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What does "Rank" mean?

ASMRLAND wrote:What does "Rank" mean?

It's explained in the opening post in the application section.

However, you also have to change your powers up to not control the powers of others. I don't know how your guy doesn't accidentally blow himself up, either. You could use a better description, or just a picture, and your bio also is formatted badly(every sentence shouldn't be a different line).

Khasinkonia wrote:Posted a response to Reina, Charlia.

PS: Could I get Amadayama added to the next roster update? Thanks.

...There's a problem...

Reina's not having a night terror. All of that just happened. She's literally on the floor in some random hallway or another holding a corpse.


So yeah...

Charlia wrote:

Khasinkonia wrote:Posted a response to Reina, Charlia.

PS: Could I get Amadayama added to the next roster update? Thanks.

...There's a problem...

Reina's not having a night terror. All of that just happened. She's literally on the floor in some random hallway or another holding a corpse.


So yeah...

Oh. Well I’ll have a different response up later then. I should have known that was literal. XD

Student Application

CHARACTER INFO

Name: "I'm called Atlas, Omega, but you can just call me Chris."

Age: "Haha... You guys expected me to count."

Gender: "I'm a guy, obviously."

Previous Residence: "I'm from Los Angeles, California."



Sexuality: "I swing toward the other team, but I'm not too interested in you humans."

Equipment:
"I've got a fun little box of toys."

• A twin set of modified Zeliskas, for when problems take a bit more than a super-punch.
• A couple sets of clothes, nothing much.
• A pack of gum.
• First Aid Kit
• Emergency Repair Nanomachines

Rank: Silver

Ability/Abilities:

"I've got some good ol' tricks up my sleeve."

Enhanced Endodermis - Laced with a nano-material and coupled with internal shield capacitors, his body is capable of withstanding a number of blows.

Overclocking - While he may not be a machine, aside from the few minor enhancements he has been blessed with, he has a peculiar ability to enhance his intelligence, speed, and strength at will. A strange, colorful, energy has been seen to Arc across his body, even more so as he increases the multiplier.

Artificial Overlay - Of his other enhancements, his vision is overlayed with with information about his surroundings, current status, and whatever else he is able to access. This is coupled with a largely inactive AI known as Atlas, which in the past had been in synergy with his consciousness, that preforms these dynamic scans and updates.

Technorganic Physiology - Due to the series of augmentations and genetic changes made to his body, he's naturally faster and stronger than the average man, along with aid from a series of neural enhancements that boost his capabilities further.

The Omega - His systems run at full capacity, and his mind merges with the Atlas AI. A nano armor shell is grown across his body to enhance his durability, provide increased powered assistance to motion, and aid in sensory input. With his consciousness and AI melded, he is capable of performing complex calculations and movements in a flash, improving his movement speed, skill, and combat capabilities.

Flaws:

- The shielding can only withstand so many consecutive blows before it needs to recharge, nor can it withstand much past a .30 cal round.

- Overclocking can be easily withstood for low multipliers, but it can quickly cause harm if pushed too far.

- The Omega only lasts the duration of a battle, and it's a one-time thing until the next repair job is done due to the accelerated degradation of his body.

-EMPs are a bitch.

Personality: Even while he's not a machine, he is still cold. Naturally, he's selfish and focused almost entirely on himself due to his current condition. Survival is a tricky game, and he plans to stand until the universe fades before him.

Biography: He was the preceding creation to Pierce, once known as the Omega. His purpose was to follow orders and push the agenda of those who created him, and he was built to do just that. A near flawless killer, an assassin, a technorganic lifeform more capable than any of the military.

Eventually, however, he became outdated, tossed aside to fade into the darkness as The Alpha began production. The pinnacle of their research, a war machine of genocide, a god.

Rather than resenting her, he saw use of their next victim. He took her under his wing, standing as a friend in her time of need, helping her work through the pain and horrifying changes. But, he was also manipulating her, feeding her anger and hatred.

Then she snapped, and he was free.

Khasinkonia wrote:

Charlia wrote:...There's a problem...

Reina's not having a night terror. All of that just happened. She's literally on the floor in some random hallway or another holding a corpse.


So yeah...

Oh. Well I’ll have a different response up later then. I should have known that was literal. XD

It's more fun that way.

Forest State wrote:

ASMRLAND wrote:What does "Rank" mean?

It's explained in the opening post in the application section.

However, you also have to change your powers up to not control the powers of others. I don't know how your guy doesn't accidentally blow himself up, either. You could use a better description, or just a picture, and your bio also is formatted badly(every sentence shouldn't be a different line).

Very, very sorry. All updated & fixed.

Charlia wrote:

Khasinkonia wrote:Oh. Well I’ll have a different response up later then. I should have known that was literal. XD

It's more fun that way.

That should be better.

Khasinkonia wrote:

Charlia wrote:It's more fun that way.

That should be better.

Much better! Thank you!

Sky-TheLandOfNekos wrote:-snip-

Accepted.

ASMRLAND wrote:-snip-

I see you changed the powers, but how does the weakness work? As in, how does getting cut cause him to die?

So, am i accepted?

Are the abilities illusion manipulation, and Tactical Analysis make a lazy character broken. I am making a character for this RP who is a mix of Shikamaru, Kisuke, and myself. I just wanted to know if there are limitations I need to be aware of.

Kingdom of Tunisia wrote:So, am i accepted?

Yes. I'm still not sure 100% how the power actually works but it doesn't look overpowered. I'll have the character list updated tonight.

BlackDeath27 wrote:Are the abilities illusion manipulation, and Tactical Analysis make a lazy character broken. I am making a character for this RP who is a mix of Shikamaru, Kisuke, and myself. I just wanted to know if there are limitations I need to be aware of.

Those are both fine abilities.

Forest State wrote:

Sky-TheLandOfNekos wrote:-snip-

Accepted.

ASMRLAND wrote:-snip-

I see you changed the powers, but how does the weakness work? As in, how does getting cut cause him to die?

The type of poison can cause harm to the skin, eventually killing. So, if you get a cut/bruise he will die.

ASMRLAND wrote:

Forest State wrote:Accepted.

I see you changed the powers, but how does the weakness work? As in, how does getting cut cause him to die?

The type of poison can cause harm to the skin, eventually killing. So, if you get a cut/bruise he will die.

I see. I don't really have too much of a problem with the app, but before I accept you, I just want to make sure that you're aware that it will be impossible for him to avoid getting cut during the RP. Too much combat, and even without that, things still happen by accident.

So the dude's like 'I could put six rounds in any of you before you even move' and Lucia's just like 'uh huh yeah sure good luck with that'

Forest State wrote:

ASMRLAND wrote:
The type of poison can cause harm to the skin, eventually killing. So, if you get a cut/bruise he will die.

I see. I don't really have too much of a problem with the app, but before I accept you, I just want to make sure that you're aware that it will be impossible for him to avoid getting cut during the RP. Too much combat, and even without that, things still happen by accident.

I know. He won't die immediately, so he CAN be saved

ASMRLAND wrote:

Forest State wrote:I see. I don't really have too much of a problem with the app, but before I accept you, I just want to make sure that you're aware that it will be impossible for him to avoid getting cut during the RP. Too much combat, and even without that, things still happen by accident.

I know. He won't die immediately, so he CAN be saved

just rephrasing the inevitability of him getting stung by a bee while being outdoors.

ASMRLAND wrote:

Forest State wrote:I see. I don't really have too much of a problem with the app, but before I accept you, I just want to make sure that you're aware that it will be impossible for him to avoid getting cut during the RP. Too much combat, and even without that, things still happen by accident.

I know. He won't die immediately, so he CAN be saved

Alright, accepted, no promises that he'll make it through the first couple of battles and/or hard training though.

Forest State wrote:

Kractero wrote:I'm uninspired.

Don't feel like bringing back any of your old characters? I could suggest a few ideas.

I'm not a fan of most of them anymore, and as of right now if I had to pick some power it would be a very humble and probably unimaginably impractical power.

I still require a room mate for Tohopka....

Faal Lot Himdah wrote:I still require a room mate for Tohopka....

Yeah, sure, have him room with Diz. I'll just pretend that all my interactions with Toby were with Tohopka.

Alright, so some general things.

1) Who still has no room mate? None of my characters have one, but I don't mind making them shack up together.

2) Who is free to talk to? I know Triss was supposed to talk to Candace, but it looks like Rudy's doing that now. Val is also open.

To Forest, I ask:

1) Out of the 6 pages of IC, what posts actually matter for me?

2) Before Anton agreed to go on this mission, he'd ask what they were retrieving, what security measures they were facing, and how they planed on getting in and out. How would Wesley respond?

Kractero wrote:

Forest State wrote:Don't feel like bringing back any of your old characters? I could suggest a few ideas.

I'm not a fan of most of them anymore, and as of right now if I had to pick some power it would be a very humble and probably unimaginably impractical power.

If you want Val you can take her. Otherwise, do food manipulation. That's a fun, humble power.

Granis wrote:

Faal Lot Himdah wrote:I still require a room mate for Tohopka....

Yeah, sure, have him room with Diz. I'll just pretend that all my interactions with Toby were with Tohopka.

You shouldn't do that. Tohopka is a different character than Toby. So the interaction would be different. Just retcon that interaction and we'll start from scratch.