Yekrenia wrote:-snip-
A few issues with this app. Firstly, while the character is indeed described as having the ability to suppress pain, most of the pain suppression power description actually deals with enhanced durability and not pain suppression. A minor issue, but still.
Additionally, all the points listed in the weaknesses section are very clearly limitations and not weaknesses. A painful past and personality traits don't quite count as weaknesses, and neither do things like colorblindness (they can be crippling limitations if severe enough, but not weaknesses).
Incidentally, the second and third points listed as limitations do count as weaknesses (while the former is formulated as a limitation, it does provide a clear way of defeating the character). I don't think the character's quite balanced if that's all, though, considering he can tank blades and gunfire alike with his skin and that the 'energy entities' that can stop him seem rather specific.
The rest (bio and such) seems fine.
The Knockout Gun Gals wrote:-snip-
Seems fine, accepted.






