To create bio-organic weapons by mixing genes of course, in this specific for us interesting case for the most part wasps, bees, hornets...and humans. Yes, humans too. Of course they didn't use a complete human for their experiments and thus killed him or her but they rather used voluntarily given or sneakily stolen probes for their science project. They had...varying success really. A couple times they had to burn their experiments with fire and dissolve the remains in acid just to be sure. Sometimes they had semi-decent results which were classified as useful weapon systems. The crown of their creations had yet to appear though. But their success was not meant to be, atleast not by their military sponsors and the changing political situation. The Cold War ended and with it, the enemy against whom they had developed their creatures was no longer in existence.

The project was shut down in 1990, all assets frozen or destroyed to leave no trace and finished results moved to secret locations. All employees were forced to swear to never talk about the project ever again lest they wanted to risk swift retaliation from the government. And all of the scientists obeyed save for one stubborn man. His name was Laurel Becker and he had been part of the project since the very beginning, contributing his knowledge and skill all along. As well as genetic samples from his dying daughter Sofia, who had been hit by a truck while playing on the street. She was in a coma and heavily injured aka in no position to object to him taking anything from her. And so he secretly snuck out a container with his latest experiment and decided to continue his work at home.

And this is how BEES came to life outside of the facility, in the basement of Mr. Becker. The result of his daughter's DNA and some Bee DNA, he immediately noticed that this was what they had always sought to achieve, a perfect mixture between mankind and bee. The little girl that had grown inside the container was about the size of a normal human baby but it also featured an abdomen as well as twice the number of arms a human baby would have, antennae and something that looked like they would eventually become wings. And her eyes, uiuiui, although human in form, they did not feature the usual structure of Iris etc. as you would think of a human eye, instead rather showing similarities to a compound eye.

Of course, being a scientist, Becker had properly secured his basement and turned it into a tiny little lab and immediately started testing. He noticed that despite the compound eye influences, the eyesight of the girl was not too bad, although she did suffer from a case of Near-sightedness. What he initially believed to be wings, indeed turned into a pair of wings. Something else he noticed during testing was, that the girl grew up incredibly fast. Within just a year it had reached the size and appearance of a 12 year old. This was problematic for him as it meant that he would probably lose his test subject within just a few years and he did not have the ressources to clone a new one from her. After only 5 years she died. Within this time, she had shown signs of intelligence and even attempted to communicate with him but he was a scientist working on a scientific project, his heart was made of stone and he did not respond unless it aided his research in any way. However, her death was apparently not permanent. Her human body, much to his dismay, quickly decomposed while her abdomen remained. Further inspection revealed that it seemed to have turned into some sort of cocoon. This discovery really relieved Becker as he now knew that he would probably have a limitless supply of test subjects so long as he didn't touch the abdomen.

Indeed, only a month later the abdomen burst open, revealing the girl again, looking like an 8 year old in addition to her inhuman quirks. And so testing could continue. Sadly, with his discovery that he had a limitless supply, Dr. Becker now turned to more brutal, more direct, more pain oriented testing methods. He mutilated and hurt the girl just to see what effects it would have. He found that taking an arm off her had similar effects as taking an arm from a human. He found that ripping out one or both of her antennae traumatized her and made it almost impossible for him to continue testing on her. He found out that ripping her wings off had similar effects. And during all this time, he nearly forgot about the human side of her. He forgot about her intelligence. And he didn't know that despite dying, the new girl always retained the memories of the former one. She remembered everything he had done to her. Although she had started with a heart that was pure and innocent, like that of any child, hate rose against Becker. Something had to be done against this inhuman man.

Her chance came during a minor earthquake in 2014. Although the earthquake was a small one and the damage it caused was minimal, it did damage her holding chamber. She was not hermetically sealed off anymore and Becker was now vulnerable in an area he thought himself to be safe. When he came for testing the next time, she brought him under he control. Through the tiny gaps the earthquake had created, her pheromones had leaked out, making him the very moment he entered the room and breathed them in vulnerable to her telepathy. A weak mind like his was easily overwhelmed and she forced him to let her out. Now, she had every reason to enact revenge on this man and planned to but he first had to outlive his usefulness. Besides, she wanted to know just why he had done all this. She had him get his diaries for her, she read through them, trying to find a reason for his behaviour. She found that he had disobeyed orders from his superiors in trying to take her away. She found that his ambition had defined him and caused all this to her. She had him hang himself later that day and then decided to set out into the world.

During her journey across the states she found that humans were awful. They had all the potential to be good and efficient, to do well and not harm each other. But their disgusting free will, their petty motivations always ruined it for them. And they just seemed so random! They had all kinds of priorities, those sometimes changing at will. Sometimes they followed really weird and unreasonable ideals, it was all so unbearable to her. Eventually though she reached the target location of her journey, the hospital in which Becker's daughter Sofia was hospitalized. She did consider her as some kind of mother to herself and visited her in secret. While looking at her mother figure, she could only notice how similar they looked. Indeed, it felt as though all of her human features were nearly the same as those of Sofia. As she was about to go, Sofia suddenly woke as though from a deep slumber. With a weak voice, hoarse from the long time it had not been used, she whispered into the darkness, asking for her daddy. It was easy to forget but the woman lying in that hospital bed was still a small 6 year old girl in her mind, for ever since the fateful accident, she had been in the deep slumber of her coma.

At first she was unsure how to respond. She couldn't just tell Sofia that her father was dead. She just couldn't get it over herself. So she instead tried to comfort Sofia. It was an actually very pleasant experience. With childish innocence and lack of care/knowledge, Sofia actually didn't really mind about her abnormalities, instead accepting them after a short moment of wondering. They talked for a while and then she made Sofia go to sleep again. She should have sweet dreams. As for herself, she now had a goal, a goal to protect the innocent and weak. And she would do so in the only way she deemed right and within her power, by taking the free will of all and building the perfect society. No one would harm his neighbour, no one would harbour petty grudges. They would all work together efficiently for a greater good.

Powers:
  • [Telepathic Royalty]: Queen Bee has a telepathic connection to anyone who was affected by her pheromones. With a rather strong and large telepathic presence, she can often turn the affected people into little more than mindless drones, willingly carrying out whatever task she gives them. She can also telepathically communicate with her minions and even take direct control in which she can see and hear exactly what the drones sees and hears and can control the movements of the drone in a more detailed fashion.
  • [Bee Pheromones]: Queen Bee passively emits pheromones which, if entering the body through mouth or nose, cloud and relax the mind of the victim and make him/her susceptible to outside influences. They also serve to establish a telepathic connection to the Queen so she can influence one herself.
    The longer the victim is exposed to these pheromones, the stronger and longer lasting the effects will be. A mere couple minutes will only cloud one's mind and make one susceptible as long as one breaths the pheromones in. Exposion for up to half an hour though will have consequences lasting for hours. And even longer exposion will gradually increase that. However, at 6 hours of exposion more lasting changes in personality will appear, usually in the form of the victim being very weak willed and susceptible to outside commands even long after the pheromones have worn off (years at worst).
    However, the Queen does still have a secret weapon. Her saliva contains the pheromones in their purest and most concentrated form. Just a single drop of it into a victim's mouth, regardless how strong willed he is, will turn him into a mindless slave for years.
  • [Bee Physiology]: As mentioned in her bio, Queen Bee does have parts of a bee (although resized to human size) as bodyparts. Among them are the abdomen, two additional arms, compound-y eyes, wings and antennae. Some of those give obvious advantages, such as 4 arms being well capable of gripping more things at once or handling more things at once or her wings enabling her to fly (cirka 70-90 km/h). Others such as the antennae or the abdomen are trickier. The antennae are necessary for her telepathic powers. Should the antennae be damaged her telepathy will not work as well or not at all anymore. The abdomen I'll explain separately. And well, the eyes? They're actually completely negative and at best a weakness and limitation.
  • [The new Queen]: The Queen has a very limited lifespan of about 5-10 years. 5 is pretty much the minimum if she is in relatively healthy condition and unharmed but her needs not being very well supplied while 10 is the maximum lifespan if she has everything she needs. Whenever she dies, may it be through force or natural means, her body will for the most part decompose while the abdomen will stay. Well, honestly if you look at bugs then the Chitin also always stays around. And since we're talking about Chitin, yes, the abdomen is pretty much armoured with its own layer of biological armour and will make destroying it a little bit trickier although not by much. Anyway, it basically forms a cocoon in which the new queen is nurtured eventually it will burst open, revealing pretty much an exact clone of her at the age of a human girl about the age of 7-10 years. It depends heavily on how long she has lived before that. The newborn Queen does retain all memories of the Queen who lived before her. And since we are talking about the abdomen, I may just add that there is a pretty sharp stinger attached to its end with a deadly toxin inside, neither usage nor getting hit by it is advised.

Limitations:
  • The Telepathy obviously has a range limit. In this case being a very generous 100 km radius.
  • A good Gasmask will help wonders. Apart from that, the pheromones too have a range limitation. In this case being still very generous 40 meters. The Pheromones obviously don't work on non-organic beings. And she can't just start kissing hundreds of people or spitting massive containers full with her saliva unless she receives a more than equal amount of food and drink (preferably honey) to compensate.
  • Due to the compoundy nature of her eyes, the Queen is relatively near-sighted.
  • You know, the trick with the abdomen only works if it stays undamaged. Directly applied damage to the abdomen will annihilate that ability. Biological and chemical weaponry such as poisons and gases which affect the whole body also have an extremely high chance of affecting the abdomen. Also, the stinger is really a suicide ability. A barb prevents her from getting it back out, rather tearing her abdomen apart than letting her get that thing back out again. Because around the stinger, the armoured abdomen is pretty weak and easily breaks.

Weaknesses:
  • [Weak Royalty]: Queen Bee does not hold any super powers and also doesn't have any real combat knowledge. In a fight against someone where she can't have others fighting for her, she is as good as dead.
  • [Smoke]: Smoke is bad for her. Not only does it sever her telepathic connection, it also neutralizes her pheromones.

Likes: Honey, yellow, black, flowers, efficiency, predictability, everything going just the way she plans them to go
Dislikes: Free will, randomness, unpredictability, freedom

Additional Information (Optional; remove if unused)-
Birthday:
Theme song:
Favorite food: Honey
Greatest fear: A big bad beekeeper turning up.


Also, I ought to ask, should I make a race app to list her other racial traits/powers or should I just list them as additional powers? Referring to the obvious flight, four arms as well as the abdomen.
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Postby The Rebel Alliances » Sat Mar 17, 2018 2:55 pm

Remnants of Exilvania wrote:Yeah, this took way too long for me to make. I'll postpone the other bee to tomorrow.
Name: B.E.E.(S.) (Biological Enemy Extermination (System)) alias Queen Bee
Age: 27 years
Gender: Female
Race: Bio-engineered Creature/ Bee-Human crossover
Appearance: BEES
Young Blood?: No
Bio: BEES' story started in 1983 in a US laboratory. Only days prior did NATO forces finish their "Operation Able Archer 83", a training exercise for the possibility of a full scale war with the Warsaw Pact. Naturally, it had raised world tension considerably as the Soviets were convinced that this was the real deal or the preparation for it and mobilized their armies. The Cold War was once again on the brink of going real hot and dragging the world down into hell.

So of course both powers started new armament and science projects to outdo each other, to become stronger than the opponent, to have a secret ace up their sleeve in case the other party declared war. The BEES Project was one such project carried out on the side of the US. The goal? To create bio-organic weapons by mixing genes of course, in this specific for us interesting case for the most part wasps, bees, hornets...and humans. Yes, humans too. Of course they didn't use a complete human for their experiments and thus killed him or her but they rather used voluntarily given or sneakily stolen probes for their science project. They had...varying success really. A couple times they had to burn their experiments with fire and dissolve the remains in acid just to be sure. Sometimes they had semi-decent results which were classified as useful weapon systems. The crown of their creations had yet to appear though. But their success was not meant to be, atleast not by their military sponsors and the changing political situation. The Cold War ended and with it, the enemy against whom they had developed their creatures was no longer in existence.

The project was shut down in 1990, all assets frozen or destroyed to leave no trace and finished results moved to secret locations. All employees were forced to swear to never talk about the project ever again lest they wanted to risk swift retaliation from the government. And all of the scientists obeyed save for one stubborn man. His name was Laurel Becker and he had been part of the project since the very beginning, contributing his knowledge and skill all along. As well as genetic samples from his dying daughter Sofia, who had been hit by a truck while playing on the street. She was in a coma and heavily injured aka in no position to object to him taking anything from her. And so he secretly snuck out a container with his latest experiment and decided to continue his work at home.

And this is how BEES came to life outside of the facility, in the basement of Mr. Becker. The result of his daughter's DNA and some Bee DNA, he immediately noticed that this was what they had always sought to achieve, a perfect mixture between mankind and bee. The little girl that had grown inside the container was about the size of a normal human baby but it also featured an abdomen as well as twice the number of arms a human baby would have, antennae and something that looked like they would eventually become wings. And her eyes, uiuiui, although human in form, they did not feature the usual structure of Iris etc. as you would think of a human eye, instead rather showing similarities to a compound eye.

Of course, being a scientist, Becker had properly secured his basement and turned it into a tiny little lab and immediately started testing. He noticed that despite the compound eye influences, the eyesight of the girl was not too bad, although she did suffer from a case of Near-sightedness. What he initially believed to be wings, indeed turned into a pair of wings. Something else he noticed during testing was, that the girl grew up incredibly fast. Within just a year it had reached the size and appearance of a 12 year old. This was problematic for him as it meant that he would probably lose his test subject within just a few years and he did not have the ressources to clone a new one from her. After only 5 years she died. Within this time, she had shown signs of intelligence and even attempted to communicate with him but he was a scientist working on a scientific project, his heart was made of stone and he did not respond unless it aided his research in any way. However, her death was apparently not permanent. Her human body, much to his dismay, quickly decomposed while her abdomen remained. Further inspection revealed that it seemed to have turned into some sort of cocoon. This discovery really relieved Becker as he now knew that he would probably have a limitless supply of test subjects so long as he didn't touch the abdomen.

Indeed, only a month later the abdomen burst open, revealing the girl again, looking like an 8 year old in addition to her inhuman quirks. And so testing could continue. Sadly, with his discovery that he had a limitless supply, Dr. Becker now turned to more brutal, more direct, more pain oriented testing methods. He mutilated and hurt the girl just to see what effects it would have. He found that taking an arm off her had similar effects as taking an arm from a human. He found that ripping out one or both of her antennae traumatized her and made it almost impossible for him to continue testing on her. He found out that ripping her wings off had similar effects. And during all this time, he nearly forgot about the human side of her. He forgot about her intelligence. And he didn't know that despite dying, the new girl always retained the memories of the former one. She remembered everything he had done to her. Although she had started with a heart that was pure and innocent, like that of any child, hate rose against Becker. Something had to be done against this inhuman man.

Her chance came during a minor earthquake in 2014. Although the earthquake was a small one and the damage it caused was minimal, it did damage her holding chamber. She was not hermetically sealed off anymore and Becker was now vulnerable in an area he thought himself to be safe. When he came for testing the next time, she brought him under he control. Through the tiny gaps the earthquake had created, her pheromones had leaked out, making him the very moment he entered the room and breathed them in vulnerable to her telepathy. A weak mind like his was easily overwhelmed and she forced him to let her out. Now, she had every reason to enact revenge on this man and planned to but he first had to outlive his usefulness. Besides, she wanted to know just why he had done all this. She had him get his diaries for her, she read through them, trying to find a reason for his behaviour. She found that he had disobeyed orders from his superiors in trying to take her away. She found that his ambition had defined him and caused all this to her. She had him hang himself later that day and then decided to set out into the world.

During her journey across the states she found that humans were awful. They had all the potential to be good and efficient, to do well and not harm each other. But their disgusting free will, their petty motivations always ruined it for them. And they just seemed so random! They had all kinds of priorities, those sometimes changing at will. Sometimes they followed really weird and unreasonable ideals, it was all so unbearable to her. Eventually though she reached the target location of her journey, the hospital in which Becker's daughter Sofia was hospitalized. She did consider her as some kind of mother to herself and visited her in secret. While looking at her mother figure, she could only notice how similar they looked. Indeed, it felt as though all of her human features were nearly the same as those of Sofia. As she was about to go, Sofia suddenly woke as though from a deep slumber. With a weak voice, hoarse from the long time it had not been used, she whispered into the darkness, asking for her daddy. It was easy to forget but the woman lying in that hospital bed was still a small 6 year old girl in her mind, for ever since the fateful accident, she had been in the deep slumber of her coma.

At first she was unsure how to respond. She couldn't just tell Sofia that her father was dead. She just couldn't get it over herself. So she instead tried to comfort Sofia. It was an actually very pleasant experience. With childish innocence and lack of care/knowledge, Sofia actually didn't really mind about her abnormalities, instead accepting them after a short moment of wondering. They talked for a while and then she made Sofia go to sleep again. She should have sweet dreams. As for herself, she now had a goal, a goal to protect the innocent and weak. And she would do so in the only way she deemed right and within her power, by taking the free will of all and building the perfect society. No one would harm his neighbour, no one would harbour petty grudges. They would all work together efficiently for a greater good.

Powers:
  • [Telepathic Royalty]: Queen Bee has a telepathic connection to anyone who was affected by her pheromones. With a rather strong and large telepathic presence, she can often turn the affected people into little more than mindless drones, willingly carrying out whatever task she gives them. She can also telepathically communicate with her minions and even take direct control in which she can see and hear exactly what the drones sees and hears and can control the movements of the drone in a more detailed fashion.
  • [Bee Pheromones]: Queen Bee passively emits pheromones which, if entering the body through mouth or nose, cloud and relax the mind of the victim and make him/her susceptible to outside influences. They also serve to establish a telepathic connection to the Queen so she can influence one herself.
    The longer the victim is exposed to these pheromones, the stronger and longer lasting the effects will be. A mere couple minutes will only cloud one's mind and make one susceptible as long as one breaths the pheromones in. Exposion for up to half an hour though will have consequences lasting for hours. And even longer exposion will gradually increase that. However, at 6 hours of exposion more lasting changes in personality will appear, usually in the form of the victim being very weak willed and susceptible to outside commands even long after the pheromones have worn off (years at worst).
    However, the Queen does still have a secret weapon. Her saliva contains the pheromones in their purest and most concentrated form. Just a single drop of it into a victim's mouth, regardless how strong willed he is, will turn him into a mindless slave for years.

Limitations:
  • The Telepathy obviously has a range limit. In this case being a very generous 100 km radius.
  • A good Gasmask will help wonders. Apart from that, the pheromones too have a range limitation. In this case being still very generous 40 meters. The Pheromones obviously don't work on non-organic beings. And she can't just start kissing hundreds of people or spitting massive containers full with her saliva unless she receives a more than equal amount of food and drink (preferably honey) to compensate.

Weaknesses:
  • [Weak Royalty]: Queen Bee does not hold any super powers and also doesn't have any real combat knowledge. In a fight against someone where she can't have others fighting for her, she is as good as dead.
  • [Smoke]: Smoke is bad for her. Not only does it sever her telepathic connection, it also neutralizes her pheromones.

Likes: Honey, yellow, black, flowers, efficiency, predictability, everything going just the way she plans them to go
Dislikes: Free will, randomness, unpredictability, freedom

Additional Information (Optional; remove if unused)-
Birthday:
Theme song:
Favorite food: Honey
Greatest fear: A big bad beekeeper turning up.


Also, I ought to ask, should I make a race app to list her other racial traits/powers or should I just list them as additional powers? Referring to the obvious flight, four arms as well as the abdomen.


I really like this character here. Although I cannot say the same for my characters. Raven I am sure would start an extermination for a Bee infestation. She likes her mind as messed up as it is. :p
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sat Mar 17, 2018 3:03 pm

Remnants of Exilvania wrote:Yeah, this took way too long for me to make. I'll postpone the other bee to tomorrow.
Name: B.E.E.(S.) (Biological Enemy Extermination (System)) alias Queen Bee
Age: 27 years
Gender: Female
Race: Bio-engineered Creature/ Bee-Human crossover
Appearance: BEES
Young Blood?: No
Bio: BEES' story started in 1983 in a US laboratory. Only days prior did NATO forces finish their "Operation Able Archer 83", a training exercise for the possibility of a full scale war with the Warsaw Pact. Naturally, it had raised world tension considerably as the Soviets were convinced that this was the real deal or the preparation for it and mobilized their armies. The Cold War was once again on the brink of going real hot and dragging the world down into hell.

So of course both powers started new armament and science projects to outdo each other, to become stronger than the opponent, to have a secret ace up their sleeve in case the other party declared war. The BEES Project was one such project carried out on the side of the US. The goal? To create bio-organic weapons by mixing genes of course, in this specific for us interesting case for the most part wasps, bees, hornets...and humans. Yes, humans too. Of course they didn't use a complete human for their experiments and thus killed him or her but they rather used voluntarily given or sneakily stolen probes for their science project. They had...varying success really. A couple times they had to burn their experiments with fire and dissolve the remains in acid just to be sure. Sometimes they had semi-decent results which were classified as useful weapon systems. The crown of their creations had yet to appear though. But their success was not meant to be, atleast not by their military sponsors and the changing political situation. The Cold War ended and with it, the enemy against whom they had developed their creatures was no longer in existence.

The project was shut down in 1990, all assets frozen or destroyed to leave no trace and finished results moved to secret locations. All employees were forced to swear to never talk about the project ever again lest they wanted to risk swift retaliation from the government. And all of the scientists obeyed save for one stubborn man. His name was Laurel Becker and he had been part of the project since the very beginning, contributing his knowledge and skill all along. As well as genetic samples from his dying daughter Sofia, who had been hit by a truck while playing on the street. She was in a coma and heavily injured aka in no position to object to him taking anything from her. And so he secretly snuck out a container with his latest experiment and decided to continue his work at home.

And this is how BEES came to life outside of the facility, in the basement of Mr. Becker. The result of his daughter's DNA and some Bee DNA, he immediately noticed that this was what they had always sought to achieve, a perfect mixture between mankind and bee. The little girl that had grown inside the container was about the size of a normal human baby but it also featured an abdomen as well as twice the number of arms a human baby would have, antennae and something that looked like they would eventually become wings. And her eyes, uiuiui, although human in form, they did not feature the usual structure of Iris etc. as you would think of a human eye, instead rather showing similarities to a compound eye.

Of course, being a scientist, Becker had properly secured his basement and turned it into a tiny little lab and immediately started testing. He noticed that despite the compound eye influences, the eyesight of the girl was not too bad, although she did suffer from a case of Near-sightedness. What he initially believed to be wings, indeed turned into a pair of wings. Something else he noticed during testing was, that the girl grew up incredibly fast. Within just a year it had reached the size and appearance of a 12 year old. This was problematic for him as it meant that he would probably lose his test subject within just a few years and he did not have the ressources to clone a new one from her. After only 5 years she died. Within this time, she had shown signs of intelligence and even attempted to communicate with him but he was a scientist working on a scientific project, his heart was made of stone and he did not respond unless it aided his research in any way. However, her death was apparently not permanent. Her human body, much to his dismay, quickly decomposed while her abdomen remained. Further inspection revealed that it seemed to have turned into some sort of cocoon. This discovery really relieved Becker as he now knew that he would probably have a limitless supply of test subjects so long as he didn't touch the abdomen.

Indeed, only a month later the abdomen burst open, revealing the girl again, looking like an 8 year old in addition to her inhuman quirks. And so testing could continue. Sadly, with his discovery that he had a limitless supply, Dr. Becker now turned to more brutal, more direct, more pain oriented testing methods. He mutilated and hurt the girl just to see what effects it would have. He found that taking an arm off her had similar effects as taking an arm from a human. He found that ripping out one or both of her antennae traumatized her and made it almost impossible for him to continue testing on her. He found out that ripping her wings off had similar effects. And during all this time, he nearly forgot about the human side of her. He forgot about her intelligence. And he didn't know that despite dying, the new girl always retained the memories of the former one. She remembered everything he had done to her. Although she had started with a heart that was pure and innocent, like that of any child, hate rose against Becker. Something had to be done against this inhuman man.

Her chance came during a minor earthquake in 2014. Although the earthquake was a small one and the damage it caused was minimal, it did damage her holding chamber. She was not hermetically sealed off anymore and Becker was now vulnerable in an area he thought himself to be safe. When he came for testing the next time, she brought him under he control. Through the tiny gaps the earthquake had created, her pheromones had leaked out, making him the very moment he entered the room and breathed them in vulnerable to her telepathy. A weak mind like his was easily overwhelmed and she forced him to let her out. Now, she had every reason to enact revenge on this man and planned to but he first had to outlive his usefulness. Besides, she wanted to know just why he had done all this. She had him get his diaries for her, she read through them, trying to find a reason for his behaviour. She found that he had disobeyed orders from his superiors in trying to take her away. She found that his ambition had defined him and caused all this to her. She had him hang himself later that day and then decided to set out into the world.

During her journey across the states she found that humans were awful. They had all the potential to be good and efficient, to do well and not harm each other. But their disgusting free will, their petty motivations always ruined it for them. And they just seemed so random! They had all kinds of priorities, those sometimes changing at will. Sometimes they followed really weird and unreasonable ideals, it was all so unbearable to her. Eventually though she reached the target location of her journey, the hospital in which Becker's daughter Sofia was hospitalized. She did consider her as some kind of mother to herself and visited her in secret. While looking at her mother figure, she could only notice how similar they looked. Indeed, it felt as though all of her human features were nearly the same as those of Sofia. As she was about to go, Sofia suddenly woke as though from a deep slumber. With a weak voice, hoarse from the long time it had not been used, she whispered into the darkness, asking for her daddy. It was easy to forget but the woman lying in that hospital bed was still a small 6 year old girl in her mind, for ever since the fateful accident, she had been in the deep slumber of her coma.

At first she was unsure how to respond. She couldn't just tell Sofia that her father was dead. She just couldn't get it over herself. So she instead tried to comfort Sofia. It was an actually very pleasant experience. With childish innocence and lack of care/knowledge, Sofia actually didn't really mind about her abnormalities, instead accepting them after a short moment of wondering. They talked for a while and then she made Sofia go to sleep again. She should have sweet dreams. As for herself, she now had a goal, a goal to protect the innocent and weak. And she would do so in the only way she deemed right and within her power, by taking the free will of all and building the perfect society. No one would harm his neighbour, no one would harbour petty grudges. They would all work together efficiently for a greater good.

Powers:
  • [Telepathic Royalty]: Queen Bee has a telepathic connection to anyone who was affected by her pheromones. With a rather strong and large telepathic presence, she can often turn the affected people into little more than mindless drones, willingly carrying out whatever task she gives them. She can also telepathically communicate with her minions and even take direct control in which she can see and hear exactly what the drones sees and hears and can control the movements of the drone in a more detailed fashion.
  • [Bee Pheromones]: Queen Bee passively emits pheromones which, if entering the body through mouth or nose, cloud and relax the mind of the victim and make him/her susceptible to outside influences. They also serve to establish a telepathic connection to the Queen so she can influence one herself.
    The longer the victim is exposed to these pheromones, the stronger and longer lasting the effects will be. A mere couple minutes will only cloud one's mind and make one susceptible as long as one breaths the pheromones in. Exposion for up to half an hour though will have consequences lasting for hours. And even longer exposion will gradually increase that. However, at 6 hours of exposion more lasting changes in personality will appear, usually in the form of the victim being very weak willed and susceptible to outside commands even long after the pheromones have worn off (years at worst).
    However, the Queen does still have a secret weapon. Her saliva contains the pheromones in their purest and most concentrated form. Just a single drop of it into a victim's mouth, regardless how strong willed he is, will turn him into a mindless slave for years.

Limitations:
  • The Telepathy obviously has a range limit. In this case being a very generous 100 km radius.
  • A good Gasmask will help wonders. Apart from that, the pheromones too have a range limitation. In this case being still very generous 40 meters. The Pheromones obviously don't work on non-organic beings. And she can't just start kissing hundreds of people or spitting massive containers full with her saliva unless she receives a more than equal amount of food and drink (preferably honey) to compensate.

Weaknesses:
  • [Weak Royalty]: Queen Bee does not hold any super powers and also doesn't have any real combat knowledge. In a fight against someone where she can't have others fighting for her, she is as good as dead.
  • [Smoke]: Smoke is bad for her. Not only does it sever her telepathic connection, it also neutralizes her pheromones.

Likes: Honey, yellow, black, flowers, efficiency, predictability, everything going just the way she plans them to go
Dislikes: Free will, randomness, unpredictability, freedom

Additional Information (Optional; remove if unused)-
Birthday:
Theme song:
Favorite food: Honey
Greatest fear: A big bad beekeeper turning up.


Also, I ought to ask, should I make a race app to list her other racial traits/powers or should I just list them as additional powers? Referring to the obvious flight, four arms as well as the abdomen.


Unless you intend to have other members of her 'race' show up at some point, just adding her physiological traits as additional powers should suffice.
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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Sat Mar 17, 2018 4:33 pm

The Rebel Alliances wrote:
Remnants of Exilvania wrote:Yeah, this took way too long for me to make. I'll postpone the other bee to tomorrow.
Name: B.E.E.(S.) (Biological Enemy Extermination (System)) alias Queen Bee
Age: 27 years
Gender: Female
Race: Bio-engineered Creature/ Bee-Human crossover
Appearance: BEES
Young Blood?: No
Bio: BEES' story started in 1983 in a US laboratory. Only days prior did NATO forces finish their "Operation Able Archer 83", a training exercise for the possibility of a full scale war with the Warsaw Pact. Naturally, it had raised world tension considerably as the Soviets were convinced that this was the real deal or the preparation for it and mobilized their armies. The Cold War was once again on the brink of going real hot and dragging the world down into hell.

So of course both powers started new armament and science projects to outdo each other, to become stronger than the opponent, to have a secret ace up their sleeve in case the other party declared war. The BEES Project was one such project carried out on the side of the US. The goal? To create bio-organic weapons by mixing genes of course, in this specific for us interesting case for the most part wasps, bees, hornets...and humans. Yes, humans too. Of course they didn't use a complete human for their experiments and thus killed him or her but they rather used voluntarily given or sneakily stolen probes for their science project. They had...varying success really. A couple times they had to burn their experiments with fire and dissolve the remains in acid just to be sure. Sometimes they had semi-decent results which were classified as useful weapon systems. The crown of their creations had yet to appear though. But their success was not meant to be, atleast not by their military sponsors and the changing political situation. The Cold War ended and with it, the enemy against whom they had developed their creatures was no longer in existence.

The project was shut down in 1990, all assets frozen or destroyed to leave no trace and finished results moved to secret locations. All employees were forced to swear to never talk about the project ever again lest they wanted to risk swift retaliation from the government. And all of the scientists obeyed save for one stubborn man. His name was Laurel Becker and he had been part of the project since the very beginning, contributing his knowledge and skill all along. As well as genetic samples from his dying daughter Sofia, who had been hit by a truck while playing on the street. She was in a coma and heavily injured aka in no position to object to him taking anything from her. And so he secretly snuck out a container with his latest experiment and decided to continue his work at home.

And this is how BEES came to life outside of the facility, in the basement of Mr. Becker. The result of his daughter's DNA and some Bee DNA, he immediately noticed that this was what they had always sought to achieve, a perfect mixture between mankind and bee. The little girl that had grown inside the container was about the size of a normal human baby but it also featured an abdomen as well as twice the number of arms a human baby would have, antennae and something that looked like they would eventually become wings. And her eyes, uiuiui, although human in form, they did not feature the usual structure of Iris etc. as you would think of a human eye, instead rather showing similarities to a compound eye.

Of course, being a scientist, Becker had properly secured his basement and turned it into a tiny little lab and immediately started testing. He noticed that despite the compound eye influences, the eyesight of the girl was not too bad, although she did suffer from a case of Near-sightedness. What he initially believed to be wings, indeed turned into a pair of wings. Something else he noticed during testing was, that the girl grew up incredibly fast. Within just a year it had reached the size and appearance of a 12 year old. This was problematic for him as it meant that he would probably lose his test subject within just a few years and he did not have the ressources to clone a new one from her. After only 5 years she died. Within this time, she had shown signs of intelligence and even attempted to communicate with him but he was a scientist working on a scientific project, his heart was made of stone and he did not respond unless it aided his research in any way. However, her death was apparently not permanent. Her human body, much to his dismay, quickly decomposed while her abdomen remained. Further inspection revealed that it seemed to have turned into some sort of cocoon. This discovery really relieved Becker as he now knew that he would probably have a limitless supply of test subjects so long as he didn't touch the abdomen.

Indeed, only a month later the abdomen burst open, revealing the girl again, looking like an 8 year old in addition to her inhuman quirks. And so testing could continue. Sadly, with his discovery that he had a limitless supply, Dr. Becker now turned to more brutal, more direct, more pain oriented testing methods. He mutilated and hurt the girl just to see what effects it would have. He found that taking an arm off her had similar effects as taking an arm from a human. He found that ripping out one or both of her antennae traumatized her and made it almost impossible for him to continue testing on her. He found out that ripping her wings off had similar effects. And during all this time, he nearly forgot about the human side of her. He forgot about her intelligence. And he didn't know that despite dying, the new girl always retained the memories of the former one. She remembered everything he had done to her. Although she had started with a heart that was pure and innocent, like that of any child, hate rose against Becker. Something had to be done against this inhuman man.

Her chance came during a minor earthquake in 2014. Although the earthquake was a small one and the damage it caused was minimal, it did damage her holding chamber. She was not hermetically sealed off anymore and Becker was now vulnerable in an area he thought himself to be safe. When he came for testing the next time, she brought him under he control. Through the tiny gaps the earthquake had created, her pheromones had leaked out, making him the very moment he entered the room and breathed them in vulnerable to her telepathy. A weak mind like his was easily overwhelmed and she forced him to let her out. Now, she had every reason to enact revenge on this man and planned to but he first had to outlive his usefulness. Besides, she wanted to know just why he had done all this. She had him get his diaries for her, she read through them, trying to find a reason for his behaviour. She found that he had disobeyed orders from his superiors in trying to take her away. She found that his ambition had defined him and caused all this to her. She had him hang himself later that day and then decided to set out into the world.

During her journey across the states she found that humans were awful. They had all the potential to be good and efficient, to do well and not harm each other. But their disgusting free will, their petty motivations always ruined it for them. And they just seemed so random! They had all kinds of priorities, those sometimes changing at will. Sometimes they followed really weird and unreasonable ideals, it was all so unbearable to her. Eventually though she reached the target location of her journey, the hospital in which Becker's daughter Sofia was hospitalized. She did consider her as some kind of mother to herself and visited her in secret. While looking at her mother figure, she could only notice how similar they looked. Indeed, it felt as though all of her human features were nearly the same as those of Sofia. As she was about to go, Sofia suddenly woke as though from a deep slumber. With a weak voice, hoarse from the long time it had not been used, she whispered into the darkness, asking for her daddy. It was easy to forget but the woman lying in that hospital bed was still a small 6 year old girl in her mind, for ever since the fateful accident, she had been in the deep slumber of her coma.

At first she was unsure how to respond. She couldn't just tell Sofia that her father was dead. She just couldn't get it over herself. So she instead tried to comfort Sofia. It was an actually very pleasant experience. With childish innocence and lack of care/knowledge, Sofia actually didn't really mind about her abnormalities, instead accepting them after a short moment of wondering. They talked for a while and then she made Sofia go to sleep again. She should have sweet dreams. As for herself, she now had a goal, a goal to protect the innocent and weak. And she would do so in the only way she deemed right and within her power, by taking the free will of all and building the perfect society. No one would harm his neighbour, no one would harbour petty grudges. They would all work together efficiently for a greater good.

Powers:
  • [Telepathic Royalty]: Queen Bee has a telepathic connection to anyone who was affected by her pheromones. With a rather strong and large telepathic presence, she can often turn the affected people into little more than mindless drones, willingly carrying out whatever task she gives them. She can also telepathically communicate with her minions and even take direct control in which she can see and hear exactly what the drones sees and hears and can control the movements of the drone in a more detailed fashion.
  • [Bee Pheromones]: Queen Bee passively emits pheromones which, if entering the body through mouth or nose, cloud and relax the mind of the victim and make him/her susceptible to outside influences. They also serve to establish a telepathic connection to the Queen so she can influence one herself.
    The longer the victim is exposed to these pheromones, the stronger and longer lasting the effects will be. A mere couple minutes will only cloud one's mind and make one susceptible as long as one breaths the pheromones in. Exposion for up to half an hour though will have consequences lasting for hours. And even longer exposion will gradually increase that. However, at 6 hours of exposion more lasting changes in personality will appear, usually in the form of the victim being very weak willed and susceptible to outside commands even long after the pheromones have worn off (years at worst).
    However, the Queen does still have a secret weapon. Her saliva contains the pheromones in their purest and most concentrated form. Just a single drop of it into a victim's mouth, regardless how strong willed he is, will turn him into a mindless slave for years.

Limitations:
  • The Telepathy obviously has a range limit. In this case being a very generous 100 km radius.
  • A good Gasmask will help wonders. Apart from that, the pheromones too have a range limitation. In this case being still very generous 40 meters. The Pheromones obviously don't work on non-organic beings. And she can't just start kissing hundreds of people or spitting massive containers full with her saliva unless she receives a more than equal amount of food and drink (preferably honey) to compensate.

Weaknesses:
  • [Weak Royalty]: Queen Bee does not hold any super powers and also doesn't have any real combat knowledge. In a fight against someone where she can't have others fighting for her, she is as good as dead.
  • [Smoke]: Smoke is bad for her. Not only does it sever her telepathic connection, it also neutralizes her pheromones.

Likes: Honey, yellow, black, flowers, efficiency, predictability, everything going just the way she plans them to go
Dislikes: Free will, randomness, unpredictability, freedom

Additional Information (Optional; remove if unused)-
Birthday:
Theme song:
Favorite food: Honey
Greatest fear: A big bad beekeeper turning up.


Also, I ought to ask, should I make a race app to list her other racial traits/powers or should I just list them as additional powers? Referring to the obvious flight, four arms as well as the abdomen.


I really like this character here. Although I cannot say the same for my characters. Raven I am sure would start an extermination for a Bee infestation. She likes her mind as messed up as it is. :p

Then Raven obviously doesn't know what is good for her and will have to be made to see reason. Her reason.
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Name: B.E.E.(S.) (Biological Enemy Extermination (System)) alias Queen Bee
Age: 27 years
Gender: Female
Race: Bio-engineered Creature/ Bee-Human crossover
Appearance: BEES
Young Blood?: No
Bio: BEES' story started in 1983 in a US laboratory. Only days prior did NATO forces finish their "Operation Able Archer 83", a training exercise for the possibility of a full scale war with the Warsaw Pact. Naturally, it had raised world tension considerably as the Soviets were convinced that this was the real deal or the preparation for it and mobilized their armies. The Cold War was once again on the brink of going real hot and dragging the world down into hell.

So of course both powers started new armament and science projects to outdo each other, to become stronger than the opponent, to have a secret ace up their sleeve in case the other party declared war. The BEES Project was one such project carried out on the side of the US. The goal? To create bio-organic weapons by mixing genes of course, in this specific for us interesting case for the most part wasps, bees, hornets...and humans. Yes, humans too. Of course they didn't use a complete human for their experiments and thus killed him or her but they rather used voluntarily given or sneakily stolen probes for their science project. They had...varying success really. A couple times they had to burn their experiments with fire and dissolve the remains in acid just to be sure. Sometimes they had semi-decent results which were classified as useful weapon systems. The crown of their creations had yet to appear though. But their success was not meant to be, atleast not by their military sponsors and the changing political situation. The Cold War ended and with it, the enemy against whom they had developed their creatures was no longer in existence.

The project was shut down in 1990, all assets frozen or destroyed to leave no trace and finished results moved to secret locations. All employees were forced to swear to never talk about the project ever again lest they wanted to risk swift retaliation from the government. And all of the scientists obeyed save for one stubborn man. His name was Laurel Becker and he had been part of the project since the very beginning, contributing his knowledge and skill all along. As well as genetic samples from his dying daughter Sofia, who had been hit by a truck while playing on the street. She was in a coma and heavily injured aka in no position to object to him taking anything from her. And so he secretly snuck out a container with his latest experiment and decided to continue his work at home.

And this is how BEES came to life outside of the facility, in the basement of Mr. Becker. The result of his daughter's DNA and some Bee DNA, he immediately noticed that this was what they had always sought to achieve, a perfect mixture between mankind and bee. The little girl that had grown inside the container was about the size of a normal human baby but it also featured an abdomen as well as twice the number of arms a human baby would have, antennae and something that looked like they would eventually become wings. And her eyes, uiuiui, although human in form, they did not feature the usual structure of Iris etc. as you would think of a human eye, instead rather showing similarities to a compound eye.

Of course, being a scientist, Becker had properly secured his basement and turned it into a tiny little lab and immediately started testing. He noticed that despite the compound eye influences, the eyesight of the girl was not too bad, although she did suffer from a case of Near-sightedness. What he initially believed to be wings, indeed turned into a pair of wings. Something else he noticed during testing was, that the girl grew up incredibly fast. Within just a year it had reached the size and appearance of a 12 year old. This was problematic for him as it meant that he would probably lose his test subject within just a few years and he did not have the ressources to clone a new one from her. After only 5 years she died. Within this time, she had shown signs of intelligence and even attempted to communicate with him but he was a scientist working on a scientific project, his heart was made of stone and he did not respond unless it aided his research in any way. However, her death was apparently not permanent. Her human body, much to his dismay, quickly decomposed while her abdomen remained. Further inspection revealed that it seemed to have turned into some sort of cocoon. This discovery really relieved Becker as he now knew that he would probably have a limitless supply of test subjects so long as he didn't touch the abdomen.

Indeed, only a month later the abdomen burst open, revealing the girl again, looking like an 8 year old in addition to her inhuman quirks. And so testing could continue. Sadly, with his discovery that he had a limitless supply, Dr. Becker now turned to more brutal, more direct, more pain oriented testing methods. He mutilated and hurt the girl just to see what effects it would have. He found that taking an arm off her had similar effects as taking an arm from a human. He found that ripping out one or both of her antennae traumatized her and made it almost impossible for him to continue testing on her. He found out that ripping her wings off had similar effects. And during all this time, he nearly forgot about the human side of her. He forgot about her intelligence. And he didn't know that despite dying, the new girl always retained the memories of the former one. She remembered everything he had done to her. Although she had started with a heart that was pure and innocent, like that of any child, hate rose against Becker. Something had to be done against this inhuman man.

Her chance came during a minor earthquake in 2014. Although the earthquake was a small one and the damage it caused was minimal, it did damage her holding chamber. She was not hermetically sealed off anymore and Becker was now vulnerable in an area he thought himself to be safe. When he came for testing the next time, she brought him under he control. Through the tiny gaps the earthquake had created, her pheromones had leaked out, making him the very moment he entered the room and breathed them in vulnerable to her telepathy. A weak mind like his was easily overwhelmed and she forced him to let her out. Now, she had every reason to enact revenge on this man and planned to but he first had to outlive his usefulness. Besides, she wanted to know just why he had done all this. She had him get his diaries for her, she read through them, trying to find a reason for his behaviour. She found that he had disobeyed orders from his superiors in trying to take her away. She found that his ambition had defined him and caused all this to her. She had him hang himself later that day and then decided to set out into the world.

During her journey across the states she found that humans were awful. They had all the potential to be good and efficient, to do well and not harm each other. But their disgusting free will, their petty motivations always ruined it for them. And they just seemed so random! They had all kinds of priorities, those sometimes changing at will. Sometimes they followed really weird and unreasonable ideals, it was all so unbearable to her. Eventually though she reached the target location of her journey, the hospital in which Becker's daughter Sofia was hospitalized. She did consider her as some kind of mother to herself and visited her in secret. While looking at her mother figure, she could only notice how similar they looked. Indeed, it felt as though all of her human features were nearly the same as those of Sofia. As she was about to go, Sofia suddenly woke as though from a deep slumber. With a weak voice, hoarse from the long time it had not been used, she whispered into the darkness, asking for her daddy. It was easy to forget but the woman lying in that hospital bed was still a small 6 year old girl in her mind, for ever since the fateful accident, she had been in the deep slumber of her coma.

At first she was unsure how to respond. She couldn't just tell Sofia that her father was dead. She just couldn't get it over herself. So she instead tried to comfort Sofia. It was an actually very pleasant experience. With childish innocence and lack of care/knowledge, Sofia actually didn't really mind about her abnormalities, instead accepting them after a short moment of wondering. They talked for a while and then she made Sofia go to sleep again. She should have sweet dreams. As for herself, she now had a goal, a goal to protect the innocent and weak. And she would do so in the only way she deemed right and within her power, by taking the free will of all and building the perfect society. No one would harm his neighbour, no one would harbour petty grudges. They would all work together efficiently for a greater good.

Powers:
  • [Telepathic Royalty]: Queen Bee has a telepathic connection to anyone who was affected by her pheromones. With a rather strong and large telepathic presence, she can often turn the affected people into little more than mindless drones, willingly carrying out whatever task she gives them. She can also telepathically communicate with her minions and even take direct control in which she can see and hear exactly what the drones sees and hears and can control the movements of the drone in a more detailed fashion.
  • [Bee Pheromones]: Queen Bee passively emits pheromones which, if entering the body through mouth or nose, cloud and relax the mind of the victim and make him/her susceptible to outside influences. They also serve to establish a telepathic connection to the Queen so she can influence one herself.
    The longer the victim is exposed to these pheromones, the stronger and longer lasting the effects will be. A mere couple minutes will only cloud one's mind and make one susceptible as long as one breaths the pheromones in. Exposion for up to half an hour though will have consequences lasting for hours. And even longer exposion will gradually increase that. However, at 6 hours of exposion more lasting changes in personality will appear, usually in the form of the victim being very weak willed and susceptible to outside commands even long after the pheromones have worn off (years at worst).
    However, the Queen does still have a secret weapon. Her saliva contains the pheromones in their purest and most concentrated form. Just a single drop of it into a victim's mouth, regardless how strong willed he is, will turn him into a mindless slave for years.

Limitations:
  • The Telepathy obviously has a range limit. In this case being a very generous 100 km radius.
  • A good Gasmask will help wonders. Apart from that, the pheromones too have a range limitation. In this case being still very generous 40 meters. The Pheromones obviously don't work on non-organic beings. And she can't just start kissing hundreds of people or spitting massive containers full with her saliva unless she receives a more than equal amount of food and drink (preferably honey) to compensate.

Weaknesses:
  • [Weak Royalty]: Queen Bee does not hold any super powers and also doesn't have any real combat knowledge. In a fight against someone where she can't have others fighting for her, she is as good as dead.
  • [Smoke]: Smoke is bad for her. Not only does it sever her telepathic connection, it also neutralizes her pheromones.

Likes: Honey, yellow, black, flowers, efficiency, predictability, everything going just the way she plans them to go
Dislikes: Free will, randomness, unpredictability, freedom

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Birthday:
Theme song:
Favorite food: Honey
Greatest fear: A big bad beekeeper turning up.


Also, I ought to ask, should I make a race app to list her other racial traits/powers or should I just list them as additional powers? Referring to the obvious flight, four arms as well as the abdomen.


Unless you intend to have other members of her 'race' show up at some point, just adding her physiological traits as additional powers should suffice.

Okay :)
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Postby Remnants of Exilvania » Sun Mar 18, 2018 3:53 pm

Yeah, I am a not exactly consistent. Now decided again that having two bee-themed characters would be a bit too many. Here, have this schizophrenic duo instead!

Name: Benedetta Cappuccini/Lily
Age: 17/1783 Years
Gender: Female
Race: Human/Succubus
Appearance: Benedetta & Lily
Young Blood?: Yes? Maybe?
Bio: Benedetta was an orphan. She never met her parents and her name also hadn't been given to her by them. No, she was found in a basket before a capuchin monastery, without anything with her other than the basket and some blankets. The monks decided to give her the name Benedetta meaning believing that she was blessed to be in their care rather than in that of her parents who had abandoned her. And of course they honoured the current Pope Benedict with that. And from then onwards she was raised by the monks in a strict catholic christian fashion. She was happy, benevolent and a good and innocent girl.

That was untill 2012. In 2012 Nightmare Agents raided the Monastery. The monks spared no effort to save her life and hid her well but from her hiding place she had to watch powerless as the monks were slaughtered by the Nightmare troopers and how this holy place full of good people which she had grown to like so much over the past decade was desecrated and largely destroyed. When the Nightmare Operatives left, leaving the monastery aflame, she finally escaped from her hiding place and managed to leave the monastery. And from outside she watched and cried as her home burned down and all her good memory turned to ash.

Eventually the rescue services arrived, although far too late. Firefighters put out the last flames and paramedics searched among the ruins for survivors. Meanwhile she was approached by a policeman who tried to comfort her and gave her a blanket against the cold. Of course she was brought to the closest police station and there they tried to cautiously interrogate her. The interrogation brought up those horrible pictures of the event again and again but she told them everything she knew. Told them about the masked attackers who had just suddenly appeared out of nowhere and started attacking them without any explanation.

Benedetta was then moved to an orphanage but she just didn't find peace within her anymore. She didn't fit in with the other kinds, none had had to endure something as gruesome as she had. She always read the news, always hoped to see news about the monastery, about the investigation. Through the news she learned that the attack had been traced back to an organisation named "Nightmare". She followed the investigation as it progressed and progressed and prayed intently every night that the police would catch the attackers and bring them to justice. Her prayers were eventually heard by the Lord, for one morning she woke up and in the news she saw the headline that the perpetrators of the monastery attack had been caught. She thanked god that he had given the people the opportunity to enact justice upon these spawns of darkness, these men of hatred. And then she followed the news, followed their trial, eagerly awaited their just punishment.

Only to be disappointed by the petty judgement system and the laws in place. Every single one of the perpetrators received a 25 years prison sentence and a considerable fee. And that was it. It was this moment of her highest disappointment which constituted a turning point in her life. As much as the goood monks had tried to teach it to her, forgiveness was something she could not feel anymore. If the governments and their judges were incapable of meting out proper punishment, she would take justice into her own hands, she would find, judge and punish those who did ill against their fellow intelligent beings. She would never again be weak and just stand aside as those she loved would be killed around her and those responsible for ending something as precious as a human life just getting a (in her opinion) light punishment.

And so she started training. At first she simply stole some knives and practiced fighting and throwing with them. She also spent countless hours hardening both body and mind of herself with constant exercise. Eventually she moved into the criminal underground and acquired some guns for herself and started training with these as well. How she acquired them? Eh, let's say the salesman was on his knees begging her not to kill him and take whatever she wanted. Anyway, while preparing herself, she also kept an eye on her monastery attackers. They were the first ones she wanted to feel the her wrath. And eventually her opportunity came. She caught news of them getting moved to a new prison and decided to lay an ambush. She was successful in her ambush, killing every single one of the prisoners while leaving the guards completely unharmed. Someone who took a life would have to pay the ultimate price of his own life.

In the following years she would carve a bloody path through the ranks of the criminals in Europe. Death from her came swiftly and usually with little pain. Innocent bystanders always stayed unharmed. She began seeing herself as the Holy Punisher of the Lord himself.

Now affairs could have stayed this way forever if she had not taken on the wrong group. She had followed some sort of satanic cult, especcially high on her hitlist for their barbaric practices, ritually sacrificed people and just the fact that they were following the devil. She had them in her sights just preparing another one of their rituals when she was suddenly knocked out from behind and the world went dark for her.
When she woke again, she didn't recognise her surroundings. Despite having a massive headache, she realised that she was in a completely different place then before. A quick survey of the location revealed to her that not only two days had passed but also that she was in a completely different city and country. Within two days of unconsciousness she had apparently travelled 200 km. But there was no sign of any of the satanists. Nothing, the house she had regained her consciousness in was completely deserted. She tried to remember if she had ever regained consciousness during those two days but there was nothing, everything just seemed kind of foggy and dark.

Eventually she moved on, set out again on her bloody business. But things would never return back to normal. Every now and then she suddenly awoke somewhere, having no idea what she had been doing. Large gaps in her memory began troubling her. Maybe...maybe it was time to give up this individual vigilantism? Maybe she should join a group then maybe someone could tell her what she was doing in these periods of time? Said and done and so she turned herself in in Zurich, asking the police inspector who came to interrogate her to let her join a hero team. After having heard her story and why she had started this killing spree, the inspector agreed that she was a good person merely a little...misguided in her ways of dealing with things. He attributed a part of that to her unusual childhood. Anyway, the boss of the inspector had heard of some school in San Diego were peaceful co-existence between humans and metas was preached. Peaceful was exactly what that girl needed and being a completely normal human vigilante, she was deemed a perfect link between the average human and the average meta.

And that's how she got to transfer from Switzerland straight to Thomsen High.
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Now comes sort of a second bio but well, this character needs it as it is more or less two persons in one, lol. I'll keep it real short, mainly because I don't want to draw this out forever and because I am already tired again from writing all the time.
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Lily was a Succubus, plain and simple. An inhabitant of the realm of hell. She did the usual stuff of torturing the poor lost souls and all that funky stuff and well, just lived century after century in the completely uneventful hell. Torturing just the same souls of weak sinners over and over again just didn't excite her that much anymore.

But there was one way out of hell. On the planet called Earth existed satanic cults as well as several artifacts and portals connected to Hell. Although most were closed or hidden away, every now and then demons managed to cross the realms and have some fun on the playground that was Earth. And this was exactly what she was waiting for too, an opportunity to cross into the realm of Earth.

Her patience was rewarded in 2017. A small cult of satanists had performed a ritual and offered the soul of a young girl for a demon to appear. Now, she could have come with all the pomp and tamtam that usually happened during such a summoning but her patience had greatly decreased over the centuries and she feared that if she didn't take this opportunity as quickly as possibly some other, more powerful demon would appear and take the opportunity in her stead.

And so she jumped through the created portal. However, immediately she noticed that something was wrong, she couldn't quite move or take on her form again. When she looked down she noticed that she seemed to be little more than a pure demonic energy, slowly being drawn into the girl and swallowed. Oh crap, she thought. The satanists apparently hadn't killed the girl and offered her soul to her, no they had simply left her alife and now this would end up as a possession. And possessions were really hard to pull off good. If you weren't skilled at it and powerful, your control would be incomplete, leading to phases in which one had control to phases in which the host had the control again. She made sure to thank the Satanists appropriately once she had taken possession of her host and transformed into her usual form. Not one of them survived the night.
Over the course of the following years, Lily got used to the constant back and forth of her taking control in a moment of her host's weakness and then having some fun. What was even more fun, was that her host was completely unaware of the fact that she was harboring a demon within her while she could see anything her host did. It was quite ironic to be fair. A faithful christian soul tainted by her demonic presence without ever knowing about it. She also had complete access to her memories and in order to mock her even further, she sought out a Nightmare cell and let herself be recruited for her cause. That Kommandant FEAR character was pretty boring guy but from what she could understand the organisation didn't want anything else from her then to cause havoc and report back every now and then, something that she was completely fine with.

But of course her host had to notice that something was wrong and so she sought help. And actually Lily didn't have anything against it. Such a school sounded like even more fun. Super powered people would certainly be fun, right?
Powers:
  • [Faith]: Benedetta is filled with faith into the Lord. She will continue on through as many hardships as life and the servants of darkness will throw at her. And when she stops then only to find a more efficient way to continue onwards. Only a word of god could stop her on her holy quest to protect the people from the sinners.
  • [Unnatural Healing]: The power hasn't been used yet since Benedetta hasn't been wounded yet but just in case, Lily has a vested interest in her host staying alife and will try to keep alife. Heavy wounds will heal within a matter of minutes.
  • [Succubus Charm]: As you can guess, Lily as a Succubus attracts the attention of the opposite sex. To males she will seem unnaturally beautiful and they will often hesitate to attack her or even try to conform to her wishes because they really want to hit on her. However, sexual interaction even as light as a simple kiss eats away at the soul of a male. Females are better of as they do not lose any bits and pieces of their soul during such procedures, however, their previously envious reactions to the Succubus Charm will turn into addictive reactions after such a close contact with the Charm, making females wanting to do everything for her just to receive more reward.
  • [Demonic Physiology]: She is a demon and not quite as frail as she seems. Indeed her strength could rival that of bodybuilders and other strongmen more than twice her size. And she is also much tougher than what one could guess. Most conventional attacks would have little to no lasting effect on her. And since she also got wings she can fly. And having a horn of course enables one to impale someone on it if one should so try.
  • [Unholy Transformation]: In a moment of mental and/or physical weakness of Benedetta Lily can take over her body. This takeover is usually accompanied by heavy physical changes as well as her clothing transforming and her scythe appearing out of nowhere.

Limitations:
  • Faith into the Lord does not mean invincibility. Something that Benedetta does like to forget.
  • Lily is forced to consume souls to keep her powers operating at their maximum efficiency. Now, unlike one would assume from a Succubus, she doesn''t necessarily have to take these through sexual intercourse although Succubi generally prefer this method, mainly because souls are being turned into sinner souls in that process. However, all she really needs is for her people to die around her and then she simply needs to strike fast to take the souls before they are gone. However, a distinction must be made between the souls of sinners and of virtuous people. While sinners' souls are like a delicious and supply a lot of power, the souls of virtuous people taste very bad and can actually have bad side effects like forcing her to puke (or Benedetta although she has no idea why she needs to puke). However, the amount of people who are truly fully virtuous or more than just small sinners is rather small so I feel the need to address the grey middle mass of people which are kind of neutral in my book. Well, they taste stale, supply relatively little power but have no bad aftereffects.

Weaknesses:
  • [Mere Human]: Benedetta is a human and although young and in a very good condition, she can by far not do everything and is easily wounded.
  • [Demonic Weakness]: Well, the usual alright. Iron is pretty darn harmful and will cause hard wounds that will take a lot of souls to heal. Holy water functions much like acid being poured onto Lilith. Holy symbols and prayers are nausea inducing.
  • [Envious Brides]: While her Succubus Charm may do well with luring in the men, it does quite the opposite to women. Indeed, women instead feel envy coming up within them, and that envy can turn quite ugly.

Likes: Peace, Freedom, the Lord, Christianity/Havoc, Chaos, Fear, Destruction, Fun, Adrenaline, Fire, Hatred
Dislikes: Satanists, Sinners, Criminals, War, Cowards/Peace, Religion, Piety, Compassion
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Nachfolgia wrote:Mind if I join this, Tomia?

Of course I don't!

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Tag.

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Nachfolgia wrote:Mind if I join this, Tomia?

Of course I don't!


Yo Tomia, mind of PC characters kill off established NPC villains?
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The Rebel Alliances wrote:
Tomia wrote:Of course I don't!


Yo Tomia, mind of PC characters kill off established NPC villains?


I'm only the Co-OP, but I'd assume that killing off established NPCs is a big no-no most of the time.
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Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
The Rebel Alliances wrote:
Yo Tomia, mind of PC characters kill off established NPC villains?


I'm only the Co-OP, but I'd assume that killing off established NPCs is a big no-no most of the time.


But what about that 'some of the time'? :roll:
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Sun Mar 18, 2018 10:40 pm

The Rebel Alliances wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
I'm only the Co-OP, but I'd assume that killing off established NPCs is a big no-no most of the time.


But what about that 'some of the time'? :roll:


Depends on what you want.
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Postby New Finnish Republic » Sun Mar 18, 2018 10:43 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
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But what about that 'some of the time'? :roll:


Depends on what you want.


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Postby Finland SSR » Mon Mar 19, 2018 11:12 am

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
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Yo Tomia, mind of PC characters kill off established NPC villains?


I'm only the Co-OP, but I'd assume that killing off established NPCs is a big no-no most of the time.

gaul did it
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Postby The Republic of Atria » Mon Mar 19, 2018 12:08 pm

Finland SSR wrote:
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
I'm only the Co-OP, but I'd assume that killing off established NPCs is a big no-no most of the time.

gaul did it


Gaul killed an NPC Neros made

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Finland SSR wrote:gaul did it


Gaul killed an NPC Neros made

Oh. That's weird. With how much Solar was hyped up, I could've sworn it was a pre-existing NPC.
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Mon Mar 19, 2018 12:55 pm

Finland SSR wrote:
The Republic of Atria wrote:
Gaul killed an NPC Neros made

Oh. That's weird. With how much Solar was hyped up, I could've sworn it was a pre-existing NPC.


Nope. Neros made him specifically to go kaput. If you look for him in the OP you won't find him.
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Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Finland SSR wrote:Oh. That's weird. With how much Solar was hyped up, I could've sworn it was a pre-existing NPC.


Nope. Neros made him specifically to go kaput. If you look for him in the OP you won't find him.

Okay then.
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So, I need some more stuff to post in after other things fell through.

I have a question, however. Does magic in this universe go far enough that there's demons that could possess somebody?
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Postby Zarkenis Ultima » Mon Mar 19, 2018 8:44 pm

Forest State wrote:So, I need some more stuff to post in after other things fell through.

I have a question, however. Does magic in this universe go far enough that there's demons that could possess somebody?


Yep. We have a character like that already, and another pending approval, so yes :P

There's a section in the OP detailing how myth and magic is treated in the RP, you might want to check it out, though the rules are vague enough to allow most things (some of the main reasons they're in place is to allow some form of 'all myths are true' and deal with potential overlap).
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Postby Forest State » Mon Mar 19, 2018 8:48 pm

Zarkenis Ultima wrote:
Forest State wrote:So, I need some more stuff to post in after other things fell through.

I have a question, however. Does magic in this universe go far enough that there's demons that could possess somebody?


Yep. We have a character like that already, and another pending approval, so yes :P

There's a section in the OP detailing how myth and magic is treated in the RP, you might want to check it out, though the rules are vague enough to allow most things (some of the main reasons they're in place is to allow some form of 'all myths are true' and deal with potential overlap).

Hmmm. Yeah, I read the magic section but I was wondering how far the stuff discussed there extended.

I'll probably come up with something else though if there's already a couple people doing that idea, might bring back my inventor from AoV.
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