He's a one-man Hooters!
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by Giovenith » Wed Jan 18, 2017 9:13 pm
by Northwest Slobovia » Wed Jan 18, 2017 10:13 pm
by Tiltjuice » Wed Jan 18, 2017 11:25 pm
by Granis » Thu Jan 19, 2017 12:03 am
by Tiltjuice » Thu Jan 19, 2017 12:54 am
Granis wrote:Ok, so here's my character app. I feel like I'll get a little lost at this point though, so where and how should I introduce myself if I'm accepted.-snip-
by Fvaarniimar » Thu Jan 19, 2017 2:21 am
having already watched their world being combined with the one the demon came from, an act which forever warped it.
which proceeded to start fusing the world of spirits with the normal human world.
by Granis » Thu Jan 19, 2017 2:45 am
Fvaarniimar wrote:@Granis
Tl ;dr: Nice app, in my opinion, but you'd better clarify what's meant by "spirit world."
This bit: okay. Also, cool.having already watched their world being combined with the one the demon came from, an act which forever warped it.
This bit, on the other hand, could be a problem depending on the nature of the "world of spirits." Is it a world full of fairly-traditional ghosts, a world of unsettling creatures...or is it an afterlife? While I'm not sure about hells, heavens for the purposes of this RP are worlds/dimensions formed by extremely powerful beings, under the purview of said beings, and accessible only with their permission. If the "world of spirits" is an afterlife, then it is not unlikely that "fusing" would require the creator of said afterlife to be actively involved...and very few players can run these Greater Beings, even as antagonists.
which proceeded to start fusing the world of spirits with the normal human world.
by Mincaldenteans » Thu Jan 19, 2017 9:02 am
by Tiltjuice » Thu Jan 19, 2017 9:13 am
by Torsiedelle » Thu Jan 19, 2017 1:06 pm
by Torrocca » Thu Jan 19, 2017 1:11 pm
by Granis » Thu Jan 19, 2017 1:20 pm
Mincaldenteans wrote:Granis and UEA, your apps will be reviewed by Cer sometime this week. Thank you for your patience.
That said, Granis, upon looking at your app, this guy is a one man walking army and needs toning down. A master of "all forms of combat" at age 24 is not realistic, however you have his points at 4 which makes him exceptionally trained - not a master of all. His rune array enchantment ability needs some serious details. At 7, this needs a serious weakness (runing an organic is easily avoidable, that is not a weakness), and restriction (objects must be large enough to draw and cannot be remote activated is not a restiction; avoidable in IC). It needs to be explained what all it can and cannot do, it needs limits. I'm conformable seeing this lowered a notch or three to level 4 or 5.
The listed equipment needs to be listed completely. Vague effects will not do as Cer will not take random things in IC that comes from your character (The jacket protects from what, exactly? Runed weapons, knife and bullets can do what, precisely? What are their restrictions?). If it's not in the app, or worked and established in IC, the char doesn't have it and/or can't do it.
You character ability is a good one, we just don't need a one man army. He's young, he can learn and harness his ability while among the Residents to its full potential rather than being already there, which gives no room for developing that aspect and runs risk of your char falling flat, or worse, IC issues.
by Giovenith » Thu Jan 19, 2017 2:33 pm
by Torsiedelle » Thu Jan 19, 2017 3:21 pm
by Cerillium » Thu Jan 19, 2017 3:25 pm
I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith
There is a fifth dimension beyond that which is known to man. It is a dimension as vast as space and as timeless as infinity. It is the middle ground between light and shadow, between science and superstition, and it lies between the pit of man’s fears, and the summit of his knowledge. This is the dimension of imagination.
by Mincaldenteans » Thu Jan 19, 2017 4:44 pm
by The BranRiech » Thu Jan 19, 2017 4:56 pm
by Cerillium » Thu Jan 19, 2017 6:41 pm
Mincaldenteans wrote:Cer, not sure if you needed a list, but here it is anyway. If anyone's missing, please post link.
ChedGranis
- Romy & Nivea: viewtopic.php?p=30889081#p30889081
NA
- Jack Evans: viewtopic.php?p=30919407#p30919407
Min
- Maghrl, Venla and Sidney (2nd post below): viewtopic.php?p=30887464#p30887464
PrimTilt
- Primordial: viewtopic.php?p=30903584#p30903584
TorsiUAE:
- Flan & Monty: viewtopic.php?p=30915717#p30915717
I wear teal, blue & pink for Swith
There is a fifth dimension beyond that which is known to man. It is a dimension as vast as space and as timeless as infinity. It is the middle ground between light and shadow, between science and superstition, and it lies between the pit of man’s fears, and the summit of his knowledge. This is the dimension of imagination.
by Holy Lykos » Thu Jan 19, 2017 6:43 pm
by Northwest Slobovia » Thu Jan 19, 2017 6:44 pm
Holy Lykos wrote:erm, cer, Romulus is still on the mission with Venla?
Real Romulus I mean. Unless this is paper Romy.
by Holy Lykos » Thu Jan 19, 2017 6:52 pm
by The BranRiech » Thu Jan 19, 2017 6:56 pm
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