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Dires
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Postby Dires » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:35 am

Tracian Empire wrote:
Trotza wrote:This sounds more like modern day Chinese production capacity ambitions to me. Except before that could happen they kind of needed the Cultural Revolution to wipe away what remained of the old society to clear the path for the new. As far as I'm aware you haven't had that level of a sociopolitical event.

That's why I'm comparing it to Imperial Russia. A Westernized center, and the capability to be quite modern, but a still backwards society and many problems.


They didn't need the Cultural Revolution for anything, period. That was purely to keep the CCP from removing Mao from power. True, but I've purged my enemies. I don't have anyone opposing me and I've had modern education made a requirement for all.

China was modernizing quite nicely before the Communists ever came to power.
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The Alps Confederation
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Founded: Apr 27, 2016
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Postby The Alps Confederation » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:35 am

Trotza wrote:
The Alps Confederation wrote:Could I have some FEEDBACK pls?

Sure. I find your concept for a nation and explanation of how you say it came to be distasteful as a whole.

I meat my damn Military numbers, YEAH?

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The Alps Confederation
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Postby The Alps Confederation » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:36 am

760,000 active duty and 1st Reserve personnel: former Class A and B(1) conscripts after two-year active tour with 17 and 1/2 year commitment
100,000 Second line Reserve: Same as above but former Class B(2) conscripts
440,000 National Army
- 1st National Army: 37- to 40-year-old men from end of 1st Reserve to 40 years old.
- 2nd National Army: untrained 20-year-olds and over-40-year-old trained reserves.
8,500,000 men available for service and mobilization.

Should I lower these numbers by 25% 50% ? I went with these numbers due to my large population size and trying to balance the ratio.
Also, in particular with the last category, since there won't be enough rifles to equip them all, some have to resort to indigenous and improvised weapons.

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The Alps Confederation
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Postby The Alps Confederation » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:37 am

Trotza wrote:
The Alps Confederation wrote:Could I have some FEEDBACK pls?

Sure. I find your concept for a nation and explanation of how you say it came to be distasteful as a whole.

Thrace already accepted it and found it plausible, no reason to question the one in charge?

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Trotza
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Founded: Feb 03, 2016
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Postby Trotza » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:38 am

Dires wrote:
Tracian Empire wrote:That's why I'm comparing it to Imperial Russia. A Westernized center, and the capability to be quite modern, but a still backwards society and many problems.


They didn't need the Cultural Revolution for anything, period. That was purely to keep the CCP from removing Mao from power. True, but I've purged my enemies. I don't have anyone opposing me and I've had modern education made a requirement for all.

China was modernizing quite nicely before the Communists ever came to power.

Ah, yes, a "great leap" in education of sorts, and everything else apparently. And we just talked about the purges and how they don't help.
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- Gustav Noske, in the face of the Communist Revolution of 1919 in Berlin

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Dires
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Founded: Aug 16, 2011
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Postby Dires » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:38 am

I think, we can settle that my core military is at least Russian level and that anything else will need additional time.
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Political Compass
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http://www.politicaltest.net/test/result/400019/

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Greater Slavic Union
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Founded: Mar 26, 2016
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Postby Greater Slavic Union » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:38 am

Greater Slavic Union wrote:Any of you speaks Serbian?


?
Official Name: ZápadoSłováńský Králevství
Population: 124.480.112

King: Král Michal I Kolovrát
Population growth: 2,3%

Queen: Královna Klaudia Katmařková-Kolovrátová
PPP GDP: 5.848 billion SK (Slavic Krunas)

Heirs: Crown Prince Oleg, Crown Princess Sylvia,
Warsaw Dukess Oksana, Prince of Prague Paveł
Nominal GDP: 3.868 billion USD

Current Royal Family: Kolovrát House
Fertility Index: 2,1 childs per woman

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The Alps Confederation
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Founded: Apr 27, 2016
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Postby The Alps Confederation » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:39 am

Dires wrote:I think, we can settle that my core military is at least Russian level and that anything else will need additional time.

Could you please take a look at my military numbers???

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Zostra
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Founded: May 27, 2016
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Postby Zostra » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:39 am

Dires wrote:
Zostra wrote:
Yeah, Japan is small and was already extremely urbanized which made it much easier to reform. This was also combined with near absolute homogeneity in culture, language, and religion and a holy reverence for the emperor. China could definitely form a modern, westernized core, think of the Nanjing Decade. However, even modern China has problems with extreme poverty, corruption, and general backwardness in rural and "frontier" areas. I imagine this China would suffer from the same issues.


That's fine, though resurgence in China's position has restored a similar level of awe in the citizenry for our own Emperor who's still the Son of Heaven. Plus, we've had a standardized written language for over 2000 years so language isn't a large a barrier for us. That's what I was imagining, a modern westernized core.


Well in my understanding the concept of the Son of Heaven and Mandate of Heaven is much more intangible than the Japanese Emperor who is quite literally a living demi-god, descended from the Sun Goddess herself. After all, in China the Mandate of Heaven could be lost, a concept that would be unthinkable in contemporary Japan. That standardized language exists in China proper, but outer areas are home to Zhuang, Manchu, Uyghurs, etc. The modern core sounds good though.
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Trotza
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Founded: Feb 03, 2016
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Postby Trotza » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:39 am

The Alps Confederation wrote:
Trotza wrote:Sure. I find your concept for a nation and explanation of how you say it came to be distasteful as a whole.

I meat my damn Military numbers, YEAH?

Equally icky.
The Alps Confederation wrote:
Trotza wrote:Sure. I find your concept for a nation and explanation of how you say it came to be distasteful as a whole.

Thrace already accepted it and found it plausible, no reason to question the one in charge?

I trust Thrace as an op to allow people to voice their concerns.
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"If you like, someone has to be the bloodhound. I won't shy away from the responsibility."
- Gustav Noske, in the face of the Communist Revolution of 1919 in Berlin

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The Alps Confederation
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Founded: Apr 27, 2016
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Postby The Alps Confederation » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:40 am

Is it so hard for you guys to say something about military numbers, seriously? This is why Discord's much more effective, since everyone's missing each other's messages.

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Tracian Empire
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Founded: Mar 01, 2014
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Postby Tracian Empire » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:40 am

Dires wrote:
Tracian Empire wrote:That's why I'm comparing it to Imperial Russia. A Westernized center, and the capability to be quite modern, but a still backwards society and many problems.


They didn't need the Cultural Revolution for anything, period. That was purely to keep the CCP from removing Mao from power. True, but I've purged my enemies. I don't have anyone opposing me and I've had modern education made a requirement for all.

China was modernizing quite nicely before the Communists ever came to power.

And still, my point stands. You are modernizing, but don't expect to be the equal of a Western nation yet.
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Hello there! I am Tracian Empire! You can call me Tracian, Thrace, Thracian, Thracr, Thracc or whatever you want. Really.

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The Alps Confederation
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Founded: Apr 27, 2016
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Postby The Alps Confederation » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:40 am

Trotza wrote:
The Alps Confederation wrote:I meat my damn Military numbers, YEAH?

Equally icky.
The Alps Confederation wrote:Thrace already accepted it and found it plausible, no reason to question the one in charge?

I trust Thrace as an op to allow people to voice their concerns.

That's the thing; You can only say it's distasteful without coming up with any suggestions, so I shouldn't listen to you at all.

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Dires
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Founded: Aug 16, 2011
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Postby Dires » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:41 am

Trotza wrote:
Dires wrote:
They didn't need the Cultural Revolution for anything, period. That was purely to keep the CCP from removing Mao from power. True, but I've purged my enemies. I don't have anyone opposing me and I've had modern education made a requirement for all.

China was modernizing quite nicely before the Communists ever came to power.

Ah, yes, a "great leap" in education of sorts, and everything else apparently. And we just talked about the purges and how they don't help.


I'm not doing anything Japan didn't do in real history. Coastal China was just as urbanized and for far longer. I merely removed nobles and officials who supported Cixi's conservatism. I didn't cull my entire intelligentsia, many of whom, should be in support of my reforms anyways.

@Tracian, I'll accept that for overall, I'm just saying that I have a decent land army with good fundamentals.
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Political Compass
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Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: -4.31
http://www.politicaltest.net/test/result/400019/

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Gorbatov
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Posts: 422
Founded: Jul 08, 2015
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Postby Gorbatov » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:42 am

Here is my WiP application.
Nation Application

Full Nation Name: Union of Soviet Socialist Republics
Short Nation Name: Soviet Union
National Symbols:Hammer & Sickle, Red Star, Flag, Coat of Arms
Capital: Moscow
Territory: Soviet Territory
Form of Government: Federal Marxist–Leninist one-party socialist state
Head of State: Vladimir Lenin
Head of Government: Vladimir Lenin
Population: ~140 Million
Military Description: Very Large, but somewhat mediocre training, very mobile and aggressive.
Economic Description: Very Large, State Capitalism, alot of natural resources, undergoing rapid industrialization.
Ideology: Marxist-Leninist
Allegiance: Itself, but may be willing to compromise.
Goals: GLOBAL REVOLUTION!...jk...actually is to finish of the remaining aristocrats in Kamchatka, ensure stable economic growth of the Soviet Union, try to stay neutral as possible.
Point of Divergence:1905 Russian Revolution
History:WiP
Have You Read, Understand, and Agree with the OP Posts & Rules In Detail? Yes
#Cibinium(do not delete this, it's for keeping track of the apps)
"The modern revisionists and reactionaries call us Stalinists, thinking that they insult us and, in fact, that is what they have in mind. But, on the contrary, they glorify us with this epithet; it is an honor for us to be Stalinists for while we maintain such a stand the enemy cannot and will never force us to our knees.."
-Enver Hoxha-

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Zostra
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Founded: May 27, 2016
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Postby Zostra » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:42 am

The Alps Confederation wrote:
Trotza wrote:Equally icky.
I trust Thrace as an op to allow people to voice their concerns.

That's the thing; You can only say it's distasteful without coming up with any suggestions, so I shouldn't listen to you at all.

I think he's trying to be polite.
I'm just a normal, functioning member of the human race and there's no way anyone can prove otherwise.
Economic Left/Right: -8.38
Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: -7.9

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The Alps Confederation
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Founded: Apr 27, 2016
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Postby The Alps Confederation » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:43 am

Zostra wrote:
The Alps Confederation wrote:That's the thing; You can only say it's distasteful without coming up with any suggestions, so I shouldn't listen to you at all.

I think he's trying to be polite.

This is more mockery than being polite, and there you go; can't offer yourself some constructive feedback.
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Dires
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Founded: Aug 16, 2011
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Postby Dires » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:44 am

Zostra wrote:
Dires wrote:
That's fine, though resurgence in China's position has restored a similar level of awe in the citizenry for our own Emperor who's still the Son of Heaven. Plus, we've had a standardized written language for over 2000 years so language isn't a large a barrier for us. That's what I was imagining, a modern westernized core.


Well in my understanding the concept of the Son of Heaven and Mandate of Heaven is much more intangible than the Japanese Emperor who is quite literally a living demi-god, descended from the Sun Goddess herself. After all, in China the Mandate of Heaven could be lost, a concept that would be unthinkable in contemporary Japan. That standardized language exists in China proper, but outer areas are home to Zhuang, Manchu, Uyghurs, etc. The modern core sounds good though.


True, but I don't need to reach later Imperial Japan levels of fanaticism. My people just view my Emperor as a savior of China. I mean the written language is read everywhere, it's been 24 years. It's not universal, but it's widespread even throughout the periphery.
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Political Compass
Economic Left/Right: -2.88
Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: -4.31
http://www.politicaltest.net/test/result/400019/

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Gorbatov
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Founded: Jul 08, 2015
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Postby Gorbatov » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:46 am

Greater Slavic Union wrote:Any of you knows Serbian?

I wish... :(
"The modern revisionists and reactionaries call us Stalinists, thinking that they insult us and, in fact, that is what they have in mind. But, on the contrary, they glorify us with this epithet; it is an honor for us to be Stalinists for while we maintain such a stand the enemy cannot and will never force us to our knees.."
-Enver Hoxha-

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Tracian Empire
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Posts: 25924
Founded: Mar 01, 2014
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Postby Tracian Empire » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:48 am

The Alps Confederation wrote:Is it so hard for you guys to say something about military numbers, seriously? This is why Discord's much more effective, since everyone's missing each other's messages.

No, but it is indeed difficult for me to follow multiple lines of conversation while typing on my phone, outside, in rain.
I'm a Romanian, a vampire, an anime enthusiast and a roleplayer.
Hello there! I am Tracian Empire! You can call me Tracian, Thrace, Thracian, Thracr, Thracc or whatever you want. Really.

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Dires
Minister
 
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Founded: Aug 16, 2011
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Postby Dires » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:48 am

The Alps Confederation wrote:760,000 active duty and 1st Reserve personnel: former Class A and B(1) conscripts after two-year active tour with 17 and 1/2 year commitment
100,000 Second line Reserve: Same as above but former Class B(2) conscripts
440,000 National Army
- 1st National Army: 37- to 40-year-old men from end of 1st Reserve to 40 years old.
- 2nd National Army: untrained 20-year-olds and over-40-year-old trained reserves.
8,500,000 men available for service and mobilization.

Should I lower these numbers by 25% 50% ? I went with these numbers due to my large population size and trying to balance the ratio.
Also, in particular with the last category, since there won't be enough rifles to equip them all, some have to resort to indigenous and improvised weapons.


You need to drastically cut these numbers. Modern-day China has a population of 1.3+ billion and only fields 2 million men. This is a time with more infantry for sure but if we even just compare our two posted militaries, it's too much. I have a population almost four times larger than yours. Take a look at the numbers I post. You also need to take into account the state of logistics at the time. You can't support that many soldiers unless you're in a full on total war. I'm not even going to mention the 8.5 million reserve.
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Tracian Empire
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Founded: Mar 01, 2014
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Postby Tracian Empire » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:49 am

Trotza wrote:
The Alps Confederation wrote:I meat my damn Military numbers, YEAH?

Equally icky.
The Alps Confederation wrote:Thrace already accepted it and found it plausible, no reason to question the one in charge?

I trust Thrace as an op to allow people to voice their concerns.

I am far from being perfect, so yes, I am always going to allow people to voice their concerns.
I'm a Romanian, a vampire, an anime enthusiast and a roleplayer.
Hello there! I am Tracian Empire! You can call me Tracian, Thrace, Thracian, Thracr, Thracc or whatever you want. Really.

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Tracian Empire
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Founded: Mar 01, 2014
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Postby Tracian Empire » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:50 am

Dires wrote:
Trotza wrote:Ah, yes, a "great leap" in education of sorts, and everything else apparently. And we just talked about the purges and how they don't help.


I'm not doing anything Japan didn't do in real history. Coastal China was just as urbanized and for far longer. I merely removed nobles and officials who supported Cixi's conservatism. I didn't cull my entire intelligentsia, many of whom, should be in support of my reforms anyways.

@Tracian, I'll accept that for overall, I'm just saying that I have a decent land army with good fundamentals.

A decent core of a land army, probably modeled after the German one, but you can't have China's numbers and Germany's quality.
I'm a Romanian, a vampire, an anime enthusiast and a roleplayer.
Hello there! I am Tracian Empire! You can call me Tracian, Thrace, Thracian, Thracr, Thracc or whatever you want. Really.

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Tracian Empire
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Founded: Mar 01, 2014
Father Knows Best State

Postby Tracian Empire » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:51 am

Gorbatov wrote:Here is my WiP application.
Nation Application

Full Nation Name: Union of Soviet Socialist Republics
Short Nation Name: Soviet Union
National Symbols:Hammer & Sickle, Red Star, Flag, Coat of Arms
Capital: Moscow
Territory: Soviet Territory
Form of Government: Federal Marxist–Leninist one-party socialist state
Head of State: Vladimir Lenin
Head of Government: Vladimir Lenin
Population: ~140 Million
Military Description: Very Large, but somewhat mediocre training, very mobile and aggressive.
Economic Description: Very Large, State Capitalism, alot of natural resources, undergoing rapid industrialization.
Ideology: Marxist-Leninist
Allegiance: Itself, but may be willing to compromise.
Goals: GLOBAL REVOLUTION!...jk...actually is to finish of the remaining aristocrats in Kamchatka, ensure stable economic growth of the Soviet Union, try to stay neutral as possible.
Point of Divergence:1905 Russian Revolution
History:WiP
Have You Read, Understand, and Agree with the OP Posts & Rules In Detail? Yes
#Cibinium(do not delete this, it's for keeping track of the apps)

It would require more details in each section. Take the other accepted claims as examples.
I'm a Romanian, a vampire, an anime enthusiast and a roleplayer.
Hello there! I am Tracian Empire! You can call me Tracian, Thrace, Thracian, Thracr, Thracc or whatever you want. Really.

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Zostra
Diplomat
 
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Founded: May 27, 2016
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Postby Zostra » Sun Nov 27, 2016 2:52 am

Dires wrote:
Zostra wrote:
Well in my understanding the concept of the Son of Heaven and Mandate of Heaven is much more intangible than the Japanese Emperor who is quite literally a living demi-god, descended from the Sun Goddess herself. After all, in China the Mandate of Heaven could be lost, a concept that would be unthinkable in contemporary Japan. That standardized language exists in China proper, but outer areas are home to Zhuang, Manchu, Uyghurs, etc. The modern core sounds good though.


True, but I don't need to reach later Imperial Japan levels of fanaticism. My people just view my Emperor as a savior of China. I mean the written language is read everywhere, it's been 24 years. It's not universal, but it's widespread even throughout the periphery.


That's fair.

The Alps Confederation wrote:
Zostra wrote:I think he's trying to be polite.

This is more mockery than being polite, and there you go; can't offer yourself some constructive feedback.


Your history is a bit vague which makes it somewhat difficult to critique specifics. However, the amount of intense modernization, westernization, and industrialization is kind of hand-waved.

Dires wrote:I'm not even going to mention the 8.5 million reserve.


I think that's basically just men fit for service in the event of expanded conscription or something similar.
I'm just a normal, functioning member of the human race and there's no way anyone can prove otherwise.
Economic Left/Right: -8.38
Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: -7.9

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