United Christian wrote:Tallahassee News Station wrote:
Hey, welcome and all.
So, basically we've got a major glut of big, tall, strong, young, super-successful firebrands who don't toe the party line, raised in poverty, but super intelligent and effective anyways, to the point that its kind of a meme.
I'd really suggest tuning all of those things down, a lot.
Prolieum reviewed my original draft and he said that I need to extremely tone down the sudden come up. Which I did, he's part of a city council and a former state department officer. How is that super successful... He's a member of the progressive party, so he's right on the party line. And if you look at the weaknesses you'd see he's a bit mental. I've hardly even held a political office.
That doesn't address any of the concerns Tallahassee noted.