The Court (OOC/Fantasy Medieval RP/OPEN)

[Gerdon Laughis]

Age needs to be raised and grammar has to be worked on. 40+ is more believable for positions like that. I'd try to offer better feedback but I'm on my phone right now so I'm sorry about that.

How is mine?

[Lorduex]

Age needs to be raised and grammar has to be worked on. 40+ is more believable for positions like that. I'd try to offer better feedback but I'm on my phone right now so I'm sorry about that.

Hey, I saw the new post and I just wanted to tell you that you kinda left the Horned Guard and John hanging around waiting for you to allow them to get up from their oath position. I'd also like to have at least 3 Horned Guard accompany you at all times since you are the new Emperor.

[The Central Fascist Empires]

How is mine?

Accepted

[The Central Fascist Empires]

Age needs to be raised and grammar has to be worked on. 40+ is more believable for positions like that. I'd try to offer better feedback but I'm on my phone right now so I'm sorry about that.

Hey, I saw the new post and I just wanted to tell you that you kinda left the Horned Guard and John hanging around waiting for you to allow them to get up from their oath position. I'd also like to have at least 3 Horned Guard accompany you at all times since you are the new Emperor.

I'll cover that in my next post.

[New Communist and Socialist Unions]

How is mine?

Accepted

Random DEUS VULT here.

Also, kwahahahahahaha, Lug is SCP-173 in human form lol.

[Bentus]

Is Lug proposing a rival organisation to the Spymaster's agents? Now that could be interesting - especially if there's also an Assassin's Guild with this other character. I wonder if there'd be some competition between the different groups and how they'd divide up their work/duties...

[New Antegria II]

Hey, I saw the new post and I just wanted to tell you that you kinda left the Horned Guard and John hanging around waiting for you to allow them to get up from their oath position. I'd also like to have at least 3 Horned Guard accompany you at all times since you are the new Emperor.

I'll cover that in my next post.

Does the rp example need fixing because that was back when i was a rp noob

[The Central Fascist Empires]

I'll cover that in my next post.

Does the rp example need fixing because that was back when i was a rp noob

Write an example in your characters perspective.

[Auropa]

Just wrote up a post of Loke entering the castle though its about 1 in the morning here (yay timezones) so I'm heading off to bed.

[Atreidya]

Sorry for the outbursty feeling of my post I felt like it had to be tha way as I didn't realize Keros was technically part of your council until you posted something saying it.

[New Communist and Socialist Unions]

Is Lug proposing a rival organisation to the Spymaster's agents? Now that could be interesting - especially if there's also an Assassin's Guild with this other character. I wonder if there'd be some competition between the different groups and how they'd divide up their work/duties...

Do you have time to hear of our Lord KEK?

[Gerdon Laughis]

So where do you want me to jump in? How can I?

[Erhialam]

Alright, for a grand reentry into Nationstates-land, I'll give this a go. Perhaps another royal family member?


Name of character: Syanne Blackmoor
Appearance: A tall, plain woman with dark hair, a slightly crooked nose, and her family's pale eyes.
Age: 43
Titles: Crowned Duchess
Position: Sister to the Emperor, not technically an advisor but a powerful person at court nonetheless
House: Blackmoor
House Words: As Strong As The Mountains
Inventory: A beautiful dagger, for defending herself if absolutely necessary, a small stock of poisons, a lesser Blackmoor signet ring
Knighthood/Guild (If any): N/A

Skills:
Martial: 4
Stewardship: 7
Intrigue: 19
Holiness: 4
Loyalty: 10
Renown: 16

Traits: Syanne is cunning and would stoop even to the Machiavellian if necessary, and while she is motivated by power, she is not entirely heartless or without empathy or care. She was not, even in her youth, considered beautiful, and thus learned the finer points of reading people and utilizing the information from an early age.


RP Examples: My work here is a fair representation of my writing, if a little more flowery that usual.

[Acumenian Empire]

Application:
Name of character: King Vexius
Appearance: 6'4", bearded red hair (think Charlemenge, except less impressive in every way)
Age: 49
Titles: King of the Praerelum Dynasty of Gatia, Lord of Whateverland
Position: Commander of the Empire of Qyr
House: House Allerton
House Words: By the Shield of Divine Love, By the Sword of Understanding
inventory: Full metal breastplate, sword inscribed with symbols and gems, with a diamond in the hilt (sword is fully functional, yes, but mostly ceremonial).
Knighthood/Guild: None

Skills:
(30 Points to divide between Martial, Stewardship, and intrigue)
Martial: 13
Stewardship: 8
Intrigue: 9
Holiness: 8
Loyalty: 14
Renown: 8

Traits:
Intelligent, Skilled Strategist, Skilled Orator, tends to be more passive than assertive

RP Examples*:

King Vexius strode into his private chambers, forcefully, as if to dare the universe to smite him here, in the epicenter of his domain, as it had on so many other occasions today. Today, his nephew, traitorous scum, had openly rebelled from his rule. Within the hour, insult upon injury came in full force, as even his most ardent advisors and supporters fled to the new upstart. If there was a room in the entire Empire in which he should be safe from further ruin, it would be the very one upon which he now stood. This bedchamber had been in his possession even before he had been King - a reminder of the nature of things to change, one which he truthfully could do without at the moment - and it had seen all trials and tribulations the mind could conjure. It had been his place of solitude, of rest and restitution for longer than his formidable mind could remember, and the comsmos knew he needed that dearly at the moment. However, when you challenge the universe, dare it to do more, to strike harder, strike faster, the stars respond.

[The Central Fascist Empires]

Snip

Looks good, accepted. Just finished up the incomplete parts.

[Novas Arcanum]

would a spy/assassin from G'haz be doable?

[The Central Fascist Empires]

Yup.

[Danceria]

Ye old Tag

[Danceria]

Application:
Name of character:
Appearance:
Age:
Titles:
Position:
House: (Not necessary)
House Words: (Not necessary)
inventory:
Knighthood/Guild (If any):

Skills:
(30 Points to divide between Martial, Stewardship, and intrigue)
Martial: 1-20
Stewardship: 1-20
Intrigue: 1-20
Holiness: 1-20
Loyalty: 1-20
Renown: 1-20

Traits:
(IE: Brave, Cowardly)

RP Examples*:

*If you have no RP examples, just type a few sentences as your character so I get an idea of your ability and what you're going for.

[Novas Arcanum]

Application:
Name of character: Anora Sendu
Appearance:

Age:25
Titles:Knight-Assassin
Position:Assassin/Spy
House:N/A
House Words:N/A
inventory: Hooded robes,retractable blades,lightweight Sabre ,5 poison darts,and 5 smoke bombs
Knighthood/Guild (If any): Brotherhood of the Red Lotus

Skills:
(30 Points to divide between Martial, Stewardship, and intrigue)
Martial: 10
Stewardship:0
Intrigue: 20
Holiness: 3
Loyalty:10
Renown: 10

Traits:Intelligent,patient, stealthy,cunning,quick,deadly,charitable
(IE: Brave, Cowardly)

RP Examples*:Anora crouched on top of the Tower of Shaheer, in the town of Mit Nun.It was a cloudless day the sun high in the sky."Gods, what is taking Nazir so long?",she whispered to herself, she had been waiting for what seemed forever, and her blades grew restless.Finally a red tailed hawk flew her way and landed on her leather gauntlet."Took you long enough" She said slightly annoyed has she freed the parchment from the hawks' leg, the hawk looked at her with a puzzled face and then flew off to the sky, after reading the note, she smirked and leaped off the tower with the elegance of a bird and landed into a wagon of hay, after jumping out she blended into the crowd of villagers and walked to the Grand Bazaar.

There she saw the person that she was supposed to take down. Her blood boiled has she saw officer Amos in iron armor push down a fruit seller demanding 50 gold in so called "taxes" She climbed the buildings with the grace of a cat and tailed him, a predator among prey has he traveled the town extorting merchants and beating up anyone who couldn't afford the gold.While she wished to kill him there were simply far too many onlookers in the open, she had to wait for the perfect moment to strike.At last that moment came has Amos and his two cronies came to a dark alleyway, has Amos was giving orders to the guards she emerged from the shadows and knocked both of them out."Well Amos I would say that this location is certainly a downgrade, but given your despicable character I would consider it most appropriate" she said in a disgusted tone.Amos looked at her with a shocked expression, then yelling unsheathed his sword and ran toward her, she flipped behind him and stabbed him with her retractable blade, and he soon fell to the ground bleeding."Thus all tyrants fall" she said repeating the Orders motto. After throwing Amos' body into the nearby canal she took the coin pouches from the guards and spent the remainder of the day returning the gold to the merchants.

[Gerdon Laughis]

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I ship it

[Novas Arcanum]

-snip-

I ship it

Sorry?

[Gerdon Laughis]

I ship it

Sorry?

My character and yours

[Danceria]

Application:
Name of character: Jacen Robidas
Appearance: Here
Age: 18
Titles: Duke of Ravennea (heir to), Count of Hovland
Position: Knight under the command of Captain Cambridge
House: Hovdus
House Words: "Rooted In Wisdom"
inventory: A shield that has a black rose on it
A copy of the Holy Scriptures
A copy of the History of the Empire
Parchment and Pen
Lute
Falchion
Knighthood/Guild (If any): Black Thistle Mercenary Company (Raised their for six years)

Skills:
(30 Points to divide between Martial, Stewardship, and intrigue)
Martial: 11*
Stewardship: 8*
Intrigue: 9*
Holiness: 3
Loyalty: 8
Renown: 1* (Nobody knows of him, yet...)

Traits: Diligent (Bolsters Martial, Stewardship and Intrigue by 1 point, able to learn/increase stats 10% more often), Patient (Increases Intrigue by 1), Brave (increases Martial by 2), Detached Mercenary (Bolsters Martial and Intrigue by 1, decreases Holiness by 1) Diplomat (Able to convince people if odds favor him), Musician (Increases Renown by 1)

RP Examples*:
The Young Man rode up to the great heart of the empire, already feeling small in the vast expanses of the country and palace, and he once more gazed upon the letter his father, Duke Timareus of Ravennea sent unto him

My Dearest Son,

I write to you with a sense of urgency, as you know, my Lord Cousin, James, intends to incite rebellion against the king. His Imperial Majesty, in some slip of sanity, has decided to bring you unto his house to hold our lineage safe, or to hold you hostage against the rising rebellion.

Remember your training in the woods, know who are the foulest of beasts here, and do not become them.

I pray to the Gods for your success,

Your Loving Father

[Argentarino]

Sorry for being a bit inactive, I've been traveling and on my phone. I'll try to get another post up today.