Pandora's Box: A Multiverse RP (reboot) OOC

[Brusia]

Okay, I'll agree to the energy depletes every time he uses this kind of abilities.

Alright than, please edit your app to include the changes we discussed.

[The New Byzantine II]

Torii, is one of your characters shooting Yuriko?

Sorry, I was a bit confused there.

[Rostavykhan]

Torii, is one of your characters shooting Yuriko?

Sorry, I was a bit confused there.

Oh! heavens no. Dima has her pistol drawn, but isn't shooting. Torii has her hand on her holster, but is surprised/confused about the sudden uproar. Katya is scolding her.

[Brusia]

Couple of things about your last post New Byzantine: First, once again, please refrain from posting OOC content in the IC; that's what this thread is for. Second, you are neither the OP nor a Co-op, so you don't get to determine what effect your attacks would have on other players. You can make suggestions for those effects which can be discussed (which is yet another reason that sort of content should be posted here in the OOC and not in the IC) but decisions that impact other PCs need to be discussed with the RPers of those PCs, or at the very least approved by me or a Co-op. To do otherwise is borderline godmodding.

[Rostavykhan]

Posted, since I didn't get a "no" or anything when I asked...

If I should redact or edit anything or hold off, just tell me.

[Brusia]

We are now officially starting our return to the Hub (if you wanted your characters to return on the Ebon Hawk, feel free to assume they boarded before the ship started heading back). Since the next universe will be a shorter side-universe the downtime on the Hub will be much shorter this time around, so now would be a good time to finish up any new character introductions on the Hub

[Naval Monte]

We are now officially starting our return to the Hub (if you wanted your characters to return on the Ebon Hawk, feel free to assume they boarded before the ship started heading back). Since the next universe will be a shorter side-universe the downtime on the Hub will be much shorter this time around, so now would be a good time to finish up any new character introductions on the Hub

Same thing can be done with the Morgana. Just say you boarded a shuttle before it left and are now in the Morgana.

[Osnil Returns]

I know my posting has been spotty, but I intend to change that as soon as I get through some tests this week.

[Talchyon]

Sometimes I think this RP is turning into a contest between Naval Monte and Demincia, as to who can respond the most. With a smattering of other people in there too.

[Rostavykhan]

Sometimes I think this RP is turning into a contest between Naval Monte and Demincia, as to who can respond the most. With a smattering of other people in there too.

Lol.

I would post more, but...I wanted to give the other players a chance to reply before I sent out my characters in pursuit...still waiting T.T

[Rostavykhan]

Fugit. Posted, will change something if need be. Anyways, Dima is after Yuriko, Katya said hello to Gaster/Skelingtones, Torii got sidetracked/discouraged and then saw the ships returning - specifically the Connie.

EDIT: I can stick to just posting with Torsiedelle if it's less confusing.

[Naval Monte]

Sometimes I think this RP is turning into a contest between Naval Monte and Demincia, as to who can respond the most. With a smattering of other people in there too.

Yeah I was stuck without internet access for a few days so when I have access again I got excited.

[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

I plan on making an Imperial Fleet faction, could I have a Super Star Destroyer?

[Brusia]

I plan on making an Imperial Fleet faction, could I have a Super Star Destroyer?

No, an SSD would be vastly overpowered at this stage of the RP. Better stick with an Imp-I or Imp-II class Star Destroyer.

[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

I plan on making an Imperial Fleet faction, could I have a Super Star Destroyer?

No, an SSD would be vastly overpowered at this stage of the RP. Better stick with an Imp-I or Imp-II class Star Destroyer.

How about a Praetor II Class Battlecruiser?

[Brusia]

No, an SSD would be vastly overpowered at this stage of the RP. Better stick with an Imp-I or Imp-II class Star Destroyer.

How about a Praetor II Class Battlecruiser?

No, an ISD would be the largest Imperial ship I'd allow at this stage of the RP.

[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

How about a Praetor II Class Battlecruiser?

No, an ISD would be the largest Imperial ship I'd allow at this stage of the RP.

Alright, how big would you allow my fleet to be? (He’s going to be an Admiral)
I was planning on about 15 more star destroyers, but that’s up to you

[Brusia]

Alright, how big would you allow my fleet to be? (He’s going to be an Admiral)
I was planning on about 15 more star destroyers, but that’s up to you

At this stage of the RP, highly advanced civilizations shouldn't have access to large numbers of very powerful vessels (take a look at the ships in the other faction apps for reference). The most I'd allow is for one Star Destroyer (if he's an Admiral, you could just say his ship was separated from the rest of his fleet when he encountered the Quantum Conduit, if that helps to explain it).

[Brusia]

Also, the new poll options are now up in the discord, and in the Next Universe tab of the OP. Unfortunately, the Co-ops and I are not familiar with most of the universes which were suggested, and as we're hoping to do something other than the usual hack-and-slash for the next universe, familiarity with the lore is more important than usual. The suggestions that were made will be retained for the next time we go to a hack-and-slash universe, but for now the poll will be a pretty short one.

[Naval Monte]

Also, the new poll options are now up in the discord, and in the Next Universe tab of the OP. Unfortunately, the Co-ops and I are not familiar with most of the universes which were suggested, and as we're hoping to do something other than the usual hack-and-slash for the next universe, familiarity with the lore is more important than usual. The suggestions that were made will be retained for the next time we go to a hack-and-slash universe, but for now the poll will be a pretty short one.

Yeah we wish to bring in more variety to the missions being done because we don't want this RP to become stale and repetitive.

[The Imperial Warglorian Empire]

Apologies if this isn't the best of quality, but I ran out of inspiration

Character Name: Venn Kellic/Elax Kun

Gender: Male

Appearance:
Apperance (Imagine wearing Imperial Admiral Uniform and having Amber/Yellow eyes)
Inquisitor Outfit
Admiral Uniform

Species: Human

Age: 39

Universe of origin: Star Wars

Alignment: Lawful Neutral

Abilities: Standard Lightside Force Powers (push, pull, etc), Force Lightning, Force Choke, Lightsaber trained in mainly Form II Makashi, Form V Djem So and Form VII Juyo

Weaknesses: Despite years of self-training and self-teaching, he still hasn't officially been trained beyond an Inquisitor (who are mainly supposed to hunt lower ranking Jedi rather than become full Sith themselves), and he was expelled from the Order while he was a padawan

Personality: Venn seems like a serious person, but really he's actually rather nice and supportive, he respects his men and cares for them like a family, and is willing to do for those he cares about.

Noteworthy Equipment: Blaster Pistol, Inquisitor Double-Bladed Spinning Lightsaber

Backstory (minimum of one paragraph): Kellic was born in 35 BBY as Elax Kun, a member of the Jedi Order, taken from his parents at a young age as per the usual. He would be trained in the ways of the Jedi, finding himself to have a higher level of force adaptation than his other peers, as well as becoming very efficient in lightsaber combat, finding the attention of the higher ranking Jedi. He would become a Padawan at the age of 13, and at the age of 14 would fight in the Clone Wars. However, he would become more interested in the Force, and eventually stumbled across the Dark Side, studying it in secret. Towards the end of the Clone Wars at the age of 16, Kun would be expelled from the Jedi Order after his delvings into the Dark Side were discovered. He would be spared the massacre at the Jedi Temple and Order 66

After finding out about the huntings of Jedi, Kun would change alter his appearance with surgery as well as making himself look older, forging false papers, and changing his name to Venn Kellic, an identity he still prefers today. He would join the Imperial Officer Academy, one of the reasons is because the Imperial Army wasn't exactly on the best of terms with Sith like Vader as he had learned via rumours, and that perhaps there were still some soldiers who sympathised with the Jedi. He would at first become a Lieutenant and would become quite known in his local area because of his competency and efficiency. He would later be promoted to the rank of Commander, and be given command of a Tartan Patrol Cruiser, this is when Kellic would really become prominent. He started using his lone Tartan to lead anti-piracy operations, liberating an entire sector of a major pirate problem that had been plaguing it for years. He would also go to different planets and crush different black market activities, liberating them of corruption. He became known as a very reliable and incorruptible soldier in the Navy.

Because of his services, in 13 BBY he'd be promoted to Captain, but before he could transfer to his new ship, he'd encounter Darth Vader. Vader would sense his force sensitivity. The official story is that Kellic had been transferred to some sort of secret project, unofficially he had been captured by Darth Vader. Vader eventually forced Kellic to join the Sith Inquisitors, instead of outright killing him because of hearing about his delving into the Dark Side when he had been Anakin Skywalker. Kellic would spend 3 brutal years of training in the Inquisitors, before finally being sent off. He would spend time going on missions hunting rebels and suspected Jedi for the next 5 years, quickly rising through the ranks of the Inquisitorius, and quickly becoming one of it's most effective, gaining a slight bit of favour from Darth Vader.

But throughout that time, Venn still held some of the beliefs of the Jedi Order, making him more Grey (in terms of alignment anyway) then completely dark. In 5 BBY, he would be assigned by Vader to start hunting down Rebels and he was given a Star Destroyer, and he would return to his identity as Captain Kellic because Vader found that Imperials were more likely to listen to other Imperials then Sith better. Kellic returned to active duty in the Imperial Navy commanding the newly named Malak, named after the Sith Lord that had reigned thousands of years ago, mainly to appease Darth Vader.

He would start retraining the crew to turn them into an efficient fighting machine, and he would also resume his now even more successful Anti-Corruption and Anti-Piracy Operations as a side objective. His original objective to hunt down the Rebellion was also very successful, as he destroyed several major Rebel Cells in the next few years. Later, Kellic would get mortally wounded while he was investigating a supposed Rebel Base and it self-destructed. Vader, not wanting to lose one of his most efficient Inquisitors if any case anything like that happened again, assigned veteran Mandalorian ISB Agent Kal Ordo as Kellic's 'Bodyguard.' The two would eventually become friends. Also during this time, and throughout his entire career, Kellic would hold a sort of decency when dealing with his enemies, keeping deals and giving mercy to his enemies. Most of the time, however, this had to be done in secret, and there were several occasions where Kellic had to do some rather merciless actions, so to not gain suspicion from Lord Vader and other less reputable Imperials (remember Uncle Owen and Aunt Beru, ya, he did that).

Kellic would eventually interact with Vader more in 2 BBY, in which after the death of his secret apprentice Galen Marek, Vader would start drawing up contingency plans, one of which was to make Kellic his (probably temporary) apprentice if the time was needed. Kellic was a prime choice because he was considered to be one of the best in the ranks of the Inquisitors, and has been known to absorb knowledge very quickly. Even though his training has technically been completed, to prepare him in case he wanted to take Kellic as his (again, most likely temporary) apprentice, Vader started giving Kellic additional limited training, only enough so that if Vader did take him as an apprentice, he could easily finish his training.

This, along with Kellic's influence in the Imperial Navy that allowed him to secretly get knowledge and artefacts of the Jedi and Sith (ironically, some from the Black Market), made Kellic more powerful than the average Inquisitor. Eventually, 0 BBY/ABY would come, and the Death Star be destroyed. During the Rebel evacuation of Yavin IV, many of the transports and ships that attempted to escape were captured or destroyed by Kellic. This, along with his continuous service to the Empire, convinced higher Imperial Officers (along with some persuasion by Vader) to promote Kellic to Admiral. Vader would also be pleased with Kellic's progress, and rewarded him with a squadron of TIE Defenders, and giving him a prototype TIE Defender Elite as his personal starfighter.

With his newly found increased influence, Kellic was able to increase his personal efforts, including reforms in his fleet, expanding his operations to more sectors, cleaning sector after sector of the scum of the galaxy, capturing many highly wanted criminals and terrorists. All of this would make Kellic seem like the ideal Imperial, and a loyal officer who stood up for the ideals the Empire should be standing for.

All this would change in 4 ABY, when the Battle of Endor would conclude in the death of both Sidious and Vader. Kellic would attempt to defend the remnants of the Empire like many others, however it proved futile as the amount of support the Newly formed New Republic had was too much to compete with. Eventually, Kellic and the Malak would be separated from the rest of Kellic's fleet after they were ambushed by the New Republic, Kellic ordering his fleet to scatter and to rendezvous with him later, as he and his ship made an emergency jump to hyperspace. There, they would find a strange portal like object.....

Tier level descriptors
Desired Tier level: Tier 2

(Optional)

Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YnGaCAHhGfo

Likes:

Dislikes:

Personal Spaceship: TIE/D Defender Elite (basically a TIE Defender but faster and with even stronger shields)

Additional Information: Kellic is more powerful then the average Inquisitor because of his additiona self training and power

RP Sample: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=410020

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Faction Name: Star Destroyer Malak

Faction History: The Imperial I Class Star Destroyer had at first been named the Avenger. The Star Destroyer had been like the others in the fleet, simply another warship in the crowd of the Imperial Fleet, filled with mostly conscripted members. However this all changed when one day a captain known as Venn Kellic was given command of it, in which he renamed the Avenger to the Malak. Quickly he started reshaping and reworking the entire crew, turning them into efficient and effective men and soldiers. He lead them through mission after mission, crushing rebels, pirates, and criminals alike, quickly becoming renowned and the prime example of what an Imperial Star Destroyer should be like. They ended corruption on different planets, destroyed extremist groups, and even lead unofficial supply runs to starving planets.

In other words, they became a famous war vessel that, unlike other Imperial Vessels, actually showed the peace, prosperity, and security that the Empire was supposed to be representing. The crew themselves were of a higher quality than the crew of the average Star Destroyer. Not only that, but they soon came to respect Kellic because of how, unlike other Imperial Officers, treated every man with respect and unwilling to send his men on dangerous missions unless he was there too. This respect for the entire crew lead to them unofficially pledging their allegiance to Kellic rather than the Empire.

Soon, this would all change, a week after Endor, where the Imperial Vessel would find some sort of strange energy anomaly....

Universe of Origin: Star Wars

Faction Leader: Venn Kellic

Important Faction Characters:
Kal Ordo: Mandalorian ISB Agent tasked with protecting Kellic, highly skilled in combat from both the ISB training he had and his Mandalorian Past
Arnold Venka: Kellic's second in command, fanatically loyal to Kellic

Military Forces: 1x Imperial I Class Star Destroyer, 36x TIE Fighters, 24x TIE Interceptors, 12x TIE Bombers, 8x TIE Defenders, 12x Sentinel Class Landing Craft, 15x Theta-Class Barges, 9,700 Stormtroopers, 20x AT-ATs, 30x AT-STs

Imperial Star Destroyer Malak
Armaments:
-60x Heavy Turbolasers
-60x Ion cannons
-6x Dual heavy Turbolaser Turrets
-2x Dual heavy Ion Cannon Turrets
-2x Quad heavy Turbolasers
-3x Triple Medium Turbolasers
-2x Medium Turbolasers
-10x Tractor beam projectors
Length: 1,600 meters
Speed: 975 km/h (has Class 2.0 Hyperdrive)
Crew: 27,850 Enlisted, 9,325 Officers, 275 Gunners
Defence: Hull and armour made of a combination of Durasteel, Titanium Reinforced Alusteel and Dura-Armor. Has 2 Deflector Shield Generators, generates both Ray Shielding (defence against energy based attacks) and Particle Shielding (defence against physical/solid based attacks)

Civilian population: None

Technological tier:

Any important additional info: Unlike other Imperial Vessels, the Malak's Crew and troops are all fully trained and are of some of the most top quality, unlike their much less effective conscripted counterparts, they're also fanatically loyal to Kellic.

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RP Sample:

[Rupudska]

Sitrep? Sitrep pls.

[Brusia]

Sitrep? Sitrep pls.

Basically we finished up the Star Trek universe and are now returning to the Hub.

[Brusia]

Apologies if this isn't the best of quality, but I ran out of inspiration

Character Name: Venn Kellic

Gender: Male

Appearance:
Apperance (Imagine wearing Imperial Admiral Uniform and having Amber/Yellow eyes)
Inquisitor Outfit

Species: Human

Age: 39

Universe of origin: Star Wars

Alignment: Lawful Neutral

Abilities: Standard Lightside Force Powers (push, pull, etc), Force Lightning, Force Choke, Lightsaber trained in mainly Form II Makashi, Form V Djem So and Form VII Juyo

Weaknesses: Despite years of self-training and self-teaching, he still hasn't officially been trained beyond an Inquisitor (who are mainly supposed to hunt lower ranking Jedi rather than become full Sith themselves), and he was expelled from the Order while he was a padawan

Personality: Venn seems like a serious person, but really he's actually rather nice and supportive, he respects his men and cares for them like a family, and is willing to do for those he cares about.

Noteworthy Equipment: Blaster Pistol, Inquisitor Double-Bladed Spinning Lightsaber

Backstory (minimum of one paragraph): Kellic was born in 35 BBY a member of the Jedi Order, taken from his parents at a young age as per the usual. He would be trained in the ways of the Jedi, finding himself to have a higher level of force adaptation than his other peers, as well as becoming very efficient in lightsaber combat, finding the attention of the higher ranking Jedi. He would become a Padawan at the age of 13, and at the age of 14 would fight in the Clone Wars. However, he would become more interested in the Force, and eventually stumbled across the Dark Side, studying it in secret. Towards the end of the Clone Wars at the age of 16, Kellic would be expelled from the Jedi Order after his delvings into the Dark Side were discovered. He would be spared the massacre at the Jedi Temple and Order 66

He would join the Republic Officer Academy, which would soon become the Imperial Officer Academy. He would at first become a Lieutenant and would become quite known in his local area because of his competency and efficiency. He would later be promoted to the rank of Commander, and be given command of a Tartan Patrol Cruiser, this is when Kellic would really become prominent. He started using his lone Tartan to lead anti-piracy operations, liberating an entire sector of a major pirate problem that had been plaguing it for years. He would also go to different planets and crush different black market activities, liberating them of corruption. He became known as a very reliable and incorruptible soldier in the Navy.

Because of his services, in 13 BBY he'd be promoted to Captain, but before he could transfer to his new ship, he'd encounter Darth Vader. Vader would sense his force sensitivity. The official story is that Kellic had been transferred to some sort of secret project, unofficially he had been captured by Darth Vader. Vader eventually forced Kellic to join the Sith Inquisitors, instead of outright killing him because of hearing about his delving into the Dark Side when he had been Anakin Skywalker. Kellic would spend 3 brutal years of training in the Inquisitors, before finally being sent off. He would spend time going on missions hunting rebels and suspected Jedi for the next 5 years, quickly rising through the ranks of the Inquisitorius, and quickly becoming one of it's most effective, gaining a slight bit of favour from Darth Vader.

But throughout that time, Venn still held some of the beliefs of the Jedi Order, making him more Grey (in terms of alignment anyway) then completely dark. In 5 BBY, he would be assigned by Vader to start hunting down Rebels and he was given a Star Destroyer, and he would return to his identity as Captain Kellic because Vader found that Imperials were more likely to listen to other Imperials then Sith better. Kellic returned to active duty in the Imperial Navy commanding the newly named Malak, named after the Sith Lord that had reigned thousands of years ago, mainly to appease Darth Vader. With this limited yet larger than before independence, Kellic started doing other things along with hunting down the Rebellion.

He would start retraining the crew to turn them into an efficient fighting machine, and he would also resume his Anti-Corruption Operations as a side objective. He would even go on unofficial Humanitarian Aidings to different planets using his Star Destroyer to transport supplies. His original objective to hunt down the Rebellion was also very successful, as he destroyed several major Rebel Cells in the next few years. Later, Kellic would get mortally wounded while he was investigating a supposed Rebel Base and it self-destructed. Vader, not wanting to lose one of his most efficient Inquisitors if any case anything like that happened again, assigned veteran Mandalorian ISB Agent Kal Ordo as Kellic's 'Bodyguard.' The two would eventually become friends.

Kellic would eventually interact with Vader more in 2 BBY, in which after the death of his secret apprentice Galen Marek, Vader would start drawing up contingency plans, one of which was to make Kellic his (probably temporary) apprentice if the time was needed. Kellic was a prime choice because he was considered to be one of the best in the ranks of the Inquisitors, and has been known to absorb knowledge very quickly. Even though his training has technically been completed, to prepare him in case he wanted to take Kellic as his (most likely temporary) apprentice, Vader started giving Kellic additiona limited training, only enough so that if Vader did take him as an apprentice, he could easily finish his training.

This, along with Kellic's influence in the Imperial Navy that allowed him to secretly get knowledge and artefacts of the Jedi and Sith (ironically, some from the Black Market), made Kellic more powerful than the average Inquisitor. Eventually, 0 BBY/ABY would come, and the Death Star be destroyed. During the Rebel evacuation of Yavin IV, many of the transports and ships that attempted to escape were captured or destroyed by Kellic. This, along with his continuous service to the Empire, convinced higher Imperial Officers (along with some persuasion by Vader) to promote Kellic to Admiral. Vader would also be pleased with Kellic's progress, and rewarded him with a squadron of TIE Defenders, and giving him a prototype TIE Defender Elite as his personal starfighter.

With his newly found increased influence, Kellic was able to increase his personal efforts, including reforms in his fleet, crushing even more corruption and criminals throughout the Galaxy, and sending more humanitarian aid missions to different planets. All of this would make Kellic seem like the ideal Imperial, and an officer who stood up for the ideals the Empire should be standing for.

All this would change in 4 ABY, when the Battle of Endor would conclude in the death of both Sidious and Vader. Kellic would attempt to defend the remnants of the Empire, however it proved futile as the amount of support the Newly formed New Republic had was too much to compete with. Eventually, Kellic and the Malak would be separated from the rest of the Kellic's fleet after they were ambushed by the New Republic, Kellic ordering his fleet to scatter and to rendezvous with him later, as he and his ship made an emergency jump to hyperspace. There, they would find a strange portal like object.....

Tier level descriptors
Desired Tier level: Tier 2

(Optional)

Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YnGaCAHhGfo

Likes:

Dislikes:

Personal Spaceship: TIE/D Defender Elite (basically a TIE Defender but faster and with even stronger shields)

Additional Information: Kellic is more powerful then the average Inquisitor because of his additiona self training and power

RP Sample: viewtopic.php?f=31&t=410020

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Faction Name: Star Destroyer Malak

Faction History: The Imperial I Class Star Destroyer had at first been named the Avenger. The Star Destroyer had been like the others in the fleet, simply another warship in the crowd of the Imperial Fleet, filled with mostly conscripted members. However this all changed when one day a captain known as Venn Kellic was given command of it, in which he renamed the Avenger to the Malak. Quickly he started reshaping and reworking the entire crew, turning them into efficient and effective men and soldiers. He lead them through mission after mission, crushing rebels, pirates, and criminals alike, quickly becoming renowned and the prime example of what an Imperial Star Destroyer should be like. They ended corruption on different planets, destroyed extremist groups, and even lead unofficial supply runs to starving planets.

In other words, they became a famous war vessel that, unlike other Imperial Vessels, actually showed the peace, prosperity, and security that the Empire was supposed to be representing. The crew themselves were of a much, much higher quality then the crew of the average Star Destroyer. Not only that, but they soon came to respect Kellic because of how, unlike other Imperial Officers, treated every man with respect and unwilling to send his men on dangerous missions unless he was there too. This respect of the entire crew lead to them unofficially pledging their alliegence to Kellic rather then the Empire.

Soon, this would all change, a week after Endor, where the Imperial Vessel would find some sort of strange energy anomaly....

Universe of Origin: Star Wars

Faction Leader: Venn Kellic

Important Faction Characters:
Kal Ordo: Mandalorian ISB Agent tasked with protecting Kellic, highly skilled in combat from both the ISB training he had and his Mandalorian Past
Arnold Venka: Kellic's second in command, fanatically loyal to Kellic

Military Forces: 1x Imperial I Class Star Destroyer, 36x TIE Fighters, 24x TIE Interceptors, 12x TIE Bombers, 8x TIE Defenders, 5x Alpha-class Xg-1 Star Wings, 9,700 Stormtroopers, 20x AT-ATs, 30x AT-STs

Civilian population: None

Technological tier:

Any important additional info: Unlike other Imperial Vessels, the Malak's Crew and troops are all fully trained and are of some of the most top quality, unlike their much less effective conscripted counterparts, they're also fanatically loyal to Kellic.

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Alright, after discussing things with Monte, we have a few concerns: firstly, we'd like to see more detail about how he was able to survive Order 66. As Monte pointed out, just no longer being a member of the Order should not be enough to write him off Palpatine's proscription list as evidenced by Ahsoka's still being targeted by her clone troopers despite having already left the Order. (I might suggest having him at least change his name and appearance after hearing that Jedi were being targeted). We'd also like to see more detail about how he was able to maintain any sort of decency or kindness while serving in a military as cutthroat and ruthless as the Empire, and particularly while studying directly under Darth Vader (who isn't likely to approve of anything short of total ruthlessness).

As to the faction app, I'd like you to swap out the Alpha-class Xg-1 Star Wings for the appropriate Sentinel-class landing craft (as per the wiki), and I'd suggest adding a few Theta-class barges to get your AT-ATs on the ground. Finally, we found your statement that "The crew themselves were of a much, much higher quality then the crew of the average Star Destroyer" to be somewhat concerning. Having a competent crew is fine, but your Stormtroopers shouldn't be at the level of Death Troopers or anything if that's what you mean. Other than that though, the rest of the app looks fine, so once those corrections are made I'll accept it.

[Demincia]

Apologies if this isn't the best of quality, but I ran out of inspiration

Character Name: Venn Kellic

Gender: Male

Appearance:
Apperance (Imagine wearing Imperial Admiral Uniform and having Amber/Yellow eyes)
Inquisitor Outfit

Species: Human

Age: 39

Universe of origin: Star Wars

Alignment: Lawful Neutral

Abilities: Standard Lightside Force Powers (push, pull, etc), Force Lightning, Force Choke, Lightsaber trained in mainly Form II Makashi, Form V Djem So and Form VII Juyo

Weaknesses: Despite years of self-training and self-teaching, he still hasn't officially been trained beyond an Inquisitor (who are mainly supposed to hunt lower ranking Jedi rather than become full Sith themselves), and he was expelled from the Order while he was a padawan

Personality: Venn seems like a serious person, but really he's actually rather nice and supportive, he respects his men and cares for them like a family, and is willing to do for those he cares about.

Noteworthy Equipment: Blaster Pistol, Inquisitor Double-Bladed Spinning Lightsaber

Backstory (minimum of one paragraph): Kellic was born in 35 BBY a member of the Jedi Order, taken from his parents at a young age as per the usual. He would be trained in the ways of the Jedi, finding himself to have a higher level of force adaptation than his other peers, as well as becoming very efficient in lightsaber combat, finding the attention of the higher ranking Jedi. He would become a Padawan at the age of 13, and at the age of 14 would fight in the Clone Wars. However, he would become more interested in the Force, and eventually stumbled across the Dark Side, studying it in secret. Towards the end of the Clone Wars at the age of 16, Kellic would be expelled from the Jedi Order after his delvings into the Dark Side were discovered. He would be spared the massacre at the Jedi Temple and Order 66

He would join the Republic Officer Academy, which would soon become the Imperial Officer Academy. He would at first become a Lieutenant and would become quite known in his local area because of his competency and efficiency. He would later be promoted to the rank of Commander, and be given command of a Tartan Patrol Cruiser, this is when Kellic would really become prominent. He started using his lone Tartan to lead anti-piracy operations, liberating an entire sector of a major pirate problem that had been plaguing it for years. He would also go to different planets and crush different black market activities, liberating them of corruption. He became known as a very reliable and incorruptible soldier in the Navy.

Because of his services, in 13 BBY he'd be promoted to Captain, but before he could transfer to his new ship, he'd encounter Darth Vader. Vader would sense his force sensitivity. The official story is that Kellic had been transferred to some sort of secret project, unofficially he had been captured by Darth Vader. Vader eventually forced Kellic to join the Sith Inquisitors, instead of outright killing him because of hearing about his delving into the Dark Side when he had been Anakin Skywalker. Kellic would spend 3 brutal years of training in the Inquisitors, before finally being sent off. He would spend time going on missions hunting rebels and suspected Jedi for the next 5 years, quickly rising through the ranks of the Inquisitorius, and quickly becoming one of it's most effective, gaining a slight bit of favour from Darth Vader.

But throughout that time, Venn still held some of the beliefs of the Jedi Order, making him more Grey (in terms of alignment anyway) then completely dark. In 5 BBY, he would be assigned by Vader to start hunting down Rebels and he was given a Star Destroyer, and he would return to his identity as Captain Kellic because Vader found that Imperials were more likely to listen to other Imperials then Sith better. Kellic returned to active duty in the Imperial Navy commanding the newly named Malak, named after the Sith Lord that had reigned thousands of years ago, mainly to appease Darth Vader. With this limited yet larger than before independence, Kellic started doing other things along with hunting down the Rebellion.

He would start retraining the crew to turn them into an efficient fighting machine, and he would also resume his Anti-Corruption Operations as a side objective. He would even go on unofficial Humanitarian Aidings to different planets using his Star Destroyer to transport supplies. His original objective to hunt down the Rebellion was also very successful, as he destroyed several major Rebel Cells in the next few years. Later, Kellic would get mortally wounded while he was investigating a supposed Rebel Base and it self-destructed. Vader, not wanting to lose one of his most efficient Inquisitors if any case anything like that happened again, assigned veteran Mandalorian ISB Agent Kal Ordo as Kellic's 'Bodyguard.' The two would eventually become friends.

Kellic would eventually interact with Vader more in 2 BBY, in which after the death of his secret apprentice Galen Marek, Vader would start drawing up contingency plans, one of which was to make Kellic his (probably temporary) apprentice if the time was needed. Kellic was a prime choice because he was considered to be one of the best in the ranks of the Inquisitors, and has been known to absorb knowledge very quickly. Even though his training has technically been completed, to prepare him in case he wanted to take Kellic as his (most likely temporary) apprentice, Vader started giving Kellic additiona limited training, only enough so that if Vader did take him as an apprentice, he could easily finish his training.

This, along with Kellic's influence in the Imperial Navy that allowed him to secretly get knowledge and artefacts of the Jedi and Sith (ironically, some from the Black Market), made Kellic more powerful than the average Inquisitor. Eventually, 0 BBY/ABY would come, and the Death Star be destroyed. During the Rebel evacuation of Yavin IV, many of the transports and ships that attempted to escape were captured or destroyed by Kellic. This, along with his continuous service to the Empire, convinced higher Imperial Officers (along with some persuasion by Vader) to promote Kellic to Admiral. Vader would also be pleased with Kellic's progress, and rewarded him with a squadron of TIE Defenders, and giving him a prototype TIE Defender Elite as his personal starfighter.

With his newly found increased influence, Kellic was able to increase his personal efforts, including reforms in his fleet, crushing even more corruption and criminals throughout the Galaxy, and sending more humanitarian aid missions to different planets. All of this would make Kellic seem like the ideal Imperial, and an officer who stood up for the ideals the Empire should be standing for.

All this would change in 4 ABY, when the Battle of Endor would conclude in the death of both Sidious and Vader. Kellic would attempt to defend the remnants of the Empire, however it proved futile as the amount of support the Newly formed New Republic had was too much to compete with. Eventually, Kellic and the Malak would be separated from the rest of the Kellic's fleet after they were ambushed by the New Republic, Kellic ordering his fleet to scatter and to rendezvous with him later, as he and his ship made an emergency jump to hyperspace. There, they would find a strange portal like object.....

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Desired Tier level: Tier 2

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Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YnGaCAHhGfo

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Personal Spaceship: TIE/D Defender Elite (basically a TIE Defender but faster and with even stronger shields)

Additional Information: Kellic is more powerful then the average Inquisitor because of his additiona self training and power

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Faction Name: Star Destroyer Malak

Faction History: The Imperial I Class Star Destroyer had at first been named the Avenger. The Star Destroyer had been like the others in the fleet, simply another warship in the crowd of the Imperial Fleet, filled with mostly conscripted members. However this all changed when one day a captain known as Venn Kellic was given command of it, in which he renamed the Avenger to the Malak. Quickly he started reshaping and reworking the entire crew, turning them into efficient and effective men and soldiers. He lead them through mission after mission, crushing rebels, pirates, and criminals alike, quickly becoming renowned and the prime example of what an Imperial Star Destroyer should be like. They ended corruption on different planets, destroyed extremist groups, and even lead unofficial supply runs to starving planets.

In other words, they became a famous war vessel that, unlike other Imperial Vessels, actually showed the peace, prosperity, and security that the Empire was supposed to be representing. The crew themselves were of a much, much higher quality then the crew of the average Star Destroyer. Not only that, but they soon came to respect Kellic because of how, unlike other Imperial Officers, treated every man with respect and unwilling to send his men on dangerous missions unless he was there too. This respect of the entire crew lead to them unofficially pledging their alliegence to Kellic rather then the Empire.

Soon, this would all change, a week after Endor, where the Imperial Vessel would find some sort of strange energy anomaly....

Universe of Origin: Star Wars

Faction Leader: Venn Kellic

Important Faction Characters:
Kal Ordo: Mandalorian ISB Agent tasked with protecting Kellic, highly skilled in combat from both the ISB training he had and his Mandalorian Past
Arnold Venka: Kellic's second in command, fanatically loyal to Kellic

Military Forces: 1x Imperial I Class Star Destroyer, 36x TIE Fighters, 24x TIE Interceptors, 12x TIE Bombers, 8x TIE Defenders, 5x Alpha-class Xg-1 Star Wings, 9,700 Stormtroopers, 20x AT-ATs, 30x AT-STs

Civilian population: None

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Any important additional info: Unlike other Imperial Vessels, the Malak's Crew and troops are all fully trained and are of some of the most top quality, unlike their much less effective conscripted counterparts, they're also fanatically loyal to Kellic.

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I'm gonna throw my two cents in too since I missed the original app discussion, but I'd recommend using a more recent picture of Christoph Waltz than that one, since he looks more fit to be an Admiral in this picture than he does at 30