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Should we continued on or reboot?

Continued on
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Reboot.
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Total votes : 9

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Ormata
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Postby Ormata » Sat Nov 26, 2016 8:27 pm

Application
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Name: Kast Vaiv'era
Age: 47
Gender: Male
Species: Bothan
Appearance: Kast stands at 6’4”, making him one of the taller Bothans you would see. In fact, one might describe him as a walking giant, and it’s no surprise some would liken him to a Wookie. However, this semblance extends to the height; Kast is a lanky fellow with little in the way of muscle mass. His face is what one might expect of a Bothan, with a substantial muzzle and long hair. Kast’s hair is brown, and his skin is the color of dirt.

He prefers to wear rather simple clothing, while off-duty, with a white shirt, black trousers, and slip-on shoes. Kast isn’t one to particularly indulge, though he does have a Durasteel watch for...some reason. The same reason one might have a watch that can survive several hundred meters underwater. For reasons.
Homeworld: Bespin
Force Sensitive: Minor. Kast won’t be setting any records, but he’s lucky enough that you could be suspicious.
Occupation: New Republic Crewman (Bombardier and Technician)
Rank: Lieutenant Junior Grade (Below Flight Lieutenant)
Affiliation: New Republic
Background: Born in Bespin, Kast was what you could describe as a social outcast. Even at this late period, Bespin was a place for gas miners and Ugnaughts; it was no place for a kid nor for a young Bothan. He would grow-up enjoying the heck out electronics, scavenged items, etc, and while the Ugnaughts disliked him for “Screwing with their controlled chaos” it indeed did work. He would, eventually, get to eighteen and join the New Republic Navy.

Initially an Ensign on a Corona-class frigate, as a Damage Control Officer, Kast would find this to be not his liking. He was bored immensely with the job, as it was “Brief moments of terror followed by intense boredom” and that he only did things when other things, such as shields and armor, went incredibly wrong. As such, he read-up on most things he could, such as tactics, bombing, electronics, etc, keeping his mind quite active. Kast would, later, request a transfer to a K-Wing Bomber Group, citing the fact that he could actually work on components, make them better and the like, and read. Instead of “Brief moments of terror followed by intense boredom” it would be “Brief moments of terror followed by intense frustration at that one wire”. His transfer would be approved, though after going through training as a Bombardier, he would be transferred to an Expeditionary Unit.
Ship:
  • Ship Class: K-Wing Assault Starfighter
  • Ship Name: Simple Soul, classification VR-543, Delta Wing, 3rd NR Expeditionary
  • Primary Ship Weapon:
    • 1 x Quad turbolaser turret
    • 1 x Twin laser cannon turret
    • 18 x Hardpoints
  • Modifications:
    • Hyperdrive Class .75 Installed
    • Reinforced Sensor Suite
    • Reinforced Shields
Equipment:Skills:
  • Lucky
  • Capable Slicer
  • Engineer
  • Bombardier Training, New Republic
Weakness:
  • Lack of Ground Combat Training
  • Poor Shot
  • Rather Diffident; he will give-up lost ground if the lost ground isn’t required.

Code 225

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Postby Theyra » Sat Nov 26, 2016 8:30 pm

Ormata wrote:
Application
Name: Kast Vaiv'era
Age: 47
Gender: Male
Species: Bothan
Appearance: Kast stands at 6’4”, making him one of the taller Bothans you would see. In fact, one might describe him as a walking giant, and it’s no surprise some would liken him to a Wookie. However, this semblance extends to the height; Kast is a lanky fellow with little in the way of muscle mass. His face is what one might expect of a Bothan, with a substantial muzzle and long hair. Kast’s hair is brown, and his skin is the color of dirt.

He prefers to wear rather simple clothing, while off-duty, with a white shirt, black trousers, and slip-on shoes. Kast isn’t one to particularly indulge, though he does have a Durasteel watch for...some reason. The same reason one might have a watch that can survive several hundred meters underwater. For reasons.
Homeworld: Bespin
Force Sensitive: Minor. Kast won’t be setting any records, but he’s lucky enough that you could be suspicious.
Occupation: New Republic Crewman (Bombardier and Technician)
Rank: Lieutenant Junior Grade (Below Flight Lieutenant)
Affiliation: New Republic
Background: Born in Bespin, Kast was what you could describe as a social outcast. Even at this late period, Bespin was a place for gas miners and Ugnaughts; it was no place for a kid nor for a young Bothan. He would grow-up enjoying the heck out electronics, scavenged items, etc, and while the Ugnaughts disliked him for “Screwing with their controlled chaos” it indeed did work. He would, eventually, get to eighteen and join the New Republic Navy.

Initially an Ensign on a Corona-class frigate, as a Damage Control Officer, Kast would find this to be not his liking. He was bored immensely with the job, as it was “Brief moments of terror followed by intense boredom” and that he only did things when other things, such as shields and armor, went incredibly wrong. As such, he read-up on most things he could, such as tactics, bombing, electronics, etc, keeping his mind quite active. Kast would, later, request a transfer to a K-Wing Bomber Group, citing the fact that he could actually work on components, make them better and the like, and read. Instead of “Brief moments of terror followed by intense boredom” it would be “Brief moments of terror followed by intense frustration at that one wire”. His transfer would be approved, though after going through training as a Bombardier, he would be transferred to an Expeditionary Unit.
Ship:
  • Ship Class: K-Wing Assault Starfighter
  • Ship Name: Simple Soul, classification VR-543, Delta Wing, 3rd NR Expeditionary
  • Primary Ship Weapon:
    • 1 x Quad turbolaser turret
    • 1 x Twin laser cannon turret
    • 18 x Hardpoints
  • Modifications:
    • Hyperdrive Class .75 Installed
    • Reinforced Sensor Suite
    • Reinforced Shields
Equipment:Skills:
  • Lucky
  • Capable Slicer
  • Engineer
  • Bombardier Training, New Republic
Weakness:
  • Lack of Ground Combat Training
  • Poor Shot
  • Rather Diffident; he will give-up lost ground if the lost ground isn’t required.

Code 225


Your characters look good so far. accepted.

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Postby Ormata » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:04 pm

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Name: Xiannlonay (Xiann)
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Species: Twi’lek
Appearance: Xiann has a rather traditional Twi’lek physique, being described as lithe and, by the less crass, graceful. Her skin is a pale blue, and Xiann’s eyes are a dark brown. However, she is, in fact, muscular and toned, due to physical training. She lacks the amount of scars most Twi’leks would have; Xiann does, however, have a scar trailing her left arm’s length, though it is not at all wide or deep.

She prefers to wear the New Republic uniform, with a white shirt, olive green jacket, and olive green trousers. Black boots, ankle-length, are also included. Xiann ends this costume with a belt and bandolier. She lacks the amount of jewelry a Twi’lek would normally have, instead wearing an anklet between book and sock and a bracelet of beads on her wrist.
Homeworld: Tatooine
Force Sensitive: None
Occupation: New Republic Crewman (Gunner)
Rank: Corporal
Affiliation: New Republic
Background: Xiann was born on Tatooine to a rather poor childhood. Luckily, her family lived on a moisture farm out in the middle of nowhere, which was sufficiently far enough that the crime lords never actually noticed. Not-so-luckily, her family lived on a moisture farm out in the middle of nowhere, which was sufficiently close enough that the Tusken Raiders actually noticed. Xiann’s early childhood consisted of hiding in the basement while her father took pot-shots at the raiders from a little window.

When she was old enough, at about the age of ten, Xiann would join her father in taking pot-shots as well, though she put enough practice into it that eventually she could very nearly outshoot him (That Bantha got in the way was always the excuse). However, there came a point where she just didn’t want to stay; there was nothing to do, save for getting occasionally threatened by pirates or, as was done, shoot at Tusken Raiders. Bargaining with Jawas quickly became a hassle, for obvious reasons.

Therefore, she would go out into the world and enlist with the New Republic. She joined as a gunner on a Quasar Fire-class Cruiser-Carrier. The vessels were being phased-out, though the New Republic was, still, keeping them as floating hangers. She would serve there for some time, finding that life in the military was nearly just as boring as life on Tatooine. However, in Xiann’s time, the vessel she was on was decommissioned and she was given a choice. Xiann could either be a gunner on a Nebula-class Star Destroyer or she could be promoted and transferred to a K-Wing group. She chose the latter.
Ship:
  • Ship Class: K-Wing Assault Starfighter
  • Ship Name: Simple Soul, classification VR-543, Delta Wing, 3rd NR Expeditionary
  • Primary Ship Weapon:
    • 1 x Quad turbolaser turret
    • 1 x Twin laser cannon turret
    • 18 x Hardpoints
  • Modifications:
    • Hyperdrive Class .75 Installed
    • Reinforced Sensor Suite
    • Reinforced Shields
Equipment:Skills:
  • Skilled Marksman
  • Strong Reflexes
  • Gunnery Training, New Republic
Weakness:
  • Impatient
  • Inexperienced in true ground combat
  • Faints at the sight of blood

Code 225
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Postby Theyra » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:07 pm

Ormata wrote:
Application
Name: Xiannlonay (Xiann)
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Species: Twi’lek
Appearance: Xiann has a rather traditional Twi’lek physique, being described as lithe and, by the less crass, graceful. Her skin is a pale blue, and Xiann’s eyes are a dark brown. However, she is, in fact, muscular and toned, due to physical training. She lacks the amount of scars most Twi’leks would have; Xiann does, however, have a scar trailing her left arm’s length, though it is not at all wide or deep.

She prefers to wear the New Republic uniform, with a white shirt, olive green jacket, and olive green trousers. Black boots, ankle-length, are also included. Xiann ends this costume with a belt and bandolier. She lacks the amount of jewelry a Twi’lek would normally have, instead wearing an anklet between book and sock and a bracelet of beads on her wrist.
Homeworld: Tatooine
Force Sensitive: None
Occupation: New Republic Crewman (Gunner)
Rank: Corporal
Affiliation: New Republic
Background: Xiann was born on Tatooine to a rather poor childhood. Luckily, her family lived on a moisture farm out in the middle of nowhere, which was sufficiently far enough that the crime lords never actually noticed. Not-so-luckily, her family lived on a moisture farm out in the middle of nowhere, which was sufficiently close enough that the Tusken Raiders actually noticed. Xiann’s early childhood consisted of hiding in the basement while her father took pot-shots at the raiders from a little window.

When she was old enough, at about the age of ten, Xiann would join her father in taking pot-shots as well, though she put enough practice into it that eventually she could very nearly outshoot him (That Bantha got in the way was always the excuse). However, there came a point where she just didn’t want to stay; there was nothing to do, save for getting occasionally threatened by pirates or, as was done, shoot at Tusken Raiders. Bargaining with Jawas quickly became a hassle, for obvious reasons.

Therefore, she would go out into the world and enlist with the New Republic. She joined as a gunner on a Quasar Fire-class Cruiser-Carrier. The vessels were being phased-out, though the New Republic was, still, keeping them as floating hangers. She would serve there for some time, finding that life in the military was nearly just as boring as life on Tatooine. However, in Xiann’s time, the vessel she was on was decommissioned and she was given a choice. Xiann could either be a gunner on a Nebula-class Star Destroyer or she could be promoted and transferred to a K-Wing group. She chose the latter.
Ship:
  • Ship Class: K-Wing Assault Starfighter
  • Ship Name: Simple Soul, classification VR-543, Delta Wing, 3rd NR Expeditionary
  • Primary Ship Weapon:
    • 1 x Quad turbolaser turret
    • 1 x Twin laser cannon turret
    • 18 x Hardpoints
  • Modifications:
    • Hyperdrive Class .75 Installed
    • Reinforced Sensor Suite
    • Reinforced Shields
Equipment:Skills:
  • Skilled Marksman
  • Strong Reflexes
  • Gunnery Training, New Republic
Weakness:
  • Impatient
  • Inexperienced in true ground combat
  • Faints at the sight of blood

Code 225


Another good one. Accepted.

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Postby Shadowwell » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:28 pm

So now onto the Armaments for my characters ship, any suggestions?
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Postby Theyra » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:32 pm

Shadowwell wrote:So now onto the Armaments for my characters ship, any suggestions?


Maybe look at the other apps? Give me one sec.

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Postby Ormata » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:32 pm

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Name: Tedu Gilani
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Species: Zabrak
Appearance: Tedu stands at 5’4”, with the characteristic stocky body type of a Zabrak. He is muscular, though this can be offset by how baggy the clothes he wears are. His skin is a lighter brown and is rather leathery. Tedu’s hair, black, is kept long in a rather unprofessional manner, and he lacks the distinctive head-spikes most Zabraks have. He instead has a head-plate sort of thing, with boney, hard tissue forming back. Tedu’s eyes are a bright blue.

He wears the clothes one might expect of a kid to wear off-duty. A shirt, normally black, tucked into some olive green trousers with ankle-boots. Tedu also wears a thin little belt, along with a small holster. Tedu wears, quite literally, nothing in terms of jewelry; he simply dislikes the concept. A stingy Zabrak, that’s what he is.
Homeworld: Ruan
Force Sensitive: None
Occupation: New Republic Crewman (Gunner)
Rank: Corporal
Affiliation: New Republic
Background: Born to the small planet of Ruan, Tedu’s parents were farmers. That’s, quite literally, all there was on Ruan: farming. Despite being a Core World, there was little mechanization on the place, aside from farming tools, and the spaceport seemed deader than an Outer Rim place. All-in-all, Tedu wasn’t much impressed with it. Instead, he loved to listen to the Holonet, to news from Coruscant. Space operas, despite their cheesiness, were little dances of imagination to him, doors to a thing he wanted to take part in.

Tedu would join the New Republic Navy for a few reasons. For one thing, it did not involve directly shooting people. While Tedu was, admittedly, squeamish on shooting individuals, he was perfectly fine with shooting ships. The person on the receiving end had a chance, after all. The Army most certainly would require shooting people; that is to say, it would if it were to have anything in the way of action. And so, Tedu would join the Navy, as a gunner on a K-Wing.
Ship:
  • Ship Class: K-Wing Assault Starfighter
  • Ship Name: Simple Soul, classification VR-543, Delta Wing, 3rd NR Expeditionary
  • Primary Ship Weapon:
    • 1 x Quad turbolaser turret
    • 1 x Twin laser cannon turret
    • 18 x Hardpoints
  • Modifications:
    • Hyperdrive Class .75 Installed
    • Reinforced Sensor Suite
    • Reinforced Shields
Equipment:Skills:
  • Honed Reflexes
  • Artistry (He would draw his friends)
  • Gunnery Training, New Republic
Weakness:
  • Cannot shoot another individual
  • No ground combat experience
  • Rather naive

Code 225

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Postby The New Byzantine II » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:33 pm

Does the Yuuzhan Vong exist here in this era? Because after the First Order, the Yuuzhan Vong invaded the Galaxy.
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Postby Theyra » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:35 pm

The New Byzantine II wrote:Does the Yuuzhan Vong exist here in this era? Because after the First Order, the Yuuzhan Vong invaded the Galaxy.


No I was not really and that is now non canon. I was not planning on using them.

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Postby Ormata » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:38 pm

Shadowwell wrote:So now onto the Armaments for my characters ship, any suggestions?


You said you wanted an ARC-170 style vessel. That type of vessel doesn't have massively heavy guns, though we can up it a bit.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/R-9X_heavy_laser_cannon This kind of weapon was used by the Resistance, and could replace your forward-facing guns (In fact, you could place them in a two on top, two on bottom sort of way, on each wing, which would provide eight forward-facing laser cannons).

The vessel also has torps, which I presume you want to keep though you could instead have missile pods (See Slave One, over Geonosis, for those) which would be quite lethal.

Stuff.

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Postby Theyra » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:47 pm

Ormata wrote:
Application
Name: Tedu Gilani
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Species: Zabrak
Appearance: Tedu stands at 5’4”, with the characteristic stocky body type of a Zabrak. He is muscular, though this can be offset by how baggy the clothes he wears are. His skin is a lighter brown and is rather leathery. Tedu’s hair, black, is kept long in a rather unprofessional manner, and he lacks the distinctive head-spikes most Zabraks have. He instead has a head-plate sort of thing, with boney, hard tissue forming back. Tedu’s eyes are a bright blue.

He wears the clothes one might expect of a kid to wear off-duty. A shirt, normally black, tucked into some olive green trousers with ankle-boots. Tedu also wears a thin little belt, along with a small holster. Tedu wears, quite literally, nothing in terms of jewelry; he simply dislikes the concept. A stingy Zabrak, that’s what he is.
Homeworld: Ruan
Force Sensitive: None
Occupation: New Republic Crewman (Gunner)
Rank: Corporal
Affiliation: New Republic
Background: Born to the small planet of Ruan, Tedu’s parents were farmers. That’s, quite literally, all there was on Ruan: farming. Despite being a Core World, there was little mechanization on the place, aside from farming tools, and the spaceport seemed deader than an Outer Rim place. All-in-all, Tedu wasn’t much impressed with it. Instead, he loved to listen to the Holonet, to news from Coruscant. Space operas, despite their cheesiness, were little dances of imagination to him, doors to a thing he wanted to take part in.

Tedu would join the New Republic Navy for a few reasons. For one thing, it did not involve directly shooting people. While Tedu was, admittedly, squeamish on shooting individuals, he was perfectly fine with shooting ships. The person on the receiving end had a chance, after all. The Army most certainly would require shooting people; that is to say, it would if it were to have anything in the way of action. And so, Tedu would join the Navy, as a gunner on a K-Wing.
Ship:
  • Ship Class: K-Wing Assault Starfighter
  • Ship Name: Simple Soul, classification VR-543, Delta Wing, 3rd NR Expeditionary
  • Primary Ship Weapon:
    • 1 x Quad turbolaser turret
    • 1 x Twin laser cannon turret
    • 18 x Hardpoints
  • Modifications:
    • Hyperdrive Class .75 Installed
    • Reinforced Sensor Suite
    • Reinforced Shields
Equipment:Skills:
  • Honed Reflexes
  • Artistry (He would draw his friends)
  • Gunnery Training, New Republic
Weakness:
  • Cannot shoot another individual
  • No ground combat experience
  • Rather naive

Code 225


Accepted.

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Postby Theyra » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:52 pm

Danceria wrote:
Application:
Name: Cosinga Sheev
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Appearance (picture or written description): shut up and take my links
Homeworld: Wayland
Force Sensitive: Yes
Occupation: Amnesiac Wanderer
Rank (If applicable) : His power level is similar to a Jedi Padawan undergoing the trials to become a Knight.
Affiliation: Unknown/His own
Background (Two paragraphs): The cold steel enclave of Wayland and training was all this young man had ever known. The boy who would be called "Cosinga Sheev" would train deep in the understanding of the Force, both the Light and the Dark, and against hideous mockeries of life and science. At age 19, he emerges from the planet after defeating his "Guardian", and explores the galaxy...

In case those other than OP know (as I've used this character in another Star Wars RP), this is a "grafted clone", what happens when multiple Force-sensitive limbs are stuck together in the same cloning vat. A contingency plan in case the Emperor would perish/not find eternal life/youth, Cosinga Sheev was trained from his "birth" in the arts of both Jedi and Sith, and learned much. He had the patience and self control of Luke Skywalker (thanks to his arm on Bespin), the elegance and eloquence of Count Dokuu (courtesy of the Battle of Coruscant near the end of the Clone Wars), the raw power of Jorus C'Boath, and ultimately surpassed him...but in many ways, he is still a child. Cosinga defies destiny, and attempts to carve out his own legacy among the stars. An heir of the Sith, yet he bears two lightsabers of former proud Jedi Knights, Cosinga is very much a set of contradictions. Whether or not he will accept his heritage or attempt to create his own, only the Force will know...
Ship: The Curich-class shuttle The Rebirth
Equipment: One Astromech droid, two green lightsabers
Skills:
(Of the Force): Jedi Mind Trick, Calmness (Kinda like what Rey did to beat Emo Ren in Episode VII, not quite Battle Meditation), lightsaber throw.
(Of the Lightsaber): Jar'Kai, Tràkata and Form V Lightsaber Combat
(Passive): Combat piloting, Negotiation, and stealth
Weakness: He's Amnesiac, and a snarky one at that. His "beat to his own drum" nature coupled with a brief understanding of the galaxy will no doubt result in some scraps.

Code 225


Almost forgot about this. I am sorry but denied. I do not think that you inherited traits from body parts.

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Postby Shadowwell » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:55 pm

Ormata wrote:
Shadowwell wrote:So now onto the Armaments for my characters ship, any suggestions?


You said you wanted an ARC-170 style vessel. That type of vessel doesn't have massively heavy guns, though we can up it a bit.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/R-9X_heavy_laser_cannon This kind of weapon was used by the Resistance, and could replace your forward-facing guns (In fact, you could place them in a two on top, two on bottom sort of way, on each wing, which would provide eight forward-facing laser cannons).

The vessel also has torps, which I presume you want to keep though you could instead have missile pods (See Slave One, over Geonosis, for those) which would be quite lethal.

Stuff.

That sounds ok, but i will take a proper look in a moment.
So i am thinking keep the Medium laser cannons they had, add 4 or so heavy laser cannons, Replace The aft laser cannons with medium or heeavy lasers and maybe some other changes.

Though it will be reasonably heavy armed for a ship its size, the Neural lonk he uses to control it will only allow for him to use a portion at a time or risk overwhelming himself with the stimuli or something.
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Postby Ormata » Sat Nov 26, 2016 9:58 pm

Shadowwell wrote:
Ormata wrote:
You said you wanted an ARC-170 style vessel. That type of vessel doesn't have massively heavy guns, though we can up it a bit.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/R-9X_heavy_laser_cannon This kind of weapon was used by the Resistance, and could replace your forward-facing guns (In fact, you could place them in a two on top, two on bottom sort of way, on each wing, which would provide eight forward-facing laser cannons).

The vessel also has torps, which I presume you want to keep though you could instead have missile pods (See Slave One, over Geonosis, for those) which would be quite lethal.

Stuff.

That sounds ok, but i will take a proper look in a moment.
So i am thinking keep the Medium laser cannons they had, add 4 or so heavy laser cannons, Replace The aft laser cannons with medium or heeavy lasers and maybe some other changes.

Though it will be reasonably heavy armed for a ship its size, the Neural lonk he uses to control it will only allow for him to use a portion at a time or risk overwhelming himself with the stimuli or something.


Permit me to observe that, with all that firepower, you will either A: Have a tank reactor or B: Overload your reactor because holy heck. Either way, your flight controls, I feel, are going to have significant issues.

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Postby Shadowwell » Sat Nov 26, 2016 10:00 pm

Ormata wrote:
Shadowwell wrote:That sounds ok, but i will take a proper look in a moment.
So i am thinking keep the Medium laser cannons they had, add 4 or so heavy laser cannons, Replace The aft laser cannons with medium or heeavy lasers and maybe some other changes.

Though it will be reasonably heavy armed for a ship its size, the Neural lonk he uses to control it will only allow for him to use a portion at a time or risk overwhelming himself with the stimuli or something.


Permit me to observe that, with all that firepower, you will either A: Have a tank reactor or B: Overload your reactor because holy heck. Either way, your flight controls, I feel, are going to have significant issues.

What i suggested had less firepower than you suggestions so what is the problem?
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Postby Ormata » Sat Nov 26, 2016 10:02 pm

Shadowwell wrote:
Ormata wrote:
Permit me to observe that, with all that firepower, you will either A: Have a tank reactor or B: Overload your reactor because holy heck. Either way, your flight controls, I feel, are going to have significant issues.

What i suggested had less firepower than you suggestions so what is the problem?


I said that you could place them in quad-formations on the wings. Admittedly, I did give no thought to reactor issues when writing that, so my apologies. That said, though, I get the slight feeling that you ship will not maneuver like a heavy fighter after the addition of this firepower.

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Postby Zhaas123 » Sat Nov 26, 2016 10:04 pm

Application:
Name: Vujekkipp Q'akuhed (AKA Kipp)
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Species: Jawa
Appearance: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/56 ... dd7644.jpg
Homeworld: Tatooine
Force Sensitive: Yes
Occupation: Jedi Consular
Rank (If applicable) : Knight
Affiliation: New Jedi Order
Background (Two paragraphs):
Kipp was born on Tatooine on one of the many Jawa sandcrawlers, he would live with his people until the age of 5 when he was found by a pair of traveling jedi. The jedi had been their to negotiate a deal between the Jawas and the nearby towns, when they saw the young Kipp pushing a small pile of scrap from some feet away. After testing to make sure that he truly had the force, the jedi would take him with them. They would drop him off on the jedi academy on Ossus to begin his training.

For the next 6 years he would train under his teachers, quickly showing an aptitude for the healing arts of the force. Training long over the years he would improve his skill in the force, and his ability to fight with a weapon. shortly before he was assigned to a master to begin his training he would complete his lightsaber finding a green crystal for it. After this he would be assigned to the Female Togruta named Zataan Kebrem as a Padawan. For the next 12 years of his life he would serve alongside Zataan as they travelled the Republic to keep the peace.

It was during this time that Kipps interest and knowledge of force healing increased, as he saw people sick and injured during his travels he tried to help them also picking up skills in more conventional healing. At the age of 23 he would earn his knighthood when he saved his master's life when she was injured inside of a bandit hideout. He not only was able to protect her but was able to stop the leader from escaping aboard his speeder bike, it was also at this time he gained what would become his starship of choice, a Corsair-class cruiser. In a year Kipp decided to join down the path of The Consular, a path of both healing and studying the mysteries of the Force.

Ship: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Corsair-class_cruiser
Name: The Sandcruiser
Modifications: Pilot Assistance droid
Equipment: Lightsaber with green cystal, Personal droid named "Tusk"
Skills: Formal Force and Lightsaber Traning, Skilled in healing (Force, and conventional), Agile
Weakness: Physically weak, Can not speak Galactic Basic, inattentive

Code 225
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Postby Theyra » Sat Nov 26, 2016 10:07 pm

Zhaas123 wrote:Application:
Name: Vujekkipp Q'akuhed (AKA Kipp)
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Species: Jawa
Appearance: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/56 ... dd7644.jpg
Homeworld: Tatooine
Force Sensitive: Yes
Occupation: Jedi Consular
Rank (If applicable) : Knight
Affiliation: New Jedi Order
Background (Two paragraphs):
Kipp was born on Tatooine on one of the many Jawa sandcrawlers, he would live with his people until the age of 5 when he was found by a pair of traveling jedi. The jedi had been their to negotiate a deal between the Jawas and the nearby towns, when they saw the young Kipp pushing a small pile of scrap from some feet away. After testing to make sure that he truly had the force, the jedi would take him with them. They would drop him off on the jedi academy on Ossus to begin his training.

For the next 6 years he would train under his teachers, quickly showing an aptitude for the healing arts of the force. Training long over the years he would improve his skill in the force, and his ability to fight with a weapon. shortly before he was assigned to a master to begin his training he would complete his lightsaber finding a green crystal for it. After this he would be assigned to the Female Togruta named Zataan Kebrem as a Padawan. For the next 12 years of his life he would serve alongside Zataan as they travelled the Republic to keep the peace.

It was during this time that Kipps interest and knowledge of force healing increased, as he saw people sick and injured during his travels he tried to help them also picking up skills in more conventional healing. At the age of 23 he would earn his knighthood when he saved his master's life when she was injured inside of a bandit hideout. He not only was able to protect her but was able to stop the leader from escaping aboard his speeder bike, it was also at this time he gained what would become his starship of choice, a Corsair-class cruiser. In a year Kipp decided to join down the path of The Consular, a path of both healing and studying the mysteries of the Force.

Ship: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Corsair-class_cruiser
Name: The Sandcruiser
Modifications: Pilot Assistance droid
Equipment: Lightsaber with green cystal, Personal droid named "Tusk"
Skills: Formal Force and Lightsaber Traning, Skilled in healing (Force, and conventional), Agile
Weakness: Physically weak, Can not speak Galactic Basic, inattentive

Code 225


Accepted and nice to see another jedi.

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Postby Shadowwell » Sat Nov 26, 2016 10:07 pm

Ormata wrote:
Shadowwell wrote:What i suggested had less firepower than you suggestions so what is the problem?


I said that you could place them in quad-formations on the wings. Admittedly, I did give no thought to reactor issues when writing that, so my apologies. That said, though, I get the slight feeling that you ship will not maneuver like a heavy fighter after the addition of this firepower.

just have two be on the wings of each adn mount two on the Nose, but yeah, then again with the stuff taken out when refitting it for one person, there could be room for a larger reactor thing or whatever.
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Postby Ormata » Sat Nov 26, 2016 10:09 pm

Zhaas123 wrote:
Application:
Name: Vujekkipp Q'akuhed (AKA Kipp)
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Species: Jawa
Appearance: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/56 ... dd7644.jpg
Homeworld: Tatooine
Force Sensitive: Yes
Occupation: Jedi Consular
Rank (If applicable) : Knight
Affiliation: New Jedi Order
Background (Two paragraphs):
Kipp was born on Tatooine on one of the many Jawa sandcrawlers, he would live with his people until the age of 5 when he was found by a pair of traveling jedi. The jedi had been their to negotiate a deal between the Jawas and the nearby towns, when they saw the young Kipp pushing a small pile of scrap from some feet away. After testing to make sure that he truly had the force, the jedi would take him with them. They would drop him off on the jedi academy on Ossus to begin his training.

For the next 6 years he would train under his teachers, quickly showing an aptitude for the healing arts of the force. Training long over the years he would improve his skill in the force, and his ability to fight with a weapon. shortly before he was assigned to a master to begin his training he would complete his lightsaber finding a green crystal for it. After this he would be assigned to the Female Togruta named Zataan Kebrem as a Padawan. For the next 12 years of his life he would serve alongside Zataan as they travelled the Republic to keep the peace.

It was during this time that Kipps interest and knowledge of force healing increased, as he saw people sick and injured during his travels he tried to help them also picking up skills in more conventional healing. At the age of 23 he would earn his knighthood when he saved his master's life when she was injured inside of a bandit hideout. He not only was able to protect her but was able to stop the leader from escaping aboard his speeder bike, it was also at this time he gained what would become his starship of choice, a Corsair-class cruiser. In a year Kipp decided to join down the path of The Consular, a path of both healing and studying the mysteries of the Force.

Ship: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Corsair-class_cruiser
Name: The Sandcruiser
Modifications: Pilot Assistance droid
Equipment: Lightsaber with green cystal, Personal droid named "Tusk"
Skills: Formal Force and Lightsaber Traning, Skilled in healing (Force, and conventional), Agile
Weakness: Physically weak, Can not speak Galactic Basic, inattentive

Code 225


How is a Jedi Consular, who are expected to diffuse situations in a diplomatic way, expected to be a Jedi Consular when they both do not know Galactic Basic and are inattentive? Will he always have Tusk with him?

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Postby Theyra » Sat Nov 26, 2016 10:12 pm

Ormata wrote:
Zhaas123 wrote:
Application:
Name: Vujekkipp Q'akuhed (AKA Kipp)
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Species: Jawa
Appearance: https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/56 ... dd7644.jpg
Homeworld: Tatooine
Force Sensitive: Yes
Occupation: Jedi Consular
Rank (If applicable) : Knight
Affiliation: New Jedi Order
Background (Two paragraphs):
Kipp was born on Tatooine on one of the many Jawa sandcrawlers, he would live with his people until the age of 5 when he was found by a pair of traveling jedi. The jedi had been their to negotiate a deal between the Jawas and the nearby towns, when they saw the young Kipp pushing a small pile of scrap from some feet away. After testing to make sure that he truly had the force, the jedi would take him with them. They would drop him off on the jedi academy on Ossus to begin his training.

For the next 6 years he would train under his teachers, quickly showing an aptitude for the healing arts of the force. Training long over the years he would improve his skill in the force, and his ability to fight with a weapon. shortly before he was assigned to a master to begin his training he would complete his lightsaber finding a green crystal for it. After this he would be assigned to the Female Togruta named Zataan Kebrem as a Padawan. For the next 12 years of his life he would serve alongside Zataan as they travelled the Republic to keep the peace.

It was during this time that Kipps interest and knowledge of force healing increased, as he saw people sick and injured during his travels he tried to help them also picking up skills in more conventional healing. At the age of 23 he would earn his knighthood when he saved his master's life when she was injured inside of a bandit hideout. He not only was able to protect her but was able to stop the leader from escaping aboard his speeder bike, it was also at this time he gained what would become his starship of choice, a Corsair-class cruiser. In a year Kipp decided to join down the path of The Consular, a path of both healing and studying the mysteries of the Force.

Ship: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Corsair-class_cruiser
Name: The Sandcruiser
Modifications: Pilot Assistance droid
Equipment: Lightsaber with green cystal, Personal droid named "Tusk"
Skills: Formal Force and Lightsaber Traning, Skilled in healing (Force, and conventional), Agile
Weakness: Physically weak, Can not speak Galactic Basic, inattentive

Code 225


How is a Jedi Consular, who are expected to diffuse situations in a diplomatic way, expected to be a Jedi Consular when they both do not know Galactic Basic and are inattentive? Will he always have Tusk with him?


Acutal I should have thought of that. Is the droid a translation droid?

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Postby Zhaas123 » Sat Nov 26, 2016 10:14 pm

To answer that he became a Consular more to be a healer and to research the force than as a diplomat, also the droid will be with him on diplomatic missions to help translate the broken Jawa trade language (Somewhat) into more understandable Galactic basic. as for the second one no Tusk will not be with him at all times, only on the ship or for talks with the leaders of important groups.
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Postby Ormata » Sat Nov 26, 2016 10:15 pm

Zhaas123 wrote:To answer that he became a Consular more to be a healer and to research the force than as a diplomat, also the droid will be with him on diplomatic missions to help with translate the broken Jawa trade language (Somewhat) into more understandable Galactic basic. as for the second one no Tusk will not be with him at all times, only on the his ship or for talks with the leaders of important groups.


Aaah. So he's a Jedi Healer.

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Postby Theyra » Sat Nov 26, 2016 10:27 pm

So I will be posting the IC sometime tomorrow.

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Postby The Valyria Empire » Sat Nov 26, 2016 10:36 pm

Wow, there sure are a lot of Force Users and a whole lot of Independent and Republic characters. Guess I won't be getting much character interaction.

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