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Cylarn
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Postby Cylarn » Thu Apr 20, 2017 2:00 pm

Aghrabia wrote:-snip-


Sure.
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Postby Cylarn » Fri Apr 21, 2017 6:30 am

Zhuge's approved.
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Postby Ayreonia » Fri Apr 21, 2017 7:08 am

Cylarn wrote:We could use an Underboss; preferably the eldest son of Sonny, or a brother/sister. There should be at least one Capo role still up for grabs, and we can use plenty of Soldiers and Associates. As for the resort itself, you've got bountiful opportunities for characters within the higher echelon staff.

I could do the Underboss.
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Postby Cylarn » Sat Apr 22, 2017 9:10 am

Ayreonia wrote:-snip-


Sounds good. More than likely, the UB is a son or brother of Sonny.
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Postby Ayreonia » Sat Apr 22, 2017 11:08 am

Cylarn wrote:
Ayreonia wrote:-snip-


Sounds good. More than likely, the UB is a son or brother of Sonny.

Gotcha.
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Postby Great Confederacy of Commonwealth States » Sat Apr 22, 2017 4:09 pm

Cylarn wrote:
Ayreonia wrote:-snip-


Sounds good. More than likely, the UB is a son or brother of Sonny.

According to my app, Sonny's eldest son is dead. I can change that, of course. Just to give a heads-up.
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Postby Cylarn » Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:24 pm

I would like at least one more Security guy, if not the Sec Chief. If it's not filled by Sunday, I will have Sam run Security.
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Postby Da Klan » Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:54 pm

Tag.

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Postby Aghrabia » Sun Apr 23, 2017 1:44 am

Cylarn wrote:I would like at least one more Security guy, if not the Sec Chief. If it's not filled by Sunday, I will have Sam run Security.

I could start work on another app if you'd like. It might take a few days, because I have A LOT of work to catch up on, in face of school starting again.
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Postby Ayreonia » Sun Apr 23, 2017 8:27 am

Great Confederacy Of Commonwealth States wrote:
Cylarn wrote:
Sounds good. More than likely, the UB is a son or brother of Sonny.

According to my app, Sonny's eldest son is dead. I can change that, of course. Just to give a heads-up.

I can work around that. Up to Cy, though.
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Postby Cylarn » Sun Apr 23, 2017 1:46 pm

Ayreonia wrote:
Great Confederacy Of Commonwealth States wrote:According to my app, Sonny's eldest son is dead. I can change that, of course. Just to give a heads-up.

I can work around that. Up to Cy, though.


Do it.

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Cylarn wrote:I would like at least one more Security guy, if not the Sec Chief. If it's not filled by Sunday, I will have Sam run Security.

I could start work on another app if you'd like. It might take a few days, because I have A LOT of work to catch up on, in face of school starting again.


Keep to a single character.
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Postby Aghrabia » Sun Apr 23, 2017 3:37 pm

Cylarn wrote:
Ayreonia wrote:I can work around that. Up to Cy, though.


Do it.

Aghrabia wrote:I could start work on another app if you'd like. It might take a few days, because I have A LOT of work to catch up on, in face of school starting again.


Keep to a single character.

Oh OK- that's fine.
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Postby Cylarn » Tue Apr 25, 2017 9:19 am

How are the works in progress going? I will begin working on the IC.
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Postby The Blazing Aura » Tue Apr 25, 2017 10:18 am

Cylarn wrote:How are the works in progress going? I will begin working on the IC.


Did almost all of it and then forgot to press either the save draft or post button. Currently redoing all of that.
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Postby Aghrabia » Tue Apr 25, 2017 11:43 pm

Cylarn wrote:How are the works in progress going? I will begin working on the IC.

Attempting to get to work on it. I'll try and get some of the big done at school today, because that always takes me the longest.
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Postby Tiltjuice » Wed Apr 26, 2017 6:00 pm

Working on the bio; RL has me running all over.
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Postby Greater Socialist Albania » Wed Apr 26, 2017 6:39 pm

Tag.

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Postby Greater Socialist Albania » Thu Apr 27, 2017 3:14 pm

Real Name: Sven Nordström

Alias: Ragnarok

Age: 37

Gender: Male

Appearance:
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Identifying Marks: Blond mohawk, signature facial hair and his tattoos.




Skills: Sven's time in the Särskilda Skyddsgruppen (Special Protection Group, SSG) has made him extremely athletic, capable of running, sprinting, and swimming for long distances. He is also physically strong and coordinated, able to knock out or even kill enemy combatants with one bash from whatever weapon he's holding. His time in the Swedish biker gang has made him an expert in driving motorcycles, and his criminal career has trained him in carjacking and evasive driving.
His stint in a Private Military Company has given him experience with nearly all modern small arms and military craft, including helicopters, gunships, maritime assault craft, and tanks. He is fluent in Russian, Italian, Swedish and English.


Primary Specialty: Marksmanship.

Personality: Sven can be summarized as a "wild man." Rowdy, boisterous and an adrenaline junkie he finds his work as an associate allows him to operate independently of those who may disapprove of his actions, his employers typically only concerned with results. It is, at its core, his way of being paid for doing what he loves. Though volatile, he is not sadistic or psychotic. He does not take pleasure from the deadly result of his destructive impulses, though he is not unaware of them either, accepting their inevitability. He is also possessed of a dry, sarcastic wit, delivering his lines with a deadpan tone.


Weaknesses: His short temper often prove to be a disadvantage effecting his judgments and negotiation skills.




Ethnicity: Russian-Swedish

Nationality: Swedish.



Likes: Alcohol, Women, Cocaine,Viking culture, Bikes, Muscle Cars, money, parties, weapons.

Dislikes: Authorities, Soft hearted people, people that talks to much, people who disrespects his boss.

Fears: Getting locked up in prison.

Role in the Family: long time associate, former bodyguard/enforcer/hitman of big sonny sordi, In charge of the Sordi's human trafficking ring in and out of the island, in charge of the island's prostitution ring.

Official Occupation: Runs the Babylon Strip Club.

Personal Biography: Sven was born in Sweden in 1980, by his teenage years Sven began getting in trouble with the law after he became involved with various street gangs and biker clubs mostly the notorious Far Right Sons Of Odin MC, Sven got arrested in 1998, at the age of 18 after a botched bank robbery, due to his young age the judge spared him jail time if he joined the Swedish armed forces, he was soon enlisted in the Swedish navy, where he served until 2002 that's when he got transferred to the Särskilda Skyddsgruppen (Special Protection Group, SSG) a special operations unit of the Swedish military, this is where Sven gained most of his current skills, he served in many black ops missions behind enemy lines during the invasion of Iraq.
In 2005 he got involved in a fist fight with his commanding officer landing the officer in intensive care and landing Sven a dishonorable discharge.
In 2006 Sven joined the international Private military company ExOps, It provides military services to world governments and private interests, in his time with ExOps Sven served in the 2006 Lebanon war, and the Syrian civil war.
In 2013 Big sonny contacted ExOps to acquire a well trained bodyguard, Sven accepted the job and he began serving big sonny, a year later Sven severed ties with ExOps and became employed directly by big sonny as his personal full time bodyguard/Enforcer and occasionally hitman, in 2016 and after big sonnies heart attack, Sven a valuable asset to the Sordi family was transferred to Capo Giuseppe DiMaggio Sordi's crew where he became the head of prostitution and human trafficking, in charge of getting prostitutes and sex slaves from all over the world for the pleasure of the VIP guests of the Poseidon hotel.
Sven also controls the "Babylon" a strip club located in Port Calypso, which serves as a front for the families illegal prostitution ring.




Buisness venture:

What is the venture: The Babylon Strip Club.
Is it legal: Yes.
How many personnel are involved with it: 30 (Bartenders, waiters, bouncers, strippers...)
Anything else: the first floor welcomes all tourists but the second is only accessible for certain VIP customers, also the club provide strippers and prostitutes to the Poseidon hotel.

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Postby Tiltjuice » Fri Apr 28, 2017 1:30 am

I'm slowly thinking mine is gonna be the char everyone else loves to hate. :P
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Postby Cylarn » Fri Apr 28, 2017 6:21 am

Greater Socialist Albania wrote:-snip-


1. I have played Mercenaries, both games. ExOps and Mattias - basically the inspiration for this character - alerted me to this.

2. An Associate, especially one without a hint of Italian heritage, would remain low on the totum pole. He would not be placed in charge of prostitution, which would be the task of a Soldier.

3. His military background is not up to the standards that they should be at for such a character. There are maybe two sentences in his bio about serving with the Navy and the SSG, two life-defining activities that you could supplement with a much more descriptive backstory. I mean, hell, the paragraph format is so disjointed, compressed, and chocked full of run-ons and comma splices, that it is difficult to read. If you're going to play an ex-SF character, I am expecting work that will exceed my expectations. "He served in many black ops missions," will not suffice for me.

4. The grammar and paragraph/sentence structure is not up to par with what I want. In its current state, it won't be approved and I would actually recommend that you seek another RP. that being said, if you can write up something phenomenal, descriptive and gripping, I'd be happy to look over it. Be sure to utilize resources provided by the Mentors here in P2TM.
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Cylarn
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Postby Cylarn » Tue May 02, 2017 10:00 am

Again, I would like to apologize for the lapse in inactivity with this RP. Work, school, and life have been pretty turbulent at best. I will put some effort into my app, get the Dramatis Personae up, and plot our IC. It may take awhile.
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Postby Tiltjuice » Tue May 02, 2017 5:55 pm

No sweat. Having people asking means there's interest :D
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Cut red tape with the Red Book / Bureaucracy is a system - #ApplyTNI / Think globally, act locally
At fifteen, I set my heart on learning. At thirty, I was firmly established. At forty, I had no more doubts. At fifty, I knew the will of heaven. At sixty, I was ready to listen to it. At seventy, I could follow my heart's desire without transgressing what was right. ~Analects, 2:4
I wear teal, blue, pink, and red for Swith.
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The Knockout Gun Gals
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Postby The Knockout Gun Gals » Tue May 02, 2017 7:35 pm

No worries.
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Ontorisa
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Postby Ontorisa » Tue May 02, 2017 11:26 pm

Sorry about this Cy, I'm still fairly interested but I'm trying to get my RP off its feet atm.

If I'm able to, I'll get an app up.

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Ort
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Postby Ort » Thu May 04, 2017 11:48 am

Hey Cy, I saw the telegram you sent me a while ago about this RP and meant to reply but I've just been so busy finishing university assignments and getting ready to move into my new place that I forgot to. Anyway, this looks interesting and I've got a character in mind that's hopefully appropriate but I've got a few more personal things to sort out before I can properly commit to this, or any, RP. In the mean time, I'll keep checking in on this and fleshing out my character idea.

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