I'll do it then. In progress as we speak.
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by Talchyon » Fri Sep 22, 2017 10:53 am
Louisianan wrote:Talchyon has great comedic writing, that is true.

by Torsiedelle » Fri Sep 22, 2017 11:11 am
Brusia wrote:Torsiedelle wrote:I dunno, I'm sort of lost like Ruppie is. Still don't see a reply to my last post as Marie. I'm interested in just getting her settled in with the others.
If you still haven't gotten a reply yet, it might be best just to have her wander over to the Conference Room at this point (I'd like to get the new arrivals briefed so we can get started laying the groundwork for our next universe).

by Brusia » Fri Sep 22, 2017 2:50 pm
Torsiedelle wrote:Brusia wrote:If you still haven't gotten a reply yet, it might be best just to have her wander over to the Conference Room at this point (I'd like to get the new arrivals briefed so we can get started laying the groundwork for our next universe).
Can do. It cool if I just sort of imply that she's sort of been catching on to where she is, or nah?
Same with Katya, since I only posted once for her. I had char!Torii crash into the bed, so she'd be out for the entire hostage crisis.
EDIT: Hmm...I also never parked Iko.

by Naval Monte » Fri Sep 22, 2017 4:14 pm

by The Empire of Tau » Fri Sep 22, 2017 5:55 pm

by Brusia » Fri Sep 22, 2017 6:03 pm
The Empire of Tau wrote:Question, what's the "power scale" here? Or in other words, how over the top can I go?
by The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Fri Sep 22, 2017 8:16 pm


by The Empire of Tau » Fri Sep 22, 2017 8:18 pm

by Talchyon » Fri Sep 22, 2017 8:35 pm
Louisianan wrote:Talchyon has great comedic writing, that is true.

by Brusia » Fri Sep 22, 2017 8:52 pm
The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune wrote:Character Name: Rift/ The Malice


by Brusia » Fri Sep 22, 2017 8:56 pm
The Empire of Tau wrote:Would armor that is basically the equivalent to, if not a bit better or worse, than Tactical Dreadnought armor be a bit overpower? Given the fact that both armors can stop a Leman Russ Battle Cannon round (150mm smoothbore cannon). Not stating the negative effects for wearing such heavy armor yet.

by The Empire of Tau » Fri Sep 22, 2017 9:00 pm
by The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Fri Sep 22, 2017 9:01 pm

by Brusia » Fri Sep 22, 2017 9:11 pm
The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune wrote:There's a infinite number of universes
Plus now he has actual motivation not to destroy everything because his afterlife depends on getting his goddess back.
by The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune » Fri Sep 22, 2017 9:13 pm
Brusia wrote:The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune wrote:There's a infinite number of universes
Plus now he has actual motivation not to destroy everything because his afterlife depends on getting his goddess back.
But he's still a chaotic evil character that likes anarchy and destruction, and Revan would still probably kill him the moment he saw him again since he's already tried to sabotage the Hub.

by The Empire of Tau » Fri Sep 22, 2017 10:43 pm

by Brusia » Fri Sep 22, 2017 11:10 pm
The Anarcho-Syndicalist Commune wrote:Brusia wrote:But he's still a chaotic evil character that likes anarchy and destruction, and Revan would still probably kill him the moment he saw him again since he's already tried to sabotage the Hub.
Revan is a man of faith, clearly if some fucker was brought back from the dead with the purpose of helping him, he would put up with him, and Rift doesn't mess up shit that benefits him, like the Hub and the crew now do.

by Brusia » Fri Sep 22, 2017 11:47 pm
). All in all, this app is going to need some serious revisions before it can be accepted, so it might be easier just to go with a new character, but if you'd prefer to keep this one, my Co-ops and I will help you work through the details.
by The Empire of Tau » Sat Sep 23, 2017 6:57 am
Brusia wrote:
So there are quite a few things that need addressing I'm afraid: The armor definitely needs a major nerf. Honestly, with that little mobility, most of his time in the RP would probably be spent near the Conduits because he'd be too slow to actually get to the action before it ended anyway, so it needs to be swapped out for much lighter and less powerful armor. For the weapons, the Ripper needs to go altogether (though you're welcome to replace it with a Choppa or similar melee weapon if you'd like) and the twin-linked assault cannon needs a major nerf as well (down to something like a regular assault rifle or shotgun). To the abilities, I'm afraid you are going to need to go into more detail on the fungal bodies (as my knowledge of 40K lore doesn't really extend beyond Imperial Guard campaigns in Dawn of War). All in all, this app is going to need some serious revisions before it can be accepted, so it might be easier just to go with a new character, but if you'd prefer to keep this one, my Co-ops and I will help you work through the details.

by Naval Monte » Sat Sep 23, 2017 10:28 am
The Empire of Tau wrote:Brusia wrote:So there are quite a few things that need addressing I'm afraid: The armor definitely needs a major nerf. Honestly, with that little mobility, most of his time in the RP would probably be spent near the Conduits because he'd be too slow to actually get to the action before it ended anyway, so it needs to be swapped out for much lighter and less powerful armor. For the weapons, the Ripper needs to go altogether (though you're welcome to replace it with a Choppa or similar melee weapon if you'd like) and the twin-linked assault cannon needs a major nerf as well (down to something like a regular assault rifle or shotgun). To the abilities, I'm afraid you are going to need to go into more detail on the fungal bodies (as my knowledge of 40K lore doesn't really extend beyond Imperial Guard campaigns in Dawn of War). All in all, this app is going to need some serious revisions before it can be accepted, so it might be easier just to go with a new character, but if you'd prefer to keep this one, my Co-ops and I will help you work through the details.
I'll likely just go write another app. Maybe a Imperial Guardsmen or Tau Fire Warrior.
EDIT:
Question, can I app for a fighter-bomber? Or nah?

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by Brusia » Sat Sep 23, 2017 8:38 pm
The Empire of Tau wrote:Character Name: ‘Addison’
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