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Postby Doughertania » Mon Jan 23, 2017 2:53 pm

Hey, so I've got a few ideas for some characters. Should I do a slightly sadistic mad scientist, has lightning/technopathy powers or a eally enthusiastic tank who carries a shield, hammer that shoots lightning, and is super strong.
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Postby Forest State » Mon Jan 23, 2017 3:06 pm

Doughertania wrote:Hey, so I've got a few ideas for some characters. Should I do a slightly sadistic mad scientist, has lightning/technopathy powers or a eally enthusiastic tank who carries a shield, hammer that shoots lightning, and is super strong.

Scientists are cool, but we could use someone to be the tank for one of the units. Alpha-4 is in need of a Master Sergeant, too...
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Postby Finsternia » Mon Jan 23, 2017 4:12 pm

No one's gonna talk to our lovely mortician? D:
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Postby Doughertania » Mon Jan 23, 2017 4:19 pm

Forest State wrote:
Doughertania wrote:Hey, so I've got a few ideas for some characters. Should I do a slightly sadistic mad scientist, has lightning/technopathy powers or a eally enthusiastic tank who carries a shield, hammer that shoots lightning, and is super strong.

Scientists are cool, but we could use someone to be the tank for one of the units. Alpha-4 is in need of a Master Sergeant, too...

Tank it is. I could make the tank a veteran soldier, but the roster says that there's a Master Sergeant for both squads.

EDIT: Also, I'll probably post tomorrow. I have a chem and psych test to study for, but I'll be done with them tomorrow, for better or worse.
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    • NAME: Raphaël Raymond
    • PREVIOUS PROFESSION: High School Student, Vampire Hunter
    • NATIONALITY: French
    • GENDER: Male
    • ABILITY: -Vampire Physiology Raphaël is a vampire, being undead and having the ability and need to feed off the blood of humans and metas. Comes with semi-immortality, enhanced strength to the pount of lifting a car, speed to the point of running at 50 mph, and senses to smell blood from 5 miles and see clearly in the dark. However, Raphaël still has trouble controlling his enhanced capabilities and unsustainable thirst for blood. Though the more he feeds, the stronger he would get and the more control he would have over himself.

Vampirism comes with these weaknesses:

    -The need to feed at least 4 liters of blood a week or else he goes crazy and becomes beast like...
    -A great aversion to sunlight which could burn and turn him into ash in fire if in sunlight directly.
    -Glowing red eyes that make him stand out in darkness
    -The still need to sleep, sometimes longer than normal humans
    -Allergic to garllic that could potentially kill him in large enough quantities
    -All holy objects and places which can burn, petrify and leave him greatly vulnerable
    -Reflection can cause vertigo, nausea, slight amnesia and things like that involving nausea
    -Whatever kills vampires, like stakes to the heart, kills him too.
    -A bullet to the head will knock him down for a few hours as his vampiric nature slowly rebuilds the synapses in her brain. A wood bullet -if successfully fired- will kill him indefinitely. A silver bullet to the head will lead to a very hefty case of amnesia, and a very long stay in bed.
    -Normal wounds will heal in a days time, but silver and wood inflicted wounds will heal slower than that of a normal person.

ABILITY CATEGORY: Magic
RANK: Private

    • AGE & DOB: 21, Nov 21 1995 (appears 14)
    • EDUCATION & OCCUPATIONAL HISTORY:

- École Secondaire de Locronan (Locronan High School) 2010 - 2011

-Académie de Paris pour Les Hommes Surdoués (Paris Academy for Gifted Humans) 2011 - 2014

-Served as private Vampire Hunter of France 2014 - 2017

    • SKILLS: A formidable combatant with both marksmanship and swordsmanship.
    • EQUIPMENT: Various weapons used to hunt and kill vampires including guns that carry wooden bullets and bullet capsules of garlic, holy water and other vampire toxins. Raphael also carries a big sword called 'Blood Drainer' and he often wears a special armor into combat while wearing dark clothing, preferably black, when off duty.
    • PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: Size: 5 feet 2.5 inches. Has deathly pale skin like a corpse, blood red eyes, long talon-like fingernails, and sharp curved fangs.
    • PSYCHOLOGICAL ASSESSMENT: PSTD. Raphaël suffers trauma from the Vampire attack on his family his unintentional killing of his his own little, causing night terrors and panics, as well as periods of depression over the past seven years. Raphaël struggles his instinctive thirst for human blood, making him have animalistic episodes after long periods without being quenched. Also, even though Raphael's technically 21, he's still biologically 14 and still has the attitude and personality of his age.
     • PERSONAL RELATIONSHIPS: His Parents have been wiped out by a Vampire Attack, and after being bitten and succumbing to vamprism unintentionally killed his own sister out of pure vampiric hunger. He still has grandparents, aunts, uncles and cousins, and have been living with the former for some time...
    • BIOGRAPHY AND BACKGROUND INFORMATION: Raphaël Raymond was born in the small town of Locronan, France to a middle-class family with a mom, dad and two sisters. He lived a happy, yet pretty normal life, being top of his class in school and best on the soccor team. However, everything changed when a group of vampires invaded the town of Locronan at night and attacked the townsfolk. Raphaël's parents fought them off along with the rest of the town, with him protecting his parents. However, they were both killed in the fight. The vampires then broke into Raphaël's home and though he fought them off he ended up bitten by one of the vampires in a struggle that ended with the attacker getting killed. Due to the fight, though, Raphaël was in the end transformed into a vampire fledgling, affecting both his physiology and his mind. In a newfound ravenous hunger for blood, Raphaël unintentionally turned on his sisters and killed them.

Raphaël was, the next morning, luckily for him a cloudy day, found by a group of super heros who came to Locronan to fight the Vampires. They found the boy orphaned in the basement, traumatized, rocking in a corner in fetal position, and unable to control his powers and animalistic thirst for blood. Thus, after carefully caring for Raphaël for sometime they sent him to an academy center for metas as a student, hoping that he would be rehabilitated. The newly fledged vampire did well at the school in both training and academia, even while struggling with trauma from the incident and his almost unquenchable thirst for blood. He made some friends at the academy, but remained a rather private kid and a loner.

Upon reaching the age of 18, though still biologically 14, Raphaël left the school to live with his grandparents. Inspired by the attack on his family with both guilt and a desire for revenge, became a vampire hunter, protecting the lands of France. Raphaël was quite successful for a time, being involved in many vampire attacks throughout France in the last 3 years. However, the young vampire began to lose control of himself, often succombing to his thirst for blood. So, Raphael recently joined Echo Ten to continue his work, but under more supervision on his increasingly uncontrollable vampirism.
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Mon Jan 23, 2017 5:06 pm

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    • NAME: Raphaël Raymond
    • PREVIOUS PROFESSION: High School Student, Vampire Hunter
    • NATIONALITY: French
    • GENDER: Male
    • ABILITY: -Vampire Physiology Raphaël is a vampire, being undead and having the ability and need to feed off the blood of humans and metas. Comes with semi-immortality, enhanced strength to the pount of lifting a car, speed to the point of running at 50 mph, and senses to smell blood from 5 miles and see clearly in the dark. However, Raphaël still has trouble controlling his enhanced capabilities and unsustainable thirst for blood. Though the more he feeds, the stronger he would get and the more control he would have over himself. This though, comes with most of the weaknesses of typical vampires including an aversion to sunlight, holiness and garlic, as well being able to be killed by a stake in the the heart.

ABILITY CATEGORY: Magic
RANK: Private

    • AGE & DOB: 21, Nov 21 1995 (appears 14)
    • EDUCATION & OCCUPATIONAL HISTORY:

- École Secondaire de Locronan (Locronan High School) 2010 - 2011

-Académie de Paris pour Les Hommes Surdoués (Paris Academy for Gifted Humans) 2011 - 2014

-Served as private Vampire Hunter of France 2014 - 2017

    • SKILLS: A formidable combatant with both marksmanship and swordsmanship.
    • EQUIPMENT: Various weapons used to hunt and kill vampires including guns that carry wooden bullets and bullet capsules of garlic, holy water and other vampire toxins. Raphael also carries a big sword called 'Blood Drainer' and he often wears a special armor into combat while wearing dark clothing, preferably black, when off duty.
    • PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: Size: 5 feet 2.5 inches. Has deathly pale skin like a corpse, blood red eyes, long talon-like fingernails, and sharp curved fangs.
    • PSYCHOLOGICAL ASSESSMENT: PSTD. Raphaël suffers trauma from the Vampire attack on his family his unintentional killing of his his own little, causing night terrors and panics, as well as periods of depression over the past seven years. Raphaël struggles his instinctive thirst for human blood, making him have animalistic episodes after long periods without being quenched. Also, even though Raphael's technically 21, he's still biologically 14 and still has the attitude and personality of his age.
     • PERSONAL RELATIONSHIPS: His Parents have been wiped out by a Vampire Attack, and after being bitten and succumbing to vamprism unintentionally killed his own sister out of pure vampiric hunger. He still has grandparents, aunts, uncles and cousins, and have been living with the former for some time...
    • BIOGRAPHY AND BACKGROUND INFORMATION: Raphaël Raymond was born in the small town of Locronan, France to a middle-class family with a mom, dad and two sisters. He lived a happy, yet pretty normal life, being top of his class in school and best on the soccor team. However, everything changed when a group of vampires invaded the town of Locronan at night and attacked the townsfolk. Raphaël's parents fought them off along with the rest of the town, with him protecting his parents. However, they were both killed in the fight. The vampires then broke into Raphaël's home and though he fought them off he ended up bitten by one of the vampires in a struggle that ended with the attacker getting killed. Due to the fight, though, Raphaël was in the end transformed into a vampire fledgling, affecting both his physiology and his mind. In a newfound ravenous hunger for blood, Raphaël unintentionally turned on his sisters and killed them.

Raphaël was, the next morning, luckily for him a cloudy day, found by a group of super heros who came to Locronan to fight the Vampires. They found the boy orphaned in the basement, traumatized, rocking in a corner in fetal position, and unable to control his powers and animalistic thirst for blood. Thus, after carefully caring for Raphaël for sometime they sent him to an academy center for metas as a student, hoping that he would be rehabilitated.

Upon reaching the age of 18, though still biologically 14, Raphaël left the school to live with his grandparents. Inspired by the attack on his family with both guilt and a desire for revenge, became a vampire hunter, protecting the lands of France. Raphaël was quite successful for a time, being involved in many vampire attacks throughout France in the last 3 years. However, the young vampire began to lose control of himself, often succombing to his thirst for blood. So, Raphael recently joined Echo Ten to continue his work, but under more supervision on his increasingly uncontrollable vampirism.


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Kractero wrote:i have this throbbing headache

Take some asprin or tylenol?
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    • NAME: Tobias Marquis
    • PREVIOUS PROFESSION: Mercenary
    • NATIONALITY: French
    • GENDER: Male
    • ABILITY: Spatial Manipulation
-Tobias can create pocket dimensions large enough to hold multiple people for about five to ten minutes. The time changes depending on how large the space is and how much of Tobias' attention is put into maintain the space.
-Tobias can create rifts through space to transport people and things anywhere Tobias already knows about. He can also use smaller versions of these rifts to redirect his bullet and keep them in motion.
-Tobias has a dimensional storage where he keeps his weapons and gear.
-Tobias can alter the space around him to where it interferes with the gravity acting on him, allowing Tobias to create his own and walk on ceiling or walls.

    • ABILITY CATEGORY: Shifter
    • RANK: Private
    • AGE & DOB: 28 / July 10, 1988
    • EDUCATION & OCCUPATIONAL HISTORY:
-Tobias received a full public school education and a bachelor's degree in Mathematics with a minor in philosophy.
-Served in the Crimson Wolves for 6 years before recruited for Echo Ten.

    • SKILLS:
-Expert sniper
-Proficient with other firearms; mainly handguns and SMGs.
-Expert in field reconnaissance

    • EQUIPMENT:
-PGM Hecate II (Saved for anti-material purposes but sometimes used against heavily armed opponents)
-PGM 338/PGM Mini-Hecate .338 (For anti-personnel use)
-P90
-Two P9 pistols

    • PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
-Caucasian Male
- Height 6'3"
- Weight 200 lbs.
-Wears glasses even though he has 20/20 vision, he says that they "complete his look."

    • PSYCHOLOGICAL ASSESSMENT: Tobias is very laid-back and cocky in every aspect. Even in very serious or depressing situations he will be the one to belt out a wise-crack or sarcastic comment, giving off a sense that he doesn't really care about anything. He enjoys taunting others and rarely lets someone trick or outsmart him. Knowing the value of information, Tobias likes to find out as many secrets as possible, which not only help when he's doing recon but as when he tries to spy on his own allies. The only way he'd tell information about something not mission critical is too vague for most people to understand. Tobias doesn't really have any motivation; he doesn't have anyone to impress and he's fine with the life he's living. Although money thrown in the right direction has proven to get result from Tobias quicker than most. Tobias also has a bit of a sadistic side as he finds human suffering and failure hilarious, this is probably due to his past trauma as a child.
    • PERSONAL RELATIONSHIPS:
-No living blood relatives. Adoptive father, Dimitri Marquis, who is actively serving as leader of the Crimson Wolves.

    • BIOGRAPHY AND BACKGROUND INFORMATION: As a child, Tobias was always laid-back deviant. He was good in school and particularly in math, but he never showed too much of an interest in other subjects. His life was fine until his family decided to take a vacation out to the Middle East when Tobias was 10. Without much warning a skirmish between two warring factions. Unable to escape, Tobias and his parents were taken prisoners by one of the factions. They were held there for weeks before Tobias' parents were killed as an example to make the faction seem more powerful. Eventually the opposing faction hire a mercenary group called the Crimson Wolves to help them defeat their enemy. The Wolves cleared out the prison camp and rescued all the hostages. Dimitri found Tobias huddled in the corner of his cell, laughing and crying at the same time. Having enough sympathy in his heart, Dimitri decided to take Tobias in as his adoptive son.

Dimitri let Tobias live as much of a normal life that he could have. He returned Tobias to his home in Paris and watched over him until he was sure Tobias could take care of himself. Still, Tobias was definitely scarred after the whole ordeal, but it seemed to have changed him in many ways. Throughout the rest of his life things started disappearing and reappearing in different places. At first Tobias just took it as he was forgetting where he placed things, but then it got to where things would disappear and reappear days later and nowhere near where he lost it. Eventually he figured out that he was the one making things disappear and reappear. Tobias found that if he concentrated and focused hard enough, he could make rifts through space that acted as portals. Whenever he had free time he found himself honing his new found skill.

Tobias finished out his school life and by the time he got out of college he figured out what he wanted to do with his life. He decided to join his adoptive father and went to work for the Crimson Wolves. He found particular interest in sniping and was trained under the group's sniper. Sometimes he would use his powers to make "impossible" shots and impress the other guys. Eventually Tobias did tell Dimitri and the mercenary group about his abilities and they figured out a way he could use his powers for the good of the group. Tobias started running reconnaissance missions for the group to give them intel and make ops run smoother. It was a good life for Tobias until Echo Ten came in a recruited him.
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Postby Altito Asmoro » Tue Jan 24, 2017 5:17 am

The Flutterlands wrote:
Kractero wrote:i have this throbbing headache

Take some asprin or tylenol?


Flutterlands, you are clear for posting in IC now.

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NAME: Tobias Marquis
PREVIOUS PROFESSION: Mercenary
NATIONALITY: French
GENDER: Male
ABILITY: Spatial Manipulation
-Tobias can create pocket dimensions large enough to hold multiple people for about five to ten minutes. The time changes depending on how large the space is and how much of Tobias' attention is put into maintain the space.
-Tobias can create rifts through space to transport people and things anywhere Tobias already knows about. He can also use smaller versions of these rifts to redirect his bullet and keep them in motion.
-Tobias has a dimensional storage where he keeps his weapons and gear.
-Tobias can alter the space around him to where it interferes with the gravity acting on him, allowing Tobias to create his own and walk on ceiling or walls.

ABILITY CATEGORY: Shifter
RANK: Private
AGE & DOB: 26 / July 10, 1990
EDUCATION & OCCUPATIONAL HISTORY:
-Tobias received a full public school education and a bachelor's degree in Mathematics with a minor in philosophy.
-Served in the Crimson Wolves for 4 years before recruited for Echo Ten.

SKILLS:
-Expert sniper
-Proficient with other firearms; mainly handguns and SMGs.
-Expert in field reconnaissance

EQUIPMENT:
-PGM Hecate II (Saved for anti-material purposes but sometimes used against heavily armed opponents)
-PGM 338/PGM Mini-Hecate .338 (For anti-personnel use)
-P90
-Two P9 pistols

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
-Caucasian Male
- Height 6'3"
- Weight 200 lbs.
-Wears glasses even though he has 20/20 vision, he says that they "complete his look."

PSYCHOLOGICAL ASSESSMENT: Tobias is very laid-back and cocky in every aspect. Even in very serious or depressing situations he will be the one to belt out a wise-crack or sarcastic comment, giving off a sense that he doesn't really care about anything. He enjoys taunting others and rarely lets someone trick or outsmart him. Knowing the value of information, Tobias likes to find out as many secrets as possible, which not only help when he's doing recon but as when he tries to spy on his own allies. The only way he'd tell information about something not mission critical is too vague for most people to understand. Tobias doesn't really have any motivation; he doesn't have anyone to impress and he's fine with the life he's living. Although money thrown in the right direction has proven to get result from Tobias quicker than most. Tobias also has a bit of a sadistic side as he finds human suffering and failure hilarious, this is probably due to his past trauma as a child.
PERSONAL RELATIONSHIPS:
-No living blood relatives. Adoptive father, Dimitri Marquis, who is actively serving as leader of the Crimson Wolves.

BIOGRAPHY AND BACKGROUND INFORMATION: As a child, Tobias was always laid-back deviant. He was good in school and particularly in math, but he never showed too much of an interest in other subjects. His life was fine until his family decided to take a vacation out to the Middle East when Tobias was 10. Without much warning a skirmish between two warring factions. Unable to escape, Tobias and his parents were taken prisoners by one of the factions. They were held there for weeks before Tobias' parents were killed as an example to make the faction seem more powerful. Eventually the opposing faction hire a mercenary group called the Crimson Wolves to help them defeat their enemy. The Wolves cleared out the prison camp and rescued all the hostages. Dimitri found Tobias huddled in the corner of his cell, laughing and crying at the same time. Having enough sympathy in his heart, Dimitri decided to take Tobias in as his adoptive son.

Dimitri let Tobias live as much of a normal life that he could have. He returned Tobias to his home in Paris and watched over him until he was sure Tobias could take care of himself. Still, Tobias was definitely scarred after the whole ordeal, but it seemed to have changed him in many ways. Throughout the rest of his life things started disappearing and reappearing in different places. At first Tobias just took it as he was forgetting where he placed things, but then it got to where things would disappear and reappear days later and nowhere near where he lost it. Eventually he figured out that he was the one making things disappear and reappear. Tobias found that if he concentrated and focused hard enough, he could make rifts through space that acted as portals. Whenever he had free time he found himself honing his new found skill.

Tobias finished out his school life and by the time he got out of college he figured out what he wanted to do with his life. He decided to join his adoptive father and went to work for the Crimson Wolves. He found particular interest in sniping and was trained under the group's sniper. Sometimes he would use his powers to make "impossible" shots and impress the other guys. Eventually Tobias did tell Dimitri and the mercenary group about his abilities and they figured out a way he could use his powers for the good of the group. Tobias started running reconnaissance missions for the group to give them intel and make ops run smoother. It was a good life for Tobias until Echo Ten came in a recruited him.


Nothing's wrong here. Accepted. Though I have something of a minor thing regarding the expertise in military and your character's current age. I'm not quite the military expert here but I do think you need to make him at least 28, perhaps.
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Postby Bycrest » Tue Jan 24, 2017 6:12 am

Altito Asmoro wrote:
Bycrest wrote:
FILE CLASSIFIED: LEVEL: TOP SECRET: Information marked as top secret is that whose release is liable to cause considerable loss of life, international diplomatic incidents, or severely impact ongoing intelligence operations
ITEM CODE: #TANGOALPHAGOLF (DO NOT ALTER OR MODIFY IN ANY WAY.)



NAME: Tobias Marquis
PREVIOUS PROFESSION: Mercenary
NATIONALITY: French
GENDER: Male
ABILITY: Spatial Manipulation
-Tobias can create pocket dimensions large enough to hold multiple people for about five to ten minutes. The time changes depending on how large the space is and how much of Tobias' attention is put into maintain the space.
-Tobias can create rifts through space to transport people and things anywhere Tobias already knows about. He can also use smaller versions of these rifts to redirect his bullet and keep them in motion.
-Tobias has a dimensional storage where he keeps his weapons and gear.
-Tobias can alter the space around him to where it interferes with the gravity acting on him, allowing Tobias to create his own and walk on ceiling or walls.

ABILITY CATEGORY: Shifter
RANK: Private
AGE & DOB: 26 / July 10, 1990
EDUCATION & OCCUPATIONAL HISTORY:
-Tobias received a full public school education and a bachelor's degree in Mathematics with a minor in philosophy.
-Served in the Crimson Wolves for 4 years before recruited for Echo Ten.

SKILLS:
-Expert sniper
-Proficient with other firearms; mainly handguns and SMGs.
-Expert in field reconnaissance

EQUIPMENT:
-PGM Hecate II (Saved for anti-material purposes but sometimes used against heavily armed opponents)
-PGM 338/PGM Mini-Hecate .338 (For anti-personnel use)
-P90
-Two P9 pistols

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION:
-Caucasian Male
- Height 6'3"
- Weight 200 lbs.
-Wears glasses even though he has 20/20 vision, he says that they "complete his look."

PSYCHOLOGICAL ASSESSMENT: Tobias is very laid-back and cocky in every aspect. Even in very serious or depressing situations he will be the one to belt out a wise-crack or sarcastic comment, giving off a sense that he doesn't really care about anything. He enjoys taunting others and rarely lets someone trick or outsmart him. Knowing the value of information, Tobias likes to find out as many secrets as possible, which not only help when he's doing recon but as when he tries to spy on his own allies. The only way he'd tell information about something not mission critical is too vague for most people to understand. Tobias doesn't really have any motivation; he doesn't have anyone to impress and he's fine with the life he's living. Although money thrown in the right direction has proven to get result from Tobias quicker than most. Tobias also has a bit of a sadistic side as he finds human suffering and failure hilarious, this is probably due to his past trauma as a child.
PERSONAL RELATIONSHIPS:
-No living blood relatives. Adoptive father, Dimitri Marquis, who is actively serving as leader of the Crimson Wolves.

BIOGRAPHY AND BACKGROUND INFORMATION: As a child, Tobias was always laid-back deviant. He was good in school and particularly in math, but he never showed too much of an interest in other subjects. His life was fine until his family decided to take a vacation out to the Middle East when Tobias was 10. Without much warning a skirmish between two warring factions. Unable to escape, Tobias and his parents were taken prisoners by one of the factions. They were held there for weeks before Tobias' parents were killed as an example to make the faction seem more powerful. Eventually the opposing faction hire a mercenary group called the Crimson Wolves to help them defeat their enemy. The Wolves cleared out the prison camp and rescued all the hostages. Dimitri found Tobias huddled in the corner of his cell, laughing and crying at the same time. Having enough sympathy in his heart, Dimitri decided to take Tobias in as his adoptive son.

Dimitri let Tobias live as much of a normal life that he could have. He returned Tobias to his home in Paris and watched over him until he was sure Tobias could take care of himself. Still, Tobias was definitely scarred after the whole ordeal, but it seemed to have changed him in many ways. Throughout the rest of his life things started disappearing and reappearing in different places. At first Tobias just took it as he was forgetting where he placed things, but then it got to where things would disappear and reappear days later and nowhere near where he lost it. Eventually he figured out that he was the one making things disappear and reappear. Tobias found that if he concentrated and focused hard enough, he could make rifts through space that acted as portals. Whenever he had free time he found himself honing his new found skill.

Tobias finished out his school life and by the time he got out of college he figured out what he wanted to do with his life. He decided to join his adoptive father and went to work for the Crimson Wolves. He found particular interest in sniping and was trained under the group's sniper. Sometimes he would use his powers to make "impossible" shots and impress the other guys. Eventually Tobias did tell Dimitri and the mercenary group about his abilities and they figured out a way he could use his powers for the good of the group. Tobias started running reconnaissance missions for the group to give them intel and make ops run smoother. It was a good life for Tobias until Echo Ten came in a recruited him.


Nothing's wrong here. Accepted. Though I have something of a minor thing regarding the expertise in military and your character's current age. I'm not quite the military expert here but I do think you need to make him at least 28, perhaps.

That's fine, I only made him 26 cause I didn't feeling like figuring out dates at the time.
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Postby Forest State » Tue Jan 24, 2017 7:03 am

Other than what AA brought up, that looks like a good app to me.

I'm going to do another IC post this afternoon to show everyone to their housing, and I can also talk to anyone's character if they need interaction. There's going to be a few more days of this period to let everyone get a chance to get into the thread, before I move anyone who is inactive and hasn't posted to another unit and start the mission prep for the active players.
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Postby Finsternia » Tue Jan 24, 2017 7:10 am

Forest State wrote:Other than what AA brought up, that looks like a good app to me.

I'm going to do another IC post this afternoon to show everyone to their housing, and I can also talk to anyone's character if they need interaction. There's going to be a few more days of this period to let everyone get a chance to get into the thread, before I move anyone who is inactive and hasn't posted to another unit and start the mission prep for the active players.

Please do include Lagren! ^^
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Postby Doughertania » Tue Jan 24, 2017 8:35 am

Forest State wrote:Other than what AA brought up, that looks like a good app to me.

I'm going to do another IC post this afternoon to show everyone to their housing, and I can also talk to anyone's character if they need interaction. There's going to be a few more days of this period to let everyone get a chance to get into the thread, before I move anyone who is inactive and hasn't posted to another unit and start the mission prep for the active players.

Will post today after my tests.
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Postby Setinel » Tue Jan 24, 2017 9:15 am

So Jack had a run in with a wormhole/space time hole/ufo/weather baloon. Would his chronometer field be way out of wack?
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Postby North Tyranis » Tue Jan 24, 2017 9:38 am

Sort of. I'm just kind of working out the details as I go along. One of the main reasons my char joined Echo was to learn how to use his power, so I plan to have him (and myself) figure this stuff out as he trains.

But, yes, his chronon field could be jacked up because of that.... and also his affect on the main timeline, the way he influences events.

Like I said, still working on details.
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Postby Setinel » Tue Jan 24, 2017 9:52 am

North Tyranis wrote:Sort of. I'm just kind of working out the details as I go along. One of the main reasons my char joined Echo was to learn how to use his power, so I plan to have him (and myself) figure this stuff out as he trains.

But, yes, his chronon field could be jacked up because of that.... and also his affect on the main timeline, the way he influences events.

Like I said, still working on details.


It's your character. I just like imagining how he'd react, looking at everyone else's somewhat off fields and then looking at Jack and seeing a mushroom cloud of desctruction. Just like

"Dafuq?" :blink:
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Postby North Tyranis » Tue Jan 24, 2017 9:53 am

THAT would be funny.

I need to develop this more...hehe :D
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Postby The Flutterlands » Tue Jan 24, 2017 10:52 am

Going to make first post later this evening.
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Postby Talchyon » Tue Jan 24, 2017 10:59 am

Tag.
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Postby Forest State » Wed Jan 25, 2017 12:04 pm

There's actually going to be a bit of a delay before the next post, but if you guys want, you can start heading to the housing area and having your characters unpack. The unit reorganization is coming in the next few days, too.
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Postby Forest State » Thu Jan 26, 2017 6:23 pm

OK, well, that post wasn't as good as my usual standards but I quickly wrote it on mobile. I think I'm setting the date for the briefing for the first mission on Saturday, I'll have the mission information up to tomorrow.
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Postby Frinalia » Thu Jan 26, 2017 6:33 pm

Forest State wrote:OK, well, that post wasn't as good as my usual standards but I quickly wrote it on mobile. I think I'm setting the date for the briefing for the first mission on Saturday, I'll have the mission information up to tomorrow.

So are we chilling in the cafeteria area now?
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Postby Forest State » Thu Jan 26, 2017 8:26 pm

Frinalia wrote:
Forest State wrote:OK, well, that post wasn't as good as my usual standards but I quickly wrote it on mobile. I think I'm setting the date for the briefing for the first mission on Saturday, I'll have the mission information up to tomorrow.

So are we chilling in the cafeteria area now?

Actually it's the plaza outside that area, but yeah. Everyone can either choose to check out the rooms or they can keep talking till the time skip.
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Postby Frinalia » Thu Jan 26, 2017 8:38 pm

Forest State wrote:Actually it's the plaza outside that area, but yeah. Everyone can either choose to check out the rooms or they can keep talking till the time skip.

Okay, thanks!
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