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Postby The Burning Sun » Fri Aug 19, 2016 7:57 pm

The V O I D wrote:Andrew Withers' reaction to the scenarios that you two have provided is this: serve them nice foods and such in the bar, and maybe even treat them respectfully; but then turn around and talk crap behind their back to people who share his views.

That might work for Faust, but talking crap about Violet might lead to some...unpleasant accidents.

I quite like him, but it's up to Saleon since he's here.

Also I highly recommend reading the NPC bit of the dramatist personae in detail.

@Faal: Yup. Pretty much. Though you won't actually kill that many people if it all works out.
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Postby The V O I D » Fri Aug 19, 2016 8:02 pm

The Burning Sun wrote:
The V O I D wrote:Andrew Withers' reaction to the scenarios that you two have provided is this: serve them nice foods and such in the bar, and maybe even treat them respectfully; but then turn around and talk crap behind their back to people who share his views.

That might work for Faust, but talking crap about Violet might lead to some...unpleasant accidents.

I quite like him, but it's up to Saleon since he's here.

Also I highly recommend reading the NPC bit of the dramatist personae in detail.

@Faal: Yup. Pretty much. Though you won't actually kill that many people if it all works out.


I will. But I'm just pointing out that Withers comes from a time where his views were acceptable; granted, his racist views have calmed down a bit, he still can't let go of his other views. I'm sure there are plenty of others like him who have died from earlier ages who were just as, if not more, racist and such. Thus, it can't be their first experience with a bigot.

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Postby Faal Lot Himdah » Fri Aug 19, 2016 8:04 pm

The Burning Sun wrote:
The V O I D wrote:Andrew Withers' reaction to the scenarios that you two have provided is this: serve them nice foods and such in the bar, and maybe even treat them respectfully; but then turn around and talk crap behind their back to people who share his views.

That might work for Faust, but talking crap about Violet might lead to some...unpleasant accidents.

I quite like him, but it's up to Saleon since he's here.

Also I highly recommend reading the NPC bit of the dramatist personae in detail.

@Faal: Yup. Pretty much. Though you won't actually kill that many people if it all works out.


I can still have Vi kill some right?
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Postby Saleon » Fri Aug 19, 2016 8:26 pm

Faal Lot Himdah wrote:
The Burning Sun wrote:That might work for Faust, but talking crap about Violet might lead to some...unpleasant accidents.

I quite like him, but it's up to Saleon since he's here.

Also I highly recommend reading the NPC bit of the dramatist personae in detail.

@Faal: Yup. Pretty much. Though you won't actually kill that many people if it all works out.


I can still have Vi kill some right?
You kill two people, and you shouldn't trash talk Violet. And don't make this a common occurrence.
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Postby Faal Lot Himdah » Fri Aug 19, 2016 8:27 pm

Saleon wrote:
Faal Lot Himdah wrote:
I can still have Vi kill some right?
You kill two people, and you shouldn't trash talk Violet. And don't make this a common occurrence.


That wasn't me talking about trash talking Violet. I'm only doing this because Burnimg said its for plot.
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Charlia wrote:Faal Lot Himdah - A wizard. Possibly evil. Seen associating with Charlia, who baas at him a lot when he doesn't feed her enough. #BlameVoid

Kuhlfros wrote:Fall Lot Himdah=Alakazam (May or May not have to do with Merlin)

Spindle wrote:I swear, you two are pretty much the font of all evil in this world...

Spindle wrote:Aaaaaand, the font of all sass.

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Postby Saleon » Fri Aug 19, 2016 8:30 pm

Faal Lot Himdah wrote:
Saleon wrote:You kill two people, and you shouldn't trash talk Violet. And don't make this a common occurrence.


That wasn't me talking about trash talking Violet. I'm only doing this because Burnimg said its for plot.
OK, you are clear.
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"You guys are the coolest Sadists on the internet," Said Blitzen
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Postby Khasinkonia » Fri Aug 19, 2016 9:29 pm

The V O I D wrote:
The Burning Sun wrote:That might work for Faust, but talking crap about Violet might lead to some...unpleasant accidents.

I quite like him, but it's up to Saleon since he's here.

Also I highly recommend reading the NPC bit of the dramatist personae in detail.

@Faal: Yup. Pretty much. Though you won't actually kill that many people if it all works out.


I will. But I'm just pointing out that Withers comes from a time where his views were acceptable; granted, his racist views have calmed down a bit, he still can't let go of his other views. I'm sure there are plenty of others like him who have died from earlier ages who were just as, if not more, racist and such. Thus, it can't be their first experience with a bigot.

I'm sure he'll just love Bonadventura. An Italian Jew...

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Postby Servanity » Sat Aug 20, 2016 2:50 pm

W H A TD O E S I TM E A N T OD I E A G A I N ?
Purgatory: The City at The Edge of No Where.

(DELETE ANYTHING IN PARENTHESIS)

Name: Zoh Kusano
Age: 28
Years in Purgatory: 7 years.
Occupation: Hitman/ Contract Killer
Prior Occupation Assassin/ Contract Killer



[floatright]Appearance
Image

Personality: Zoh has become a cold person after the death of himself and his family. Hes not much of a man for conversation, you could say hes a more a man of action than words. He does tend to have a soft spot for women and children though always refusing contracts against women. Hes known as a quite and collected man someone who gets the job done no matter what the cost.

Biography: After arriving in Purgatory Zoh didn't waste anytime making a name for himself as a skilled assassin and accepting contracts from Violet Von Kanin the Queen of the Dark side of Purgatory that is after his legend spread to her and she began floating contracts his way. The one person that he found in that place that he became loyal to. He made sure that when killing needed to be done he would be the one that she would call and that he would be her killing right hand and confident.

How much do you Remember?: When Zoh was young his mother was the one who always took care and provided for him, she was his whole world. His father on the other was a aggressive drinker who would come home a beat Zohs mother. She always would shelter him from the beating but one night was different and instead of his dad coming for his mother he came for him. But before he could land a strike his mother came up behind him stabbing a knife into his back. She rushed froward holding Zoh in her arms. Then the gunshot went off and her body went limp and she fell leaving him and his father with a smoking gun. After realizing what he did he turned the gun on himself a pulled the trigger.

After all of this Zoh was put into foster care. Because of what happened he became mute and cold causing most to avoid and ignore him. Because of all of this no one would adopt him. When he was 8 years old a man in a dark slick suit came to the orphanage that he lived in and claimed he was a distant relative of Zoh having all the proper paperwork and everything. Zoh left with him that day on the ride in the mans car he told him his name was David and that Zohs life was going to change forever. At the time Zoh had no clue how true that really was.

Through the years David trained him in that many ways of combat and killing. He made him a master in every handgun, rifle, knife, sword, and style of hand to hand combat known to man. After a few years he taught him how to be resistant to pain after suffering some of the worst pain imaginable. But because of all of this he gained unparalleled skill in the art of killing. when he reached the age of 18 he gained his first contract and last test. He had to kill David his master and father figure. After a drawn out battle with swords he was finally triumphant and defeated his master of course after receiving a few scars so he would never forget.


After his training was complete he went on to taking contracts and becoming one of the greatest Assassins in the world. He did this for years making his living. He was happy with his life and the way it was going until the day he met Leanna the love of his life the one person who could get him talking again. For her he would give it all up. For her he would do anything and eventually for there son David. He gave up the life as a assassin and become the father and husband he felt his family deserved doing everything to keep his past in the past and keeping it away from his family. Until the day his past came back to haunt him through a ten million dollar contract that was put on his head. Ten men showed up at his house that night deciding to get the drop on him. He successfully fought them off all but one that had been hiding with a rifle on a distant building and taking out his legs. Falling to the ground he watched as the hidden man slammed a bullet into the head of his wife then his 3 year old son. He knew the man without even seeing him and he yelled. "I swear to god I will kill you even if its from the grave you son of a bitch!" and a bullet sealed his fate.


Likes and Dislikes:
Likes: He is a simple man who enjoys things like cleaning his many guns, sharping his knives and swords, working out keeping his body in peak condition, and smoking one of his not so good habits. He prefers solitude to being around alot of people which is why he often keeps to himself.

Dislikes: Sadly theres a good bit of things he doesnt really care for like being in a room with too many people, people who chew with there mouth open tend fire up his temper, ignorant and rude people also can get him quite angry and fire up his killing sense. Another thing that tends to get him going is when he does a contract and trys to short him on his money, that kind of thing tends to get people killed.

Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UprcpdwuwCg

Accept the Rules?: No, I read the Orders.
If no, reason:
RP Sample: OM&T

short summary: He is a assasin that may or maynot have a few bolts loose after the things he has been through in his life. Dont be shocked if he trys to kill you.

#DEADMAN
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Postby Saleon » Sat Aug 20, 2016 2:57 pm

Can you add a little more to the personality and like/dislikes? The bio should cover what he does when he comes to Purgatory, as well. Actually, you removed the biography, why? Why would you remove a portion of the application? Also, read Order X.
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"You guys are the coolest Sadists on the internet," Said Blitzen
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Postby The Burning Sun » Sat Aug 20, 2016 2:58 pm

Servanity wrote:
W H A TD O E S I TM E A N T OD I E A G A I N ?
Purgatory: The City at The Edge of No Where.

(DELETE ANYTHING IN PARENTHESIS)

Name: Zoh Kusano
Age: 28
Years in Purgatory: 7 years.
Occupation: Hitman/ Contract Killer
Prior Occupation Assassin/ Contract Killer



[floatright]Appearance
(Image)

Personality: Cold and Collected

How much do you Remember?: When Zoh was young his mother was the one who always took care and provided for him, she was his whole world. His father on the other was a aggressive drinker who would come home a beat Zohs mother. She always would shelter him from the beating but one night was different and instead of his dad coming for his mother he came for him. But before he could land a strike his mother came up behind him stabbing a knife into his back. She rushed froward holding Zoh in her arms. Then the gunshot went off and her body went limp and she fell leaving him and his father with a smoking gun. After realizing what he did he turned the gun on himself a pulled the trigger.

After all of this Zoh was put into foster care. Because of what happened he became mute and cold causing most to avoid and ignore him. Because of all of this no one would adopt him. When he was 8 years old a man in a dark slick suit came to the orphanage that he lived in and claimed he was a distant relative of Zoh having all the proper paperwork and everything. Zoh left with him that day on the ride in the mans car he told him his name was David and that Zohs life was going to change forever. At the time Zoh had no clue how true that really was.

Through the years David trained him in that many ways of combat and killing. He made him a master in every handgun, rifle, knife, sword, and style of hand to hand combat known to man. After a few years he taught him how to be resistant to pain after suffering some of the worst pain imaginable. But because of all of this he gained unparalleled skill in the art of killing. when he reached the age of 18 he gained his first contract and last test. He had to kill David his master and father figure. After a drawn out battle with swords he was finally triumphant and defeated his master of course after receiving a few scars so he would never forget.


After his training was complete he went on to taking contracts and becoming one of the greatest Assassins in the world. He did this for years making his living. He was happy with his life and the way it was going until the day he met Leanna the love of his life the one person who could get him talking again. For her he would give it all up. For her he would do anything and eventually for there son David. He gave up the life as a assassin and become the father and husband he felt his family deserved doing everything to keep his past in the past and keeping it away from his family. Until the day his past came back to haunt him through a ten million dollar contract that was put on his head. Ten men showed up at his house that night deciding to get the drop on him. He successfully fought them off all but one that had been hiding with a rifle on a distant building and taking out his legs. Falling to the ground he watched as the hidden man slammed a bullet into the head of his wife then his 3 year old son. He knew the man without even seeing him and he yelled. "I swear to god I will kill you even if its from the grave you son of a bitch!" and a bullet sealed his fate.


Likes and Dislikes: Likes: Killing
Fighting
Smoking

Dislikes: Talkative people
People who chew with there mouth open.
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
Theme: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UprcpdwuwCg

Accept the Rules?: [X] Yes [ ] No
If no, reason:
RP Sample: OM&T

short summary: He is a assasin that may or maynot have a few bolts loose after the things he has been through in his life. Dont be shocked if he trys to kill you.

#DEADMAN
(Do not remove tag. This is for finding apps.)

Denied. Go read the rules lel.

Also, considering his occupation would you like him to work for Violet? Nominally, at least?
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Atlannia wrote:Mmm it's not looking good I'm afraid, the purple haired goth loli next to a sweatervest wearing bishonen portends financial strife and the double archery chick is a rare sign predicting the death of someone close to you, I'm sorry.
...
That'll be $32.99
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Postby Faal Lot Himdah » Sat Aug 20, 2016 2:58 pm

The Burning Sun wrote:Denied. Go read the rules lel.

Also, considering his occupation would you like him to work for Violet? Nominally, at least?


Sal already denied it
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Kuhlfros wrote:Fall Lot Himdah=Alakazam (May or May not have to do with Merlin)

Spindle wrote:I swear, you two are pretty much the font of all evil in this world...

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Postby Servanity » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:13 pm

I didnt even know i deleted it i dont remember seeing a biography section and ill fix the issues sorry haha.
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Postby Servanity » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:15 pm

Also what was those occupation things you was talking about???

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Postby Saleon » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:19 pm

Servanity wrote:Also what was those occupation things you was talking about???
prior occupation is pre-death; occupation is in opurgatory. Also, A killer might want to have met Violet, it would be good to add that to your bio.
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"You guys are the coolest Sadists on the internet," Said Blitzen
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Postby Servanity » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:22 pm

Ok i got ya. So i can be a Contract killer in Purgatory? And so just add Violet into my bio?

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Postby Saleon » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:33 pm

Servanity wrote:Ok i got ya. So i can be a Contract killer in Purgatory? And so just add Violet into my bio?
Yeah, Violet rules the darker sides of the city. If you are dealing in blood money, she knows of you, and at least lets you do it. Get on her bad side and you are gone.
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"You guys are the coolest Sadists on the internet," Said Blitzen
"A Low key super freak who gives you hickeys that can read into your soul?" -Legato Venari
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Postby The Burning Sun » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:34 pm

Faal Lot Himdah wrote:
The Burning Sun wrote:Denied. Go read the rules lel.

Also, considering his occupation would you like him to work for Violet? Nominally, at least?


Sal already denied it

Sal ninja'd me by less than a minute, according to the timestamps.
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The Burning Sun wrote:I posted. Just in case it gets buried by the depressing duo over there.

I award you ten points for the nickname. Which will buy you...
more posts from the duo
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Atlannia wrote:Mmm it's not looking good I'm afraid, the purple haired goth loli next to a sweatervest wearing bishonen portends financial strife and the double archery chick is a rare sign predicting the death of someone close to you, I'm sorry.
...
That'll be $32.99
All the logic

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Postby Servanity » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:36 pm

Sounds good to me. And i didnt see that Bio on there but ill get it all fixed but would what i put in What I can remember work as my Bio??

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Postby Saleon » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:38 pm

Servanity wrote:Sounds good to me. And i didnt see that Bio on there but ill get it all fixed but would what i put in What I can remember work as my Bio??
no. The what I remember covers everything before death that you remember. Bio covers everything after death. You can splice it a little bit, but try and keep them to be reasonably separate.
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Postby The Burning Sun » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:40 pm

Servanity wrote:Sounds good to me. And i didnt see that Bio on there but ill get it all fixed but would what i put in What I can remember work as my Bio??

Everyone misses the bio, even me. Also you broke the float tag with your image placement, make sure to fix that.

Violet's bio and relevant information are under the NPC tab in the Dramatis Personae. Currently, she also directly employs Jack the Ripper(controlled by me) and Aura/Vi(controlled by Faal Lot Himdah).

Whether he reports directly to Violet or not is your choice. I don't mind either way.
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The Burning Sun wrote:I posted. Just in case it gets buried by the depressing duo over there.

I award you ten points for the nickname. Which will buy you...
more posts from the duo
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Atlannia wrote:Mmm it's not looking good I'm afraid, the purple haired goth loli next to a sweatervest wearing bishonen portends financial strife and the double archery chick is a rare sign predicting the death of someone close to you, I'm sorry.
...
That'll be $32.99
All the logic

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Postby Servanity » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:42 pm

Ahhh I got ya. Ok so where do I need to put the bio on my app?

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Postby Saleon » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:48 pm

Servanity wrote:Ahhh I got ya. Ok so where do I need to put the bio on my app?

Above personality. Also flesh out personlaity and likes/dislikes. They are a little barren, and personality should be way more than that. "cold and collected" please make him more diverse and in depth, including good and bad personality traits.
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"You guys are the coolest Sadists on the internet," Said Blitzen
"A Low key super freak who gives you hickeys that can read into your soul?" -Legato Venari
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Postby Servanity » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:48 pm

Ok will do.

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Postby Saleon » Sat Aug 20, 2016 3:50 pm

Servanity wrote:Ok will do.
And check Order X
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"You guys are the coolest Sadists on the internet," Said Blitzen
"A Low key super freak who gives you hickeys that can read into your soul?" -Legato Venari
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Postby Servanity » Sat Aug 20, 2016 4:26 pm

Ok i fixed it how does that look?

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