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The Irish County of the Beare-Mor
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Postby The Irish County of the Beare-Mor » Wed Aug 23, 2017 7:22 am

The Valyria Empire wrote:Tag, I hope that one spot isn't reserved.

If not, I can wait.

Hmm. Really ought to put something down.

Since we got 2 new people interested, if the app currently being submitted is going through, I may allow you 2. I'll see how it goes.
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Postby Jiyon » Sat Aug 26, 2017 11:59 am

The Irish County of the Beare-Mor wrote:
Jiyon wrote:Name: Sachin Pujara
Age: 14
Appearance: Tall, skinny, frisky brown hair
Gender: Male
Camp Attended: Camp Halfblood
Years at Camp: 3 years
Godly Parent: Hermes
Position: Camper
Abilities: Can speak over 20 languages fluently, is very fast, agile, intelligent, cunning, good at stealing things, skillful with a short sword
Weaknesses: Is not trusted fully by his friends, hates his parents, has fear of not being able to protect his friends, has a tendency to trust the lies of evil
Equipment: Flying shoes gifted by Hermes, a magical lyre that can make people freeze in its beauty, an invisibility helmet gifted to him by Hades for stealing Hades some gold from Zeus
Personality: He's an anti hero, can go against his friends wishes sometimes for the greater good

Biography: Sachin never got to meet his father. His mother was abusive and was almost never home, preferring to be out partying with friends and doing illegal things. Sachin was exemplary at school, but, due to his troublemaking tendencies and ADHD, was soon expelled.

One day, at his new school, he spotted a large, snake like monster with countless heads. He'd read the myths before, but he'd never actually believed in them! He was so shocked that he didn't notice the Hydra enter the school and snatch his best friend, Harriet, in front of his eyes.

Suddenly, he impulsively lunged towards the Hydra. He grabbed a heavy book and tried to crush its heads with it, but to no avail. Just as the monster was closing in on him, he saw someone burn its heads. He blacked out.

When he woke up, he found himself on a front porch. He could see a lake, and a deep thicket. And he saw many kids kneeling in front of him. That's when he realized later: he was a demigod. A son of Hermes.

Sachin was known for being a brave, hot-headed and intelligent demigod at Camp. He was renowned for his exemplary sword and linguistic skills. As a result, he used to co-lead on many quests. However, everyone knew he was prone to doing naughty deeds for other gods. For example, he used to be on very good terms with Hades, because while on a quest, he'd gone to the underworld, where Hades requested that Sachin steal some magic gold which would provide the King of the Underworld with light in his dark realm. However, this gold had to be stolen from Zeus, from Olympus itself. Sachin, fortunately, was heading to Olympus for his Quest anyway, and, due to his expertise at stealing things, stole the gold from Zeus's throne. Only Hestia saw, but she never revealed to Zeus that Sachin stole it. Hades, happy with Sachin, gifted him with a helmet that would make the wearer invisible for 30 minutes.

Because of his countless successes on Quests, Hermes, proud of his son, gifted Sachin with two gifts: a lyre (because Hermes created it), which produced such beautiful music that it made people freeze for 5 minutes when listening, and a pair of flying Air Jordans.

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From reading it over, it seems that your character seems a bit overpowered. How efficient is the invisibility? And the Lyre, does it affect *everybody*? And if he has been at camp for only 3 years, how many quests could he have been on?


Ok, here goes my final try to appease you:

Name: Sachin Pujara
Age: 14
Appearance: Tall, skinny, frisky brown hair
Gender: Male
Camp Attended: Camp Halfblood
Years at Camp: 3 years
Godly Parent: Hermes
Position: Camper
Abilities: Can speak over 20 languages fluently, is very fast, agile, intelligent, cunning, good at stealing things, skillful with a short sword
Weaknesses: Is not trusted fully by his friends, hates his parents, has fear of not being able to protect his friends, has a tendency to trust the lies of evil
Equipment: Flying shoes gifted by Hermes, a magical lyre that can make people freeze in its beauty, an invisibility helmet gifted to him by Hades for stealing Hades some gold from Zeus
Personality: He's an anti hero, can go against his friends wishes sometimes for the greater good

Biography: Sachin never got to meet his father. His mother was abusive and was almost never home, preferring to be out partying with friends and doing illegal things. Sachin was exemplary at school, but, due to his troublemaking tendencies and ADHD, was soon expelled.

One day, at his new school, he spotted a large, snake like monster with countless heads. He'd read the myths before, but he'd never actually believed in them! He was so shocked that he didn't notice the Hydra enter the school and snatch his best friend, Harriet, in front of his eyes.

Suddenly, he impulsively lunged towards the Hydra. He grabbed a heavy book and tried to crush its heads with it, but to no avail. Just as the monster was closing in on him, he saw someone burn its heads. He blacked out.

When he woke up, he found himself on a front porch. He could see a lake, and a deep thicket. And he saw many kids kneeling in front of him. That's when he realized later: he was a demigod. A son of Hermes.

Sachin was known for being a brave, hot-headed and intelligent demigod at Camp. He was renowned for his exemplary sword and linguistic skills. As a result, he used to co-lead on the few quests he'd been on. However, everyone knew he was prone to doing naughty deeds for other gods. For example, he used to be on very good terms with Hades, because while on a quest, he'd gone to the underworld, where Hades requested that Sachin steal some magic gold which would provide the King of the Underworld with light in his dark realm. However, this gold had to be stolen from Zeus, from Olympus itself. Sachin, fortunately, was heading to Olympus for his Quest anyway, and, due to his expertise at stealing things, stole the gold from Zeus's throne. Only Hestia saw, but she never revealed to Zeus that Sachin stole it. Hades, happy with Sachin, gifted him with a helmet that would make the wearer invisible for 30 minutes only, even to gods, unless those gods were Athena, Zeus, or Hades himself.

Because of his success at camp, Hermes, proud of his son, gifted Sachin with two gifts: a lyre (because Hermes created it), which produces such beautiful music that it makes people freeze for 5 minutes when listening, except for gods, monsters and children of Appolloo, and a pair of flying Air Jordans.
Last edited by Jiyon on Sat Aug 26, 2017 12:00 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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