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Anowa
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Postby Anowa » Mon Nov 20, 2017 2:02 pm

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Arengin Union wrote:Can't I just describe in detail how Yuri stabs a guy and opens up their insides???

Keep it PG and I really don't want a fucking PTSD episode

And I straight up dont want PTSD.

But yeah, "The smell of burnt sulfur and the cries of pain as rounds tore flesh asunder. Blood starting to repaint the hallway a macabre red." Was a phrase I used to describe a minigun opening up on a hallway full of Hostiles in a different RP. It didnt get taken down so try not to go too far.
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Postby Wysten » Mon Nov 20, 2017 2:15 pm

So NUC any update on that post and once we reach and the cliff and recon a bit who do I report to?
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Chewion
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Postby Chewion » Mon Nov 20, 2017 2:52 pm

Could someone help me on some appropriate accessories for a HK416 a medic would use?
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Hothnia
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Postby Hothnia » Mon Nov 20, 2017 2:55 pm

Chewion wrote:Could someone help me on some appropriate accessories for a HK416 a medic would use?



Do you mean attachments? Or medical gear?


Also, Brandon isn't a German name. Neither is Kaiser. Kaiser is taboo here. (At least in Ulm.)

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Chewion
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Postby Chewion » Mon Nov 20, 2017 3:45 pm

Hothnia wrote:
Chewion wrote:Could someone help me on some appropriate accessories for a HK416 a medic would use?



Do you mean attachments? Or medical gear?


Also, Brandon isn't a German name. Neither is Kaiser. Kaiser is taboo here. (At least in Ulm.)

American Father. Hence American first name. And Kaiser is still a surname in Germany just rare now.
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Chewion
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Postby Chewion » Mon Nov 20, 2017 3:46 pm

Hothnia wrote:
Chewion wrote:Could someone help me on some appropriate accessories for a HK416 a medic would use?



Do you mean attachments? Or medical gear?


Also, Brandon isn't a German name. Neither is Kaiser. Kaiser is taboo here. (At least in Ulm.)

And yeah I meant attachments. Had a brain fart I guess.
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Segral
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Postby Segral » Mon Nov 20, 2017 3:46 pm

Post'll be up tonight
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Nations United for Conquest
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Postby Nations United for Conquest » Mon Nov 20, 2017 4:07 pm

Hothnia wrote:-Snip-


I never heard either in Frankfurt or Hesse for that matter. But standardard stuff like some red dot reticle might be in order, foregrips [angled or not your prefrence], maybe a flashlight/laser combo if you're feelin' extra tactical

As far as I'm aware combat medics generally don't carry different gear in terms of weapon attachments [Meaning I don't think anything is required]

Wysten wrote:So NUC any update on that post and once we reach and the cliff and recon a bit who do I report to?


Gotta push back till tomorrow. Something came up with a close friend, and I nearly had to surrender a good part of my afternoon and likely evening as well.

For now, until the seperate Sniper Cell is created, you'd report to the fire team CO. Jack I believe
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Insaeldor
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Postby Insaeldor » Mon Nov 20, 2017 4:43 pm

Chewion wrote:Could someone help me on some appropriate accessories for a HK416 a medic would use?

Tbqh I don't see why your character would use the HK416. By this time the Bundeswehr would be intergrating the HK433 (wiki doesn't have a picture so here you go, essentially anything that is comparable with the 2324 rail system will fit on the rifles (both HK416 and HK433).

Heres a good Wikipedia article of Combat Medic equipment

Heres another article if the job and equipment of a Combat Medic
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The Central Shadow Nation
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Postby The Central Shadow Nation » Mon Nov 20, 2017 4:59 pm

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Full Name: Davyd Lysenko
Rank: OS-4 (Corporal/Junior Sergeant)
Gender: Male
Birthdate: 1/28/1993
Birthplace: Barysaw, Belarus
Nationality: Belarusian
Educational Degrees: Graduated Belarusian Secondary School at 18; Degree in Law from Gomel State University (5 years)
Description: Lysenko is 5'7 and weighs 155 pounds. He has no tattoos or other unnatural markings.
Criminal Background: N/A
Medical History:
Bullet graze (Underarm) (2019)
Stab wounds (Stomach 2x, arm) (2017)
Minor shrapnel wounds in back (2011)
Sprained Ankle (2011)
  • Bullet graze (Underarm)
    Stab wounds (Stomach 2x, arm)
Prior Service History: Belrusian State Security Agency (KGB)
  • Belrusian State Security Agency(KGB) 4 years
  • KGB Alpha Group (Special Forces) 3 years
  • 1 1/2 years in the Belarusian Army (Conscription)

Qualifications:
Belarusian Army Basic Training
Belarusian Army Extended Training
Special Tactics Training (KGB)
Medical School (KGB)
Crisis Negotiation
Bilingual (Fluent with Russian and Belarusian, proficient with English and Ukrainian)
HALO training
Multi Environmental training
Hostage Rescue
Building Breaching
Alpha Group Training (KGB)
Extended Spec-Ops Training with Belarusian Spetsnaz
Hand-to-hand combat
Airborne (rotary) insertion training

Operational Role: Medic/Rifleman
Psychological Evaluation: Lysenko is loyal to his allies and the people he trusts. He is defensive to insults or attacks against himself or his friends.
Biography: WIP

Equipment:
Primary Weapon: AK-74M
  • Obzor 1P63
  • Bayonet OR GP-34 grenade launcher
Secondary Weapon: PM Makarov
  • Red dot
Tertiary Weapon: 7 inch combat knife
Additional Munitions: Two flash grenades
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Dayganistan
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Postby Dayganistan » Mon Nov 20, 2017 5:06 pm

One day we'll have enough characters for a full combloc squad.
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Futrellia
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Postby Futrellia » Mon Nov 20, 2017 5:14 pm

I really can't think of anything that would equal two or more paragraphs, so I'll wait for my Squad Lead to post first. Also, what do we do about the two Vietnamese soldiers that are no longer with us? As well as the new players? I can create another operator if I need to.
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Arcanstotska
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Postby Arcanstotska » Mon Nov 20, 2017 5:17 pm

Tag. This seems cool.
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Insaeldor
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Postby Insaeldor » Mon Nov 20, 2017 5:21 pm

The Central Shadow Nation wrote:

Full Name: Davyd Lysenko
Rank: ?? (Would probably be OS-4, Corporal/Junior Sergeant if in the Belarusian Army)
Gender: Male
Birthdate: 1/28/1993
Birthplace: Barysaw, Belarus
Nationality: Belarusian
Educational Degrees: Graduated Belarusian Secondary School at 18; Degree in Law from Gomel State University (5 years)
Description: Lysenko is 5'7 and weighs 155 pounds. He has no tattoos or other unnatural markings.
Criminal Background: N/A
Medical History:
Bullet graze (Underarm) (2019)
Stab wounds (Stomach 2x, arm) (2017)
Minor shrapnel wounds in back (2011)
Sprained Ankle (2011)
  • Bullet graze (Underarm)
    Stab wounds (Stomach 2x, arm)
Prior Service History: Belrusian State Security Agency (KGB)
  • Belrusian State Security Agency(KGB) 4 years
  • KGB Alpha Group (Special Forces) 3 years
  • 1 1/2 years in the Belarusian Army (Conscription)

Qualifications:
Belarusian Army Basic Training
Belarusian Army Extended Training
Special Tactics Training (KGB)
Medical School (KGB)
Crisis Negotiation
Bilingual (Fluent with Russian and Belarusian, proficient with English and Ukrainian)
HALO training
Multi Environmental training
Hostage Rescue
Building Breaching
Alpha Group Training (KGB)
Extended Spec-Ops Training with Belarusian Spetsnaz
Hand-to-hand combat
Airborne (rotary) insertion training

Operational Role: Medic/Rifleman
Psychological Evaluation: WIP
Biography: WIP

Equipment:
Primary Weapon: AK-74M
  • Obzor 1P63
  • Bayonet OR GP-34 grenade launcher
Secondary Weapon: PM Makarov
  • Red dot
Tertiary Weapon: 7 inch combat knife
Additional Munitions: Two flash grenades

OS-4 would be called Mládshiy Serzhánt or Junior Sergeant in English.
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Insaeldor
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Postby Insaeldor » Mon Nov 20, 2017 5:23 pm

Futrellia wrote:I really can't think of anything that would equal two or more paragraphs, so I'll wait for my Squad Lead to post first. Also, what do we do about the two Vietnamese soldiers that are no longer with us? As well as the new players? I can create another operator if I need to.

Anowa usually has some creative ways to handle these things. The two Vietnamese guys will probably die and Anowa will figure out how to handle the new guys if they are accepted.
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Futrellia
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Postby Futrellia » Mon Nov 20, 2017 5:26 pm

Insaeldor wrote:
Futrellia wrote:I really can't think of anything that would equal two or more paragraphs, so I'll wait for my Squad Lead to post first. Also, what do we do about the two Vietnamese soldiers that are no longer with us? As well as the new players? I can create another operator if I need to.

Anowa usually has some creative ways to handle these things. The two Vietnamese guys will probably die and Anowa will figure out how to handle the new guys if they are accepted.


Looks like Vietnam needs to step up their training. This is gonna look awful for their military.

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The Central Shadow Nation
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Postby The Central Shadow Nation » Mon Nov 20, 2017 5:29 pm

Insaeldor wrote:OS-4 would be called Mládshiy Serzhánt or Junior Sergeant in English.


I put the question marks there because I dont know Belarusian KGB ranks.
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Postby Futrellia » Mon Nov 20, 2017 5:31 pm

The Central Shadow Nation wrote:
Insaeldor wrote:OS-4 would be called Mládshiy Serzhánt or Junior Sergeant in English.


I put the question marks there because I dont know Belarusian KGB ranks.

Probably classified. I would just use the Army rank.
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Segral
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Postby Segral » Mon Nov 20, 2017 5:42 pm

Turns out, post may have to wait. Will get it up as soon as school's out tomorrow.
yea bro idk

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Dayganistan
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Postby Dayganistan » Mon Nov 20, 2017 5:48 pm

The Central Shadow Nation wrote:
Insaeldor wrote:OS-4 would be called Mládshiy Serzhánt or Junior Sergeant in English.


I put the question marks there because I dont know Belarusian KGB ranks.

Soviet KGB used the same rank system as the army, I imagine it would be the same.
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Chewion
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Postby Chewion » Mon Nov 20, 2017 6:02 pm

Chewion wrote:

Full Name: Brandon Kaiser
Rank: Stabsunteroffizier (Sergeant)
Gender: Male
Birthdate: April 12th, 1992
Birthplace: Munich, Germany
Nationality: German
Educational Degrees: Bachelor's in History with specialization in Military tactics and history.
Description: 6' 2", 210 lbs, green eyes
Criminal Background:
  • none
Medical History:
  • No major illnesses or surgeries.
Prior Service History:
  • 1 tour to Afghanistan in 2014-2015
Qualifications: Abzeichen für Leistungen im Truppendienst, Schützenschnur, Einzelkämpferabzeichen, HALO/HAHO, mountain warfare, desert warfare, winter warfare, Asymmetrical Warfare, Counterinsurgency, Scuba Certified, Survival Skills, Jungle Warfare, amphibious warfare, Combat Medic certified. Fluent in Spanish, German, Russian, Mandarin, English, French, Arabic, and Portuguese.
Operational Role: Combat Medic
Psychological Evaluation: Kaiser exhibits a high moral standard and keen sense of right and wrong but appears to be able to disregard this in cases which warrant no clear morality however doing so appears to hang with him for sometime after. Kaiser is able to make split second decisions without much hesitation but afterwards he sometimes questions his choice when he is in an area he can do so safely. Overall I believe he is of sound mind and able to handle himself in combat effectively.
Biography: Brandon Kaiser was born in Munich, Germany to an American Military father and a German Military mother. A year after his birth his mother left the military and the family moved to the US for three years until Brandon was 4. Then his father left the military and the family moved back to Germany again living in Munich where his father started a business. By the time Brandon was 10 his parents were quite wealthy and Brandon enjoyed a nice childhood. After graduating high school Brandon enlisted in the Heer Reserves and attended Heidelberg University obtaining a History degree. Following that, at age 21, Brandon was moved to Active Duty and sent to Afghanistan. After coming back at age 23 he applied for the KSK and, after training, he passed the tests and was allowed into the KSK then aged 24. Since then he hasn’t been deployed but continued training until he was selected for the UN Task Force.

Equipment:
  • Standard Medic Gear
    Ski Mask when warranted
    Standard combat gear
    Grapple when needed
Primary Weapon: HK433
  • Red Dot Reticle
    Laser dot
    Flashlight
Secondary Weapon: H&K USP 45 Tactical
  • Flashlight
    Laser dot
Tertiary Weapon: Combat Knife
Additional Munitions:
[list][*]2x Frag grenade
2x Flashbang/list]


How’s it looking? Does it need anything added to it like more bio?
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Insaeldor
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Postby Insaeldor » Mon Nov 20, 2017 6:36 pm

Chewion wrote:
Chewion wrote:

Full Name: Brandon Kaiser
Rank: Stabsunteroffizier (Sergeant)
Gender: Male
Birthdate: April 12th, 1992
Birthplace: Munich, Germany
Nationality: German
Educational Degrees: Bachelor's in History with specialization in Military tactics and history.
Description: 6' 2", 210 lbs, green eyes
Criminal Background:
  • none
Medical History:
  • No major illnesses or surgeries.
Prior Service History:
  • 1 tour to Afghanistan in 2014-2015
Qualifications: Abzeichen für Leistungen im Truppendienst, Schützenschnur, Einzelkämpferabzeichen, HALO/HAHO, mountain warfare, desert warfare, winter warfare, Asymmetrical Warfare, Counterinsurgency, Scuba Certified, Survival Skills, Jungle Warfare, amphibious warfare, Combat Medic certified. Fluent in Spanish, German, Russian, Mandarin, English, French, Arabic, and Portuguese.
Operational Role: Combat Medic
Psychological Evaluation: Kaiser exhibits a high moral standard and keen sense of right and wrong but appears to be able to disregard this in cases which warrant no clear morality however doing so appears to hang with him for sometime after. Kaiser is able to make split second decisions without much hesitation but afterwards he sometimes questions his choice when he is in an area he can do so safely. Overall I believe he is of sound mind and able to handle himself in combat effectively.
Biography: Brandon Kaiser was born in Munich, Germany to an American Military father and a German Military mother. A year after his birth his mother left the military and the family moved to the US for three years until Brandon was 4. Then his father left the military and the family moved back to Germany again living in Munich where his father started a business. By the time Brandon was 10 his parents were quite wealthy and Brandon enjoyed a nice childhood. After graduating high school Brandon enlisted in the Heer Reserves and attended Heidelberg University obtaining a History degree. Following that, at age 21, Brandon was moved to Active Duty and sent to Afghanistan. After coming back at age 23 he applied for the KSK and, after training, he passed the tests and was allowed into the KSK then aged 24. Since then he hasn’t been deployed but continued training until he was selected for the UN Task Force.

Equipment:
  • Standard Medic Gear
    Ski Mask when warranted
    Standard combat gear
    Grapple when needed
Primary Weapon: HK433
  • Red Dot Reticle
    Laser dot
    Flashlight
Secondary Weapon: H&K USP 45 Tactical
  • Flashlight
    Laser dot
Tertiary Weapon: Combat Knife
Additional Munitions:
[list][*]2x Frag grenade
2x Flashbang/list]


How’s it looking? Does it need anything added to it like more bio?

I'd say add more in. It reads more like a brief summary rather than a biography. What where his experiences in Afghanistan? Why did he want to join the KSK? What did he do in the KSK? You spent more describing his family than you did his military career and that's the whole reason he's here in the first place.
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Hansdeltania
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Left-wing Utopia

Postby Hansdeltania » Mon Nov 20, 2017 7:00 pm

Out of town for the next few days. I doubt that I can post.
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Anowa
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Postby Anowa » Mon Nov 20, 2017 7:01 pm

For ease I'm just converting the native ranks of the operators to that of the US Army, since that's usually where one is usually redirected, and since a majority of us are from the US.
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Nations United for Conquest
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Postby Nations United for Conquest » Mon Nov 20, 2017 7:10 pm

Insaeldor wrote:I'd say add more in. It reads more like a brief summary rather than a biography. What where his experiences in Afghanistan? Why did he want to join the KSK? What did he do in the KSK? You spent more describing his family than you did his military career and that's the whole reason he's here in the first place.


Additionally, if I may add some insight:

A bachelors takes 4 years to achieve, three with accellerated courses, which some schools don't offer. As such, how can he have a Bachelors degree, yet be sent to active duty and deployed at age 21, his third year of college? Consider adding something about attending classes after returning, or edit your bio.

Now, while I don't want to doubt he could make KSK at age 23, two years and one tour isn't a lot of experience. I would also like to point out that training cycles of the KSK are two-three years, not one.

A final note, it would take about three and a half years to learn basic fluentcy in all the langugues you mentioned, if he practiced each one for five whole hours a day. Given your character has only been off duty, not accounting for the corrections you need to make to your bio's timeline, he would have barely had enough time. While no impossible, I don't know how realistic this is. Co-ops/OP?
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Leader - Prime Minister Alaro Kuhn
Capital - Gesno
Population - 325,581,223
Currency - Krot ($)
Roleplay Information
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TBA FE RP - PLANNED

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