Star Wars: A New Age (OOC /Semi-Open)

[Ormata]

Name: Brabous Kjyseiicecamykek

Age: 645 BBY

Gender: Male

Species: Hutt

Appearance (picture or written description): (Image)

Homeworld: Nal Hutta

Force Sensitive: No

Occupation: Crime Syndicate Official

Rank (If applicable) :

Affiliation: The Hutts

Background (Two paragraphs): Bourbous was born on Nal Hutta. He took after his family and took into a life of crime at a early age. When his father was murdered by a rival Cartel Owner, Bourbous took control of his family's cartel. He sold weapons, spacecraft, spice, and slaves all across the galaxy, and he killed all the members of his family to ensure he would rule the Cartel. The Hutt stood neutral on most wars, and most sides respected that. But in the first years of the clone wars, he secretly made a deal with the Confederacy of Independent Systems, allowing them to use his Hyperlanes, and in return, the Separatists would give him droids and captured Natives from invaded worlds. This was all done in secret, through. Bourbous was in control of many Separatist Warships and Droids, which he used to transport his Items, and enforce his policies.

Once the Clone Wars ended, he underestimated the Galatic Empire, thinking it would be much like the Republic, where it was easy to evade security. But his freighters were caught, and his fortune was dwindling. Again, he made a deal, this time with the Empire, and they agreed to allow his freighters to move through Imperial Systems, if he told them that he would expose other Syndicates that were loyal or supportive to the Rebellion. His crime levels soared, and he sat in his throne for
18 years, and watched the credits come to him. When he heared the Death Star was destroyed, Bourbous thought that the Rebellion would replace the Empire soon, and he feared that they would shut down his Syndicate. Rebels raided his Freighters, stealing weapons and supplies. Bourbons turned to the Empire, who ignored him. When he heared that his Friend Jabba had died at the hands of a Rebel, he was sad, but also happy, thinking that he could soon have the best Cartel! Once the Second Death Star was destroyed and the Emperor dead, he knew the Empire's time was done. The battle of Jakku certained him. The New Republic was easy to infiltrate, but with the First Order rising, he signed loyalty to The New Republic. Star killer base destroyed five New Republic worlds areadly, and he feared for his life. The Battle Station was destroyed quickly, a blow the First Order would never quite recover from. The battles were short, and the First Order was no more. Bourbous joined his Hutt Breathren in the Hutt Cartel, creating a giant superpower. His trade lines tripled, and he has been profiting since.

Ship: Slavaged Super Star-destroyer
Equipment: E-11 blaster rifle
Skills: Intelligence, experience, long life
Weakness: Slowness, and inflexibility

Code 225

Nice name, though...there's no explanation as to how he got the SSD, what class of SSD it is (Eclipse is different than Executor), how well-armed it still is, and your biography is littered with grammatical issues. For that matter, the issue of why the Empire didn't shoot him for aiding the CIS is also not answered.

So Spindle, you want to RP with my K-Wing crew and the like? If it was attached to your ship it would certainly be fun.

Hell yeah!

Huzzah! Here comes being shot-at because overzealous COs!

[The Imperial Regions of Commerce]

I'm only Hutt aligned?

I said it was in Secret, and the Empire did not find out.

I changed it to Another type of star Destroyer. I'll fix my post with Grammer Power

[Whalestron]

Name: Saris Gufrai

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Species: Human

Appearance (picture or written description): Saris has jet black hair, green eyes, and pale skin. She is often seen adjourning a TIE flight suit, stolen of course. She stands at 5'5".

Homeworld: Coruscant

Force Sensitive: Yes

Occupation: Sith

Rank (If applicable): Apprentice, was going to finish her training but her master died just before

Affiliation: Sith/Imperial Remnants

Background (Two paragraphs): Saris was born on Coruscant and taken away by a Sith quite abruptly. She was trained with a smaller circle of people, taught to fight and use the force. As she got older, more and more of her fellow students were picked off by the Jedi, or otherwise captured in battle, once she was sixteen years of age, however, she was the last student her master had. By now, any idea of good was stamped from her mind. She was sent to some battles, typically ones involving Jedi, sometimes she even killed one or two.

All was well, and Saris was going to go through her trials to became a Sith Lord, or rather Lady. This was halted when her master was dealt a fatal blow by a Jedi and his padawan. Saris had the right mind to escape when she had the chance, and has been on the run ever since. She originally planned to exact revenge on the Jedi who did it, but figured they would be long gone by the time she tried locating them. She began to take bounty's, earning a reputation as the 'Bounty Hunter with a Lightsaber'. This definitely got some Jedi attention, but she was always careful to make her appearances uneven. Her most recent kill was a Jedi padawan who strayed too far from her master, a sign that she was still active and highly against the Republic.

Ship: The Whiplash, an older B-Wing model

Equipment: She has two red-bladed lightsabers, each can connect magnetically to form a dual bladed saber.

Skills: She knows pretty much everything a graduating Sith student should know, adept in the Dark Side of the force, she's quite persuasive, able to lie low, maneuverable

Weakness: No backup, could become overwhelmed easily, anger can sometimes get the best of her.

Bumping this because someone changed the page

[The Imperial Regions of Commerce]

Name: Brabous Kjyseiicecamykek

Age: 645 BBY

Gender: Male

Species: Hutt

Appearance (picture or written description): (Image)

Homeworld: Nal Hutta

Force Sensitive: No

Occupation: Crime Syndicate Official

Rank (If applicable) :

Affiliation: The Hutts

Background (Two paragraphs):

Bourbous was born on Nal Hutta. He took after his family and took into a life of crime at a early age. When his father was murdered by a rival Cartel owner, Bourbous took control of his family's cartel. He sold weapons, spacecraft, spice, and slaves all across the galaxy, and had all the members of his family killed to ensure hewould rule the Cartel. The Hutt stood neutral on most wars, and most sides respected that. But in the first years of the clone wars, he secretly made a deal with the Confederacy of Independent Systems, allowing them to use his Hyperlanes for battle purposes, and in return, the Separatists would give him droids and captured Natives from invaded worlds. This was all done in secret, through. He had all evidence burned, and killed anyone who knew if his plans. Bourbous was in control of many Separatist Warships and Droids, which he used to transport his Items, and enforce his policies.

Once the Clone Wars ended, he underestimated the Galatic Empire, thinking it would be much like the Republic, where it was easy to evade security. But his freighters were caught, and his fortune was dwindling. Bourbous thought the Empire would bust him, or found out about his bargain with the Separatists. Again, he made a deal, this time with the Empire, and they agreed to allow his freighters to move through Imperial Systems, if he told them that he would expose other Syndicates that were loyal or supportive to the Rebellion, and sell the Empire slaves for Special Projects His crime levels soared, and he sat in his throne for
18 years, and watched the credits come to him. When he heared the Death Star was destroyed, Bourbous thought that the Rebellion would replace the Empire soon, and he feared that they would shut down his Syndicate. Rebels raided his Freighters, stealing weapons and supplies. Bourbons turned to the Empire for support, but they were busy fighting the Rebellion than to aide a Mobster. When he heared that his friend, Jabba, had died at the hands of a Rebel, he was sad, but also happy, thinking that he could soon have the best Cartel. Once the Second Death Star was destroyed and the Emperor dead, he knew the Empire's time was done. The battle of Jakku certained him. The Hutt had his Army raid Imperial Strongholds, smuggling Imperial Warships and Weapons. The New Republic was easy to infiltrate, and he quickly had his name rebuilt. But with dire news of a Militant Organization, The First Order, rising, to power, he signed loyalty to The New Republic. The dreadful Starkiller base destroyed five New Republic worlds aready, and he feared for his life and his busines. The Battlestation was destroyed quickly, the resistance, a major blow to The First Order and it would never quite recover from. The battles were short, and the First Order was dissolved. Bourbous joined his Hutt Breathren in the Hutt Cartel, creating a giant superpower. His trade lines tripled, and he has been profiting since.

Ship: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Interdic ... _Destroyer

Equipment: E-11 blaster rifle

Skills: Intelligence, experience, long life

Weakness: Slowness, and inflexibility

Code 225

Bump

[Ormata]

I'm only Hutt aligned?

I said it was in Secret, and the Empire did not find out.

I changed it to Another type of star Destroyer. I'll fix my post with Grammer Power

Still, I don't know why he would have an Imperial-I class Star Destroyer or how. I mean, those things are still in use, sure, but...how'd he get one?

Name: Saris Gufrai

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Species: Human

Appearance (picture or written description): Saris has jet black hair, green eyes, and pale skin. She is often seen adjourning a TIE flight suit, stolen of course. She stands at 5'5".

Homeworld: Coruscant

Force Sensitive: Yes

Occupation: Sith

Rank (If applicable): Apprentice, was going to finish her training but her master died just before

Affiliation: Sith/Imperial Remnants

Background (Two paragraphs): Saris was born on Coruscant and taken away by a Sith quite abruptly. She was trained with a smaller circle of people, taught to fight and use the force. As she got older, more and more of her fellow students were picked off by the Jedi, or otherwise captured in battle, once she was sixteen years of age, however, she was the last student her master had. By now, any idea of good was stamped from her mind. She was sent to some battles, typically ones involving Jedi, sometimes she even killed one or two.

All was well, and Saris was going to go through her trials to became a Sith Lord, or rather Lady. This was halted when her master was dealt a fatal blow by a Jedi and his padawan. Saris had the right mind to escape when she had the chance, and has been on the run ever since. She originally planned to exact revenge on the Jedi who did it, but figured they would be long gone by the time she tried locating them. She began to take bounty's, earning a reputation as the 'Bounty Hunter with a Lightsaber'. This definitely got some Jedi attention, but she was always careful to make her appearances uneven. Her most recent kill was a Jedi padawan who strayed too far from her master, a sign that she was still active and highly against the Republic.

Ship: The Whiplash, an older B-Wing model

Equipment: She has two red-bladed lightsabers, each can connect magnetically to form a dual bladed saber.

Skills: She knows pretty much everything a graduating Sith student should know, adept in the Dark Side of the force, she's quite persuasive, able to lie low, maneuverable

Weakness: No backup, could become overwhelmed easily, anger can sometimes get the best of her.

Bumping this because someone changed the page

Sorry, sorry.

[The Imperial Regions of Commerce]

When I read the Wookiepedia Article of the Indicator Class Destroyer, it's users were Empire, Imperial Remnant, and also New Republic. So the new Republic must have captured them, so that's what The Hutt did.

[Ormata]

When I read the Wookiepedia Article of the Indicator Class Destroyer, it's users were Empire, Imperial Remnant, and also New Republic. So the new Republic must have captured them, so that's what The Hutt did.

Yes, that is true, except the fact that a number of Imperial Officers, and their ships, did defect to the Rebel cause. However, capturing a heavily-armed vessel is not an easy task; if it were, the Empire wouldn't have bothered making them in the first place. So, again, how did a Hutt captured that class of vessel?

I mean, it could've been heavily damaged (In which case, again, how much of it still works?) and salvaged by your Hutt. Or you could have, I suppose, captured it by force.

[The Imperial Regions of Commerce]

They raided it from a Shipyard that was aboanded by Imperial Forces. (That Okay?)

[Anowa]

They raided it from a Shipyard that was aboanded by Imperial Forces. (That Okay?)

The shipyard would've been scuttled if they were leaving it.

[Theyra]

Application:
Name: TY-17
Age: About 60
Gender: Male programming
Species: Droid(T-Series Tactical Droid)
Appearance:

(Image)

Homeworld: Hypori
Force Sensitive: No
Occupation: Bounty Hunter
Rank: N/A
Affiliation: None
Background:

TY-17 is a tactical droid dating to the years of the Clone War. Produced by the Separatist Factory on Hypori sometime near the end of that conflict, TY never saw action and was instead abandoned as the Confederacy collapsed. After the massacre of the Separatist leaders and the ascension of Emperor Palpatine, he sent out a shutdown order which managed to deactivate the majority of the vast droid armies scattered about the galaxy. However, the foundries on Hypori, as well as their garrison, somehow escaped this fate and continued to function. In the following years the factory remained undiscovered, and eventually TY-17 became its commander. He oversaw the production of hundreds more droids, and attempted in vain to contact the Separatist government.

By the time of the Galactic Civil War Hypori's resources had diminished and TY found himself unable to produce any more droids. But by then they had finally attracted someone's attention- that being the Hutt cartels. TY-17 and his droid army survived an assault by a group of bounty hunters, but their numbers were thinned. Several days later Tyber Zahn, an aspiring warlord who was worried about the factory falling into the wrong hands, also attacked. This proved too much for the battered defenders and they were quickly defeated, allowing Zahn to capture and utilize the foundries. However, TY-17 escaped along with numerous droid battalions aboard a small fleet of nicked CIS starships.

Tattered and weary, the remnants of the Hypori garrison were lead by their leader across the galaxy. Miraculously they were hassled by no one. Finally the tactical droid located the barren planet of Jakku, and quickly landed there. The droids discovered the wreckage of a crashed Imperial Super Star Destroyer(the Ravager) and quickly inhabited it, making it their base of operations and taking shelter there to escape the desert. Inside TY-17 discovered much unspoiled technology, and hastily set about collecting it. Droid scouting parties were soon sweeping the area and stripping any wrecks they discovered. After several years the tactical droid learned that many of his droids were malfunctioning after decades of neglect. TY began using scavenged parts to repair them, though it was not very successful.

Eventually the New Order began to send parties down to search for a droid, BB-8, and several of them encountered TY-17's forces. Violent skirmishes whittled down the droid army, and after some time New Order troops grew so numerous that TY-17 and his droids had to cower inside the Ravager just to survive. After a long period the New Order finally left Jakku, and the droids again began scavenging the ship graveyard. Around that time TY-17 captured with a retired bounty hunter-turned hermit who stumbled into the super star destroyer. From questioning him TY found out a lot about the galaxy; he had assumed the New Order was the Republic using new sets of armor, and was shocked to discover that both the Republic and Confederacy had been dissolved long ago. Further inquisition made TY determine that life as a bounty hunter would be the best course of action; for one, that would give him the funds to properly maintain and even expand his droid forces, and it would also allow him to use his strategic thinking, which was aching for action.

The tactical droid made hologram contact with a Hutt Warlord, Voras(leader of the Ivax Syndicate), who arranged for a meeting. Voras himself travelled to Jakku and met with TY-17, who demonstrated the abilities of his droid army, in particular the B2 battle droids and droidekas he still had. Visibly impressed, Voras contracted TY and gave him his first assingment.

Ever since then the droids have been dutifully serving Voras, and with those credits TY-17 has been able to somewhat repair his droids, though their numbers are ever diminishing. Their ultimate goal is to find a functioning droid factory and reactivate both it and the Confederacy of Independent Systems.

Ship: HMP Droid Gunship
Equipment: Three squadrons of B1 Battle Droids, one squadron of B2 Battle Droids, four droidekas
Skills: Calculating, strategic computing mind; droid henchmen
Weakness: Overconfidence, arrogance

Code 225

Accepted

Application:
Name: TR-0666 "Six"
Age: 34
Height: 6'1 (180 cm)
Weight: 183 lbs (83 kg)
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance: Armor
Homeworld: Onderon
Force Sensitive: No
Occupation: Stormtrooper
Rank: Captain
Affiliation: Imperial Remnant
Background:TR-6666 was born on Onderon to a family of beggars. Although not under the control of Onderon, the Imperial Remnant managed to get their hands on the boy, and started their brutal training regiment. Six never knew family, only those training with him were close to being family, but when he gained squad leader status, they usually died as a result of achieving their objectives.

Over the 18 years of service the mortality rate for Six's units exceeded 60% with a mission success rate of 100% as a trade off. As a result, Six has become emotionally and socially withdrawn, seeing it better to simply recognize his troops as pawns in a greater image, as such he's more likely to outlive the rest of his unit. Going so far as to order outright suicidal objectives to achieve even the smallest victory. After he was promoted to the head of the Stormtrooper Corps, an event which very nearly tanked morale to an all time low.

This morale drop caused more than a few losses , though not because of command error, troopers simply didn't have the motivation to push for victory. As a result, Six enacted a new policy for Stormtrooper officers, execute all troopers who retreat without authorization, or who refuse orders of movement from their commander. And Commanders who fail in achieving their objectives would be forced to be executed by their replacement officer.

Things quickly improved out of fear. And Six's remaining morality dwindled into nothing, the man was very nearly a machine at this point, sheer loyalty to the Remnant the only thing keeping him human.
Ship: None, usually aboard an Imperial owned warship.
Equipment: F-11D, Stormtrooper armor, SE-44C, Quadnoculars.
Skills: Stormtrooper training, Advanced marksmanship.
Weakness: Socially dull, emotionally empty, brutally methodical, a bad source of morale.

Code 225

Accepted

Name: Brabous Kjyseiicecamykek

Age: 645 BBY

Gender: Male

Species: Hutt

Appearance (picture or written description): (Image)

Homeworld: Nal Hutta

Force Sensitive: No

Occupation: Crime Syndicate Official

Rank (If applicable) :

Affiliation: The Hutts

Background (Two paragraphs): [spoiler]Bourbous was born on Nal Hutta. He took after his family and took into a life of crime at a early age. When his father was murdered by a rival Cartel owner, Bourbous took control of his family's cartel. He sold weapons, spacecraft, spice, and slaves all across the galaxy, and had all the members of his family killed to ensure hewould rule the Cartel. The Hutt stood neutral on most wars, and most sides respected that. But in the first years of the clone wars, he secretly made a deal with the Confederacy of Independent Systems, allowing them to use his Hyperlanes for battle purposes, and in return, the Separatists would give him droids and captured Natives from invaded worlds. This was all done in secret, through. He had all evidence burned, and killed anyone who knew if his plans. Bourbous was in control of many Separatist Warships and Droids, which he used to transport his Items, and enforce his policies.

Once the Clone Wars ended, he underestimated the Galatic Empire, thinking it would be much like the Republic, where it was easy to evade security. But his freighters were caught, and his fortune was dwindling. Bourbous thought the Empire would bust him, or found out about his bargain with the Separatists. Again, he made a deal, this time with the Empire, and they agreed to allow his freighters to move through Imperial Systems, if he told them that he would expose other Syndicates that were loyal or supportive to the Rebellion, and sell the Empire slaves for Special Projects His crime levels soared, and he sat in his throne for
18 years, and watched the credits come to him. When he heared the Death Star was destroyed, Bourbous thought that the Rebellion would replace the Empire soon, and he feared that they would shut down his Syndicate. Rebels raided his Freighters, stealing weapons and supplies. Bourbons turned to the Empire for support, but they were busy fighting the Rebellion than to aide a Mobster. When he heared that his friend, Jabba, had died at the hands of a Rebel, he was sad, but also happy, thinking that he could soon have the best Cartel. Once the Second Death Star was destroyed and the Emperor dead, he knew the Empire's time was done. The battle of Jakku certained him. The Hutt had his Army raid Imperial Strongholds, smuggling Imperial Warships and Weapons. The New Republic was easy to infiltrate, and he quickly had his name rebuilt. But with dire news of a Militant Organization, The First Order, rising, to power, he signed loyalty to The New Republic. The dreadful Starkiller base destroyed five New Republic worlds aready, and he feared for his life and his busines. The Battlestation was destroyed quickly, the resistance, a major blow to The First Order and it would never quite recover from. The battles were short, and the First Order was dissolved. Bourbous joined his Hutt Breathren in the Hutt Cartel, creating a giant superpower. His trade lines tripled, and he has been profiting since.

Ship: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Interdic ... _Destroyer

Equipment: E-11 blaster rifle

Skills: Intelligence, experience, long life

Weakness: Slowness, and inflexibility

Code 225

[/spoiler]

Denied, just explain how he got the ship.

Application:

Name: Saris Gufrai

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Species: Human

Appearance (picture or written description): Saris has jet black hair, green eyes, and pale skin. She is often seen adjourning a TIE flight suit, stolen of course. She stands at 5'5".

Homeworld: Coruscant

Force Sensitive: Yes

Occupation: Sith

Rank (If applicable): Apprentice, was going to finish her training but her master died just before

Affiliation: Sith/Imperial Remnants

Background (Two paragraphs): Saris was born on Coruscant and taken away by a Sith quite abruptly. She was trained with a smaller circle of people, taught to fight and use the force. As she got older, more and more of her fellow students were picked off by the Jedi, or otherwise captured in battle, once she was sixteen years of age, however, she was the last student her master had. By now, any idea of good was stamped from her mind. She was sent to some battles, typically ones involving Jedi, sometimes she even killed one or two.

All was well, and Saris was going to go through her trials to became a Sith Lord, or rather Lady. This was halted when her master was dealt a fatal blow by a Jedi and his padawan. Saris had the right mind to escape when she had the chance, and has been on the run ever since. She originally planned to exact revenge on the Jedi who did it, but figured they would be long gone by the time she tried locating them. She began to take bounty's, earning a reputation as the 'Bounty Hunter with a Lightsaber'. This definitely got some Jedi attention, but she was always careful to make her appearances uneven. Her most recent kill was a Jedi padawan who strayed too far from her master, a sign that she was still active and highly against the Republic.

Ship: The Whiplash, an older B-Wing model

Equipment: She has two red-bladed lightsabers, each can connect magnetically to form a dual bladed saber.

Skills: She knows pretty much everything a graduating Sith student should know, adept in the Dark Side of the force, she's quite persuasive, able to lie low, maneuverable

Weakness: No backup, could become overwhelmed easily, anger can sometimes get the best of her.

Accepted


Also since Ormata is kinda doing my job......... want to be CO-OP?

[Ormata]

Also since Ormata is kinda doing my job......... want to be CO-OP?

Uh, sure...? Not sure entirely what that would involve, other than talking to people on applications.

[Anowa]

Name: Brabous Kjyseiicecamykek

Age: 645 BBY

Gender: Male

Species: Hutt

Appearance (picture or written description): (Image)

Homeworld: Nal Hutta

Force Sensitive: No

Occupation: Crime Syndicate Official

Rank (If applicable) :

Affiliation: The Hutts

Background (Two paragraphs):

Bourbous was born on Nal Hutta. He took after his family and took into a life of crime at a early age. When his father was murdered by a rival Cartel owner, Bourbous took control of his family's cartel. He sold weapons, spacecraft, spice, and slaves all across the galaxy, and had all the members of his family killed to ensure hewould rule the Cartel. The Hutt stood neutral on most wars, and most sides respected that. But in the first years of the clone wars, he secretly made a deal with the Confederacy of Independent Systems, allowing them to use his Hyperlanes for battle purposes, and in return, the Separatists would give him droids and captured Natives from invaded worlds. This was all done in secret, through. He had all evidence burned, and killed anyone who knew if his plans. Bourbous was in control of many Separatist Warships and Droids, which he used to transport his Items, and enforce his policies.

Once the Clone Wars ended, he underestimated the Galatic Empire, thinking it would be much like the Republic, where it was easy to evade security. But his freighters were caught, and his fortune was dwindling. Bourbous thought the Empire would bust him, or found out about his bargain with the Separatists. Again, he made a deal, this time with the Empire, and they agreed to allow his freighters to move through Imperial Systems, if he told them that he would expose other Syndicates that were loyal or supportive to the Rebellion, and sell the Empire slaves for Special Projects His crime levels soared, and he sat in his throne for
18 years, and watched the credits come to him. When he heared the Death Star was destroyed, Bourbous thought that the Rebellion would replace the Empire soon, and he feared that they would shut down his Syndicate. Rebels raided his Freighters, stealing weapons and supplies. Bourbons turned to the Empire for support, but they were busy fighting the Rebellion than to aide a Mobster. When he heared that his friend, Jabba, had died at the hands of a Rebel, he was sad, but also happy, thinking that he could soon have the best Cartel. Once the Second Death Star was destroyed and the Emperor dead, he knew the Empire's time was done. The battle of Jakku certained him. The Hutt had his Army raid Imperial Strongholds, smuggling Imperial Warships and Weapons. The New Republic was easy to infiltrate, and he quickly had his name rebuilt. But with dire news of a Militant Organization, The First Order, rising, to power, he signed loyalty to The New Republic. The dreadful Starkiller base destroyed five New Republic worlds aready, and he feared for his life and his busines. The Battlestation was destroyed quickly, the resistance, a major blow to The First Order and it would never quite recover from. The battles were short, and the First Order was dissolved. Bourbous joined his Hutt Breathren in the Hutt Cartel, creating a giant superpower. His trade lines tripled, and he has been profiting since.

Ship: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Interdic ... _Destroyer

Equipment: E-11 blaster rifle

Skills: Intelligence, experience, long life

Weakness: Slowness, and inflexibility

Code 225

Denied, notable grammatical errors, notable writing errors, lack of rank.

[Theyra]

Also since Ormata is kinda doing my job......... want to be CO-OP?

Uh, sure...? Not sure entirely what that would involve, other than talking to people on applications.

You can just do that, maybe take control of certain npcs if needed. Though you can just handle apps.

[Ormata]

Uh, sure...? Not sure entirely what that would involve, other than talking to people on applications.

You can just do that, maybe take control of certain npcs if needed. Though you can just handle apps.

OK then, cool. Thanks!

[The Imperial Regions of Commerce]

(Void)

[Anowa]

Heres how he got the Ship

Imperial Shipyard,

Bourbous exploited the Empire's weakness and commanded his droid forces to raid a Imperial Shipyard. Munificent Class Frigates blasted Rails that were holding the ships in place, and Battle droids deployed from Boarding Crafts were deployed inside the Compound, and a massive gunfight took place inside. IG series Assassin Droids proved the upper hand, and they pushed through the startled Stormtroopers. Bounty Hunters killed the last of the Officers, and the Frigates gathered around the Imperial Ships. One Star Destroyer escaped, and it had destroyed a Frigate. The Provdence Class Destroyer leading the Assault charged at it, and the Frigates around it concentrated fire on the Imperial Vessel. Soon the Star Destroyers shields could not take any more fire, and it shut off, and Turbolasors from the Hutt Destroyer disabled the ship. Droids boarded the ship, and killed any Imperial Crew members on the ship, and Droidekas soon took the Bridge. All of the shops were boarded by Hutt Crews, and the Ships exited together. A new Indicator Destroyer was given to Bourbous as a Personal Flagship.

The Star Destroyer would've jumped to hyperspace if it were in such a bad position. Adding on to the fact that you claimed the shipyard was abandoned, everything would be in inoperable pieces.

But since you've decided that's not the case, the Star Destroyer would've been under construction anyway since you blasted the rails holding it into it's construction bay.

[Whalestron]

Can someone post a link to the IC thread?

[Ormata]

Can someone post a link to the IC thread?

IC Thread isn't up yet. Will be later today.

[The Imperial Regions of Commerce]

Alright, I will just not have the Star Destroyer. Let me change it.

[Theyra]

Well since we got a good list of accepted I could post it now if you guys want?

[The Imperial Regions of Commerce]

Name: Brabous Kjyseiicecamykek

Age: 645 BBY

Gender: Male

Species: Hutt

Appearance (picture or written description): (Image)

Homeworld: Nal Hutta

Force Sensitive: No

Occupation: Crime Syndicate Official

Rank (If applicable) : First Lord of Family Syndicate

Affiliation: The Hutts

Background (Two paragraphs):

Bourbous was born on Nal Hutta. He took after his family and took into a life of crime at a early age. When his father was murdered by a rival Cartel owner, Bourbous took control of his family's cartel. He sold weapons, spacecraft, spice, and slaves all across the galaxy, and had all the members of his family killed to ensure that hewould rule the Cartel. The Hutt stood neutral on most wars, and most sides respected that. But in the first years of the clone wars, he secretly made a deal with the Confederacy of Independent Systems, allowing them to use his Hyperlanes for battle purposes, and in return, the Separatists would give him droids and captured Natives from invaded worlds. This was all done in secret, through. He had all evidence burned, and killed anyone who knew if his plans. Bourbous was in control of many Separatist Warships and Droids, which he used to transport his Items, and enforce his policies.

Once the Clone Wars ended, he underestimated the Galatic Empire, thinking it would be much like the Republic, where it was easy to evade security. But his freighters were caught, and his fortune was dwindling. Bourbous thought the Empire would bust him, or found out about his bargain with the Separatists. Again, he made a deal, this time with the Empire, and they agreed to allow his freighters to move through Imperial Systems, if he told them that he would expose other Syndicates that were loyal or supportive to the Rebellion, and sell the Empire slaves for Special Projects His crime levels soared, and he sat in his throne for
18 years, and watched the credits come to him. When he heared the Death Star was destroyed, Bourbous thought that the Rebellion would replace the Empire soon, and he feared that they would shut down his Syndicate. Rebels raided his Freighters, stealing weapons and supplies. Bourbons turned to the Empire for support, but they were busy fighting the Rebellion than to aide a Mobster. When he heared that his friend, Jabba, had died at the hands of a Rebel, he was sad, but also happy, thinking that he could soon have the best Cartel. Once the Second Death Star was destroyed and the Emperor dead, he knew the Empire's time was done. The battle of Jakku certained him. The Hutt had his Army raid Imperial Strongholds, smuggling Imperial Warships and Weapons. The New Republic was easy to infiltrate, and he quickly had his name rebuilt. But with dire news of a Militant Organization, The First Order, rising, to power, he signed loyalty to The New Republic. The dreadful Starkiller base destroyed five New Republic worlds aready, and he feared for his life and his busines. The Battlestation was destroyed quickly, the resistance, a major blow to The First Order and it would never quite recover from. The battles were short, and the First Order was dissolved. Bourbous joined his Hutt Breathren in the Hutt Cartel, creating a giant superpower. His trade lines tripled, and he has been profiting since.

Ship: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Lucrehul ... battleship

Equipment: E-11 blaster rifle

Skills: Intelligence, experience, long life

Weakness: Slowness, and inflexibility

Code 225

Edited, it is now a Lecurehulk Class Battleship that was given to him by the Separatists in secret, in exchange for Confederate Usage of Hutt Hyperspace lanes.

[Anowa]

Name: Brabous Kjyseiicecamykek

Age: 645 BBY

Gender: Male

Species: Hutt

Appearance (picture or written description): (Image)

Homeworld: Nal Hutta

Force Sensitive: No

Occupation: Crime Syndicate Official

Rank (If applicable) : First Lord of Family Syndicate

Affiliation: The Hutts

Background (Two paragraphs):

Bourbous was born on Nal Hutta. He took after his family and took into a life of crime at a early age. When his father was murdered by a rival Cartel owner, Bourbous took control of his family's cartel. He sold weapons, spacecraft, spice, and slaves all across the galaxy, and had all the members of his family killed to ensure that hewould rule the Cartel. The Hutt stood neutral on most wars, and most sides respected that. But in the first years of the clone wars, he secretly made a deal with the Confederacy of Independent Systems, allowing them to use his Hyperlanes for battle purposes, and in return, the Separatists would give him droids and captured Natives from invaded worlds. This was all done in secret, through. He had all evidence burned, and killed anyone who knew if his plans. Bourbous was in control of many Separatist Warships and Droids, which he used to transport his Items, and enforce his policies.

Once the Clone Wars ended, he underestimated the Galatic Empire, thinking it would be much like the Republic, where it was easy to evade security. But his freighters were caught, and his fortune was dwindling. Bourbous thought the Empire would bust him, or found out about his bargain with the Separatists. Again, he made a deal, this time with the Empire, and they agreed to allow his freighters to move through Imperial Systems, if he told them that he would expose other Syndicates that were loyal or supportive to the Rebellion, and sell the Empire slaves for Special Projects His crime levels soared, and he sat in his throne for
18 years, and watched the credits come to him. When he heared the Death Star was destroyed, Bourbous thought that the Rebellion would replace the Empire soon, and he feared that they would shut down his Syndicate. Rebels raided his Freighters, stealing weapons and supplies. Bourbons turned to the Empire for support, but they were busy fighting the Rebellion than to aide a Mobster. When he heared that his friend, Jabba, had died at the hands of a Rebel, he was sad, but also happy, thinking that he could soon have the best Cartel. Once the Second Death Star was destroyed and the Emperor dead, he knew the Empire's time was done. The battle of Jakku certained him. The Hutt had his Army raid Imperial Strongholds, smuggling Imperial Warships and Weapons. The New Republic was easy to infiltrate, and he quickly had his name rebuilt. But with dire news of a Militant Organization, The First Order, rising, to power, he signed loyalty to The New Republic. The dreadful Starkiller base destroyed five New Republic worlds aready, and he feared for his life and his busines. The Battlestation was destroyed quickly, the resistance, a major blow to The First Order and it would never quite recover from. The battles were short, and the First Order was dissolved. Bourbous joined his Hutt Breathren in the Hutt Cartel, creating a giant superpower. His trade lines tripled, and he has been profiting since.

Ship: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Lucrehul ... battleship

Equipment: E-11 blaster rifle

Skills: Intelligence, experience, long life

Weakness: Slowness, and inflexibility

Code 225

Denied, notable grammatical errors, notable writing errors.
Not putting that monstrous image in a spoiler tag.

[The Imperial Regions of Commerce]

Okay

If I re-do the Biography, could I have another chance?

[Theyra]

Okay

If I re-do the Biography, could I have another chance?

Yeah, you got chances. Just clean it up and you should be fine.

[Theyra]

Also the IC is up so feel free to post.