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by Britanania » Thu Oct 12, 2017 12:33 pm

by True Christopia » Thu Oct 12, 2017 12:35 pm
True Christopia wrote:I don't think it was necassary to report him lmao but oh well.
As for you, Revlona. I still want more meat on those bones. For both of those apps. Like I said, at least 2 paragraphs - look at the apps for Andrew, Raphael and William Darkenstone for good examples.
Also, I'd personally recommend finding a girlfriend IC with another player character, but that's up to you. Flutters has pulled off a relationships between his own characters well, so there's some mileage in it but I think it's more worthwhile personally. Up to you in the end, however.

by Revlona » Thu Oct 12, 2017 12:36 pm
True Christopia wrote:True Christopia wrote:I don't think it was necassary to report him lmao but oh well.
As for you, Revlona. I still want more meat on those bones. For both of those apps. Like I said, at least 2 paragraphs - look at the apps for Andrew, Raphael and William Darkenstone for good examples.
Also, I'd personally recommend finding a girlfriend IC with another player character, but that's up to you. Flutters has pulled off a relationships between his own characters well, so there's some mileage in it but I think it's more worthwhile personally. Up to you in the end, however.
I told you, Rev.

by Revlona » Thu Oct 12, 2017 12:36 pm
Revlona wrote:Revlona wrote:Name:Robert Strong
Gender:Male
Age:15
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Appearance/PictureBrown Hair Brown eyes, tall and muscular
Blood status:PureBlood
House (future house):gryffindor
Patronus (Optional):Wolf
Views (Blood ideology, optional):Bloodless
Fears:Claustrophobia
Likes and Dislikes:Likes to read and deul, Dislikes arrogance
Personality:He is a very outgoing person and just wants to be your friend, but has a very quick temper if you mess with him or his friends.
Brief Backstory:Robert, second son to the strong family a powerful pureblood family that immigrated from england to america in 1946. He was born April 7th, 2001, in Atlanta Georgia to Jonathan Strong and Lilian Strong, both powerful pureblooded magic users.He recieved his wand (12 inches, made of oak, with a Phoenix feather core) from Shikoba Wolfe when he reached 11. He attended Ilvermorny school for witchcraft and wizardry until his 4th year when he intervened and in a scuffle between his friends and some school bullies, he accidentally severely injured one of the bullies when a spell went bad, he faced several death threats and was even ambushed once forcing his parents to send him to his aunt in London. He believes that all witches and Wizards are equal no matter there blood status and is not afraid to defend his beliefs. He is an amazing dueler for his age and works out often giving him a somewhat muscular build. He really only wants to make friends but isn't afraid to make enemies, He treasures two physical possessions more than anything else, his wand and an enchanted pocket knife given too him by his father.
When he was young he always had a obsession with muggles and aspired to be a muggle peace enforcer, his parents snapped him out of wanting this saying that as a wizard he is better than any muggle. He once thought he might like other Wizards and even kissed a couple in his 1st year, but he fell out of this and became interested in women again. He also tortured and killed small animals when he was younger but was snapped out of this habit by his mother.
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Do not remove: 3391Revlona wrote:Name:Savannah Wood
Gender:Female
Age:15
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Appearance/Picture(Image)
Blood status:Pureblood
House (future house):Gryffindor
Patronus (Optional):Fox
Views (Blood ideology, optional):Undecided
Fears:Pain
Likes and Dislikes:Her boyfriend and reading----Girls who whore out there bodies
Personality:A very friendly person she just wants to make friends, but will blow up on anyone who attempts to hurt anyone she cares for
Brief Backstory:Born May 5th, 2002, in Manchester England, to Micheal Wood and Mary Wood, her family moved to America when she was young but she still has her british accent. She received her wand at age 11 (Spruce wood, 11 inches with dragon heartstring core). Going to Illvermor until her fourth year, meeting Robert Strong who she began dating in her second year, she is sent back to Britain when she and Robert severely injure a bully in a scuffle. She is planning on surprising Robert who doesn't know she was sent to Britain.
When she was young she loved to run around with her friends causing all types of mischief, she would tease her little ¨Boyfriends¨ by giving them pecks on the cheeks making them go red. Her first true kiss was with her boyfriend Robert Strong in both of there third year. Sne loves animals and has always wanted to fly like a bird.
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How is that??

by United Democratic Christian States » Thu Oct 12, 2017 12:36 pm
True Christopia wrote:True Christopia wrote:I don't think it was necassary to report him lmao but oh well.
As for you, Revlona. I still want more meat on those bones. For both of those apps. Like I said, at least 2 paragraphs - look at the apps for Andrew, Raphael and William Darkenstone for good examples.
Also, I'd personally recommend finding a girlfriend IC with another player character, but that's up to you. Flutters has pulled off a relationships between his own characters well, so there's some mileage in it but I think it's more worthwhile personally. Up to you in the end, however.
I told you, Rev.

by Britanania » Thu Oct 12, 2017 12:38 pm

by Revlona » Thu Oct 12, 2017 12:48 pm
True Christopia wrote:True Christopia wrote:I don't think it was necassary to report him lmao but oh well.
As for you, Revlona. I still want more meat on those bones. For both of those apps. Like I said, at least 2 paragraphs - look at the apps for Andrew, Raphael and William Darkenstone for good examples.
Also, I'd personally recommend finding a girlfriend IC with another player character, but that's up to you. Flutters has pulled off a relationships between his own characters well, so there's some mileage in it but I think it's more worthwhile personally. Up to you in the end, however.
I told you, Rev.

by Revlona » Thu Oct 12, 2017 1:32 pm
Revlona wrote:Name:Robert Strong
Gender:Male
Age:15
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Appearance/PictureBrown Hair Brown eyes, tall and muscular
Blood status:PureBlood
House (future house):gryffindor
Patronus (Optional):Wolf
Views (Blood ideology, optional):Bloodless
Fears:Claustrophobia
Likes and Dislikes:Likes to read and deul, Dislikes arrogance
Personality:He is a very outgoing person and just wants to be your friend, but has a very quick temper if you mess with him or his friends.
Brief Backstory:Robert, second son to the strong family a powerful pureblood family that immigrated from england to america in 1946. He was born April 7th, 2001, in Atlanta Georgia to Jonathan Strong and Lilian Strong, both powerful pureblooded magic users.He recieved his wand (12 inches, made of oak, with a Phoenix feather core) from Shikoba Wolfe when he reached 11. He attended Ilvermorny school for witchcraft and wizardry until his 4th year when he intervened and in a scuffle between his friends and some school bullies, he accidentally severely injured one of the bullies when a spell went bad, he faced several death threats and was even ambushed once forcing his parents to send him to his aunt in London. He believes that all witches and Wizards are equal no matter there blood status and is not afraid to defend his beliefs. He is an amazing dueler for his age and works out often giving him a somewhat muscular build. He really only wants to make friends but isn't afraid to make enemies, He treasures two physical possessions more than anything else, his wand and an enchanted pocket knife given too him by his father.
When he was young he always had a obsession with muggles and aspired to be a muggle peace enforcer, his parents snapped him out of wanting this saying that as a wizard he is better than any muggle. He once thought he might like other Wizards and even kissed a couple in his 1st year, but he fell out of this and became interested in women again. He also tortured and killed small animals when he was younger but was snapped out of this habit by his mother.
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Revlona wrote:Name:Savannah Wood
Gender:Female
Age:15
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Appearance/Picture(Image)
Blood status:Pureblood
House (future house):Gryffindor
Patronus (Optional):Fox
Views (Blood ideology, optional):Undecided
Fears:Pain
Likes and Dislikes:Her boyfriend and reading----Girls who whore out there bodies
Personality:A very friendly person she just wants to make friends, but will blow up on anyone who attempts to hurt anyone she cares for
Brief Backstory:Born May 5th, 2002, in Manchester England, to Micheal Wood and Mary Wood, her family moved to America when she was young but she still has her british accent. She received her wand at age 11 (Spruce wood, 11 inches with dragon heartstring core). Going to Illvermor until her fourth year, meeting Robert Strong who she began dating in her second year, she is sent back to Britain when she and Robert severely injure a bully in a scuffle. She is planning on surprising Robert who doesn't know she was sent to Britain.
When she was young she loved to run around with her friends causing all types of mischief, she would tease her little ¨Boyfriends¨ by giving them pecks on the cheeks making them go red. Her first true kiss was with her boyfriend Robert Strong in both of there third year. Sne loves animals and has always wanted to fly like a bird.
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by Britanania » Thu Oct 12, 2017 2:31 pm

by Great Confederacy of Commonwealth States » Thu Oct 12, 2017 3:39 pm

by New Roman Empire » Thu Oct 12, 2017 4:35 pm
Revlona wrote:Revlona wrote:Name:Robert Strong
Gender:Male
Age:15
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Appearance/PictureBrown Hair Brown eyes, tall and muscular
Blood status:PureBlood
House (future house):gryffindor
Patronus (Optional):Wolf
Views (Blood ideology, optional):Bloodless
Fears:Claustrophobia
Likes and Dislikes:Likes to read and deul, Dislikes arrogance
Personality:He is a very outgoing person and just wants to be your friend, but has a very quick temper if you mess with him or his friends.
Brief Backstory:Robert, second son to the strong family a powerful pureblood family that immigrated from england to america in 1946. He was born April 7th, 2001, in Atlanta Georgia to Jonathan Strong and Lilian Strong, both powerful pureblooded magic users.He recieved his wand (12 inches, made of oak, with a Phoenix feather core) from Shikoba Wolfe when he reached 11. He attended Ilvermorny school for witchcraft and wizardry until his 4th year when he intervened and in a scuffle between his friends and some school bullies, he accidentally severely injured one of the bullies when a spell went bad, he faced several death threats and was even ambushed once forcing his parents to send him to his aunt in London. He believes that all witches and Wizards are equal no matter there blood status and is not afraid to defend his beliefs. He is an amazing dueler for his age and works out often giving him a somewhat muscular build. He really only wants to make friends but isn't afraid to make enemies, He treasures two physical possessions more than anything else, his wand and an enchanted pocket knife given too him by his father.
When he was young he always had a obsession with muggles and aspired to be a muggle peace enforcer, his parents snapped him out of wanting this saying that as a wizard he is better than any muggle. He once thought he might like other Wizards and even kissed a couple in his 1st year, but he fell out of this and became interested in women again. He also tortured and killed small animals when he was younger but was snapped out of this habit by his mother.
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Do not remove: 3391Revlona wrote:Name:Savannah Wood
Gender:Female
Age:15
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Appearance/Picture(Image)
Blood status:Pureblood
House (future house):Gryffindor
Patronus (Optional):Fox
Views (Blood ideology, optional):Undecided
Fears:Pain
Likes and Dislikes:Her boyfriend and reading----Girls who whore out there bodies
Personality:A very friendly person she just wants to make friends, but will blow up on anyone who attempts to hurt anyone she cares for
Brief Backstory:Born May 5th, 2002, in Manchester England, to Micheal Wood and Mary Wood, her family moved to America when she was young but she still has her british accent. She received her wand at age 11 (Spruce wood, 11 inches with dragon heartstring core). Going to Illvermor until her fourth year, meeting Robert Strong who she began dating in her second year, she is sent back to Britain when she and Robert severely injure a bully in a scuffle. She is planning on surprising Robert who doesn't know she was sent to Britain.
When she was young she loved to run around with her friends causing all types of mischief, she would tease her little ¨Boyfriends¨ by giving them pecks on the cheeks making them go red. Her first true kiss was with her boyfriend Robert Strong in both of there third year. Sne loves animals and has always wanted to fly like a bird.
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by Britanania » Thu Oct 12, 2017 4:44 pm

by Revlona » Thu Oct 12, 2017 4:46 pm
Britanania wrote:Take the bloody knife out, for God's sake.
And I might just be a stupid girl, but I have two brothers and know lots of boys, and 15 year old boys tend not to be very muscular no matter how hard they work out. Try again.

by Britanania » Thu Oct 12, 2017 4:47 pm
Revlona wrote:Britanania wrote:Take the bloody knife out, for God's sake.
And I might just be a stupid girl, but I have two brothers and know lots of boys, and 15 year old boys tend not to be very muscular no matter how hard they work out. Try again.
Wait, he said no knife? My bad.
And like i said, he isn´t buff but he isn´t flabby. I´ll put semi-muscular instead, hows that?

by Revlona » Thu Oct 12, 2017 4:47 pm
Revlona wrote:Name:Robert Strong
Gender:Male
Age:15
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Appearance/PictureBrown Hair Brown eyes, tall and semi-muscular
Blood status:PureBlood
House (future house):gryffindor
Patronus (Optional):Wolf
Views (Blood ideology, optional):Bloodless
Fears:Claustrophobia
Likes and Dislikes:Likes to read and deul, Dislikes arrogance
Personality:He is a very outgoing person and just wants to be your friend, but has a very quick temper if you mess with him or his friends.
Brief Backstory:Robert, second son to the strong family a powerful pureblood family that immigrated from england to america in 1946. He was born April 7th, 2001, in Atlanta Georgia to Jonathan Strong and Lilian Strong, both powerful pureblooded magic users.He recieved his wand (12 inches, made of oak, with a Phoenix feather core) from Shikoba Wolfe when he reached 11. He attended Ilvermorny school for witchcraft and wizardry until his 4th year when he intervened and in a scuffle between his friends and some school bullies, he accidentally severely injured one of the bullies when a spell went bad, he faced several death threats and was even ambushed once forcing his parents to send him to his aunt in London. He believes that all witches and Wizards are equal no matter there blood status and is not afraid to defend his beliefs. He is an amazing dueler for his age and works out often giving him a somewhat muscular build. He really only wants to make friends but isn't afraid to make enemies.
When he was young he always had a obsession with muggles and aspired to be a muggle peace enforcer, his parents snapped him out of wanting this saying that as a wizard he is better than any muggle. He once thought he might like other Wizards and even kissed a couple in his 1st year, but he fell out of this and became interested in women again. He also tortured and killed small animals when he was younger but was snapped out of this habit by his mother.
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by Britanania » Thu Oct 12, 2017 4:49 pm
Revlona wrote:Revlona wrote:Name:Robert Strong
Gender:Male
Age:15
Sexual Orientation:Straight
Appearance/PictureBrown Hair Brown eyes, tall and semi-muscular
Blood status:PureBlood
House (future house):gryffindor
Patronus (Optional):Wolf
Views (Blood ideology, optional):Bloodless
Fears:Claustrophobia
Likes and Dislikes:Likes to read and deul, Dislikes arrogance
Personality:He is a very outgoing person and just wants to be your friend, but has a very quick temper if you mess with him or his friends.
Brief Backstory:Robert, second son to the strong family a powerful pureblood family that immigrated from england to america in 1946. He was born April 7th, 2001, in Atlanta Georgia to Jonathan Strong and Lilian Strong, both powerful pureblooded magic users.He recieved his wand (12 inches, made of oak, with a Phoenix feather core) from Shikoba Wolfe when he reached 11. He attended Ilvermorny school for witchcraft and wizardry until his 4th year when he intervened and in a scuffle between his friends and some school bullies, he accidentally severely injured one of the bullies when a spell went bad, he faced several death threats and was even ambushed once forcing his parents to send him to his aunt in London. He believes that all witches and Wizards are equal no matter there blood status and is not afraid to defend his beliefs. He is an amazing dueler for his age and works out often giving him a somewhat muscular build. He really only wants to make friends but isn't afraid to make enemies.
When he was young he always had a obsession with muggles and aspired to be a muggle peace enforcer, his parents snapped him out of wanting this saying that as a wizard he is better than any muggle. He once thought he might like other Wizards and even kissed a couple in his 1st year, but he fell out of this and became interested in women again. He also tortured and killed small animals when he was younger but was snapped out of this habit by his mother.
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