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Postby Kormanthor » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:01 pm

I just picked one picture with the flying sub outside the Submarine to show that the UKS Oceanview
has launchable smaller subs as well as other craft. 8) :clap:

Is there any thing else I need to correct before you except my Character?
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Postby Brusia » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:02 pm

The Federation of Kendor wrote:Are there anyone who know how to create a great Multiverse RP? Just so people know, this RP was born from my failed Multiverse one, due to management issues. And while I originally tried to join, I ultimately don't due to how this RP was created

Look, if you want to make an app to join the RP, that's fine. If you want to make your own multiverse RP, that's fine too. But please don't come into the RP just to insult it, that doesn't do anything to help anyone.

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Postby Kormanthor » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:04 pm

It's not my intention to insult. I apologize if it sounded that way.
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Postby Brusia » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:05 pm

Kormanthor wrote:It's not my intention to insult. I apologize if it sounded that way.

Not you, that was in response to Kendor.
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Postby Kormanthor » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:05 pm

Oh Ok!!! :clap:
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Postby Kormanthor » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:07 pm

So is my application acceptable now?
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Postby Brusia » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:12 pm

Kormanthor wrote:So is my application acceptable now?

We've still got a pretty long way to go before we get there I'm afraid (and you still need to spoiler your RP Sample like I showed you).

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Postby Kormanthor » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:19 pm

The spoiler causes the links to not work. Show me how to put spoilers in that work.
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Postby Demincia » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:20 pm

Kormanthor wrote:The spoiler causes the links to not work. Show me how to put spoilers in that work.


The main thing that needs a spoiler is that giant block of text that is your RP sample

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Postby Kormanthor » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:35 pm

Ok, the Giant Block is spoiled. :clap: Anything else :?:
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Postby Demincia » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:39 pm

I mean, you've worked on the formatting issues, but you haven't really done anything to work on the actual content issues that Brusia mentioned (like overpowered abilities and equipment)

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Postby Parcia » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:46 pm

Just going to have Bethany kinda just chill then, god help the covies is they piss her off though.
So apparently Cobalt has named me a Cyber terrorist, I honestly don't know to be Honored or offended.
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Postby Kormanthor » Tue Sep 19, 2017 5:55 pm

Ok, obviously you don't want me here. Double teaming me, I asked you to give me specifics about the so called power levels of the character and her equipment. You did not. You know I have run my own threads before and have never given anyone this much grief. I'm out of here. :roll:
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Postby Brusia » Tue Sep 19, 2017 6:13 pm

Kormanthor wrote:Ok, obviously you don't want me here. Double teaming me, I asked you to give me specifics about the so called power levels of the character and her equipment. You did not. You know I have run my own threads before and have never given anyone this much grief. I'm out of here. :roll:

I mean, I did, but suit yourself.

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Postby Multiversal Venn-Copard » Tue Sep 19, 2017 6:48 pm

I'd like to apologize for not posting recently. I've had some real-life stuff going on, but during my free time it's mostly just that I just can't really work up the motivation.

If it's not an issue, I'd like to ditch Urist and Belar; I think I can put some effort into new posts soon, but I don't feel like the dwarves are really going to end up doing anything and I don't want to force myself to write them. Is that alright?

I may end up applying for a new character or two in the future, but I'll have to wait and see if I can build up the mental fortitude to run them all.
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Postby Demincia » Tue Sep 19, 2017 6:51 pm

It's alright with me, I can't speak for Brusia. No need to overload yourself

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Postby Torsiedelle » Tue Sep 19, 2017 6:54 pm

Multiversal Venn-Copard wrote:I'd like to apologize for not posting recently. I've had some real-life stuff going on, but during my free time it's mostly just that I just can't really work up the motivation.

If it's not an issue, I'd like to ditch Urist and Belar; I think I can put some effort into new posts soon, but I don't feel like the dwarves are really going to end up doing anything and I don't want to force myself to write them. Is that alright?

I may end up applying for a new character or two in the future, but I'll have to wait and see if I can build up the mental fortitude to run them all.


RL comes before RP. It's cool. I have periods of low motivation too.
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Postby Brusia » Tue Sep 19, 2017 7:03 pm

Multiversal Venn-Copard wrote:I'd like to apologize for not posting recently. I've had some real-life stuff going on, but during my free time it's mostly just that I just can't really work up the motivation.

If it's not an issue, I'd like to ditch Urist and Belar; I think I can put some effort into new posts soon, but I don't feel like the dwarves are really going to end up doing anything and I don't want to force myself to write them. Is that alright?

I may end up applying for a new character or two in the future, but I'll have to wait and see if I can build up the mental fortitude to run them all.

It's alright (I've certainly been there a few times myself). I'll remove Urist and Belar from the roster (if you decided you want to bring them back later on, that'd be fine as well ;) )

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Postby Talchyon » Wed Sep 20, 2017 12:31 am

Hey guys.

So, I'm back, and now I find people on the Hub in the bar, but some not - still back on Skyrim, and there's fighting in some parts of the Hub? Can you guys clue me in what happened the last few days?

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Postby Brusia » Wed Sep 20, 2017 12:41 am

Talchyon wrote:Hey guys.

So, I'm back, and now I find people on the Hub in the bar, but some not - still back on Skyrim, and there's fighting in some parts of the Hub? Can you guys clue me in what happened the last few days?

-Talc

The apps that were pending review got accepted, and the newly arrived Covenant decided to take hostages on the Hub, but that situation has since been resolved. Everyone that participated in the Skyrim universe should currently be on the Hub, or making their way back to the Hub at this point, and some of those returning folks decided to stop by the Hub bar for a drink (though I think they all left the bar to respond to the hostage situation, and are currently in the Hub corridors). We also finally got switched over to the new IC, so the link in the IC OP now leads to the correct OOC. I think that was pretty much it.

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Postby Greater South » Wed Sep 20, 2017 2:13 am

Character Name: Ramon "Sharpshooter" Gonzalez

Gender:

Appearance: Image

Species: Human

Age: 35

Universe of origin: Pirates, Vikings and Knights II

Alignment: Chaotic neutral

Abilities: Enhanced skill and aim with muzzleloading guns, extremely good knife fighting techniques and some aerobic ability, also a very durable drinker.

Weaknesses: Extremely clumsy out of combat, his attempts at charm often lead him into trouble. Did I say he had good fighting techniques? I mean TECHNIQUES, not actual strength, so nothing he does really will harm a monster or anything like that.

Personality: A delusional man with ambitions of being a great lover, acting like a charming and romantic hero for the ladies (or men, or anything else because of pansexuality). He has a great affinity for performing great acts of bravery that usually make things worse.

Noteworthy Equipment: A Brown Bess musket with 10 cartridges, a flintlock pistol with 20, a very fancy dagger, a map, a bottle of whiskey, a rose and also a miniature piano.

Backstory: Born in central Madrid, Spain during the 17th century, he used to work shifts in a below-average class family in a fruit stand as an assistant merchant. It was during this time he picked up his social skills and such, where he tried picking up girls but usually either got beaten or humiliated. Later, after a feud with yet another man over a dispute for a moderately ugly girl who turned out to be a mother of 5, Ramon had shot them up using flintlock guns after his rapier broke in a duel. Being chased by the guards, he was forced to go into a life of piracy, attacking ships in the Mediterranean and West African coast. lurking in the shadows and killing from a distance, the Sharpshooter is the Pirates' sniper. A gentleman of refined taste; he's almost as skilled at sharpshooting as he is at charming the ladies.

His long-distance Rifle and medium-range Pistol are capable of sending the mightiest of warriors to their graves, but up close, his butter-knife of a dagger will tickle rather than torment.

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Desired Tier level: 1

Theme Song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tgww9j64Pik

Likes: Sex, gold, romantic comedies, antique weaponry, fantasy novels, classical music, alcohol

Dislikes: People who aren't single, water (ironically considering he's a pirate), the Portuguese

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Postby Naval Monte » Wed Sep 20, 2017 2:26 am

Greater South wrote:---


His backstory really is lacking there. I think you should fill in more information about the guy.
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Postby Greater South » Wed Sep 20, 2017 2:47 am

Naval Monte wrote:
Greater South wrote:---


His backstory really is lacking there. I think you should fill in more information about the guy.


Uptaded for ya.
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Postby Brusia » Wed Sep 20, 2017 11:23 am

Greater South wrote:Character Name: Ramon "Sharpshooter" Gonzalez

Looks alright, though I'd probably recommend going with a more advanced firearm once he gets to the Hub (otherwise he'd probably be better off with his dagger than a Brown Bess for much of the RP). Also, from his likes and personality, do keep in mind that this is strictly a PG-13 RP ;)
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Postby Torsiedelle » Wed Sep 20, 2017 1:01 pm

Brusia wrote:
Greater South wrote:Character Name: Ramon "Sharpshooter" Gonzalez

Looks alright, though I'd probably recommend going with a more advanced firearm once he gets to the Hub (otherwise he'd probably be better off with his dagger than a Brown Bess for much of the RP). Also, from his likes and personality, do keep in mind that this is strictly a PG-13 RP ;)


I mean, Marie has a Lee-Enfield and a bayonet. Muskets take about 10-15 seconds to reload, right?
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